THAT'S BACKFIRE PLEASE WRITE MORE I LOVE SESSHY WHEN HE'S OOC

THAT'S BACKFIRE PLEASE WRITE MORE I LOVE SESSHY WHEN HE'S OCC

We'll figure out what happens later on in the story right? Well, update soon!!!

The story is really good so far, but you should really update the summary. You call the story a "one-shot" but you say that it has three parts. A one-shot is a story that has only one chapter or part to it. I'm not trying to be rude about it or anything... it's just kinda misleading.

Other than that minor detail, I really enjoy the story, it's very well written so far and I think it will turn out to be a good story :D

hey!

i really like ur story! its wicked awesome...

ummm...one question tho...

why is sesshoumaru swimming in a river thingy where a waterfall is in the middle of winter? if it was a hot spring that is understandable...and im not sure he would lay naked out in the cold would he? only if he wasn't affected by the cold because he's a youkai...

ok...back to the swimming thing...i don't think that there would be n e hot springs around there then would there? u made the location sound like a city...

this is all mere curiousity....

anywho...great job on the story!

i'm really enjoying it and i like the flashbacks!

please update again soon!

-Ashley