that was a nice comeback with the innocent remark. i love this story... just had to say it.

OMG i read an earthly knight! in grade 7 for silver birch.. goodness its my favorite book...wow.. i didnt know it was famous and i'm for sure thinking your from t.dot ahaha GO MAPLE LEAFS!

That was a brilliant awesome story I read it all in a day couldn't stop till I only had a hour of sleep till I went to work but it's good this story was worth it I actually thought it was short but I hate really good stories to end anyway lol I enjoyed this immensely thank you

Loves Arry

As I am sure you probably know by now this fic was a total hit. From the beginning to end you were able to keep it interesting and fun. The beginning had me enjoying seeing Kagome in a different character and her jail scenes were real good. To think someone who never had jail time could become that endeared so quickly was great. She always has had a charismatic personality. I loved Miroku's part and that Sesshoumaru had a LARGE family. It made the story that much more enjoyable. Sachi and Miroku's scene was totally hilarious. Rin was absolutely precious. When you first wrote it she did seem to be too intelligent for her age but when you revised it, she just beamed "Awww, how cute!". The last courtroom scene was spectacular. I laughed so hard as they had to bring Rin (in pj's) to the courtroom and didn't get a chance to get anyone to keep an eye on her and in walks Miroku high off of his probable makeup sex with Sango and he's fussing with Rin calling himself "Uncle". Any good lawyer would have had him recuse himself for being too closely invovled with the family and make it stick but not in this case. Miroku shined ( in more ways than others...moonshined on dakairis). He was so funny. Rin sitting in the middle of the proceedings without a care in the world doing a split after being dragged across the room on he daddy's leg. And finally the getting home to make "lemonade", don't be concerned, for one your age to write what you did must have had you wondering if you could pull it off and you did. The scene was sexy, romantic and totally sweet. Your little addition to Sesshoumaru leaning into the drawer for a condom was a nice touch. VERY funny that he thought to check the expiration first. As with all things that expire, that was a very interesting little tidbit of info for those who don't think to check...excellent, from one so young. Oh and having not yet experienced your own "lemonade party", give yourself time to grow up some and enjoy being young and free. Once you grow up there's no turning back. You don't get second chances to be that girl anymore. Enjoy the precious time you have left and don't let anyone go breaking your heart. My daughter says she's a "jealous virgin" but she doesn't care, she's living for herself now and enjoying the freedom she has (she's 20). So, on a scale from 1 to 10? This fic is a total 10 on the overall factor. Very good work, lil one. Now, I best be getting along cause I think I've done wore out m welcome. Take care now. Hugs, Jen

Wow! what an ending... I believe that was one of the hottest ending i have read yet. I can't tell you how long i have antisipated the ending to this story. Bravo!

Chaos

OMG!!!!! That was a nice ending. Me likey!! But *sniff* its over. Waaa!!!!! That was probably one of the most hilarious fics I have ever read!!! NOw how am I going to amuse myself? Ah well, at least I can reread it...

That was absolutely amazing! I loved the entire story!! Yay!! I kinda hated it ended but it was a kick ass ending!

-KB

I LOVE IT!!!!!!

I Loved it!!! one of my favorite stories thank you for making it!! LOL

Charming, witty and so wonderfully sweet. Looking forward to the final update. Nicely done!

Can't wait for the last chapter!! Update soon!!

Please update soon!!!! T_T

I can't wait for the last chapter ^_^

oh!! please please, update soon! i am absoltely loving this story so far! so cute and witty! and Rin is just adorable! i also loved how you made the Tashio family bigger and brought Sesshomau's mom into the story, it makes it a lot more interesting. is Sesshomaru ever going to meet Kaogme's family? and what about InuYasha? he is Sesshomau's half-brother but Sesshomaru's mom is still with his dad. i hope you explain this in later chapters. can't wait!
-OhBrother

Great story!!!

Great story!!!

holy shyt Disturbia was such a freaky movie =(

NicE!!!

It was an awesome chapter!

I loved it!!

I hope you update soon!

Ja Ne!!

what ever happened to me betaing your story? o.o; I love it though, and I hope you update soon!!! :3

KEEP GOING!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^ XD

AWWW, man! I thought you had another chapter. T.T

Well, update soon! ^^ Luv da story.

*sigh* How sad, that toad is still alive. Darn! Funny chapter though.

Please update T_T

Please update T_T

Please update T_T

please update T_T

please update T_T

this...is good... what i dont get is that the mediaminer version is only on chapter 4 or 5... weird. update soon!

