Please update this story as soon as possible. It is very well written and I absolutly love the plot. Keep up the good work!

wow, its written beautifully, i haven't seen a plot come close to this. great writing. kept me addicting

Alrighty...I have to say that I was pleasantly surprised with this story. I read one of your others - the one where Sesshomaru and is an artist and as much as I enjoyed it, I thought it was lacking in description (please don't take this personally, it is merely to compliment this story and I wish to explain my reasoning). Granted, I'm not one to speak since I'm better at dialogue. However, when I began reading this story, I got very into it - even to the point where I forgot which author had written it. And when I realized that it was, indeed, you, my first thought was "WOW". Hah, I hope I'm making sense. But seriously, great plot, great portrayal of character, great depth and detail; overall, I give it four thumbs up. :) Keep up the great work!

Please keep writing...this is amazing!!!! I'm hooked!!!!

I love the complexity of both Kagome and Sesshoumaru...they are far from simple, 2-dimensional characters. You are Blessed with a wonderful talent!

I loved this chapter becuase I liked the way you incorporated Andou into this story. Maybe Kagome has finally found a friend that she can talk to. I wonder what was the deal between Andou and Naraku. Maybe Naraku was his previous owner? What will Sesshoumaru say or do once he realizes that Kagome was the one that tamed his horse? Awesome chapter and cant wait for the next chapter! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

So glad that our lovely couple is making headway. I especially liked this horse scene; it really brings out Kagome's affinity to animals... and Naraku never ceases to creep me out. ^^. Please continue!

I have never been so eager to read the next chapter of a story as I have been reading this. You have done amazingly well with plotting out this story and making each chapter exciting, passioate, fiery, and all together intriguing. I can't wait to read more!

Heyyz, i enjoyed reading your story. i guess you could call it enthralling... just lures people in you know? Update soon plz. 3

I don't see how anything good will come from a relationship that has started off like this. You will have to work some magic to make any reconciliation between these two possible. I mean rape, abuse, horrible insults, not to mention the fact that he really truely believes she is lower than he...I feel bad for Kagome and I want her out of there.

that was a beautiful image to end it on.

love it

Hee~~ My favorite chapter to date! Beautiful. Take your wonderful darling time at writing if you can create marvelous wonders such as this chapter 3

Also, did you know you had Kagome turn into an Inu Yokai during the morning after their consumation of their marriage? Just wondering if that was intentional and you forgot or something~~

More please!

@ Chapter 3

I read this before. Well the first chapter, but I remember it. I had forgotton who wrote it and the title so it's good to finally get back to it.

Is Kagome inu now?
I must admit I usually don't read stories when she suddenly transforms, but I do like your story so I am continuing. Though I would like to know what made her transform, I'll just have to continue to read.

I don't see anything confusing as of yet, but you do have a couple of typos. For example a couple of times you put "or" when you meant to put "of". I'm not sure if "imediently" or "imediantly" are words, but I seen them when I believe you meant to put "immediately". *shrugs* I don't know, I'll go look them up. There were a few more typos like somewhere I think you meant to put "the" but missed the 'T' and just put "he". Can't remember exactly where I saw it but so far I only read three chapters if that's any help.

I'll be back later to read more. Good job so far.

i think your story is very good. I found it very easy to follow, and understand. I also know why i understand this story so well is because i went through the same things so i can relate to your story. Don't let anyone get you down about your story. I think it's very good. Unlike my story I just started writing it and only got one review so far. Its called "A clash of royal proportions". anyway good fic and i plan on reading the next chapter. keep up the good work.

Aww, I came to read it and it started at chapter nine. Well, whenever you fix it, I'll be back

You know you reposted chapter 9 over chapter 1?

Hmm...I think this is a good story with an interesting premise. But, it needs to be edited. Some of the sentences don't make any sense and it makes it hard to read. Also, it may seem like an intriguing idea to add the Japenese language to the story, but again, it just makes it hard to read. So much so, I just stopped reading.

