please!...update soon!

I can't wait for some serious ass kicking!!!

please!....

update soon!...

love this story!..

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love this story!..

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love this story!..

Just wanted you to know that i think this is one of the better fics i've read in a while. It actually had me laughing and excited while i was reading. keep up the good work :D

this is geting good!...please!...updtae soon!...

awsome story! I love it! please oh please update really really soon!!!

O please, you have to update soon - plz don't leave me hanging on the cliff like that!

:)

I love it! I want to know what's going to happen now that everyone knows who she is! x3

please please update the story soon i can't wait to see what will happen next everyone has found out that kagome is the tough bitch and all of dat stuff i wonder will there be alot of fighting in the next chapter i can't wait this is a very good story i mean i praise this

*bursts into tears*
You-siffle-up-blubber-dated!
*smiles*
THANK YOU! I thought you would NEVER update your fic!
Great addition by the way!

u son of a bitch! How can u just stop it right there when it was gettin soooo gooood n juicy! Above all i love this story pleeeeeease do update asap i love it! Thanks

I CAN'T BELIEVE U ENDED LIKE THAT!!! COME ON U GOTTA UPDATE SOON LIKE RIGHT NOW ... NOT LIKE NOW TOMORROW BUT LIKE RIGHT NOW!!! LOVE THE NEW CHAPTER!!!

Hey!
Yay!
A new update, but aw man, so short. Now we have to wait (hopefully not to long). I really love this story and my whole bored day just got brighter when I saw that you updated. *smiles widely*
I'm so loving this fic. The best high school/gang fic ever.
Please update please please please real soon.
Of course school comes first, but as soon as possible please come back to us and update. You left us on quite a cliffy and have us - well me thinking exactly how are Sess and Kag gonna hook up when they pretty much hate each other and it seems like Andres is practically in love with her or something. So have to see how you have things planned. So happy she got to see her friends again. So happy you updated. So want another chapter... so when you get a chance....

Great chap.

*A-Kay*

great chapter, about time you updated!!!!

*wipes brow in relief*
Yewh, I was getting worried you might abandon your stories.
*pauses and looks terrified*
You ARE going to continue, aren't you?

Nice work girl.
BTW: I haven't talked to you in awhile.
E-Mail: fan-girl-69@hotmail.com or kittycat617@yahoo.com both Instant Messenger, or just tilk on MySpace or MySpaceIM

Update soon, you home girl & fan: Simone

Nice work girl.
BTW: I haven't talked to you in awhile.
E-Mail: fan-girl-69@hotmail.com or kittycat617@yahoo.com both Instant Messenger, or just tilk on MySpace or MySpaceIM

Update soon, you home girl & fan: Simone

Nice work girl.
BTW: I haven't talked to you in awhile.
E-Mail: fan-girl-69@hotmail.com or kittycat617@yahoo.com both Instant Messenger, or just tilk on MySpace or MySpaceIM

Update soon, you home girl & fan: Simone

Nice work girl.
BTW: I haven't talked to you in awhile. E-Mail: fan-girl-69@hotmail.com or kittycat617@yahoo.com both Instant Messenger, or just tilk on MySpace or MySpaceIM

great chapt.
i love a jealous Sess...

dude..i hope you get better!...

i love you story!...please up date soon!...

I absolutely love your stories and was wondering if I could do a request for the In The Shadows of my Hate. Since Andreas is supposed to Brazilian I was wondering if you could do like a dance scene with him and Kagome to make Kagura and Sesshy jealous I have a youtube video that I think would be perfect muse http://youtube.com/watch?v=vpmSsViAtU4

anyways I'm so glad that you update and I can't wait until you're able to update again.

i love this story just read it for the first time n fell in love with it please update! Pleeeeeeeeeeease! Keep up the good work!

i love this story just read it for the first time n fell in love with it please update! Pleeeeeeeeeeease! Keep up the good work!

This fanfic is going into my favorites,i love the girl power in all of this, maybe you could do another dancing-in-club scene?

