im not telling you what to do and im not telling you to update but i think your story is really great and its actually one of the few i actually read all the way through. normally ill read the first chapter and go to a new story but this is the best i've read so far
what your chose to do with the story is your own desicion to make i just thought you might like to know someone has another insight on it

well I just started reading this entire story today and I think that its pretty well written. The grammar and spelling errors were pretty much minimal and alot less than the grammar and spelling errors in my story's. I think that so far the story is getting good and I really hope you continue this story if you decide to take down the story please add me to the list of people that you e-mail it to thanx

hi i lovd ur story & i hope u continue but if u dont then i understand.i loved the chapters that u did the plot is great & i loved how kagome is so strong in the story & the plot is great so ya well hope continue & as i said if u dony then i tottaly understand :)

Cat:people who complain about grammer are ideots i for one suck at both lol =^.^= i really like this story its sad that nu may not updat it *sigh*
BCAt: *walks in huming with gun*
Cat: =.=; ummm BC?
BCat: iv been hunting.
Cat: do i wont to know?
BC: Nope,...... please update
Cat: *looks outside* =0o= okkk im kinda scared now remind me not to ask about ur "hunting" again BC

You know you really leave people in suspense.. When other people piss you off telling you to update.. I mean, It would be nice and everything, but oh well. I read your story like.. I don't even know how many times and everytime I'm lake DAMNIT ALL.. I think the fact that you have such an original story, is really cool. Cus .. I like writing, and it never turns out all cool and like OMGOSH kinda thing.. I don't remember what feedback is either so I don't think I can give you any. My teachers are always saying they need feedback and I'm always ignoring them.. So..XP
Anyway.. If you ever feel like letting me read the rest of your story, let me know, and tell me what feedback is :O So I can give you some. Kay I'm done babbling now :) Happy Thanksgiving! An have a nice day *nods*

I may of just started reading this fic but i like it. It's out of the ordinary and is actually holding true to the characters. Kira wasn't just thrust onto us by some weird chance. I ike that she has a background and she's explained. You can tell it's thought out and not just randomly typed up. Well any way please please don't stop I like this and it's been a long long long time since i could find a creative story that flows and is not in with all the other cliches of inuyasha that I like. Please don't stop. (Just so u know cuz this is what i would think: I am not just typing what i think i want you to hear i acctually mean this and i really do like this.)

You shouldn't let people get to you. I for one have always enjoyed reading your stories while I have always just rated. I never saw a point in giving verbal feedback as it is mostly just silly things. The whole 'you should do this' and 'hurry update or die' stuff does get old.. Sometimes people need to understand that good writing takes time. With time, a story can become something great. So thus I leave you this review saying that I find your plots wonderful and congratulate you on writing from the person's view point. I for one, am horrible at doing that. You continue to write what you want to write and update when you want to. Keep up the good work on your stories.

im really sory to here that u wont wright on this site any more but in my opinion your really tallented as soon as I started to read i was hooked on the story well if u ever wished to become a writer u would do grate well bye

I throughly enjoyed the beginning of this fanfic. It seems to me that it will just get better as it goes on. I look forward to seeing if it is continued.

I really do enjoy your fic. The only problem is that you have a few misplaced words. If you dont keep posting, can you e-mail me the story? Keep up the good job

you write well. grammatical mistakes are unavoidable (sorry, i have 'proper english' fetish), but the story is well written, not hasty, well planned, and fun. i have no actual suggestions for the story because i think you are doing a wonderful job and i don't like altering the vision of others. i'm sorry to hear that you plan to stop posting, seeing as your one of the better writers i've come across. good luck with your stories.

Are you fucking crazy your plot line in this story is great the spelling and grammar is not perfect but it is pretty damn close to it.And if you were to stop writing it me as a curious writer would never know the end I love to see fresh new Ideas on these sites. And I have yet to find another on of these fanfics that has the same story line as this.Please don't give up if you try really hard you could become a writer in the big where everybody will know who you are.Because your plots are good and the feeling is there now just put your own characters with it and you could be famous and no I am not just saying this as a distraught fan who's devestated at the news I am saying this as an author of many short stories who has been praised by college proffessors and professinal writers since the fifth grade about my stories. Well I hope you don't give up and good luck.

