*pants* holds a cold and damped small towel and presses the coldnes of it on her face and shoulders and neck while pantgn againa nd says * man youre really good keep ging with the story please oh and sen m an email fi you wana be friends either by yaho acounts or msn ok my email is normamourani@yahoo.com

*pants* holds a cold and damped small towel and presses the coldnes of it on her face and shoulders and neck while pantgn againa nd says * man youre really good keep ging with the story please oh and sen m an email fi you wana be friends either by yaho acounts or msn ok my email is normamourani@yahoo.com

that was a very intence chapter keep writing please

this story is really good

now i'm in heat lol when is my husband coming home

I love it you need to write some more thsi is one of my fav storys. I will be lookin for the next chapter and I hope it will be soon

UPDATE

that was good you should make one of her having inu pup's XP !!

I LOVE THIS FIC I THINK U SHOULD MAKE MORE OF IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hot story. Update, and make the chapters a little longer plz.

OH FUCK THAT WAS SOOOOOOOO GOOD YOU ARE MY QUEEN OR KING IDK ANYWAYS YOU ROCK THIS STORY ROCKS I LOVE IT OH GOD

OH FUCK THAT WAS SOOOOOOOO GOOD YOU ARE MY QUEEN OR KING IDK ANYWAYS YOU ROCK THIS STORY ROCKS I LOVE IT OH GOD

I love the fanfic and would like it if you wrote more.

I just thought you should know that there is a difference between clit and vagina. So therefore shouldn't he be putting it in her vagina and not her clit? Actually I think it's impossible for him to put it into her clit. Other than that this is a good story!

absolutely fantastic!

i want MORE =)

This was a good chapter.update soon

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

It's really good but i have two complaints.

When you say that he puts two /three/however many fingers into her "clit" A clitorus isn't that big it's normally small and has no entrance into the birth canal. Perhapes what your looking for is Vagina, or any other name for it. That's where the thrusting occurs.

Second in the first page you said that when he came in her ass it went straight to her womb. Do you see the problem there, the anal cavity does not connect to the birth canal thus his seed could not reach her womb.

Other than those things, which confused me and ruined a tiny bit for me, the story is very well writen. Keep it up.

This sounds like a really fantastic story, keep up the good work and I really hope you UPDATE as SOON as you can please.

I read your fanfic and I really liked what you have so far

Very kinky and sexy... PLEASE UPDATE!!!

This is so juicy! :D
I think for the next one you should make it that she teases him badly. like touching him lightly. barely touching his skin. he wants he to touch him more and harder but he wont. the she get's on top of him and thrust slowly in to him. and he try's to break free so he can make her go faster on top of him. you can fill in the rast.... ;D

PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!

Hey you have to keep up with this story it's great, very kinky. I very much approve of it

This is a good story. Less bndage and mor missionary, doggy style. Heve them fuck out side or at a party in a broom closet or somethin. More than sex even though you have to make them have sex. Still wee need more.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

more please

Please you must write more, I have never been more excited to wait for an update. Plus this story is keeping me on my toes, I hope you keep up the job well done. Also this story sounds fantastic, so PLEASE UPDATE as SOON as you can.

This is really godo story and I hope you keep goiong with all the review ypu get.

Muse: yay lemon
Cat: u have one sick mind
BCat: well i love lemons 2
Cat: =0o= PERVS MY INNER VOICES/ DARKER SIDES ARE PEVERS!
muse &BCat: well duh
Cat: u sicken me
BCat: * hits cat over head* u made us
Muse: yes but she doesnt control us.
Cat: =0o= since when did my darker half become a perv (bcat = black cat)
BCat: since now
Muse: dito
Cat: that means im going to become one some day =.=; im doomed
BCat: love the story update soon,
Muse: yeah cat just is in denile
Cat: there has to be a way not to be come a perv and I will FIND IT!
Bcat: sure u well kitty sure u will

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Sweet keep up the good work I love it...

how about getting really kinky? lyk sess coming home from work kag tying him to the bed (i mean hands and feet) using some hot wax, chocolate, whipped cream and strawberries? and even kag masturbating in front of him?

I kno I'm kinky. Thanx

~lust~

this is a good story krrp up

GREAT!

Use the words: pumped, pounded, pussy, dick, lust arousal, slammed, nipped, bite, taste, trail, and describe the penis more, and tell how wet she was or how she felt wrapped around him. Go into more detail... (did I just make you blush??? I just made myself blush.) it makes the lemon a whole lot jucier!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Not bad though... not bad at all. I can kinda picture it as a cartoon tho... not realistic... I know you're writing fanfiction for an anime... but if you write it to where it's realistic and more detailed the better it'll be. But I like it and I vote for you to continue... just wanted to give u my two cents... tho I don't write hard core lemon.....NEWAYZ

Luv ya,
-Kjinuyasha

please more chapters

This story was great. I cant wait until you update.

WOW... thats all I can say... WOW, good stuff, keep writing!

more more MORE!!!!!!!!!!!! yeahhhhhh

hey great i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Update plissss

aw-e-some story! i'll be watching out for it and will be checking to see if you update! good job! i'm one of your fans, so don't disapoint me and make me call my squirrel friends on you!

FREAKING AWESOME!! I love it!! Sex, love, and of course the alllllll important element, sex!!!! HAHA!! Much love to it!!

this is hot - you should update soon - is Kagome gonna get pregnant? o_O? please dont make her get pregnant >_!

I'm so happy you got the reviews to continue the story. Update soon!

That is soo mean...U can't just stop !!! Update now!! Plzzz!!! UPDATE I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!

OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Is all I have to say!!!!!!

awsome story keep it up

fwee you updated!

this i soooooooooo great we need more alot more. 5 stars all the way.

Please you must write more. I have never been more excited to wait for an update. And, this story is keeping me on my toes. PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON.

PLEASE update

I need to read more of this, so hot and dirty please update

please continue on to the next chapter!!!!

GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON>^_^

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

WOW!!!!!!!!!! AMAZING!!!!!!!!!! INTSENSE!!!!!!!!!! I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE MAKE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

keep going every sight needs abit of smut ^__^

That was a great fanfiction! I cant wait for more.

wow!! that was pretty intense!! wat's gonna happen next?

AMAZING!!

Your story is really good, keep up the good work. I can't wait to read more of your story, I hope you UPDATE ASAP PLEASE ! ! ! : ^ )

Your story is really good, keep up the good work. I can't wait to read more of your story, I hope you UPDATE ASAP PLEASE ! ! ! : ^ )

You definitely should continue this fic. So you better update and make it soon, lol.

put more

more more MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!

please more to this story

please add more chapters
thanks

0o0oo def. hott!!

hey it sound like a good fic keep writing more.

this would be a pretty goos story if you added more chapters. SO PLEASE ADD MORE CHAPTERS!!!!

MORE MORE MORE ! ! ! !

i like the story please continue!!! u did great on the lemon keep it up!!!!!