A very wonderful beginning! I am certainly looking forward to your future updates. Sesshoumaru is completely in character as far as I'm concerned. The way he keeps talking to himself about Rin is priceless, bordering on funny. It looks like our favorite stoic youkai lord is in love and doesn't even know it. I will look for your updates.

Ja ne!

Nefra

Beautiful beginning. Your word choice for metaphor is graceful and poignant. Can't wait to read more!