WOW... this was really really good... i give it a 10 matter of fact i'm gonna rate it and give u all tens... you deserivet for a well writen ff... ty for the GREAT and i mean GREAT story

Wow. That was really hot. It's just such a pity it's a oneshot:)

I really liked how you wrote this and I would be interesting in reading what would happen next, but I understand if you wish to keep it a one-shot.

wowwwwww...that was darn good stuff XD

WOW! that was amazing you are a one shot genius. looking foreward to maybe a part two or just more one shots. keep up the great work!

Wow...that was deliciously citrusy.

Honestly this fic and the lemon was great! ^_^ good work i hope you keep on writing ^_^

Perfect. I don't believe it's your first one. You did awesome.

its kinda sad..... but really hot....

I luv it. I wish you wrote more as a story but the lemon was perfect. Especially the setting, a beach in Jamica

i liked this alot

Nice! Looking foward to your other stories.

I really enjoyed this. Kagome and Sesshoumaru were in character, and I don't think I've ever heard of Kagome running away to Jamaica! The only things I can find at fault in this fice were some grammatical errors, but then I don't think anyone who isn't a grammar nut would really notice or care. All in all, I thought this was excellent and refreshing, and I hope you continue to write.

I think you should write more on this!!
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really enjoyed it!!! needs to be a two shot though. hehe

Ooooh!! Yummy... I loved it. Please write more one shots like this soon!

Wow I love your this story sooo much it's sooo wrong but at the same time sooo right!!!
Please update