This fanfic is going into my favorites,i love the girl power in all of this, maybe you could do another dancing-in-club scene?

Love The New Chapter ... Can't Wait To Read More!

Hey~
Please update soon.
I can't take it anymore. . .
I much read more, please.
Up date soon and keep up
the great work. HeeHee ^-^

OMG I'm going crazy waiting for you to continue the story! I love it love love it! I cna't wait to see how sesh reacts to his new competition! lol please update soon! please please please please please!!!!!

Hey, it's me... Well, I must say, I love this story. Please update soon, I don't think I can hold out much longer.

noo... it stopped xD hahaha if your not to busy, can u update? This is an amazing story ^^

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz finish it was great i loved it!!!!!!!!! finish or i will kill you muahahah plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

oh snap. :P
this fic is REAL good.
gimme more. :D
haha.
[sorry, i'm extremely hyperr]

I really liked that chapter. Andres sounds BEYOND hot. I keep picturing him in my mind instead of Sesshomaru when I image Kagome with the 'perfect' someone. I truly looked forward to your update!

Wow this story is really good! Please update again soon! The plot is unique but I really like it!

It is a wonderful and loving story Please finish the story I want to finish reading it

Keep up the good work

yay love triangle but wait, how old is andres anyway? isn't he just like a father to kagome or something?

Hmm Sesshomaru Better Watch His Back ... Well It Seems As Kagura Has Got A Thing For Our Dragon Character ... I Wonder Whats Going To Happen There ... Update Soon Otay!!

yo..

o love this story!...

please!..more chapters

Oh I like this Andres dude. Hehe. Can't wait to see how Sesshoumaru gets around this guy. ^^

the story is real good and i can not wait for the next chapter and there were some place that you type she for he or he for she but the story is real good and can wait for next chapter and rest of the story when you get it up here good luck in school too. your fan.

Wow, ummm could you write some more sooon please... :((

Mm-mm-mm!
your OC sounds delicious ^_^
n0w that Sess has some c0mpetition, im even more eager for the next chapter! hehehe, till next time!

Jyaki is the demonic aura you were looking for. It is also called youki. Probably a few other things I'm missing to, but the "J" one, that's "Jyaki" =]

lol! and just when i thought the fic cnt get any bter than this, you throw in this curvebaLl! dang!
anyhow, update asap aight? cnt wait for the next 1! oh and gudluck w/ c0llege ",
bye!

As long as Andres is not wounded, I don't care how long he stays! I love his character and I love him and Kagome together. I can't wait to see what happens between Andres and Sesshomaru. We all know that invasion of privacy when Andres entered his mind and dropped a line, he pissed Fluffy-sama off. Ooh! If they fight, have Andres win. Kind of like another way of sticking it to Sesshomaru, letting him know what he is missing out on since an obviously gorgeous guy is fighting for Kagome's affections. I dislike it greatly when Sesshomaru always wins. I'd like for him to get a reality check. If Andres can't beat him [at least once] can Kagome?? =D Can't wait to read the next chapter!

WHOOHOO! Hot Demons!!!

i really don't know how you do it, but this story just keeps getting better and better and better!

I've been busy as well, we have a forigen exchange student in our house going to high school, not exactly making me wish my kids were old enough....lol
I really like the newest chapter, and am very happy about you (finaly) up-dateing! the long seperation of chapters almost made me forget all about your story! But i didn't! Is Andres going to do anything with the Shikon Miko, you know, fight by her and stuff? And will anything more exciting happen in the near future? Also! lol, alot huh? Will there be any dreams from one of the three?: Kags, Sesshy, or Andres.... Any dreams are welcome by me, as long as they are either lemony or full of limes!
ok, Up-date soon please! TTFN!
joanne

That was kick ass awesome. YOU MUST UPDATE SOON!!!

craaaaapppppp....I think I might like your character more than I do Sessy!!!!
he sounds like a HUNK!!!!! and he's sweet and cares for Kags......

