oh and 4 and a half/5 :) It really is good

-cough cough- just seeing the word "cookie" and "ham" made me drool a bit cuz im hungry. haha. xD o well. guess the other already got em. time to go eat some food then :) -goes off in search of ham- haha. xD

Ooh! I found three things off from this chapter

1. Shippo was mentioned in Chapter One. He was being yelled at by Kagura, cause apparently the watercolors weren't in the right place.

2. In the first chapter, Miroku doesn't seem to know InuYasha, but in this chapter, they're the best of friends.

3. Kagome was going out with Bankotsu, a federal convict, who is also named in this chapter as a tormentor of InuYasha in Middle School. I suppose this one isn't necessarily inconsistent, but just a bit odd.

I still love this fic though!!!!!

Oh, this was awesome! I seriously love this fic. Sango, and Kagura are both so hilarious, and so was Kikyo. Honestly though, Kagome'd better lose Yasha soon, Seshoumaru doesn't deserve to be alone, in all his totally hot glory. I love this story! You'd better update soon!

I'm not to sure but is it the napkin thing. I've laughed and well laughed some more. this story is writen very good and I'm loving the whole kagome falls in love while seeing inu. Loved the dancing and the dress description. post more soon.

hugs and puppies

I really like your story!!.. but.. I thought that Miroku didn't know Inuyasha O.o

Anyway.. hope you update soon!!

Oh goodness, I really do love this fic. It was my one source of entertainment while on a very long car ride, and I fell in love with it along the way. Very well written! I can't wait to read more! Kagura and Koga are just too funny, along with Sango and her monk. 3 The dancing part was simply phenomenal; I've taken dance for a few years, so it was a joy to read that chapter.

oh yeah another thing u messed up the age... okay kag is 25 so tht means inu is like 25 or so..
sess is 29...
in chap.8 he tells sango tht his mom died 10yrs ago but like in a chapt. b4, he told kag. tht his dad remarried like a couple of months after his mom died. tht means inuyasha should b like 10yrs old OR sess dad BEEEN cheated on his mom and had an illicit affair and had inuyasha whom's mom he married right after his first wife died.
okay thts all

great story....
umm bankotsu was her boyfriend from an american federal prison and it turned out to b the same guy who used to terrorize inuyasha in middle school...
okay i want a white chocolate macademian nut cookie
hurry and update

Uhm...The paintings that Kagura rejected in the first chapter are what Kouga used to distract Naraku with?
It's ok if i don't get a cookie cookie, a pixelized cookie will do just fine! LOL!!
Great story by the way. You have to update sooner, it's one of my favourite stories!
-Tenshi no Kami
(^.^)v

~Mutters~ I'm probably gonna sound insane, but...
I really, really like this story. I mean, I like all fanfiction in general, but there are precious few that have a true artistic feel about them {None of them being mine-perhaps why none have been uploaded} and to me, this story seems to have that quality.
It's probably right under my nose, but I don't have an answer to your question, though I must agree with XOXO. Did Sessh dye his hair? Please update soon~
Love and fudgesicles~ Tainted

Two things. WONDERFUL! (that was just a side-bar comment not one of the two...)
1) When did Sesshoumaru get black hair when he HAD blonde?
2) how the heck did he age two years in like one chapter (which had been a couple of weeks after he asked her to go dance)?
Other than these minor, MINOR details perfect!
*Oh and did Sesshoumaru ever send his artwork to Kagura?*

So... I stumbled across this story today... and I'm hooked. Please update soon, I can't wait!

heehee. I love this story.

This is some great stuff! When I read Sango's line about the "six inch hooker boots and snakeskin pants" I just about damn near choked on my soda pop. My goodness, that was soo funny. Keep up the fantastic work. Toodles!

Sango had just gotten back from America and Paris, not just years ago.

The funkiness is that, in the first Chap, Miroku and Sango are both trying to find out what Inuyasha is like, and now Miroku has known Inu since school. Right? :P Love this fic. You could pretty much have Kagome and Sess riding pink elephants and eating paint chips, and I would STILL see absolutely no problems with it. Also, I'm loving the frequent updates.

Best of luck!
~SCN

Thanks for clearing up the time frame when his mother died. I have to say, I really like the fact of how insecure Sess's character is. It completely compliments Kagome's.

Emily

I LOVE this fic. It is so romantic and simple.I like to read something that's real and meaningful besides just smutty. Don't get me wrong, I love citrus, but I enjoy it even more when it is based on love rather than just lust. Great job.

Why laugh at Kagura and Naraku as a couple? I don't really know, I just remember sitting in my room by myself and laughing so hard. I had been fairly new to fan fiction at the time, and this fic was the first I had read with that particular pairing, and for some reason I found it hilarious. I must'uv been on something.. j/k

Anyway, great work.

-miki-chan

Please send me updates when you post for your stories on A Single Spark. Especially for Angels Are Made From Ink and Pencils, as I especially enjoy it. Thank you.

~Lady Chiichobi

That was the cutest most sweetest chapter ever! The ending with Kagura and Naraku was so funny I loved how he knew what she was doing even from down stairs. That seems a little too familiar to me but still very funny.

