Love the fic! I think you should update because you have 100+ reviews for 5 chappies.
Asian Gurl- Fri 26 Oct 2007
Plz update soon!
please please update soon....
please update T_T
chap 7 is a tease... what will sessh do? can he remark kag or is she doomed to be naraku's????? update update update... thanks
Please update this story. I can't wait to read more.
update update update please
kayla- Mon 30 Apr 2007
i like nixie better
Oooohhh...I love this fanfic. So sorry that your mom read it :(
Please update soon. I can't wait to read the next chapter. I truly feel bad for Sesshoumaru, hopefully they'll be able to mate soon.
please update soon cant wait for a new chapter
nikita- Wed 28 Feb 2007
hey I love it so far and hope you continue.
~nikita
chibilee- Wed 28 Feb 2007
yay! u updated! still liking the fic although i did have to go back to reacquiant myself w/the fic! lol hopefully the next update won't be too long.
phxazkyote- Mon 26 Feb 2007
Bout time you returned! Does this mean everything is ok and you'll be writting more?
Aurora- Mon 26 Feb 2007
please hurry and update this story. it is so awesome.
Crys- Mon 26 Feb 2007
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I WANT MORE!!
if it's not to much truble.
wow! i love this story! It's so great! The detail and the way you describe things is just awesome! I'm sorry about you're loss, and hope you are doing well...
Hope you update soon!
please write more please oh please oh please i've been waiting for so long for you to finish writing your story so please oh please write more
Red-smartiez- Sun 25 Feb 2007
i reallly liked it!! pweeeeeez continue n thnk u!! =)
silverdragon demon- Sun 25 Feb 2007
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Interesting, but after Naraku I think poor Sesshy deserves to reach the castle!
-Dani
update soon
udate soon i love it plez udate soon!
sheiba90- Sun 25 Feb 2007
i had the same problem but i wasnt so lucky. She read it before i could erase it. I got in SOOOO much trouble and was banned but now i just get on at school. I'm so jealous of ur writing its so much better than mine.. WAH!!
Metis- Sun 25 Feb 2007
(bouncing) YES! WHOOHOO! YOU UPDATED! Glad I could be of help, even though at the same time I thank you I BEG you not to leave me in limbo like this! KILL THE FREAKIN' ARACHNID WANNABE!!!! (cough) I mean, don't be away long. Another update would be well-received. heh.
Metis- Mon 19 Feb 2007
*starting to sniffle* Just thinking that there's more to the story. And how Long it's been. Are the chapters already written? Am I being denied the thrill of seing how many pieces Naraku can be torn into because your mom is still looking over your shoulder? Is life fair? *wails* PLEASE UPDATE!!! IT'S BEEN SO LOOOONGGG!!!!
silverdragon demon- Sun 21 Jan 2007
plez update soon!
silverdragon demon- Sun 21 Jan 2007
plez update soon!
silverdragon demon- Sun 21 Jan 2007
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silverdragon demon- Sun 21 Jan 2007
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silverdragon demon- Sun 21 Jan 2007
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silverdragon demon- Sun 21 Jan 2007
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silverdragon demon- Sun 21 Jan 2007
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silverdragon demon- Sun 21 Jan 2007
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silverdragon demon- Sun 21 Jan 2007
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silverdragon demon- Sun 21 Jan 2007
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silverdragon demon- Sun 21 Jan 2007
plez update soon!
Metis- Sat 14 Oct 2006
Still alive out there? :) You're not going to leave the poor girl in that slime's clutches....are you? ;)
orchid- Mon 02 Oct 2006
update update update please
alexa- Sun 10 Sep 2006
I don't have a good reason like you; I've just been tired, sleepy, lazy, and have had lots of HW to keep me busy!So I'll rate it up because I admire your dedication. I have delayed days [over a week] so far and I know people are mad at me, so I admire you for beign so self-less-obviously in my freet tiem I am readin instead of writing...you are comendable unlike me.