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!

craaaaapppppp....I think I might like your character more than I do Sessy!!!!
he sounds like a HUNK!!!!! and he's sweet and cares for Kags......

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!

Another great chapter Zyren. ^^ Thank you for updating and keep up the good work. I love this story.

-miki

Great. Perfect. Wonderful.
I was so happy to see an update.
I loved it. And your OC... very cute.
Seems like I need to look up some of these Spanish words.
I never paid attention in that class when I was in high school.
Update when you get the chance ok. Don't forget. I love this story.

"I don’t know about you guys but I liked the way the chapter turned out and I hope you do too!"
i loved this chapter!!! it was actually one of my favorites cause the beast was added into it more :D
update asap please

i am really glad that your char. aren't changing. what i mean is that most writers usally change kagome back to her weak self by now. the story is flowing really well too. sess and kag aren't jumping in bed and all lovey dovey and that moment of weakness was perfect to show that she isn't completly dead of feelings. i don't want to see kags all crying and screaming but this part went well with the story. thanks for writing this fanfic and hope to read another amazing chap soon.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Demon (Youkai) energy is called youki. Good story!

COOL! ! !
I LOVE IT! ! !
PLEASE PLEASE! ! !
MAKE MORE! ! !

PS. I"m a HUGE FAN! ! !
Let's talk some more, ok?

THANK YOU !
THANK YOU !
THANK YOU !
You updated! I'm so giddy, loving this story as I do.

you need to continue this story

Email me when you do

I think there are different words for demonic energy. Most common used ist youki (opposite to reiki, holy power), but also jyaki and youroku, thought I'm not sure if they mean the same.

its called jaki.....a demonic aura is called jaki......and thestory is going great thanks

LOVED IT! please post the next chapter soon...i like this story very much so please update soon.

chaos

This is a great fic keep up the good work, i'm enjoying it immensely..
oh and the word is Jyaki or Youki

ooooooo! I looooove it!!!! Please update ASAP!!!

You're thinking of Jyaki.

I like the story so far, good characterization. Ganbatte!

i luv this chapter who we kidding i love the whole story please dor the sake of humanity write more lol!!!!!!! (i have the erdge to be overly sarcastic but i do really like the story)

LOL I loved it. Oh and i think it jaki or something like that sorry if its not right. Well post soon.

hugs and puppies

At first, I thought the concept of "gangs" to be rather corny. Then, I read this and thought, hm, interesting. Update soon. I find this rather entertaining. :)

this is awesome!!!...more chapters please!!

SOOO good! I absolutely love it. And to answer your queston, it's jaki. If it's possible, could you send an email when you update? I definatly don't want to lose track of this one.

Jaki? Youki would also work as well, or so I've read ^_^ Anyhow, Dear gods, thiss is too rich! Both are just intent on trying to annoy one another, aren't they? Well, please update as soon as you can! Ja ne!!

Loved The New Chapter ... Hmmm I Think Sesshomaru Is Not The Only One Coming Up With Plans ... He Better Watch His Back I Have A Feeling That Kagome Is Ready For A Fight ... Well Update Soon Please And I Believe The Term You Are Looking For Is Youki ... Well At Least I Think So ...

i love ur fic it's so awesome anyway i believe it is called jyaki or something to that effect. update soon

as usual, i loved it. i think that word you looking for is called jaki, but sometimes i see people refer to it as youki. anyways awesome job,keep up the good work, and update soon.

I've seen it before, jaki. I love your story so far.

OH MY!!!! I LOVE IT!

The demonic energy is Jaki or youki.
Awesome story by the way!

Yay, you updated!!!! And finally, some touching that doesn't involve tryin to hurt someome!!! Please update again soon!

i love this story so far =D please update !!

I love this fic. I do hope that the two of them will become a bit nicer to one another now, although it is amusing to see them fight like cats and dogs,
Any ways kep up the good work and post the next chapter soon.