This is an amazing story. I've read a lot of fanfics and this one is by far one of my favorites. Great job, you certainly do have talent when it comes to putting your avid readers into another world altogether, allowing them to escape from the one they reside in.
Hope all is well,
Chloe

I loved it, and I wish there was more to this one. I want to know life after the fighting. You're truely amazing at what you do!

wahhhh.
why does Sessho have to be such a sexy bastard.
can he at least show a little ounce of affection to Kaggie?
please?

don't be a tease!! lol

WOW. I must say the rel. bet. kags and sesshy is complicated. hahaha

I can also see a lil S and M going on..hahaahah LOL

PLEASE UPDATE!!!

awesome story love it so far your an amazing author im looking forward to finding out what happens next please update soon im itching to read more lol literally
im glad sesshomaru and kagome aren't fighting anymore good deal there so looking forward to more of this wonderful story from your newest fan LordSesshomaruLover16

I love all your stories because of how the characters are always so different. Never in the 'traditional' way that they usually are. And it all comes together so smoothly. This fic does not seem rushed in anyway. It's so refreshing from what I'm used to. I can't wait to read more! ^_~

Other than a bit of editing for the occasional missing word, misspelled word, or incorrectly used word, the only really frustrating thing about this story is 'WAITING FOR THE NEXT UPDATE!!!'....PLEASE update soon.

Yeah! I loved it! Im so glad that you decided to update. It has been awhile. Im really glad that Kagome and Sesshoumaru came to an understanding. Bu that doesnt mean that everything is ok. They still have a long way to go.

Great chapter and PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Wow, I'm so excited about this new chapter, I didn't think that I would ever see this story again. Thank you for the update !

well, for a chapter that you aren't sure about, this was one hell of a good chapter. I hope you keep it a part of the story because it makes so much sense. It was time for Kagome to come to him, to make the first move, and what a hot move it was! Good work. I have to go take a cold shower now.

Oh man, that was one passionate chapter! I loved the heated sex and the firey emotions. Great job! Thank for the read.

~Rin

I think this is the best chapter as of yet. You really out done yourself inspite of your computer problems. This chapter works well with the story and flows very well. It does not seem out of place. The couple have come full circle with a better understanding of each other. I look forward to reading the next chapter.

Ohohohoh.... marvelous story! more please :)

Very interesting story

As of now I do love this story.

I have to say that Sesshomaru is wrong for not loving him, but in a way Kagome is being way too resistant. I'm hoping the two come to a peaceful and loving relationship soon enough.

(That was me trying to sound smart)

And now what I have to say

THIS STORY ROX!!

I really do love the seriousness of it.

I'M PLEADING WITH YOU TO UPDATE ASAP!! DONT HAVE ME WAITING!!!!

Luvs muchos

~Gem~

I wonder when those 2 will have some peace & harmony.There's too much animosity & am starting to get pissed off with Kagome's character.

umm ya so.....you uhhh gonna update? Well anyway this a really good story, and I hope that you are able to add to it soon.

well, it's STILL a really good story, but you haven't added to it in ever so long and i really Really REALLY want to know how it ends.

This is a very GOOD story! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! Its been so long since you've posted a chapter. Icant wait for the next chapter to come and see what happens between kaogme and Sesshoumaru. Great story and dont give up!

update update update or i will be forced to kill u muahahaha please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

love your story.

Ok, as much as I appreciate the fact that Sesshy wants her to submit, I think its just about time for the 'lets hate each other' phase of the story to end. I dislike the both of them being such asses. I'm glad you brought Rin into the story, and it will be interesting to see how exactly Sesshomaru reacts to her worshiping.

please write more about what is going to happen between sesshoumaru and kagome. i just love this story.

The problem is that you are looking for months, when what you said was 'moons'. Chapter one - "The Shikon jewel passed down century to century upon the shoulders of the purest women that could be found within the family. Because of his brides recent birthday of eighteen moons, she had become the jewel’s protector and had immediately been sought after by many because of it."

Per your request, I'm a girl, xD. Your fic is well written. I cannot wait for another update.

I am so happy that you updated this story. It was way to good for you not to finifh it and theefore I must say again that I am grateful that you did update.

I wonder what will happen Between Kagome and Sesshoumaru now that Rin is living with them. I bet Sesshoumaru will be jealous b/c he wishes that Kagome would show him half the niceness that she does towards Rin.

Awesome chapter and I cant wait for you to update the next chapter PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE!

Nice chapter! Update soon please!

Ah, I haven't actually read any of the story yet, but the translations at the beginning caught my eye.