alexa- Sun 10 Sep 2006
Been there done that, and yeah IT is way embarrassing...My mom was surprised at my 'vulagrities' and was wondering how in the world did I know how to write that stuff and if I was usign condoms...LOL can you imagine?! Since then I deny that I write [I am actually a virgin but she doesn't believe me and ignores that topic..] and just say that read what other people write BUT my dear elder brother read a fanfic...a very' M' if you take my menaing which resembled PORNO! I mean I had all of these hentai thoughts involving Sesshy and Inuyasha and I let it all out...bad girl. Anyways my brother read that 4 days ago, and to this day he is still bugging me about it! Ex. "Like, why did you write that?" "What happened to you?" as for his gf she simply was curiosu how much of a 'hentai' I was although my fanfic was not shounen, but I don't swing that way-nothign wrong with people that do! [shudders recalling the groping hug from her bro's gf] and to tell you the truth I am embarrassed. I mean why?! It's not meant for them to read, ya know? It's humilating, it's liek beign caught naked by your family or something. I dunno, what I do know is that my brother is extorting money from me so he does not tell my mom! What a caring brother-not! Anyways don't change your sn just do what I did, make a new email that you don't tell anyone and make that one your hentai one and write M stories from there but keep clean ones on reg, so mommy dearest does not suspect a thing.I mean put citrus and stuff, but lemony ones on another oen where you don't really post perosnal information, k? I feel you, I REALLY do!
Megan Consoer- Tue 22 Aug 2006
I really ike this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
animebook fan- Sat 19 Aug 2006
Please update asap! I can't wait to read what happens next! This is such a good story!!! Please continure it. Keep up the great work!
Metis- Sun 06 Aug 2006
Both you and your fic are missed. Sorry about your friend/relation(?). Hope to hear from you soon. ~_~
mina-chan- Sun 06 Aug 2006
This fic is amazing please update soon ^_^
phxazkyote- Thu 27 Jul 2006
You take it easy gurlie and take the time to recover. The story can wait. The ones loyal enough to the story will wait for you for when you are ready. =)
Embury- Thu 27 Jul 2006
I'm sorry for your loss. I love your fic, but don't worry about. It'll be here later if you decide to finish it, which I hope you will since it's really good!
what- Tue 18 Jul 2006
I LOVE! KEEP IT UP
orchid- Tue 18 Jul 2006
yay.. new chap... more more more... update soon... please... thanks
angle101- Sun 16 Jul 2006
i really like your story i'm really getting excitted on whats going to happen next. how many chapters do you think that you'll write?
FlyingDamnSquirel- Sun 16 Jul 2006
i'm back!!!!! nice new chapter by the way!
Inu_Twins- Fri 14 Jul 2006
Plz Update soon!! Real soon!! This is a good ff and I love it!! I hope U update real soon!!
Catofhope- Fri 14 Jul 2006
this story rox
phxazkyote- Fri 14 Jul 2006
WHAT?! who's giving you bad ratings??? This story is good! I know I am reading it for the 2nd time now! Write more!
Miss Artemis- Fri 14 Jul 2006
Yeah, take that Kouga! I feel bad for Sesshomaru, all he wants is to be mated to KAgome but the gods are against him (Shakes her head in sympathy), but I do find it extremely cute that he's willing to go through so much for her, especially at how possessive he is about her. ^^ Hope you update soon, you got me hooked! Plus, you shocked me at how fast you updated from the time I discovered it. Great job!
SummerSnow- Fri 14 Jul 2006
oh god you poor soul, i would die if my mom ever found a lemon i wrote, i would want to jump off the face of a cliff!! Anyways good story good luck with your mom. Snoopy buggers arent they
phxazkyote- Fri 14 Jul 2006
Hey! I'm just looking out for yeah! I want to know the ending gosh darnit! As for the title......umm... I'll get back to you on that one!
FlyingDamnSquirel- Thu 13 Jul 2006
did i already review? well it doesn't matter....love your storie, it was awesome! good-luck! can't wait for you to post another chapter! >.
rhonda34- Thu 13 Jul 2006
please update soon
riyoku-san- Thu 13 Jul 2006
Another chapter! w00t! Awesome job, post the next chapter soon!