~clusterlizard1

I LOVED THIS CHAPTER. IT HAS TO BE ONE OF MY FAVORITES TOO. CAN'T WAIT OT KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT.

keep going ^_^

keep going ^_^

i must say this was my favorite chapter too.
i did so enjoy the guess the thong game, we used to play guess the bra... i really enjoy this story, i look forward to your updates.
keep up the excellent work

Two more of the chapters for the story or two more chapters before Kagome gets laid?

Yes, ots my favorrite too. Update soon. ja

Nice!! ", I like it! So, yah updating anytime soon?

yep i can agree by far one of the best chapters i have read its sooo funny, the movie scene reminds me of one of my bestfriends only im sess and he is kags weird you would think hed be the guy but he just cant handle bloody and grusome things.

yep i can agree by far one of the best chapters i have read its sooo funny, the movie scene reminds me of one of my bestfriends only im sess and he is kags weird you would think hed be the guy but he just cant handle bloody and grusome things.

you're gonna do a lemon fore it's done right??
please update soon!

cant wit 4 update, great writing

-moments of silence-



-silence remains-



-slides off the chair and hits the floor hard-



-quickly gets back up and sits back down upon the chair-


Damn! That was a funny and AWESOME chapter!!


You must update soon and do it really freaking soon!!


Ja Ne!

omigosh. I couldn't stop laughing. please, update! >_ I LOVE IT XD *going crazy* can't wait for the update! *falls asleep from sitting up to long to read this* .... *snores*

omigosh. I couldn't stop laughing. please, update! >_ I LOVE IT XD *going crazy* can't wait for the update! *falls asleep from sitting up to long* .... *snores*

loving the banter well done. Very well done.

Wohoo! I can just imagine that!! Nice!! Bravo!! Ok, now, when's the next chapter!!?? Soon, please?! With Sugar on top?!?!

Please update soon... I really like it.

I loved it. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Please update soon!

Update!!! I love this stor ybut you take too long to update it . Try for three chapters!!! ok??!!

i can personaly relate to you, my high school just got over thursday, and we had finals! after two test the week before! i mean REALLY! why have two tests in a class the week before, and a final 10 pages long, double sided! JEEZ!!! it's like they want us to pass out! i almost did!!! I'm okay that it was a little delayed, and understand if it takes a while for it to get up-dated again!
OH! and my aunt, joanne or um...'Kawaii-Kilala' is in the hospital, she's giving birth to my cuzin in a few hours, according to what the tests say...
BYE BYE! meggy!

Hey keep the story going. I love it so far and cant wait till you up date again

lol poor you, hugged by a stranger. I have seen quick affection to, to my friends and family so i understand the quick affection in your fiction. Okay well I hope to read the next chapter soon and good luck on them exams I'm glad I got out may 18... -sighs- but now I have to wait till august 21st to see my school friends again... oh well.

I wish you lots of luck and hope you pass them!!

Ja Ne!

Really liking it! Can't wait for more!

Keep going ^_^

Keep going ^_^

Keep going ^_^

Keep going ^_^

I love this story, please update soon it is a great story

I LOVED IT!!!!!! I hope there's a lemon!!!

PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE CONTINUE AND THANK YOU!!!! ^_^

P.S. lemons pweez or lime..lol =D

update soon update soon!!!!!!! I'm dieing to know what happens. update update

i love it!!! I really love chapter 8. miroku being judge was totally unexpected and completely hilarious.

Please write more. must have more i love this story please write more a.s.a.p. N how could u leave it like that?!:-( on chp. 21 once again love it.

Oh my frickn god!!! that was totally cool!!! please update!!! as quick as possible!! Will there be *lemons* later?

i believe this was the sound i made at the end of that last chapter... *deep sigh of satisfaction*

i can't wait to read more about their nocturnal adventures.

aw man you gotta update!!! ^^

keep updating ^_^

keep updating ^_^

keep updating ^_^

keep updating ^_^

keep updating ^_^

keep updating ^_^

u have 2 update like fast!

uPDATE!!

LOL naughty Sesshou. LOL Can't wait for the next chapter. Love the story plz update ASAP

LOL naughty Sesshou. LOL Can't wait for the next chapter. Love the story plz update ASAP

horny dogs thats all i got to say!

OOO!! SESSHOU! YOU BAD BOY! Going hentai on our poor Kags.

LMAO. SOO FUNNY! Kags finally got a reaction outta him! WOOT!

Update soon!

