It's pretty boring to be honest..

plz make a sequel my friend recomended this and i want to read the next

o plz do a sequel plz

plzplzplzplzplz! make a sequal! you have an awesome tallent! i hope u write more, maybe you could add more characters, like shippo and sango. and maybe even koga and ginta and hakkaku and jinenji and stuff, maybe the hojos, eri, yuka, and ayumi! it wou.d b so cool.

you definatly need to add a couple more chapters! i dont think that she should die, if that was whatr you were implying at the end

please write a sequel

Great story!!! I hope you will right more. ;-)

Great story!!!

that was really good, as for a sudgestion for a sequal.... i think he should stop before he completely kills her (i don't know guilty consious or somthing) and maybe she should change....kinda like the way wherewolves infect others... only sesshomaru shouldn't know it is possible and is confused why his attack didn't completely kill her and why she is now changeing..... i think it would be pretty cool

hey you should continue this chapter!!!!PLEASE DONT leave me stuck on this chapter my idia(sp)is that she finds out that shes a powerful fairy & kills the beast thing & sesshy feels the amount the power but while the beast is feeding he starts saying "to bad your family doesnt care,"& all that then she snaps & she becomes angery &t ransforms into a powerful fairy & starts yelling & taking her anger out on the beast when the beast finally dies she faints from so much power usage & whene she falls sesshy is their to catch her!!!thier is my idea!!!the outfit should be a beautiful silver dress thats cut in the front & falls long in the back & is ripped & her hair is longer & she has silver wings with black tips & finally she has a black tattoo that wraps around her uper ar that swirls in some plases with silver diomends in the middle & a silver crystal.& thats my idea.luv ya bye!!

hi i am too lazy to log in. so i loved the whole plot of the story and if you continue i promise i would review every chapter.

i like it can you please make a another story of 'a deadly encounter' it was really good what happeneds to kagome know i would really like to know

This is a nice start for a mini fanfic, but it needs a bit more detail and length to it. This could be potential better that way.

I like where this is going, but truthfully, this really does not follow much of a Sess/Kag duo. It just puts both in a plot where she is killed far too soon before a good plot line is formed.

please update soon!!!! It can't just end there!!!But it would be cool if Sesshomaru changed his mind and didn't kill Kagome but decided to keep her. and then her family wouldn't even notice, then Kagome would grow to love him and him her!! Or somewhere along those lines!!!

ooo... this is a lot like a freaky movie i read, this like gargoyle attacks someone and then this guy witnesses it but she spares him on the oath that he didn't tell a soul, she posed as a girl and they fell in love, like ten years later he told her and she had to kill him. It was a good movie, and this story is really good!!

i lyk it update soon angel-sama

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No its can't be finished!! well it was good while it lasted at least!

wow!!! tell me its not over!!! its a great story!! so did kagome die? i must know, please update ASAP!!!!

.....if its not done that was asome! if it is done...(I have become the silent)