No mistakes at least not that I can recall. I'm so content now that I've had a nice long chappie to read from this story. I can seriously enjoy the rest of my night now! lol ^_^

I really like this story. However, I am slightly confussed. Did Sess's mother died when he was young or in high school. At one point he tell her that she died when he was little, and then at the end it is referencing her death as a little more 10 years ago.

The latter makes sense for why he would still habor such a grudge against Inuyasha and his mother. She being so other woman and INuyasha being the proof.

Please update as soon as possible. I really love this story.

Emily

LOVELY!!! More please!

please update soon

This story is so Beautiful!!!!!!!!!!
Please...Please KEEP GOING!!!!!!!!!!!
:)

Love the new chapter! More please!

Love the new chapter! More please!

I knew bookmarking this fic months ago would pay off! ^^ thanks for the nice update!

XD It feels like forever has passed since I read this story!! You have no idea how excited I was when I saw the title and read the summary again!! Please continue to update and write this story!! =D

i luv da chap!!!!cant wait 2 c wut happens when sess and inu and kags meet n da same room!!!!dat should b interesting!!!!!!anyway post again soon!!!!!! ps:peac+luv+respect=happiness

YAY!!! New chapter! Is it wrong that I am oh so excited?? I think not, anyway. I love how Sesshoumaru basically volunteered Kagome into ball room dancing. That was so funny but honestly, who could turn him down? Anyway, glad for the update! Take care and I cannot wait to read more. ^_~

Woh, you know its very mean to leave people on edge in such a story that is placed in winter & hidden love, Dw I love it, the story has great structure. Keep it up.

MoniQ

haha I literally burst out laughing when I read that kagura and naraku were married. Please continue the story. :)

I've been waiting for months for an update on this story, PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!

:O MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i... need ...... more

yes! i loved this chapter! it was amzing! an di can't wait til they have breakfast! but one question, and not meaning to sound rude or pesterous, why is kagome's last name Amefuri? you might have mentoined it before and it has escaped my mind. I humbly appoligise if you have..

ohhh!!! this is sooo good!!^^but i wonder?..who could ever ignore sesshomarus presence?lol ^^

awesome, awesome, awesome... i am loving it.... great job.... update soon....

This truly is an amazing story. I love it! More creative than most of the others I've read. Update soon!

Haha! I haven't read this story in soooo long! So when I saw your response to my review, I suddenly remembered and started giggling madly! lol! And omfg.....I had forgotten just how much I love this story!!! lol! I hope you update soon cause I just became addicted all over again! *grins*

Wow, great update. I really enjoy reading this story it's up there on my favorites list. Of course, I can't wait to read more!! ^_~

Maybe it's been brought to your attention already, but you mention in this chapter that Sesshoumaru's hair is black.

Otherwise, the developing relations between all of the characters has me "turning the pages" so to speak.

fun.

I really enjoy reading this. It seems you've finally settled on a point of view as well. One chapter (where he finds a note from Kouga) ended with Sesshoumaru and the POVs switched, but that was a one time thing. However, I like the opening paragraph in the first person, like a journal entry of the day, but with no true telling details - just a nice little entrance into the chapter.

This story is a nice, calming read and I'm really excited to read what happens next. I envy Kagome. God doesn't even know how I'd feel about an artist seeing me as a muse. I can't wait till she sees his work. Thanks and I hope to see an update soon!

Of all your works, this one's my favorite. As an artist myself, I see a lot of my own struggles in Sesshoumaru. You've done a great job of capturing the intense emotion an artist has about their work and their need for inspiration. Plus, it's just a lovely portrayl. Keep up the good work!

The plot this story is really orginal compared to alot of the ones out there. I really hope that you continue writing it.

i love you! update?

i love it. update soon

uww I wonder what Kagome will think if she sees Sessho-kun's Sample art,..... will sshe think Stalker! xD but hey she has a beautiful Stalker. Anyway Update whenever you can Ja ne

I LOVE THIS STORY! I just wnat to know when will Sesshomaru meet Kagome? will they be togther in the end or will it be like to life storys in one? keep up the good work!

this fic is sooo cute! u should totally continue it!

I like this fic so far. It's very cute and light-hearted, like a breath of fresh air. I hope to see a little more of Sesshoumaru pretty soon, though I do like his artistic perspective of Kagome and how it's kept at a distance. I'm also curious to see if you're going to make Inuyasha his brother. In the first chapter I thought her boyfriend was Hojou. Boy, was I surprised! I just can't see them as not being brothers...

Please update soon so I can hopefully get a glimpse of how you'll portray Sesshoumaru in this story. Good luck with your upcoming chapters!

I'm enjoying the stalker Sesshomaru. I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope your next chapter is a bit longer if not than I hope it'll come out sooner.

Yeah...I'm too lazy to actually sign in XD

But I ADORE this story so far! Which is really saying something cause I was up late last night and now I'm cranky XD and when I'm cranky, I'm BIG on the criticism lol But I love the idea and I love how you're writing it so keep up the good work!

Wow! I've been have a really cruddy life lately, and this fic just made everything seem like it was no big deal! Seriously, I don't know...maybe it's because it's been so long since I've read anything with such great grammer? But this fic makes me feel really happy and content when I read it!

Please update soon!

i'm very intrigued!! i like how you described sesshoumaru's artistic view of kagome, and your writing is very "clean". simple. so all in all, great job!! i hope you update soon!

byee~~

ur doing great...please update soon