OMG I love this story! It's soooo funny; really, can you see lil seshy wetting the bed! lol...lol...nand lol some more! Keep up the great work!

Amusing, homey, charming, funny as anything and I swear Sesshy had skid marks with her driving his precious car. LOL! Now about the sleeping arrangements...yep, I can see someone's legs ACCIDENTALLY being wrapped around anothers...and an arm coming to rest in rather interesting places...I do mean Kagome's arm lol. Loved the big joke...little hentai..apparently he was channeling Miroku lol. Nice come back after much time away from this story. Please let Kagome drive again LOLOL!

I like the sly "Pirates of the Caribbean" quote you slipped in there. Very funny. Good story, but I want more sess/kag action! lol. who doesn't?

you better not delete this story. I want to know whats going to happen.

Ha!! She's like me, she's goin to keep askin!! Lol! Hope you update again soon!!

must continue!! i looove this story !!
i got sooo hyper when i realized this updated XDD
Update soon.
Ja-ne.

Gods, Gods, Gods!!!! Sesshoumaru and Kagome are getting quite naughty. *giggle*

This fic is so good! I've been going on and on about it all day with my friends. Let me know when the next chapter comes out!

OMG!! How can you make it so funny?!?!?!?! I think I'm going to keel over and die from the hilarity of your work! But, then again, maybe not. If I did, I wouldn't be able to read the rest of it! I am totally hooked now! You have to update again soon! I love what you did with his family! Yay! for sibling rivalry and hilarious fathers!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love this story...and it looks like we have one thing in common...we have the same beta! I agree, she is awesome. Well, keep up the great work!

Hi!! I love this fic!! Total addict 0.0 update soon!

Hi!! I love this fic!! Total addict 0.0 update soon!

I dare you to find any red blooded woman who doesn't want to play with Sesshoumaru's toy! Nice update and nice segway from the Miroku kiss. I did not think that would slip by without retribution. What a nice turn of events with his brother's help of course.

OMG! Your story is so creative and hilarious! I was laughing my butt off when we met Sesshoumaru's family! For some reason, I can totally see it. Your story is original and overall EXCELLENT!!! Update soon, please!

awesome!!! hurry and update soon!!! I must know what's next!!!

Love the story very much, and I hope that you have a nother chapter out soon

Yay! You updated! Have I ever told you how much I love this story?
I was just wondering though... what does the kiss with Miroku have anything to do with this? Kagome didn't even seemed bothered by it...

loving it!!!!!

I love this story can't wait for the next chapter.

hi it is Angel,

I absolutly love your story please please hurry up with the next chapter it is an awesome story hehe i love it

Tchao
Angel

What is Miroku thinking?? Please, update!

What happened what happened I need to know. please continue

OMFG!!! Please update soon! I have to know what is going to happen next!

I just read all of these chapters, and hurt my tummy from laughing so hard :) Great job :-D The parts that really got me where Miroku with his bunny slippers and the missing gavel, and Sesshoumaru's father doing his evil laugh thinking about scheming...please update soon :)

You must not like Miroku because you want him to die. The last updated chapter was so wrong. You are sick. I love yourf fanfictions though, just stop having people get killed. Poor Miroku. You should be ashamed of yourself.

I absolutely adore this story! It's so well written, and so good I couldn't stop reading once I started! I can't wait to read the next chapter...I'm so glad you are making things heat up REALISTICALLY and not all of the sudden in the first 5 chapters!!! Shoot me an email when you update, I can't wait to see what happens :)

*claps hands together in silent prayer for Miroku's soul*

May Kami have pity on his soul because fluffy-dono sure as hell won't.

You have to update this story really soon ok??? I have waited for the update and only get one chapter.!!!! Your killing me here!!!

OH SHIT! This is going to be funnnnnnnny. I cant want now! lol

WOOT WOOT!. I love it. What got into mirkco. Sesshomeru is going to kill him haha. I love this story. keep it coming !

write more and more

OMG!! OMG OMG OMG!!! WHAT IS SESHO GONNA DO!!! OMG!!!

OMG!!!! Someone is going to die!!
PWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!! N THANK U!!!! =)

P.S. lemons pweeeeez =)

WHAT!?!?!?*stutters* what just happened??
Miroku's her judge for crying out loud!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

hey Abi is Rin's bio-mom right? and Abi's mom is a bird....so is Rin a BirdDog??*i thought of that and it cracked me up*
and Rin is such a cutie!!!!!!!!!!!!!