Chaos

thankies for the update i liked it its the first time i read this and its pretty darn good props^^

I like this chapter. It was nice. I love this story.

The locker rooms? Why would he be taking her there? Update soon!

Whaaaa?!?! Please update sooN!! I wanna read what happens next! Darn Sesshoumaru! Please!!! Desperate here!! I love your story!! So update as soon as you can!! Ja Ne!!

this is awsome...more chapters please...this is gstting good!!..

AWESOME STORY!

Hah?!?! WtH?! Darn Sesshou... Ah well,please update soon! I really am enjoying thinks story! Hahahah, Sess has got a nice big puzzle!! Ja!!

... you mean "sadist" don't ya?
great story, keep it up. ^^

please update asap!!!

OH I Love Your Story!!! Its Realli Realli Good!!! I Cant Wait To See Whats Going To Happen Next!!!

HOLY S***! WHAT THE DELL?! This is just wow.

Wow!!! I have seriously been waiting for this update foreverrrrr!!! Thanks so much for updating. Hmm I was wondering what happend to Naraku. And now I know LOL. Keep up the good work and please update soon.

this is awsome!!!..i was trying to find this story again!!!...please!!!up date soon!!!...i love this story!!!

i still love this fic so much.. write me next time u update ^^ i cant wait for the next chapter!! update soon! criminal_ballerina@yahoo.com

oh, oh, oh!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

HOLY S***!! OmG, this Fic is sooo cool! PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!

Oh man, please update soon!!!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I read your reviews because I could have sworn that I reviewed this story. I couldn't fine me anywhere but I did find the review from Tera(?) , It didn't seem like she was reading the same story we were.

I am not fond of "gang" stories because I just can't relate to the mind-set. But your summary was intriguing and so I gave it a roll and was very sorry when I read the last chapter. Such a good cliffy!!!

You have great FLOW and the story is very unique and original. I don't write but I do read ALOT of fanfiction and I know what I like. Even your characterizations of Sesshomaru and Inuyasha are right on the mark. I like it that you haven't made Inuyasha the bad guy.

I really like the kick-ass Kagome and even Sota is more than a stickperson. I think you have done a marvelous job of creating something very exciting and original. I hope to read more soon.

Til next time, DEB.

Oh I just love this.

I love how you made Kagome a bitch who won ` t take people ` s shit && powerful enough to kick people ` s ass.

LMAO.

Keep doing your thing and please update soon !

I like the idea of gang related fanfics about Sesshoumaru too, it's a great idea to throw them into modernized settings with a twist. But your fanfic....needs a more realistic feel to it and some more details added, more colorful words to it. Seems like you've only written in the drama filler parts, and those don't make the story.....FLOW. That's the word I happen to be looking for. But yeah, your fanfic right now is like a greasy rope that I can't seem to hold onto, and honestly, I can relate, because I've written some horrible fanfics in my past that I hate with a passion. So yeah, don't take this as a flame dear, I'm just telling my opinion so you can try to see it from my point, I'll still keep reading though because I lerv the idea. 3

nice, i like it! update soo!

Haha, go Kagome. But still, that's a terrible past, but this fic is so good! This has to be the best gang fic I've ever read! Most of them are...boring and kinda wierd but this one is compelling and it sucks you in. I can't wait for your next update!

wen r u updating next?? email me back plz at criminal_ballerina@yahoo.com

Hey, I love all three of ur stories that you have written so far, and i can clearly see the passion you have for writing because it's so natural and it flows. I really hope you finish Shadows of Hate, because that's the kind of story I like, where Kagome is not so submissive, but is the powerful one

Midnight snack is funny but hot- :)

I've watched Inuyasha anime- all episodes and movies, but never read the manga- I was into Inuyasha/Kagome, but I have read so many Sess/Kags fics that they all describe Inuyasha as inferior or a tempermental guy- that I have come to actually see him as that LOL - so I'm pput off him now lol

Good luck with any of ur future fics- I look forward to reading them

Sango

oh my .... YOU ARE GODDESS you hear mean * GLOMP* i loe it you have to have have have to write more you hear me ... *huggles comp* beautiful story

PLEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAASSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEE FINISH DIS- IT'S 2 FULL OF SUSPENSE
i love it!!!

