the fic was okay until that kitana chick came into the story... seems out of place.... oh well

Awesome update. Just loved it. Had me rolling on the floor. Your brand of humor reminds me of my own, violent and out of left field. Hope to see an update real soon. Love this fic.

Oh man. If the next chapter is anything like this one then I approve! I think I about busted a gut laughing! Keep up the good work! XD