YOU HAVE GOT TO UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Well Miroku is a dead man now kissing Kagome

This story is awsome please write more as soon as you can I wanna see what happens to that whore kikyo.

O.o I can't believe you stopped there!!!! Please upddate soon.

H...O...L..Y..... S...H...I...T..........


*faints dead away, hitting the floor with a dull thud*

OMG that last chapter was great but I can just imagine what Sesshomaru will do to Miroku for kissing kagome I mean god that man is ballsy adn that seems to be a very bad thing when around sess. Can't wait for the next up date Jane

I love it I can't wait to read the next chapter

OMG! WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!

I love this family. They are hilarious. Just the kind of family we all wish we had...well sometimes. I loved the old line of the the oldies song. You musy be an oldies buff. And is Miroku looking for an early death or what? Fun fic you have going here. Can't wait for the outcome.

OMG! No he didnt! I was not expecting that at all! Gah, now I have to wait for the next chap...boo

LOLOL....see, that is what feet and toes were meant to do...hehehehehe....

Okay, I loved the new chapter and thank you for updating, but what the hell was Miroku thinking? Did someone dare him or did he see her?

Hn....now I love darling little Rin...BUT dag nammit...why did she have to come into the room then? Oh thanks for the memory of apples and cinnamon...a lovely scene...I really like this. Nice job. Good night.

Gotta love the brothers lol...dibs on first pup's name indeed. You are doing a great job, as I read, I smile...then the hentai part of me...just faints....a rooooooooooooom full of sexy versions of Sesshy...THUD

OMG!! HE HAS A DEATH WISH!!! poor miroku is going to die... o.o oh well. ^^ update soon!

God bless stormy nights...nice chapter lol...very sweet and kind of romantic...hn

Oh yea, this is gettin good!

I'm absolutely and utterly in LOVE with this story!!!!!! ^_^
The characters, the trama, Rin and the Taisho sibilings... better said Family!!!!!!!!! Everything is just too awesome!!!! And I can't wait for more ;D
Wonder when we'll see more of Inuyasha and his tra... I mean Kikyo... ¬¬.................... ^_^
And... more kisses!!! and dates!!!!! Yay!!!!! ^.^
Hope see you soon
Ja nE

I liked this story. It was sute, funny and this is the first story that i read where Sesshomaru had more siblings beside just Inu. Please update.

oh wow! This story got me hooked aftr reading the first chapter! Compeltely and utterly awesome! i love the situations! And I'm hardly not laughing! YOU MUST UPDATE! I Command thee!

Very cute!! Love it... please continue!! And jeez.... so many siblings!! Poor Shou... I can't even keep track!! The first pup should TOTALLY have blue-black hair, white tips, and golden eyes. SO CUTE!!! Ah, the possibilities....

Hey what's with the cliffy? We've been waiting for so long already. Waaaaaah! Update soon...er.

You can't leav it like that!, I need more Woman, hurry and update

Update this noWWW!!!! Ass soon as you read this.!!! Start updaiting ok???!!!!

Now, I really really need an update!! LOL. It's killing me. If I were Kagome, I'd just pounce on him and drag him into the bedroom again.

Alright...now, did I really just say that?? Please write more - you're doing a great job!:)

Love,
MissTeak

Love the fic, hate the cliffy!! Update asap or I'll throw rotten veggies next time!!

YOU EVIL CLIFFHANGER WRITER YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DO you ALWAYS HAVE TO GIVE A CLIFFHANGER????
Wait.....don't answer that....
I REALLY LOVE THIS STORY AND EXPECT YOU TO UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!

OMG!!!!! I can't beleve you could be so mean. That was a major cliffy there. Now you HAVE to update ASAP!!!!!
I just adore your story. It is possitivly wonderful.

yay! ^^ I'm glad you updated. I can't wait till you update again.

What the hell is a flame?


anyway this is really good!

it's alright to take time off i'm sure everyone else knows how it is to be busy in school

*cries histerically* how could you stop!!!!! omg i am sooo in love with this that i check everyday just to see if you updated. please try to update soon.