OH MAN!! THE FREAKING CLIFFIE! I WANT MORE!! I really enjoyed this revelation and the resilience of Kagome. Though sometimes the story gets choppy. I hope you update soon!!

AAAHHHHH!!! Damn it!!
And it was getting really good to man!!!! I hope you update soon cause i want to know what's going to happen!! So update soon!

I LOVE IT!!!! i hope that you will update soon....i really wanna read the next chapter.....please update soon.

OK! I love this new story and all... but are you gonna update "Yukai recovery"? I just loved it!

OMG PLEASE UPDATE SOON! this story is sooooo goood!!!

HELO! PLZ SUBMIT NEW CHAPPIES!
LUV THE FIC

so far its really, really good. keep up the great work.

loved it plz update soon, drop me a email when u do if not too much trouble

Wow! That was awesome! Thanks for updating. I hope to see the next chapter soon 'cause I really want to know what happens next.

Well you certainly piqued my interest. Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon.

i really like this one. i hope that you will updat really soon. even tho im not supposed to be reading them during my classes...heh heh...oh well the classes are boring and these are my salvation. i hope that you will continue with this one. i like where its going.

update update update update update

UPDATE SOON! Please...I really like this story.

-Dani.

ohhhhhhh ... u have 2 update -pout-
this is a good story. i'm normally not really into this stuff (gangs) but it really all depends on the writter, and the situation of things. you've done pretty good. me like. update soooon.
(oh, ps, was 'the shikon miko' wearing a mask or something .. i can't remember reading about one .. i was just wondering if that was why no one recognized her.) Ja-ne.

This is really good. I can't wait to read what happens now that Kagome's secret is let out.

oh fuck yea!! need more!!!

I love the way Kagome's portrayed in this fic. I like to read fics where Kagome is tough and kicks ass.

I FUCKING LOVE IT! it's so addictive. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE contine and update. Too lazy to login.

wow! I am really happy someone decided to take on a challenge like this one, i too also wish that more gang like stories were out on this website.
=)
I loive what you have written so far, and if it isn't any trouble, could you please email me when you update?

Please and thank you.

once again, incredible job~

i very much love this fic... you're developing the plot very well... can't wait for your next update... keep up the good work...

I love it! Update soon please.

-Dani.

For Inuyasha and Sessh to dig her would be cool. And don't make her dumb-allow her a cool and collect intellect.

can I read tomorrow?

wow...that was great. It was intriguing and creative, I love that Kags kicks ass.

EEk!! x.X

i loved this and i hope you update soon its really an awesome story and i would love to read more so plzzzz update soon!!!!!!!!!!^_^

I was searching up and down for this story for a week.Update really soon plz

love it! you should finish it!

plz update!!

I LOVED IT!!!!!!!! Thank you, it's going great so far. OH! And thanx for giving me credit. It meant a lot to me. I'm feelin' the names and Kagome is so AWESOME!!! You created her just like I thought she would turn into. Anyway!! Make more soon!!! YOU ROCK!!!!!!

~Night's Perfection ~

Wow!!! that was really COOL!! I love it....Kagome is so awesome! please let her kick some Sesshy ass! hehehe just a little not too much of course...uuuh I know let it be a draw ah yes that'd be so awesome! anyways it's your story not mine keep up the great work and update SOON! XD

Again, I loved it! Please update soon!

Awesome...simply awesome!!

update soon

ACK! Please please PLEASE don't stop there!!! This is so good, and it's just in the first chap! AGH!! I can BARELY wait for the next chapter! Oh, and I hope Kagome gets to kick MAJOR ass soon! *winkwink*

Much Luck!

oooh nice! update sooon plz!