| Also, one of the groups could do "My Paper Heart" by All- American Rejects
~*Pagan~Youkai*~- Fri 09 Nov 2007
| You know, you should todaly do "Alive'n Out of control" by Papa Roach as a song that Sesshoumaru could sing. That would be Awsome!!!!!!! ^_^
mizu- Wed 26 Sep 2007
DID U DIE OR SOMETHING???? WHERE ARE YOU???? HAVE YOU GIVEN UP ON THIS STORY???? HELLOOOOOO?
LOL, just hurry and update, oh and check out my Harry potter story on media miner it is, at http://www.mediaminer.org/fanfic/view_st.php/142874/ it is good, even though i do not like the first three chapters. My friend Sondra wrote them, and I have been writing most of it as of late. So check it out if you can, and update soon. Oh and if you are dead I command you come back to life immediately. LOL
Mizu
That Was a Gr8 Chapter!!!! PLEASE Updage Soon!!
Love,
Kagome-Chan ♪
keiki- Mon 27 Aug 2007
| Wow i loved it. I can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens.
lolz!! The little kid Zack was funny....Kapome!!! *laughs hysterically* Their date was soo cute!! Awww....although while I was reading I kept thinking about Zeppoli's....damn I want some! lolz! Update really soon!!
Toodles!!
Much Love, PunkrockerX
| This stories great plz continue,Love the characters.♥ ~_^
| This stories great plz continue,Love the characters.♥ ~_^
sakura- Mon 13 Aug 2007
| YAAYY!!!!!! Finally a new chapter! I want to know how many times Sango can slap Miroku during one Date!
| I really like this story.
Nya- Mon 13 Aug 2007
| Woohoo you finally updated! So glad you're back can't wait to read the next chap, luv'd it keep it up.
Mizu- Mon 13 Aug 2007
Oh when i was looking through your reviews i noticed that i had made some wrong couple errors in mine, lol once i reread it i was like. "Well don't i feel dumb." In my defense, It is late, and i haven't read the story in a while, which i am going to do. lol so let me see, how about after Inuyasha and Zerlina, Sango and Miroku have a date chapter. you do one with Eve and Riku and Takara and Bankostu in one chapter. then you can do me and Shinzo, with haru and shadow. than Aki and Muso, with Ayame and Kouga. lol like random date chapter, they do not have to follow each other. but it is an idea lol Though i do not want to sound selfish, but i would like to see me and Shinzo together soon or at least a little fluff. lol so yeah forgive me for that. lol can you tell i am really bored tonight. .You are the only good fanfic that has been updated, so i am a tad bit bored, but hey rereading your story is fine by me. lol hope to read more from you soon.
Your most faithful Reviwer, Beta reader, and biggest fan,
~Mizu Setsuna~
*AKA Brittany*
sessysbaby666- Mon 13 Aug 2007
| don't take this the worng way but i love u.
Mizu- Mon 13 Aug 2007
Hey just so you know it has been a while but remember that i am your beta reader. lol just thought i'd remind ya.
Mizu Setsuna
AKA Brittany
Mizu- Mon 13 Aug 2007
YAAAAAY! You finally updated. lol Kagome got dizzy on the carnival rides, lol i do that too. I am glad you are not dead lol, we all missed you of course. I hope you like your new computer. New computer's are nice I just got a laptop. So yeah I loved their date, that little kid was toooo cute. so yeah i enjoyed this chapter a helluva lot. it was one of the best one's yet. Now the next chapter should be fun, Inuyasha on a date. I hope he does not blow it or make a fool of himself, or do it? Hmmm? jk. So anyway hope you update soon, and i wanna read about Riku and Eve getting together on a date as well. lol the tension between them is high. It is kinda nice to read though. Oh and i hope that we meet haru's fiancee soon. lol it'll be nice. So yeah. I also hope that Shinzo and I get together as well, along with shadow and Bankotsu too, lol and just everyone else. Hope to read another update sooner than this last on took. lol I'm jk. enjoy your new computer and update soon. Have a good day, or night depending on when you read it.
~Mizu Setsuna~
*AKA Brittany*
the westren land heiress lady Ky- Tue 31 Jul 2007
Hey I don't know if you want to use it but I thought the song broken by seether ft.Amy lee would be a great song for Kagome and Sesshomaru to sing together it's your choice, good fic though very funny. here are the lyrics for
"Broken (feat. Amy Lee)"
I wanted you to know I love the way you laugh
I wanna hold you high and steal your pain away
I keep your photograph and I know it serves me well
I wanna hold you high and steal your pain
'Cause I'm broken when I'm lonesome
And I don't feel right when you're gone away
You've gone away, you don't feel me, anymore
The worst is over now and we can breathe again
I wanna hold you high, you steal my pain away
There's so much left to learn, and no one left to fight
I wanna hold you high and steal your pain
[x2]
'Cause I'm broken when I'm open
And I don't feel like I am strong enough
'Cause I'm broken when I'm lonesome
And I don't feel right when you're gone away
'Cause I'm broken when I'm lonesome
And I don't feel right when you're gone away
You've gone away
You don't feel me here anymore
Mizu- Mon 30 Jul 2007
lol, well i guess i can forgive you, cuz i know how it happens, and thus how you feel. it is not your fault just make it extra good okay!!!!!! Lol i cannot wait to read sess and kag's first date. lol yay. hope to read more soon.