This story its funny and I really could see sesshoumaru's family being like that. So you got your first flamer I haven't been so lucky, but then who ever it was that flamed you was probably just jealous because you can write better then them.

hugs and puppies!
BYE BYE

I just loved the whole family scenario. What fun that was!!! You've got quite a gift for making families have such "bonding" adoration for each other. Are you from a big family? I have no brothers, but sisters are just as hysterical when we all get together. But that's rare these days with so many states keeping us apart. I really loved the Miroku scene. I was reading it to my daughter and we laughed so hard. You've got the gift for humor and should I congradulate you on your first flame??? You seem so pleased!!! Yeah, people like that can't seem to give out constructive critisism so they show off how ASSinine they are by writing like a child. Hmm...anyway, You keep going cause we that like what you write have got your back. TTFN

eek you got a flame... I've gotten three flames from one person they hated how my fic was going so i had to delete it sad really, But oh well ^-^

Your fic is to good to get flammed, who was the evil wretch who flammed you -pulls out a giant spear- i can use the blood shed lol

-evil laughter- ^-^ okay hurry and update i'd love to know what's next!

YOU GOT YOUR FIRST FLAME TOO!!! *Claps* It's so exciting isn't it? I got mine recently, it was a dooooozy:-P

I love this FF btw... its amusing to me.

Hey! (^^) I just want to tell you how I am absolutely enjoying this story! It was hilarious to say the least, to see the interaction between his crazy brothers. LOL. And the sexual tension at the end of the story is just...wow. Throw in the little girl, and it only makes things all the more funny! I understand you're busy, but I really really hope to read more of this^.^ I am sure the same goes for many other readers as well!

Thank you for your review on my other story too...I'm glad you liked it. If you want to read something heart-wrenching, you can check out my fic "Love after Loss". It's a personal fave of mine!

Love,
MissTeak

i REEEEEEEEEALLLLY like ur story!! PWEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ CONTINUE N THNK U!! =)

P.S. lemons pweez

YAY you updated so happy ... and that book an earthly knight.. i love its .. its actually really good ...one of my favorets anywho.. UPDATE SOON please .. i love the story

1 chappy 17 was awesome I never laughed so hard poor Miro..and 2 oooh have fun with school I am glad it is over for now for me...yeah untill summer semester blah. Have fun with the flamers and remember they are fun to play with

can you continue it, i love it, eveyones insane like me i feel so loved, well tchao

please Update soon.

i love the story.....

I enjoyed this chapter especially at the end. I will enjoy reading how the both of them get out of this situation. ")

Awesome!! Finally an update!! How the gods have blessed me!! Update again, soon!!

..... -screams- WHAT SIGHT!!! THIS ONE WANTS TO KNOW!!! you will update and tell this One what it is!!

This fan-fic is awesome please continue pretty please~It not ever day you find a enjoyable fan-fic !!!

Updates, Updates!!!! Update soon.

when will you update? please update soon because i'm dying here......
love the story!

Update soon! This is great!

Funny as hell.

Dani.

this is the greatest story ever!!!!!!! =)

I still love it, but did I mention my hate for cliffies? They're evil incarnate I say!! (lol)

~zen

.. P.S. I normally don't use lol

ohh this is absolutely adorable!.. thank you for the cute and sexy story. Please keep it up. Thanks

loved this chapter and yah Rin is acting more like a two-year old does...you did a good job.

take care and update soon-
Silk_worm

Aww. Kawaii.

-starres at the author- .....

-continues to stare mutely- ......

.............

UPATE!!!

It was awesome! I must read more.. I have to know what happens next so hurry and update soon okay!

This is such a good story...plz write more soon.

I absolutely LOVE this story. It's a bit strange, but that's what makes it interesting. I can't wait for the next chapter. I want to know what Kaido and Fujita are up to.

I absolutely LOVE this story. It's a bit strange, but that's what makes it interesting. I can't wait for the next chapter. I want to know what Kaido and Fujita are up to.

Wow! This story is so fantastic! Honestly, I really can't wait for the next chapter to come up. Please keep writing!:)

this is really good. I mean REALLY!

this is so cool! I love this story..pls do continue to update ^^ looking foreward to the next installment! ^^ keep it up and never give up!! ^^

this is so cool! I love this story..pls do continue to update ^^ looking foreward to the next installment! ^^ keep it up and never give up!! ^^

Your story is frickin awsome. I hope you update soon.

Your storys soooo cute..............

This story is wonderful!! I love your characters... visit my profile on FanFiction for some good stoies by FanFic authors. My name is Humble Goddess. Again, YOU ROCK!!!!!!!!

Love the story!! Please try to update soon. I really like this story!

Ack. awsome chapter you are fabulous, now I can hardly wait for the next chapter. Yay, update soon please.

I like this story, ALOT> Please update it soon. Like tommorow because I need a good story in my life.