Just wanted to let you know that "kumo" does indeed mean spider. It also means cloud. It's one of those weird words, like "kami", which can mean god, paper, or hair.
"Gumo" is what either spider or cloud would be changed to if you combined the word with another word. The g and the k are pretty much equivalent in Japanese- the g is just the softer consonant, and is used when preceeded by a vowel, such as "Onigumo" rather than "Onikumo" or "Kitsuneguma" rather than "Kitsunekuma" (which means "fox-bear").

Just thought I'd straighten out the whole ordeal.

And if you don't believe me, ask my brother, who actually has studied Japanese, unlike pretty much any of the fanfic writers here (myself included).

Now I think I'll read your story. xD;

Update soon.!!!

i think it was awesome , good story line , i cannt wait for the next part

I love it. Please update soon.

please update soon

Great story, however, just for a point of information. Technically, if Kagome is '18 moons' old, she would not likely be marrying anyone. One moon is one month. If she is 18 moons, then she is only 18 months old Most often people of the time measured age by the passing of the seasons.

If she were 18 winters, or 18 summers old, then she would be 18 years old.

i love this story. please update soon.

amazing writing! there is so much feeling put into every scene. Hope to see an update soon

It has been a long time since you have last updated. I really like this chapter and how Kagome stands up to Sesshoumaru and doesnt take any of his bullshit. I dont like the look of things with the little girl and Sesshoumaru using her as blackmail against Kagome. Anyways I REALLY hope that you UPDATE SOON! to damn good a story not to :)

if you update soon i will rate all of your chapters with straight tens

I hope you decide to update really soon! I cant wait to see how Sesshoumaru and Kagomes relationship developes!

plz update soon!!!!=)

OMG! I love it. i laughed so hard at the last two chapters. This is gonna be great I can tell. I hope you decide to UPDATE SOON because I really want to see what happens next in the story! Thanks!

Hahaha! I just pissed my self laughing!

hehe I love this story! Can't wait to see what else you got for us! Keep up the great work! ^_^

Nice chapter, I hope you up-date soon. I can't wait ^-^ Keep up the awesome work!
Ja ne!

wow, that was a really great chapter. hope u update soon. just one thing though, what exactly did kagome do at the end of the chapter when she snapped her fingers?...

I loved the two new updates! Please update asap! I can't wait to read about what Sesshomaru does to Kagome...lol...this is going to be very funny!

Please update! I can't wait to read the next chapter!!! I love this story!

Well, I'm glad he apologized. It would horrible to go to war with your own mother in law. Most of all, I'm glad to see a step in the right direction in their marital relationship. I'm hoping that love will follow. By the way, I really love how detailed your descriptions are in this story.

wow yes u r lol

Um.. You said that you were going to be gone until the 18th.. ::Looks at calander:: its only the 4th and the site says its updated and its not... lol... What did you do????

I'm really looking forward to see (read) what's going to happen in the next chapter and how/if they sort things between them out - but I didn't really understand, why Sesshoumaru appologized; I was under the impression that he was going to refuse to do it?

Anyway, I like your story and I hope you update soon!

Nice ! I've always liked Sesshoumaru x Kagome. Your's was the best !

I love what I have read so far.

I'm female by the way

hmm...it said there was a new update, but i dont know what it is. damn the suspense is killing me.

*for the note at the top*
who care what others have to say about this fanfic, i like it the way it is.

Hey! It says you updated! um... what did you do??? lol too many fanfics...I want more!! NO vacation!

I hope you decide to update this story soon b/c I really want to see what happens next! Thanks!

damn.. i love this story.. and i have read a story far worse than this one.. well where sesshoumaru is alo tmore of a brute to bad the author hasnt updated in like three years. the story is called youkai society and its in fanfiction.net.. i think its awsome. which that was the story that made me love sesshoumaru / kagome fanfics. lol well i love your story and hope you update soon!!!!

This was a good chapter! I hope that Sess and Kagome can get togethe now! HeHe

twisted? nah Never! I would have done more horrible things. I am just mean that way. haa haa Keep it up this story is going on great!

AWSOME! =D absolutely coolness =) I know you won't get back till the 18th but I shall be looking for the update =)

I just wanted to say that I love this story.

I read some of the other comments that were made on this fic. I'm a girl and have been reading fanfics since I was 17. I've read things with far more abuse/mistreating of female characters than this one. But I feel as if this story is different.

