Reviews for The Beautiful Smile by Angel of the Fallen
Shyla- Sun 12 Nov 2006
helikesitheymikey!- Sat 14 Oct 2006
PLEASE DO MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~Mags ^.^ *smirk*
~Nikkari~- Fri 13 Oct 2006
~Nikkari~- Mon 09 Oct 2006
Sess has found somthing he wants, but in order to obtain it completely he must do what is almost impossible for him... he must release his cold exterior for her.
I don't know if that will work for you or not. It also depends on what the main plot to the story is. But great job and keep up the good work.
Oh and ps if you don't mind could you possibly space out your paragraphs it will make it easier to read!!
Nikkari
slm111- Mon 09 Oct 2006