I dont understand. Did Sesshomaru decide to stay in the business and leave Kagome? I do not understand. Can you make it clear?
thanks

This story was one that made you acctually stop and think. The truth presented, that which we are all subject to knowing, is so simple yet complex in understanding it. This truth and reason placed in this story are part of our own world and help you relate to the characters' and the cold, bitterness life can throw at you. There was so much passion and insight wrote into this it could very well be nonfiction. It just powerful, meaningful, and pensive in a dark sort-of way. Irony, scarcasm and the twisted way the world spins is omnipresent throughout this piece. The ending leaves nothing to be desired because it proves nothing's perfect, including life. Wonderfully written. You are very intelligent and wrote this exceedingly well. Think of my adding 'Vastly Overrated' to my favorites a handshake of appreciation to you. Thank you for writting this I know it must have taken a very long time. It is so nice to know some writters write more than just happily ending fairytales.

This Chappie was serious yet fun at the same time I loved it can't wait for more!

Loves Arry

Love it!! I am so happy with the way you started, it wasn't cliche or overused. It was original and to the point. I love the way you brought the readers into Kagome's head right away, capturing the confused and muddled thoughts that make complete sense. Extremely realistic characterization. Highest praise for your work, Can't wait to continue and read more. :D ^_~

I love your story. I'm 14 and homeschooled because public school was unbearabley boring and easy for me. I've read thousands of stories out of anything ranging from a getaway from work to complete and utter boredom. I've even read Hannibal Rising. Your story is one of the few that actually makes me THINK. I love how you give your views on the trival things that everyone else in this world simply accepts it for what it is and gives it no thought. I will be waiting and praying that you hurry and continue because I NEED this!! If only to keep the hope in me that all is not completely lost in this world.
.:-:.Shayna.:-:.

i hope u update soon i hope kagome family lose their company and they beg for her help so please please please update

i hope u update soon i hope kagome family lose their company and they beg for her help so please please please update

I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait to see what happens next.

I really have to hand it to you... your use of vocabulary and writing intellect keeps me intrigued and is worthy of a standing ovation. You seriously don't come along many stories that make you think. When reading, because I read A LOT, I hate coming across the same repetitive words that rephrase the same thing that was written previously. So I thank you for having the ability to use your brain properly, and being able to grasp my attention. I love the title, the summary, AND the story itself. Keep it up... and I read that last review at the bottom of chapter 15... Please don't make the next chapter predictable... You're doing extremely well right now, and I love you for being a part of the reason for my insane addiction to kag/sess fiction... your writing is a thirst quencher to my parched throat.

Luv ya,
-Kjinuyasha

Once again you have done it. Created another amazing chapter. I'm so glad Kagome getting out of the hell hole for now. Is she really disowned? Or was her father just really pissed? well update when you can can't wait for more

Loves Arry
ps. thanks for the reply too

Bravo! Love the psychological musings. Please do continue...It is a wonderful digression from the 'norm'. Again, nice work.

*laughs evilly* Kagome's gonna get that bad little puppy!

~~~I love the chapter intros, especially the 'grass is green' and 'the sky is blue' ones. I was totally enthralled from page one, so keep 'em coming!

Oh my god woman you are amazing there's no words to express exactly how I feel about this fic I love it sooo much. you openings are so very enjoyable I relate to them on so many levels and not to mention the unique way you made Kagome's personality. Just WOW I await eagerly for your next update next month and I love it when they are long so thank you for making the recent update longer. Well thank you very much for the read

Arry

very thrilling... love yasha bashing... love kag's cleverness and sarcasm.... please update soon

I love your story, but can you have Kagome stand up for her self out loud to her family and not in her thoughts, and have them see how much they need her. Im not tring to tell you how to write your story, but I dont like how they walk all over her. Have her quit for a time and do somthing else and have her father come crowling back when his company starts falling, or have her start her own company and have it be secessful.( did I spell that right?) But over all I like it.

I love your story, but can you have Kagome stand up for her self out loud to her family and not in her thoughts, and have them see how much they need her. Im not tring to tell you how to write your story, but I dont like how they walk all over her. Have her quit for a time and do somthing else and have her father come crowling back when his company starts falling, or have her start her own company and have it be secessful.( did I spell that right?) But over all I like it.

I love this!! Your story is sooo much more different from all the crap you see now. GAH! It's about time.

I'd like to thank you for actually writing a good story that makes you think. Your insights for the characters are so well put out. I love it.

I hope you'll be able to update soon. Hopefully things won't be so busy for you. =]

bwahaha! I had to reread this in order to remember what it was about, but I'm SOO glad you updated! I hope you're feeling better! -hug- update when you can!

This is definatly a different kind of story. There's more thought in it, and not to mention that Kags is actually Real like in this story. Cause, lets face it, no one is that cheery all the time! So this is a refreshing peice of story, that i can't help but want to continue quickly!
I've been meaning to read it, but...my baby, can't seem to stop going to the bathroom or crying to be held, and like my other kids, she doesn't like me sitting down why i hold her...*sigh*lol
but really though, this is a fantastic story, and the only problem i have is that the latest chapter was much shorter than the others....not including the reviews that you had in it, of course...
Up-date Soon!
ttfn!
joanne

its odd. the way u write it. it sounds like the thoughts are coming from some one in a mental institution, at first. But then, they do actually make sense. i had to stop here, my brother wanted to use the interenet, so i'm very curious as to what the next chapters hold. This sounds very interesting though.

wow This fic is absolutely amazing... You're truly amazing. I can't believe I Haven't read this fic until today! Omg! The amount of thought you put into the introduction to each chapter blows my mind. I'm totally faving this right now. 3

I really like this and hope that you do continue because I want to see how it all turns out. Update soon .

I love the way you portrayed Kagome's attitude, much better than those boring cheery gooody two shoes shy types that i have read so much about, this is a nice change and it suits Sesshoumaru's match. It's the kind of things that he would find a challenge in a girl.

Please continue, I look forward to reading it soon.

Sango

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

wow, love your story, keep up the good work.

this is a really good story! i like the way it flows and how everything questions everything else >. its awesome! update soon please ^_~

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

It's not a problem. Sometimes we should engage our minds in complex activities to keep our skills sharp and alert. Update soon!

I love the fic I can't wait for more of it!

I like how this is written and I think it has a great future. The 'sky is blue' and the 'grass is green' almost gave me a headache, however.

good job. you described it all very well. the closest i've ever heard the description of cutting coming to the real thing. but i have to ask, why is the business thrown to her if her parents are ashamed that she's a girl?

can u update sooon im really interested in ur fic so update plz