this is good update soon

what happened next? write more plz!!!!

NOOOOOOO!!!!!!*cries* PLEZ CONTINUE!!!!!DONT MAKE ME BEG MORE!!! ;____;

:) you did so well :) and i'm happy the way this has turned out :) if you need help with the other chapters just ask :) or any of you other story's i'll give you ideas and help with any of them :)

NOT FAIR!!!!! i wanted to read the rest and i think you sould make your cahpters longer.

well... first of all i just want to clean this up... Sesshy's and Inu's dad is dead, Sesshy's mum is died recently... Inu and Inu's mum are his only relatives so he moved to live with them... the way he's dealing with the recent loss of his mother is pushing every one away.. and basically hasn't let him self grieve or is still grieving... he's kinda an orphan and doesn't want to get hurt any more...
the next chapter could begin with sesshy cleaning up his room after Kagome left and finds the yellow ball where the picture of his mother had been and (after a flash back) he realises that Kagome might (big MIGHT- in his opinion) have been saying sorry about going into his room... he gets annoyed about the emotions the realisation brings up (he doesn't want to have/refuses to recognise he has emotions- 'feeling's are there just to cause pain, better not to have them than to be hurt by them').
He goes for a walk to cool off at the same park he said good bye to Kagome 2 years before and thinks about how he hurt Kagome when he found her in his room and that he regretted it (unwillingly) because he realised (after another flash back) that it was just a misunderstanding and that she was apologising for going into his room and possibly not apologising for the death of his mother. When he's walking he finds Kagome siting on a swing by her self and decides to talk to her. He walks up to her from behind and says "Did you know my mother died when you were in my room?".... if you want you can put that as a cliffy... then in the next chapter (or not) she says "oh, Sessho-!... no, i didn't find out till i asked Inuyasha's mother" Sesshomaru sat on the swing next to her keeping his face passive and avoiding eye contact and was silent for a long time then said softly "I'm sorry.. I'm sorry for hurting you... it is just hard to... seeing how she.... and its just better if...." he became silent as his hands tightened on the swing chains and his hair covered his face from the world in a screen of silver "I'm sorry" he growled then quickly stood and Kagome saw the pain, sorrow and a million other emotions in his eye's before his eye lids blocked them from view and the mask crashed down over his face. He buried all his emotions deep in his bleeding heart, locked them in and froze his heart. Only when he turned away from her did he open his eyes and they showed nothing but the spark of life that never fades till death. His flickered and, even though impossible, dulled. He walked away with steady, even steps he heard sobbing from behind him 'why is she crying?' but he didn't care and continued on his walk.

so there you go :) hope this helped.. i would write more but i'm running out of battery on my laptop and i'm not sure how much more this will let me type in :) p.s Kagome's crying cause Sesshy can't and she doesn't want him to be cold to her and to go back to being the old sessy she knew and she feels so sad that he has to go through all that pain

It's so sad. But very good.

wow!!!!!!! this is soooo great :) even though it was short :) i loved it :) i can't wait till next chapter :) the same with your other story's :) i just can't wait :)

woo!i love this story :) next one please :) i love it :) if you get stuck at any stage don't hesitate to reply and ask? cause i like this story and would hate to see it discounted k? update as soon as you can :)

HELLOZ I LIKE THE STORY PLZ UPDATE SOON
LIKEE TOMORRROW MAYBE
LOLZ
BYE

I'm glad your continuing this!! but who's eyes were they? lol!

update update update plz plz plz sooooooon

I am going to send the hamsters in if you don't update soon ............ The ham hams are very angry so do whats right and update K?

-_~ update soon please luv it

Awesome chappie!!! plz plz plz plz update the next chapter sooooooon?????? ToT

So ummm is Koa a made-up character? He sounds great! anyways im glad you decided to continue I love this story!

i loved it but i didnt lyk the fact that it looks lyk now Koa and Kagome are going to start liking each other and Kagome and Sesshomaru are the ones that should start liking each other though this fan fic is still awsome ;D

*Celestial*Youkai*

I loved this chaper and can't wait for the next one. But please,please,please,please,please,please,please,please don't let Koa and Kagome get together.
Kagome and Sesshoumaru are so ment to be NOT Koa and Kagome

Loved it. Please update.

Loved the chapter! Please post a new one soon!

Thank you, thank you, thank you!

THANK YOU SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!!!!! Now i have something to read yay.

yay thanks for continueing i will review the next chapter the second its posted lol

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz more it's awesome u shouldnt end it like that

Hell no don't leave it there. I want more more more dammit more.