Awesome update!! Oh kami, what are those terrible Taisho's up to now??!! :p

great chapter- Loved the part when Kagome started coming up with what sorts of 'combanations' her kids could be....anyways update soon....
so tricky huh? *grin* yeah well the reviews sometimes don't show up when I review on a single spark....so I reviewed on fanfiction.net....why not?

take care-
Silk_worm

'Operation Kagome and Sesshoumaru' huh? Sounds interesting. I'll be looking forward to finding out more about this mysterious 'Operation' lol.

Great chapter!! Please update soon!! I would like to know whaat will happen next to Sesshoumaru and Kagome.

Enjoyed the chapter. Can't wait to see what the Taisho family has instore for both of them.

Great Chapter!

lol. I absolutely love this fic! it's so humorous. please continue soon. ^^.

this is abosuletly AWESOME!
is is fanfuckingtastic.
=)

so If it isn't a problem or anything, could you email me when you update?
Please and thank you!!

I really like the whole lawyer-client set-up. very cool. I just can't wait till they admit they are going to get together. ^_^
so are you hiding the fact that they are demons? Seems that way...so that was probably a stupid thing to say...-_-'
oh well.
sorry about my ranting. Anyways, INCREDIBLE story and please update soon!

=)

That was great. I loved it. Thank you for updating so fast. I hope we get to see the next chapter soon.

LOVED THIS CHAPTER! You are such a great writer, I can't wait to read more. Until next chapter.

Thanks for updating so quick. It was a great chapter. How silly for the other brothers to assume that Kagome was Sesshy's mate just becasue she was with him.....but how smooth too cause they got to kiss!!!!

--Update soon.
Silk_worm

Now things are getting somewhere.
Kagome and Sesshoumaru finally had there first kiss. YAY!!!!!!
I can't wait to see what happens next.
Please, Please, Please, Please, UPDATE SOON!!!!!

Great story. Can't wait till you update!

~Kat

Ooooooh! I can't wait to meet Sesshou's brothers and sister! ^_^

Yah, go u awsome story keep on writing.

i like how you protray the dad or Kido, was that it? anyways this was a cute ch and i can't wait for the next one!
KUDOS TO YOU!
Leira ^.~

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

This story is very well written. I'm really enjoying all aspects and characters in the story. Great job.

zomg! how sweet!
hmm. i think there should be some competition of sesshomaru like another male...kyo or one fo his brothers. mwuahahaha
>]

hi-
thanks for updating, it was a great chapter and I was laughing the entire time! Kaido is such a funny Hentai of a demon!! anways update soon

--Silk_worm

i love this fanfic! keep up the good work!

I must say the chapter with Miroku had me in complete stitches with laughter. I cant wait to read more

great chapter! can't wait till you update....and Kagome falling on the ground? Why couldn't Sesshy give her CPR???

*grin*
Take care and update soon!
Silk_worm

ooooooooh nice chapter! plz keep updating =)

I simply love your story. I was laughing so hard at miroku, that I almost peed my pants. Can't wait for another chapter.
Oh, thanks for the review.

I was wondering when the new chapters will be posted

I was wondering when the new chapters will be posted

I was wondering when the new chapters will be posted

I was wondering when the new chapters will be posted

I was wondering when the new chapters will be posted

I was wondering when the new chapters will be posted

I was wondering when the new chapters will be posted

I was wondering when the new chapters will be posted

I was wondering when the new chapters will be posted

I was wondering when the new chapters will be posted

I was wondering when the new chapters will be posted

so what did he say to Ren? i want to know! any ways i liked the ch and i can't wait for more!
^__^ YEAH!
Leira ^.~

he he i love this story. u must update sooooon, kay !?!? much love XD
Ja-ne.

I read the newest chapter and can't wait to read the next

This story sets me into continues fits of giggles and I love every moment. Would it be overly fan-girlish of me to say, "HOMIGOSH I CANT WAIT TILL THEY HOOK UP!!!111!!!one!!11"? Because if it does, I'll just say that this fic rocks instead... XD Keep up the great work!

hey loved the chapter a little down but still good. keep updating

AWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!! Fluffiness for esshou! WOOT sorry i'm a bit hyper this morning. WEll I enjoyed this chapter verymuch! I can hardly wait to hear what Sesshou has up his sleeves. Update again soon!! Ja ne!

what did he tel her. telllllllllll meeeee.
o.k sorry just had a moment of pure sugar bliss. the fic is going grat keep it up.

