I really like this story. It's so sad that it's only a one-shot though.
RainStorm- Thu 06 Jul 2006
OMG! I never laughed so much in my life. Sesshoumaru, passive, PLEASE!!! Unbielivable!!! WHEW!!! GIGGLE! GIGGLE! GIGGLE! I'm still tickled. You did a great job seriously. I hope you write another soon. Take good care of yourself. PEACE!!!
Mocha Lee- Thu 06 Jul 2006
This was excellent! I started reading your other stories to try to keep from begging for more chapters of property and found one of the best lemons hands down. I love the role reversal :)
Natsumi- Wed 05 Jul 2006
I did like it! You did me proud! Question though, where is Sesshoumaru's armor? You could just say that he wasn't wearing it because no one could beat him anyway. But really, you did a fantastic job and I'll keep you in reference should I have another idea! Happy writing!^_^!
Natsumi- Wed 05 Jul 2006
I did like it and THANK YOU! I'm glad that you decided to add those last two things. I didn't really find any mess ups other than where did his armor go? But I guess you could say he hasn't been wearing it lately because who could beat the great Sesshoumaru? You did a fantastic job and if I happen to have any more ideas I'll make sure to see if you want to write it. Happy writing!
Natsumi- Wed 05 Jul 2006
I did like it and THANK YOU! I'm glad that you decided to add those last two things. I didn't really find any mess ups other than where did his armor go? But I guess you could say he hasn't been wearing it lately because who could beat the great Sesshoumaru? You did a fantastic job and if I happen to have any more ideas I'll make sure to see if you want to write it. Happy writing!
shelly- Wed 05 Jul 2006
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