Kagome is strong enough to stand up to Sesshomaru. They are equals. It's not as if Kagome is this weak woman who just cries and does nothing. If anything, your story is a good example of how a woman can be strong/stand her ground. Don't change your story. Stand your ground and write it exactly how you feel the story should be.

Yes, I do think you're too twisted for your own good, but I still love ya the same ;P Haha, I love the "coniving wench" "scheming bastard" lines, cracked me up ^^
till the 18th?! -le gasp- I'll miss you! T___T Have a nice time and return to us soon! Perhaps some more drama and possibly some irony, ne? Definetly needs more humour and a side of sweetness to the story, otherwise, this fic is frickin awesome! Don't mind my...choice of words, I'm weird that way; so humour me ^^"

OMG! I just read this story and it is so awesome. I really hope that Kagome makes Sess wait a long time. I REALLY hope that Sess gets what he deserves because he IS acting like a jerk! Maybe Kagome will make him jealous if she keeps flashing those smiles of hers at someone else. Or we could have someone kidnap her and Inuyasha and her friends save her. That will be a blow to his pride. Anyways great chapter and I HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON!

I'm a bit confused.

In the chapter that Sess was talking to Kags mother to try to wed her, her mother said that Kagome was her only child, and then whammo, Kikyo pops up.

Was that intentional?

holy freaking crap. this is quite an attention getter.. Keep it up. I wanna see kagome's revenge..

I think Kagome should play the same trick on him. Great story!

can't wait for the next chapter, though i think at the end you ment under instead of over.

You know, I pause to think about stories like this, with male characters physically, emotionally, sexually and mentally abusing the women they "love".

Yes, this is only a story, I know but it sets up a terrible standard by which young women judge relationships and you're a fool to think young women aren't reading this. Stories like this make abuse of this kind almost acceptable. Sure, she's gonna get her revenge eventually, but a relationship of this kind simply isn't healthy and I've seen so many like these it just makes me wonder and worry.

Sure, no relationship runs smoothly but a relationship like this? In a reality based world, wouldn't work and in a fantasy world, to me it sets up some terrible ideals. Just my ten cents though, so feel free to ignore and revile me.

It's just plain wrong.

Very good. I like very much. Update soon

Wow. Nyice!!! One thing bothered me though, Wasn't it underestimated? The last sentence (i do believe) said overestimated wasn't he underestimating her? Anyway that's about itupdate soon! ^.^ Nyar!

Oh so lemony!! ^_^

Wow! I like this story! Hee! Hee! I wonder what Kagome does next... knowing her, something that Sesshomaru will really regreat!
Keep up the great work!

je ne possesse(accent) pas l'inuyasha...i think that's right anyways....

I'm a girl. I completely forgot to include this in my first review. Sorry.

Please update soon!

I like you. And you are cool. This story is bomb and ur a favorite!!! YAYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! My good gracious alive!! I just barely fineshed the first chapter and I'm already sending you a second review. Oh anf that vampire story is kickin too!!!! mane ur good!!!!


Luv ya,
-Kjinuyasha

I just finished reading ur a/n at the top of the first chapter... and ummm... welll ur very random... LOL but who isn't on this site. Most of the people ur gonna find on Fanfiction sites are gonna be females. 9 times out of 10 it'll be a girl that reviews a story and 9 times out of 10 it's gonna be a girls story you read.... I'm a girl too. and yes i'm straight as well.. which by ur part was random!!! LOL don't turn the tables on me!!!! so what if i'm part insane. lol. read my fics... plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz??? i support you... (well I try seeing as how I've onli read 2 of ur stories and rated onli 1....... SOOOO!!) how bout u me????

Luv ya,
-Kjinuyasha

Great job. I love plots when Sessh is so dominate. Do what you do, I can't wait for what you have up you're sleeve. PEACE!!!

Great story, can't wait to read more!!!
Just one question, how can kagome be an only child if Kikyo is her sister?

wow I just read the two chapters you posted and...wow. thats all I can say. This seems like a good story so keep on writing. Hurry up and post the next chapter I wanna see what happens next. ^.^

I really enjoyed your story and can’t wait for the chapters to come.

Liz

P.S. I also get tingles when reading certain fanfics and I can’t help, but smile. Glad to know I’m not the only one.

Just a note. Gumo does not mean cloud. The word for cloud is Kumo.