Metis- Thu 13 Jul 2006
*blinks* Well, thanks for the promt update. I hope that I remember the change in name of Both you and the fic. Erg. woozy. I hope he gets there sometime, though the title says otherwise. If you want a similar title....hmm...have Journey in there somewhere? All the titles I can think up at the moment are corny, like 'Journey to Joining', or 'Mating Journey'. Urg. Come up with something better.
----- Thu 13 Jul 2006
how many chapters were there in your story?
Metis- Thu 13 Jul 2006
Oh, good. Bye bye Kik you. heh. Now to take out another annoyance. . .. I'm still in slight mourning over the fact that this was posted previously, and now I have to wait for the rest of it because I didn't see it before. *sigh*
phxazkyote- Wed 12 Jul 2006
::Smacks Tink upside her head:: DON'T discuss your new name! Jeez!! If she is keeping tabs on you then she will keep track on the story and then your editor's notes will give you away.. DUH!!!! And you need to do a title change on the story as well that way it won't get found.
..... Just A Nobody.....- Wed 12 Jul 2006
Ummm... If I were you, I probably shouldn't put the name in the fic or mom go riot and see them! Heheh! Just to warn ya! I really love your fic! Keep it up!
nixie is better.plz hurry and post the next chapter.
inuyoukai8- Wed 12 Jul 2006
I know how you feel, my DAD found my little works of fiction and then he read them out loud to me while I was cooking dinner. GAH! he thought it was so funny, not me. So I hear ya honey! LoL Please update soon this is great
Alexis- Wed 12 Jul 2006
This fanfic. is sooooo good!! And I am truly sorry you deletd it but feel even worse that your mom found out! But, good thing she didnt take away your computer (mine probably would have)! So, good luck!
-Ja ne
Alexis
rhonda34- Wed 12 Jul 2006
more more more
DedicatedReader- Wed 12 Jul 2006
hey
get start, up-date soon cause this in really good, but i cant say much in just 2 chapters
ssssssssooooooo....up-date soon
PS
how long is it gonna be??? roughly
riyoku-san- Wed 12 Jul 2006
w00t! you posted this chapter soon, AWESOME!
Shadow Girl- Wed 12 Jul 2006
I like Nixie, though I really like the other one as well... ^_^ I can't wait for the next chapter! I've been waiting impatiently for you to update!
Was it that bad with your mom? I guess it would be weird... my mom doesn't know that I'm reading this kind of stuff, so I guess it would come out as a real shock to her...
Anyway, hope to see you update on friday! ^_~
Shadow Girl
riyoku-san- Tue 11 Jul 2006
oh wow. that must of sucked. great jod deleting it before she read it though xD. anyway, im glad you decided to take the time to repost this fanfic, its really good. i read it all the way through. and ya, i think you should change your author name, it'll help avoid -ahem- arkward situation...
phxazkyote- Tue 11 Jul 2006
LOL!!! This is why you ALWAYS hide your writtings!!!! You could always post it under my name.. lol I wouldn't mind. Its a good story!!! I can't wait for the revisions!
zackire- Tue 11 Jul 2006
good heavens! your mother read this fic? hahaha... i understand your situation.. embarassing...
anyway keep up the work and if you think you need to change your username, then do it.. but keep me updated
Shadow Girl- Tue 11 Jul 2006
Changing your name is definitely a very good idea... As long as you don't stop writing it and delete it completely because I love your story.
Shadow Girl- Tue 11 Jul 2006
Changing your name is definitely a very good idea... As long as you don't stop writing it and delete it completely because I love your story.
rhonda34- Tue 11 Jul 2006
please ipdate soon. i like the story please keep it up
Completely understand how you feel. Once my mom got a hold of my story and read it. She told me she liked it and at the time all it had was a makeout scene but still. I was red as a tomato. Mortification set in and I couldn't look her in the eye for the rest of the day. *shudder*
Either way good story and I'm looking foward to the rest.
Striking Falcon- Tue 11 Jul 2006
Yeah, changing your name is a good idea. It's a good thing my mom is computer illiterate. Gah, the blood and gore that's in mine would have her pack me away to the nut house. lol. Oh, but this is a great chapter. If you do change your name please let me know what it is so I can read the rest of this story. By the looks of things its a good one.
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