that was a really a good story i also liked the little talk time you had with the characters. nice job

I like your story. It is great! But Konbanwa meand good evening.It is a way to say hello, not goodbye. Also -kun is a sufix used for young/ teen boys. I can understand how you got mixed up because peopleare always using wring Japanese in their stories. But I love it so far.^_^

Oh--my--god. This is appalling. The characterisation is so off it's painful. Hands up any sane and rational person that can actually envisage Sesshomaru not only putting up with a woman grabbing him by the throat, but say, "Yes, ma'am" to her demands. Hands up any one (again, only the sane and rational may participate) who really believes Sesshomaru could be bullied around by his nonexistent sister. That's what I thought. No one. There's *way* too much Nami. This is meant to be fanfic. If I wanted to read about an OC, I'd read original fic. And *way* too many author's comments. This story is 90% comments. Who wants to read that? Not me. "Koi" is a fish. A lot of fanfic writers do it, but "koi" really isn't an affectionate shortening of "koibuto". And ugh. "Maru-chan" might actually be the most appalling pet-name for Sesshomaru that I have ever had the misfortune to read. If you're reading this before you've subjected yourself to the pain of reading this story, do yourself a favour and don't.

i love this story

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?

hey like the story but what did Ayame have for a Kid??????? i mean i love Inu-yasha Ayame and i want to know what she had but hey that's just me. LOL. o well any way like the story the only thing i think could improve is the grammar and spelling, but im used to Gibberish writing so I can read just about any thing....... except different letters.....LOL.....hey in one of the chapters Sesshomaru said somereally weird(started with an O) word and then Mate dont have a clue what that ment

Aww so cute. Thanks for making the baby a girl!!!!

GOMEN NASAI!! I'm so sorry for my previous review, please remove it! I sent this review to the wrong story! Though Your plot, grammar, puntuation and the like do need a bit of work, you should try and make everything a bit more believable, but otherwise you are doing great!!!


PLEASE IGNORE MY PREVIOUS REVIEW, I SENT IT TO THE WRONG STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The plot of your story was great you had many good twists and turns to confuse the reader, but still managed ot get your point across while keeping everything interesting.

I loved it just loved the ending. I"m sad to see it go but all good things must come to end right? good story and keep on writing.

awww maaan its over......i think ill hav to liv but.........THAT WAS AWESOME DG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I love that song by Ne-Yo

loved it but there were a few spellnig mistakes. i liked it alot. update when you can.

Still a great story! Keep going!

make the baby a girl!!!!puweez? *uses the power of the puppydog eyes*

Haha, I love the story so far! Anyway if Sesshomaru and Kagome have a pup make him/her a girl! Every fan fic I read they always have a boy... anyway great job!

a baby giving an evil laugh???? that was sweet.................*starts giggling* I loved the part where Nani started strangling Naraku because of the pain...that was a nice touch

This was a really good chapter. Only there waa this setence that Ayame said that I didn't quite understand but other than that an amazing chapter.

thats funny plz put more up really soon

Another great chapter... Cant wait for Sess and Kags to have pups... They will be too cute... Hurry and update... About time they get together, LOL..
Take Care
Mari

LOL -rofl- Inuyasha so silly xDDDD atfirst im like OMG WTF the Baby talked right after its born xD anyway I love your story

I just love this chapter, can't wait for you to update the next one!!!!!
Ja Ne
XD

Well, if you really need help to get moving, I suggest the next thing you work up to is them getting married. As for how you build up to that, you're on your own, that's why you're the author and not me.

i hav an idea since u hav writers block:When are theweddings goingto be? andmaybe ucould hava double wedding or somethinglikethat

Ahh! Update now! Lol anyways, I love this story so keep it up!

GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! love the lemon

ur story is awesome im glad u found a way to get Shippou in it

i love this story, i cant wait to find what happens, so do me a favor and UPDATE!!!!!

Thank you,
Desdemona


ps: if you dont i will give you to inu-no-tashio as a chew toy.

I loved it! Please give us some more.

Ja ne

I liked the lemons they were very good, i hope that the ones that hurt shippo roast in hell and die a slow and torture filled death. update soon

I really like this chapter you need to update soon,

Aww, I love it! I know it sucks when people don't review.

Hey those character bios were cool!! I really dont know what to say except that I love this story and Ill be waiting till you update! Oh yeah..if you dont mind..can you email me when you update?

awww sooo cute except the evil plan part

I love the story. I hope I get to read more soon.

ja ne

This is a really awesome story! I enjoy it very much.

DUDE! I love Foamy! My fav is five more minutes!! ha ha, anyways umm... i was thinking that if you make kikyo and onigumo go all weird at sesshs/kag's then afterone of the hectic moments the leomn could come on..... just a thought..

IMREVIEWING M REVIEWING!! DONT KILL ME!! lol, imnot sure where the lemon should go, cuz i'm not exactly sure where you're leading wiht them staying with sessh and kagz, but i do like the story a lot and cant wait to read more!

The last chapter was great. I love how the plan backfired. Although i wouldn't have been as forgiving as Kagome was toward Kikyo. Update soon.

This was a great chapter. I love the interaction between Nami, Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha. I hope that Kikyo gets stoned or something. update soon

AWESOME!! I loved it! And the ed where they go after the stick and tree!! HA HA!!!

one thing and one only!!! MORE,MORE, MORE!!!!!!

YAY!! Love at last! ...but kikyo is making me mad... GRRRR!! and i wanted to say, im glad naraku is a good guy! evn thou i might have said it before!!

I hope that bitch's plan goes awry. Updated soon!

I love the banter between their inner youkai it is very good. I love this story very much.Update soon

Hey!!! I really love your story!!!! I hope you have fun on your two week vacation thingy!!! Cant wait till you update after that!! If its not a problem for you can you tell me when you update this fanfic cuz im always off in my little world of fanfics and i dont wanna forget about this story!!! Wellps Bye!

FLuFfyNeSs_92
Sessholover28

YAY! And i wonder what kikyou is planning i have an idea but... i could always be wrong... like any other mome t of my life.. ha ha... anyways i really love the strory hope you update soon!

I really love your fanfic! but it did take you a loooong time to update the last 3 chapters that you updated! so when you update the next chapter can you do it a little faster pleeeaaassseee. I daon't mean to be rude. I know that I am sounding rude, but it's not meant to be.XD

your story is totally awesome, you should totally update soon

I just love your story and glad that you finally added another chapter. This was very good. I love how you made Naraku a good guy.

LOL! i really liked that one specially him groping her ass... he he... alos i just like to say that i call my girls bitches all the time.. well actually that's my nickname heh heh anyways love the story!