Hm...not exactly what I'd consider a complete story as the profile claims, naw just kidding but the description does indeed say that this story is completed. It's good, none the less. Ah, and about not receiving very many reviews for your other stories, don't let that get you down. Keep it up and continue writing. You'll get better and then you can make a good reputation for yourself.

-Pandora

Hmm...not exactly what I'd consider a complete story as the profile claims, naw just kidding but the profile does say that this is completed. It sounds good so far, and about not recieving reviews, don't give up or anything. You'll get better, and then you can make a good reputation for yourself.

PLEZ DON"T DELTE it's so good plez don't delete pwesa i love it update soon!