you should write how sesshomaru comes after kagome cuz he wants her to be his mate or something...just write more i love the direction of the story

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

wow i like it please keep going

They're called ofuda, charms, enchantments, whatever.

Nice penname, by the way.

Good idea here. But your grammar needs a little bit of brushing up and your plot seems thin already.

You've rushed into her thinking "Oh my gosh, I love Sesshoumaru" in less than 2000 words.

That's not only unrealistic, but it's completely OOC.

And who on earth thinks that the 'putty' feeling and wet dreams means you love someone? All that means is that you're lusting after them ... and you seriously need to get laid.

That goes double if your long time crush - new found boyfriend's older brother is the one inciting all of these 'feelings' in you.

Still, I want to know what you're going to type next, so I'll return next chapter.

Good Luck

~ M.S. Cascata

Great fanfic!!! Please update!!!!!! It's soooo good, and I can't wait to read it!!! :D

write more! write more!

UHOH you go kaggies.