Hey, I just wanted to say, great job on this fic. I'm completely hooked! XD

Please review soon!! I mean, really that was such a cliffy I can't take it!! :D

-zephyr

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE! Please?

Wow that was awesome! I'm dying to see what happens next. Pleeeeaaaaase update soon.

Sorry! Ignore the review that just got sent! My computer copied the wrong message. Urgh! Please, just delete it if you can. I would like to see more of this story from you. You have a good plot going here. Everyone seems pretty well in character. Please, don't cave to the people who want you to just dive right into steamy lemons and such. Personally, I find it detracts from the goodness of the fic, and doesn't really enhance it. Sure, you could put them in, but just keep going at your own pace. Don't let others push you into putting stuff in, sooner (or later) than [i]you[/i] intend.

~Lady Chiichobi

You just so happen to be fantatic. Update soon please.

-Love-

wow!
Make more chapters
Make a reallly hot and steamy lemon scene between Sesshomaru and Kagome
And Make Innuyasha watch it and not be able to do anything about it.
That would be really good
But, awsome story though

wwwhhhyyyy do i keep doing this to myself?!?! I've read like three of your incomplete stories now, and it really is (the) most disappointing thing ever. It's like you stop just when it's getting really good.....alright i'm going to go cry myself to sleep now.

Hello! I just wanted to let you know that I really like your story and I think it's got a lot of potential! I appreciate an author's ability to take time to sit and write for others and self accomplishment, seeing I am a writer myself!

Keep up with the story, you've pretty much got all the character's down as far as personality goes, and I'm loving all the suspense and excitement!

:] Good luck with future chapters!

-Autumn

quite interesting and funny. I hope you update soon.

WOW!!!!!!!! I can't believe it turned out this way! I am totally surprised. I only just now started to read this and am enraptured in it. PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I have enjoyed your story so far and I hope you update again soon. Let their dreams become reality. :-)

I really like this one from the get go. All characters remain in Canon and the writing is excellent...

Great story!! Looking forward to your next update. Keep it up!!

MidnightStar

totally awesome chapter!!! loved it... and can't wait to read more.

Luv it so far. update as soon as u can k.

I lURV your story! Do you have a mailing list that you can send it to me with updates so that I won't lose it? PLEASE?

dude, i totally know how you feel- being embarassed about lemons. but really, i think everybody needs lemons. they are just fun to read. they are a must-have in all stories, but i know the embarassment. it comes from the sexuality of it.

luv the chapter. it was totally riviting. could not stop reading it!!!

I have read this first chapter at least 3 times prior to this. Do you keep changing the title or something? I think that it is one of the more powerful first chapters I have ever read. There is an underlying strength and desperation that comes through in the lemon that takes my breath away. It's very good. I must have missed some of the other reincarnations of this story; I don't remember a couple of the latter chapters at all. Your interplay between the characters is intriguing. I understand that it will be a while before you update. I eagerly await the update, but it would be most helpful if you could keep the same title.

Hi,

Please change the following spelling :

Kaeda ==> Kaede

Trivia:

I don't know if your basing your fics from the manga(comics) or from the anime. In the manga, Kagome and Kikyou had the same face and body build. The only difference in them was their hair and the color of their eyes. Kagome's hair is slightly wavy or curved at the ends where Kikyou's hair is extremely straight. Kagome's eye's are blue grey while Kikyou's are brown. In the anime, they colored kagome's eyes into brown.

I like this a lot! I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work!

Please update asap! I can't wait for the next chapter!

loving it! plz update asap!

This was a very good chapter. I liked it alot. The way you put something it italics is by using the word you want italicized would go in btwn the two > update soon

This fic is good. Some grammar problems, but still good.

The only true complaint I have is that Kagome had "sparkling tears" or something in her eyes a lot in the latest chapter. Kagome is strong minded even if her miko powers aren't that developed.

She's stared Sesshoumaru down. So why would you have her trying to cry over a few words no mater if they are hurtful? When she saw Kikyo and Inuyasha together when she was bound to the tree by soul stealers she didn't cry. Nor did she cry when Kanna tried to take her soul and her love for Inuyash used agains;t her.

If you won't make her strong in power yet at least keep her core character of being stron willed intact. Otherwise what's the point of writing her?

Sesshoumaru also wouldn't want her if at every adversity she's almost crying.

There needs to be some type of spell that smacks Inu on the nose every time he belittles her. The Sits are obviously not getting through. Although having his voice disappear entirely is appealing too.

You write lemons amazingly well, and i was struck in surprise by your first chapter. It only grew in interst as i continued reading, and i am sure that you will continue to capture my interest. Please continue.

Please continue this story...I think it's really good and highly original!

Hmm. This chapter looks familiar. Repost?

well, this is certainly an interesting plot - but I have no idea how you could possibly 'make' Sesshoumaru get together with Kagome.

Hope you update soon (as soon as possible ;))

Hmm. Why would the gods be so against him preserving his species? Hanyou are too chaotic and insecure. ...besides, youkai pups are cuter. ^_^

Good story -- really good story! Please update soonest! I do have a few comments, though. . .the scene changes are not very delineated, so it makes it a bit hard to follow, but that is the only thing I saw that could be slightly changed. Also, Inuyasha dropping the Tama into the well was a very welcome and unique way of dispossing of the Tama (instead of wishing on it and then everyone rejoicing at the unselfish wish made -- which to me is pretty much impossible --- selfishness in some degree will always exist) . That is what he did, right? Oh, well, enouogh of me babbling. . .have a great time in Texas!

update soooooooooon i really like the story so far.

awesome chapter!!! ^^

I adore this story...update soon!

I loved. It was very good.

You are an amazing writer, getting right into each characters head, you can even see exactly what is happening because of your detailed descriptions. I t would be nice if once kagome and Sesshoumaru are together, that she is able to help heal his arm back, perhaps he could demand this, or ask nicely ( ha ha as if he would ). There are all kinds of ways one could take that little path.

Keep up the good work, I love your protrail of Sesshoumaru, it is so exact and you have obviously thought long and hard about what he thinks, how he acts and what his actions will be. I look forward to your next installments.

I love this story! It has a great begining. Please update soon :)

This is an awesome story...I hope you update soon!

kool keep writing. You gave me a fright when kagome died there. well update soon.^.^

kool keep writing. You gave me a fright when kagome died there. well update soon.^.^

-squeals- YAY! -throws arms in air and waves them wildly while screaming- I have found my new drug. Oh sweet, sweet addiction. The plot just draws you in! And it makes so many ideas pop into my head about what could happen. ^.^
Sooo excited for next chapter!

PLz update soon! That was really good! Keep up the good work!

Ah, this is really really really good. I love it, update soon!

i like it

woah that was a GREAT beginning!! I cant wait until the next chapter!! Please update soon!

I really like this so far, It is well written and is well thought out. I hope that you update soon and if you could you please send me a note.

i think i already sent a review...but i love this story. please update soon. I think the way you have characterized them is very well done.