I don't think my first review went through but anyway, great chapter. Chocolate pancakes huh? never had those before and it's so cute....Kagome and Sesshomaru getting all warm and cozy on his bed.
great job and update soon!
ta!
Silk_worm

I don't think my first review went through but anyways, great chapter. Chocolate pancakes huh? never had those before and it's so cute....Kagome and Sesshomaru getting all warm and cozy on his bed.
great job and update soon!
ta!
Silk_worm

ah-ha!! chocolate pancakes huh? Never had those before....loved the chapter, it was really cute with Kagome and Sesshomaru getting at cozy on his bed, yeah that would be nice....anyways keep up the good work. and update soon!
Ta!
Silk_worm

sess dont seem too nice hes with his daughter all good parents are nice around their kids

Aww..but I like it when he's bein kinda nice!! Oh well, your story...but I do wonder what he whispered to Rin...Oh the suspence!! Hope you can update again soon!!

Cutest chapter EVER.

I suppose it was too good to be true with the Sesshourmaru and the niceness. As the French say, c'est la vie, no?

awww that's so nicccceeeee!!! i love it when sesshoumaru gets on all paternal on rin. it's so cute =) plz continue to update!!!

What did he say? What did he say? Tell me! Tell me! TELL ME!!!

What did he say? What did he say? Tell me! Tell me! TELL ME!!!

hi- great chapter. hope you update soon. Sesshoamaru's acting so nice...kind of strange.

drop me a line whe you update

ta!
Silk_worm

do you know what time it is...it's 1:26 in the morning...i just couldn't get to sleep until i finish this thing haha.
i love this fic. my favorite part: I didn't know walrus's can talk.
update as soon as you can.

Your awsome. I love you... Not literally... Just update.

Aww that was so sweet I love it.

I really like it, and the updates are really good. Please update soon.

i really like the chapter. i can't wait to read the next one. ^_^

this is your first Fanfic your good!!!

Can't wait for the next chapter. As for getting things in bold, all you have to do is but the b > before the word you want to bold. And then / b > RIGHT after the word that you wanted bold. Take out the spaces of course, and if the karrots didn't show up it's the ones next to the M key!!

~Lady K

To bold something you put b > before the word or statement and / b > after it. (Except without the spacings in between)

Ok, chagne it but leave chapter 8! Ha ha Miroku is so my hero now!

Umm...Rin's acting very old for her age. Two almost three year olds won't ask if their parents trial went well. That's kind of a mature question. Most two year olds still have pacifiers. I like the story line though. Just keep Rin to a believable age.

Okay just remember to keep a copy of this one as an origanail if the the other gets lost or deleted.

SCHOOL IS A PAIN IN THE ASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!

hi- I haven't reviewed your fic for quite a while. I've been busy with school as well...

great chapter though...I can imagine Kagome's shock when she was assigned to Sesshy's home....

Now don't you suppose HE'S going to (ahem) 'endanger' her? *chuckle*
Sorry been eating too much sugar...(sigh) anyway don't feel obligated to update really fast....do so at your own pace.

take care-
Silk_worm

Oh My God! You're going to delete it?!?!?!!? Are you mad, woman?!?!

*cough* Ahem. Sorry about that. It seems my temper got the best of me. I assure you, that won't happen again. Anyways, I love your story. Its REALLY good.

If you're going to delete it, I guess I'll have to wait. I hope to read the newer version soon.

~Killing Perfection

wwwwwwwwwwhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaatttttttttttttttttttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! aere you crazy??????/ please tell me you are crazy how can you delete all of this beutiful story if you delete it put most of the story the same please!!!!! and don''t forget that i will send a review every chapter just to tell you what i think of it. no flames don't worry just critisism.

OMG I have seen tiny plaid ninjas! Would you like some more tea Joseph?...or was that nachoes...*goes to re-watch the episodes*

its awesome now i have to do homework ugh update when u can ill be watching for iy

Definitely different, but I have enjoyed it very much so far.

Thats cool... Hope everything works out for you.. Just don't give up on this story.. I think its awesome.. Can't wait for the next chpater since he now remembers Kags...
Just take your time and we will all wait with baited breath until you add another chapter...
But plz hopefully not to long of a wait..
This is really an awesome story..
Take Care
Mari

Gah!!! how could you do that to me!!!! how!!! *chuckles* nah...j/k

I understand the stress behind being loaded with schoolwork and being busy....so update when you can kay? no pressure

by the way, your fic is one of my favs. from the 'present era.' Most people tend to make a big mess out of it and ugh the story can get all botched up, so to speak.

take care-
Silk_worm

Gah!!! how could you do that to me!!!! how!!! *chuckles* nah...j/k

I understand the stress behind being loaded with schoolwork and being busy....so update when you can kay? no pressure

by the way, your fic is one of my favs. from the 'present era.' Most people tend to make a big mess out of it and ugh the story can get all botched up, so to speak.

take care-
Silk_worm

hi- will you please, pretty please update before I die of old age.....I'm dying to know what happens dammnit!!! *hopeful eyes*
*laugh*

ta!

