| yes! I loved the fluff! I'm all fluttery right now! lol. and I like how you got right to him telling her. Don't get me wrong, I like ones where he has trouble and all, but man the guy is jost SO slow!!! Sessh: WHAT?! SM: SEE?! lol but really loving the story!
| LOL! I liked the ending convo, and the story is really good. I liek the ones that are in kagome POV so thats just an added bonus!
kilala_shippo(not logged on)- Sat 05 Aug 2006
It is a little short and isn't paragraphed off enough. I like its beginning but add something to spice it up. Other than that, it's a good start.
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YAY! Your making a story! I'm really happy now! YES! It's good so far and I'm guessing that this chapter was here to introduce your storya nd the plot? I dont care because I bet it will be great. Hope ya update soon! I'll check tomorrow for your update!
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