The story started off well but it became very disappointing. Many of the chapters served no purpose. You go into detail with things that mean very little to the story. It is completely obvious you do not understand the world of stocks. The development of the plot is extremely weak. And your characterization are way off.

I just finished chapter 1, good start. Just wanted to let you know, you use "stalk" when you should be using "stock." I was totally confused when I saw that.

HOLY SHIT!!!!!!!! Y the fuck didnt u put a lemon in here???????????? dat would of made the story soooooo much better!!!!!! WTF!!!!!! this pissed me off and i am soooooooo not readin g it any more.

the word is stocks most good writers simply don't write about things they don't understand it maintains an air of intelligence

OMG U TOTALLY ROCK LIKE I WAS TOTALLY CONFUSED FOR THE LAST FEW CHAPTERS NOT COUNTING THE EPILOGUE, BUT YA. YOU ROCK!!!!!! ^^

wow wonderfull loved it

NOOO IZ DONEEEEEE
LOLZZZ
LIKE IVE SAID B4 NICE STORY
I WILL LOOK OUT FOR MORE STORIES BY U

Must say this was a fanfastic story keep up the good work, you should really think about doing a sequel. Can't wait to read more of your stories.

Must say this was a fanfastic story keep up the good work, you should really think about doing a sequel. Can't wait to read more of your stories.

Hi! I love your story, it's really good! Only one thing, the thing you spelled 'stalks' should be 'stocks' like the NY Stock Exchange. But don't worry! I bet you did that on purpose. Can't wait for an update!

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i realli like the ending it was good it was sorta rushed bah it was a NICE ending anywayz ne whoz it is very late so i shall go sleep
bye bye
mszbrownangel

Marabilloso! I loved it. Gracias, gracias, gracias for updating. Great work. I hope to see the next chapter soon. Hopefully, everyone will live happily ever after.

This is such a great story!! PLEASE update it soon!

I loved it soooo much. Please update soon. I can't wait to find out what happens next.

HEY!!!! I was begining to worry that you weren't going to put up another chapter. But, this one was great! so i forgive you. lol.jk. zyou did a fantastic job!!!! I loved it! i can't wait to see what else happens!!!!!You are an amazing writer!!! I love all of your chapters!!!!!! I love this story. IT one of my favorites! I usually review on animespiral......but i found you next chapter on here and couldn't wait to read it!!!!! kick ass job! i was worried for a second therem but had faith that you would not kill her off. I can't wait for the next chapter! please update soon.

haha. i love your story && i just found out whos after kagome. im sorry but i laughed so hard at finding out that it was myouga. i mean its a lil ironic since in the anime hes a litlle scaredy cat flea. && not to mention hes a good guy. but stilll, i love your story!

I REALLI LIKE THIS STORY I DONT THINK THAT THE SUMMARY DID IT JUSTICE BUT IT IS INTRESTING NONE THE LESS
PLZ UPDATE SOON AND KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK

Lol, "I feel like taco's..." If you've ever seen 'The Emo' song, you know why I'm laughing.... but anyway's it's good keep it up 'k? Oh, and E-mail me when you update : Smart_girl46360@yahoo.com

:) YEAH!

Hi KiAnE!!!

I loved ur story is really good. Please update more soon I cant wait!!!

Ja ne!!

More Chapters Please?:)

you need to redo your chapter 13,because it's a repeat of chapter 12.i like it so far,and you've got a great hand at writing.take your time with the next chapter,and try not to send a previously shown chapter again.
good luck.no flames here.just an easy jab as reminder.

OMFG !??!!!!! THIS IS SOOO GOOD I CANT BELIEVE MYOUGA IS THE BAD GUY THIS IS SOOO TENSE PLEASE O GOD PLZ TELL ME WHEN THE NEXT CHAPTER IS UP OK..... OK !?!!

OMG!!! that was GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

So cute, hmm poor Hakudoshi, nice making Myogua the bad guy.

I love it. This chapter was great. But then again what can we expect from a great writer but the best.

Ja ne

Wow another great chapter keep them coming.

Hey can't wait for the next chapter to come out i really like this one

yay! ^^ kag/ses mushyness! lol, update soon, please! its awesome!

AWW! YAY THATS SOO CUTE!!
im happy ^____________^
I Really Enjoy Reading This Fic Please Update Soon!!!
JaNe^_^

I think you meant Kagome managed "STOCKS" not "stalks"

Aww This is SOO CUTE!!!
I LOVE This Story!!! UPDATE SOON!
JaNe^_^

i was scared for a second i thought he would hurt her...well update soon

I love the story! Who is the "boss"? and will Kags finally tell Sess and vice versa. Please update soon.

Please you must write more, I have never been more excited to wait for an update. Plus this story is keeping me on my toes, I hope you keep up the job well done. Also this story sounds fantastic, so PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE ASAP.

hehe this fic is soo cute ^-^ can't wait for the next update

i luv it i luv it can u e-mail me when you update. i want to read the next chap so update asap