Silk_worm

i can't wait to find out what happens next. i'm glad that sesshoumaru finally remembered what happened at the club. please update soon! happy writing.

...FUCK KOUGA!!! THAT FUCKING GOOD FOR NOTHING BASTARD!!! Please get himkilled by the law or by in a freak accident or something, please??? Oh, and Update soon!

good job. keep goin. ;D

hi- thanks so much for updating, although I'm not sure if I updated earlier.....hmm....well anyhow....I look forward to reading your fic! It's quite unlike any i've read before, kind of like a twist and great details by the way....keep up the good work!!

oh and by the way, when I saw my pen-name on the top of your chapter 6, I think my jaw litterly hit the floor....*giggle* I didn't think you liked my fics that much.....

anyhow, take care-

Silk_worm.

I like your story!!! Keep up the good work!!! ^_^

Hey!
Well, i was hoping that maybe you could introduce more characters? I absolutely love having rin as a little toddler and i was hoping that maybe kagome could be depicted as being a little bit more serious sometimes? I don't know... i love having her sing randomly and obsess over barbies, but i'd really like for the sess/kag love thing to kick off already!
lol, maybe some more kikyo bashing? that's always nice. Oh, and perhaps the ever-angry kaguya could make an appearance? or perhaps even rin's mother? Another attempt at getting ahold of sesshy's money??
Also, sesshoumaru's father seems interesting, maybe a possible plot development? DO you intend to include Naraku? I doubt i'd mind either way. Anyways, if you plan to do anything twisted or dramatic, please don't have rin be kidnapped or whatever... That has been overdone. OMG!!! Once things get jucier, maybe there could be room for a little love-traingle or square ... he he (i'm getting carried away)

Ok: There needs to be a dramatic escape! Kagome can't take it anymore, and she, Ayame, and the one good guard (forgot his name) all escape. There's a big manhunt, and after a few weeks, after the trio meets up with some interesting homeless people (aka Myoga, Totosai, ect.) they are running out of resources, so they go the only place left: Sesshoumaru's. I'd really like an exciting yet intricately planned breakout scene... and who knows? Maybe the good guard (gah it's making me mad that I can't remember his name) could hook up with Jakotsu? He seems a little... flaming... *winkwink* Well, there's my suggestion! Ja Ne!

Hey! I would love to see a jealous Sesshoumaru and I mean a really jealous Sesshoumaru! I would like to see Kikyo get caught up in her own lies! Kagome seems like a nice person and im not sure why you made Kouga so mean with her because in the story he is in love (or he thinks he is) with Kagome, so, I guess this is a big turn around for Kagome and Kouga! Oh, I thought of something else, I seen a movie where this wardon made these women sleep with these other men and he got money for it. Now that seems like the mean Kouga you've got going. But all is just a thought! and, if Kouga gets caught, Kogome become a hero for saving these women and again Kikyo looks bad. But still, I hope you put a jealous Sess in there, because a jealous Sesshoumaru is a good Sesshoumaru! Ok great story

aha!! you updated!! I was waiting for like forever!! keep up the good work!!! .....

ja!!

Silk_worm

this story is cool. The guy from gravitation names is ryuichi.

well this is good! I know that Kouga can't be threw with Kagome yet, even though I wish he would be! Oh, and please do something mean to Kikyo for this mess! I know someone whe acts a lot like Kikyo (the one you are describing now in this fic), and she lies and is as mean as this one. Oke good fic! Update soon, because I really enjoy this fic!

My!!! This is so awesomeee!!!
Keep writing, KEEP WRITING I Say! lol....
A bunch of kisses

-Kanz

Hi-
I have to admit, you did a great job and even kept the charecters from becoming OOC.

I normally don't read many fics set in the present time, because people tend to make a big 'mess' out of it.....but this fic is good. *chuckle*

Update soon and drop me a line when you do.....

take care-

Silk_worm

hi y cant seshh remember anything??????????? I know he was drunk but yyyyyy???? itsss sooooooo meannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn pooorrr kagssss

i think chap 2 repeated itself is there anyway u can fix this cuz i wanna read it!!