Reviews for Debt by AnitaGrace

rowdysgirl- Thu 30 Aug 2007
Oh where have you been wandering? Far from the tale you began? I keep checking, you don't keep writing. This is a heavy imbalance in the universe. You must correct it. I must know how this ends. This is very charming and funny. Now be a good little author and write!

luna- Thu 17 May 2007
that explains a few things about sess-him being a demon that is.

ElegantPaws- Thu 17 May 2007
How absolutely marvelous to finally see an update of a fiction I did think had been abandoned. It has such a wonderful premise and began superbly. I continue to like it very much and have noted a “voice” change in Kagome, not so quick to flare up anymore. Interesting, keen to see where you take it. Also noted change in Sesshoumaru more POV. Glad to see it resurface and looking forward to the coming chapters lemony goodness in future much appreciated. Nice to have it back. So far so very interesting.

Alandrias- Mon 16 Apr 2007
NO FAIR!!!!! i'm really getting into this too! how will kags react when she find out she has powers :O how will she react when she find out about all the demons!!!!!

Tana-san- Mon 26 Mar 2007
Any of the Inu cast in tight jeans is quite a turn on. So, I like the intro. It's humorous and yet informative...hmmm, yeah. Anyway, nice job. I'll be looking in for more as it seems like you may be a delightful new addition to this fandom. God Bless with your fic.

ElegantPaws- Mon 26 Mar 2007
A very pleasant "background" chapter. Most usually think nothing happens in these, but it is all about the setting. More importantly, I loved the elaboration at the end re Jaken, and the subtlety of the writing...and the "noticing"...parts like these help very much to forward the plot, but even more the human sensibilities. A most enjoyable and amusing chapter...

Eternity of Tears- Mon 26 Mar 2007
hmm...very good chapter. I liked the beginning and how you decrbied the sowrds and the events that are not to be named, very humorous.
ohh..i can't wait to see why tenseiga is acting the way it is! ^_^

Please update soon!


ps.-thanks for emailing me with the update, i appreciated it!

hasu86- Mon 26 Mar 2007
you updated! hahahah, i was wondering where you went off to. i'm happy happy though, and after reading this chapter, i've somehow developed a soft spot for Jaken, aww, poor little annoying toad. lol, i really loved it! continue soon!
-hasu86

swtdrm01- Mon 26 Mar 2007
Thank you for alerting of the update and I love the new chapter and can't wait for the next one. Great job.

Sarah- Mon 19 Mar 2007
Great story. I love your sense of humor, and the way you've portrayed Kagome. The whole "Flashing of the old man" scene gave me the giggles, and everyone at work thought I was insane. I look forward to reading your next update. Just out of curiosity, do you alert your readers when you update? If so, could I be added to that list? My email is chemical_imbalance83@yahoo.com

Kanazawa- Sat 17 Mar 2007
Well done, well done!! I love the author commentary interspersed throughout the chapter- very funny! I am looking forward to seeing how this fic goes. P.S. I have been to Boston- beautiful place.

Ava 365- Thu 08 Mar 2007
I just love this fic!! It's so original and hilarious!! I hope you post next chapter soon.

ElegantPaws- Tue 06 Mar 2007
I can tell this is going to be highly amusing looking forward to more.

EmbraceSolitude- Tue 06 Mar 2007
lol. This really reminds me of Ouran High School Host Club.

luna- Mon 05 Mar 2007
its inuyasha isn't it?.....
..
cant............wait....................
the anticipation is killing me. damn people and always with their damn clifies.

hasu86- Mon 05 Mar 2007
ooohhhhhh, i remember reading this some time ago but i guess i stopped seeing how i was a few chaps behind. hah! but i'm back again and boy i must say that i am loving it!! mmhmmmm, very nicely written! *thumbs up* i'll be waiting to read more so continue soon!!
-hasu86

Eternity of Tears- Mon 05 Mar 2007
this is very interesting! I loved that dispute with Kouga and susan about kagome!
XD

well, i'd like to keep reading this so if it isn't a bother, could you please email me when you update? (i promise to review)

=D

once again, great chapter and please update soon!

Yukino- Sat 06 Jan 2007
For Chapter 2:

The manner in which you tell the story is refreshing. I enjoyed reading this chapter specially the alarm clock scenario.

Yukino- Sat 06 Jan 2007
For chapter 1.

Kudos for the wonderful play of words.

DarkMiko6Decortiquer- Wed 03 Jan 2007
Wau funny! Lean chicken? Heh!

-Dani.

Tori- Tue 02 Jan 2007
I'll say this write more, it's good and do not down yourself ok it is a fine work and it's coming along ok. Continue on when you can.Your idea works.

Flightoffancy- Sat 23 Sep 2006
Okay, so this is a flirty, funny story and I realy like it. It is set in a place that I have never been and it is a situation that I have not read about, so it is unique and original.

U love the way you described Miroku. Very sexy and most writers have a tendency to overlook this most enticing character and make him somewhat of a buffoon. I don't think he is but hides his more sympathetic feelings for protection.

I think your chapters are just fine as they are and I love cliffies. THat is what makes people keep coming back to finish the story.

I think that you have a really good story going here and I hope to see more of it soon.

Til next time, Deb. pegasus4@bellsouth.net

swtdrm01- Fri 22 Sep 2006
I like long chapters, but in between would be good as well.

odango- Fri 22 Sep 2006
::Lol; thats funny good work update soon

Dana Daidouji- Wed 23 Aug 2006
I had so much fun reading this! I like the fresh way in which you write. Maybe she could be majoring in Women Studies? I saw it once in a movie if I remember correctly. I think it has to be with sociology. Update soon!

SesshomaruCrazy- Mon 21 Aug 2006
Sounds like it is going to be an interesting story.. Nice intro into it.. Cant wait for the actual story.. Hurry with next chapter..
Mari

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