CONTINUE, CONTINUE, CONTINUE, CONTINUE, CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PLEASE IT WOULD BE SO GREAT IF YOU COULD CONTINUE THIS STORY. KAGOME AND SESSHOUMARU SHOULD GET MARRIED AND HAVE A KID AT THE END OF THE STORY AND EVERYONE ELSE STILL NEEDS TO COME IN. YOU SHOULD ADD AT LEAST 5-8 MORE CHAPTERS.
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE

YOU SHOULD CONTINUE ITS A GREAT STORY but that is just my opinion

More More More! I love this story!!!!! Please update more!!!!!

dont stop here. i thought it was getting interesting. well now that we all know that sesshomaru is well again what about inuyasha. how will he take it now that kagome is going to be with sesshomaru. i think you should have them fighting over her.

wtf of coarse you should continue im begging you to continue!!! i promise that if you continue i will review every freakin chapter but plz dont end it there plz keep on this is sooooooooo good

I thought the Fanfic was great!!! I think that you should continue the story, and write about Kagome and Sesshomaru having a relationship. And who is the Bao character? You should make him a rival to Sesshomaru for Kagome's heart.

an epilogue would be nice.
but it's your story,and it's entirely up to you.
good luck.take your time,and take care.

oooooh come on!! u can´t leave it like that!!! pleaaaaaaaase, make it a little longer.. please??
it´s a nice ending though, but.. I really really would like to know what would happen after

great story!! once I started reading it I just couldn´t stop ^^

First of all, DON'T SCARE ME LIKE THAT. I don't think I can handle his death and second of all, I love the story. Please update soon.

OMG IM CRYING....SOBSOB YOU SHOULD CONTINU FOR I LUVED IT!

WOW! Fricken awesome! I love it! i thought you killed him. And even thought that's a cute ending it hink you should continue it

PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE
write the next chapter. I'm dying to know what happens next. Sesshoumaru isn't really dead is he?
I REALLY hope not?

oooooh noooo ur joking my u cant just leaveit there plz update soon i am inlove with this story its awsome!!!!!!!! plz update soon and u cant make sesshomaru die right? i mean he part of the whole plot and he isnt weak enough to just all his energy like that right omg plz update soon!!!!!!! i wanna seeee wat happensssss!!!!! lol

plz update soon im beggin!!!!!!!!!


*Ceestial*Youkai*

Please update soon! I love this story so far!!!

WHAT!!

WHAT!!!!!!!!

WHAT THE HELL JUST HAPPENED!?!

HE CANT BE DEAD... He just CANT BE!!!!!!

You must be wrong... he can't be DEAD!!!

*sigh*

Whatever...

I'll just have to wait for the next chapter now wont I...

l8r

Woah!!!
I am in love with this story!
You should update as soon as possible & if you have the time, maybe create lengthier chapters.
Much love for you & your story,
Amanda

SESSHOMARU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU CANT DIE!!!!!!

HE'S DEAD!! he cant be. update soon i wanna find out what happens next.

good chapter...but its sooo sad

I LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!

i love the story but i have a question is kagome and inuyasha dating or are they just friends and does inuyasha like kagome more than a friend and vice versa just wanted to know oh and does kagome returne sesshoumaru's feelings

Love it. Update soon.

i really like your story and i was wondering if you could make the chapters a little longer.

Great story... and... that last part with Sesshoumaru talking about his dad and the stars and such kinda reminded me of the lion king... hehehe... hmmm... I think I need to stop watching disney movies...

l8r

that was a good update...the begining sounded like the Lion King tho...heeheehee ^_^
please update again soon!

Love it. You have done it again, Killing Perfection. That was stupendous.

THIS CHAPTER WAS WAY TO SHORT!!!!!!!!!
But still really good just next time MAKE THE CHAPTERS LONGER!!!!!!!
please

OMG!!! U have to Update ASAP!! Wat will Kags do now that she knows they are brothers? Why does Sesshomaru always have to be an ass? Plz tell me why!!! Update Update

*jumps up and down* update!update!update!update!update soon! this story ROCKS!!!!!!!!!

really good... continue it

EEK! Please don't tell me she and Inu are an item. Close to it least it looks like. Here's hoping he finds someone else.

Love it love it! keep the great work! updeat soon!

Love it love it! keep the great work! updeat soon!

it was so... touching!! pls don't leave it like that!!!!!!!!

I hope not the end. Growing up waiting for him maybe? *hopeful look*

OMG!! *cries* WWWAAAHHH!!! That was sooooo emotional! *sniffle* Ok Ok it was great. I love it. *bites lip and gives 2 thumbs up* cho!

Nice. Very interesting, the things you alluded to but left it open enough for imagination to take over. It could defiantely make for an interesting AU full story. I'm thinking....that first part as a prolouge type event and the main stroy about the two of them meeting up again in the future. I could even see her being friends with Inuyasha when they meet again (instantly making Sesshomaru pissed and feel betrayed) but since Inu's a 'bastard' them not having the same last name and her not knowing they're actually half brothers. Could make for some interesting things...especially since Sesshou's kind of OOC in this, in the future he could be more his standard self overtly and the time and events in between the reason for it. Okay, I'm done blathering. The crux of it all was...I liked it!

Aww so sad!! Sess can be sooo stupid some times!!! Jeez!!.....Plz update ASAP!!