Hey I love the story!!! but Kagome is a little to self hating an doutful and why didn't she get anything midoriko was saying I did plain as day I might not be right with my assumtions on it but I pretty much got the just of it. Kagome sorta acts like shes dumb and she puts herself down to much sorry if it seems mean thats not my intention at all I'm just asking questions oh and when does sesshomaru come in to the story just wondering. Other then that I LOVE YOUR STORY !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! no pun itended.

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Well, this is an interesting new creation.

I must admit, the first person almost narrative style is getting to be a bit of a head ache to follow. But that's alright, I am still enjoying it.

I only have one request.

Is it possible to extend the chapters a bit. Even if that means two in one; they just seem so...short.

I realize there seems to be a fair bit of information 'packed' into each chapter - almost literally. But extending them may be of benefit to you.

None of this is meant as an insult, or even criticism. Believe me, I am told I can write, but I don't find my own caliber as high as I would like. Still, I strive. And so I request.

In other words, I do not feel I am some how superior to your writing; I am merely an interested reader making an avid request to an author that writes stories in which I have found an interest.

Thank you for the reads. And do continue. I am eager to see just where it is you are going with this.

Mainly because it IS so original.

~ MS Cascata

wow. that took a bit, but i read through your latest chapter a second time and now i understand it. wow. complex plot, ne? i'm not complaining, far from it, so far i've found your story both humourous and refreshingly original. just some parts are a little much to grasp. so, what exactly has kaggie turned into? a demon, or something? where does sesshie come in? GAH!! SUSPENSE!! lol, anyway, i look forward to your next update, and also to reading any more stories you happen to write.
toodles till next time
emily

o.o your so malevolent yet so unique at the same time. every ending of a chapter I call it a cliffy odd but its how i function. I love this story(even though the author is evi.. i mean o.o so talented ) xP yea um just update before i come upp with bad scenarios of what will happen in chapter 3

Uh hello chapter 3? You have got to update this story is so good, orignal and exciting!

Intersting.I somewhat tuned out all the explinations, and suprisingly i understood it all, or so i think. anway i like it, you do a good job.

You're evil. You, and the cliffy goodness that you've created. I hope you're proud of yourself...

NEwayz, please update soon! I'm loving this!