I remember this story when it first came out. I thought it was great then and i think that its great now. I would like to see some of this story but i understand the whole irritation with the whole "update now" responses. They get annoying and are rather rude. Just hope you don't ever get an entire paragraph saying "UPDATE".

hey, i'm an author on a single spark too, and i totally understand how you feel about those messages. well, i just wanted to send you a real one, with real comments. i love the plot of this story. i've never seen a setting like this one in other stories, and i love to see new things. not only that, but i like the images you put in my mind with the descriptions. i also really like the fact that you didn't draw out the whole inu/kag thing. i think you really got into kagome's mind and a part of her attitude that we don't often see...thank you for writing this, and please continue to post on this site. or, if you decide not to, i'd like it if you'd email me the chapters so i can read them...my email is blood_mistress_666@yahoo.com

thank you!!!

I think your writing is a marvel and it pains me that you are not getting the recongition you deserve. I agree with mediaminer, since I haved posted stories on there thinking "how is it possible for this story to have over 800 reviews when its long winded and annoying and just bad all over" while the story I post I spent months over to perfect only to get a scattered few. So yeah, I know your frustration. We can be thankful the few who will take the time to give a decent review, such as how we could better our work, what they like about it, and such. "Update now" doesn't cut it. I will look for this story on ff.net if you still plan on finishing it the way you like and hope you do continue. You have massive potential to go far, even professional if you wanted. Keep up the good work, have faith and I for one hope to see more stories :)

Hi I am a girl who had been reading you story and I like then so far 4 story from u and my favoties are Love is and Inmates. I won't tell you to write now and other things like every one else has, but the plot are good I like your plots realy not a lie. I like to read more of your storys when u finish and thst if you finish on this site. I sorry for not rating the chapter of the stories but if you life I can start now. I hope to read more of your story soon, but if not I hope your friends like them.
By Jc13685

Please don't give up on this site. I love your story. Its the first one with good grammer and an original plotline in ages. I don't nag, just consider it.

I hope that you reconsider taking your story off of the site, because I greatly enjoy your story. I first read this story on another site, and it was a little futher ahead; however, i think that you are a good write, and I enjoy the plot of this story.
So I hope that you continue to work on the story, because it is rather interesting.

i love the story and it would be a real shame if you stopped posting them. a lot of ppl would be missing out on your wonderful writing. i hope you decied to keep posting i love the story and really wann see how it eand up. thank you very much!

NOOOOO . . . Please dont take off this story . . . it has captivated me so much . . . i am completely enthralled with it . . . also . . . you arent bad at your grammar and spelling . . . i guess i shall also ask you nicely to update it . . . but if you decide not to post anymore can you PLEASE email me this story . . . i would be in your debt . . . *gives puppy dog eyes* . . .

I really like the storyline too . . . it is very different than the whole "oh inuyasha betrayed me and now i must run to sesshoumaru" . . . And you keep the characters in character . . . for lack of a better word . . . And truthfully i wouldnt change anything about this story or how you write . . .

Sincerely,

Heather

I have only just now read your story. I enoyed it so far and I'm sad that you won't be updating anymore. Though I couldn't blame you if your feedback was nothing but, "WRITE MORE! UPDATE NOW!"

I loved your idea for the story, and Kira was turning out to be an interesting character. I was a bit confused and curious as to what the card on her flowers said that caused such a reaction from her. I was also looking forward to seeing how this party would turn out, as well as Kagome's living with Kira and Sesshomaru.

But, just letting you know I enjoyed your story, and writing style. Keep at it!~3

Hey It's me again turns out the story I was looking for just had the same name as yours sorry about that but I really do like your story keep up the good work.

Hey didn't you have this fanfic on mediaminer I think I remember it from there but I can't find it. Anyway I hope you update real soon I luv this story.

haha luv it!

Hmm...pretty good so far...