mizu
AMG!!!! SHE LIIIIIIVVVVEEEEESSSS!!!!!!!! lol I Thought U Had Gone and Died or Something!! lol I'm So0o0 Glad Your Back! I Look 4ward 2 the Next Chapter. And If U Need a Beta, Call On Me Any Time!!!! ^_^
Ciao Darling!!
Kagome-Chan ♥
Mizu- Tue 24 Jul 2007
| hey, r u still interested in this story at all, or are u like me and end up giving up for a bit, i really want to read the date and that would make me and all your other readers happy so please update soon, or at least give us an authors not saying you are taking a break plz. thanx. Mizu
Jasmine- Sat 09 Jun 2007
| Please write more it's inresting.It's cool story
| hey update NOW . . . I didn't mean it please update
blacketernal- Mon 28 May 2007
| I WANT TO SEE SOMEONE SING Numb by Linkin Park or Pain by Three Days Grace!!!!! I can't wait to see who will sing what next!!!
| come oon finish already, i can'it wait any longer
subtle sarcasm- Tue 08 May 2007
| You are doing a great job herding all these characters around. The plot's still flowing despite everybody crushing on each other and playing shows. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Hopefully it'll include a bit of "suck face" between Sess and Kagome???
| wow.... what a bunch of rowdy animals!!! Now that i see what they do on their down time, i'm scared to see what will happen if they all go on vacation together.......lolz! Update soon please!!!
| OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG....OMG!!!! lol i FREAKIN' LOVE THIS story!!!!!!!! its really good! cnat wait for the next chappie
| Please hurrry and post the next chapter!!! Can't wait till then!!
Kira- Sat 14 Apr 2007
| I LOVE your story so far! You HAVE TO update soon! It's just to funny!
OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD! Where did you learn to write so good....all my longie fanfictions end up drappy...I never have any more good plots....Love the story!!
Iro-chan
sesshous_girl- Fri 13 Apr 2007
| hey this story rocks, lol. Can't wait for another chapter.
| OH this is adorable!! Theres a few typos and grammar mistakes, but who doesn't have those! lol It's carefree and funny! I'm skeptical of Kikyou.. And I LOVE your OC Eve! Great job!
swtdrm01- Fri 13 Apr 2007
| I can't wait for the next chapter. This one was hilarious. I couldn't stop laughing. Great job.
Twilight Garden- Thu 12 Apr 2007
| I really enjoyed this chapter and the last one though I didn't review it. I like how Sesshoumaru and Kagome are finally having that date and the fluff was great. I like that my character Zerlina gets a kiss from Inuyasha. I hope that Kikyou dies a fiery death if she tries anything. Update soon
LunarGaze- Thu 12 Apr 2007
| Great fic! I really like it. Update soon!
DarkAngel495- Thu 12 Apr 2007
PleaSe UpdaTe!!! I waNt tO KnoW
WhAt iS goIng TO HAppEn to The
DaTe, !!!!!!!!!!!!!! ThAnK YOu !!!!!!!!!!!
^^
angel_of_darkness- Thu 12 Apr 2007
| hey i emailed you awhile back about the fanfic its still great by the way but you never got back to me about being in it i would love it if you did im not being pushing or anything just coruios k?if you did put me in it could my name be niko? please get back to me as soon as possible k? oh and when you e-mail me put as the subject "you rock my world" ill recognize it better k? thanks bye
AMG Im IN LOVE WITH YOUR FIC!!!! I LOVE all the couples, and the songs are like classic!! I luv every 1 of them! Please Update As Soon As U Can!!!! ^^ Thanks!!
-Kagome-Chan
| Please,Please,Please update soon! I love the story so far!
DarkAngel495- Wed 28 Mar 2007
| UpdaTe pLeAse!!!!! ThanK YoU!!!!!!
swtdrm01- Tue 27 Mar 2007
| Thank you for updating. That was funny. Great job. I hope to see the next chapter soon.
Shyla Marie Tobiassen- Mon 19 Mar 2007
Hi I LOVE YOUR story but I was wondering if you could possibly in the next chapter put the songs
Missing or Everybody's Fool by Evanescence? Just wondering.
T- Sat 03 Mar 2007
| I'm beginning to get the idea that you're completely insane.
Aubrie- Fri 23 Feb 2007
| What were the songs used in Concert Day Part 2? I know the one from Evanescence, but that's it.
Aubrie- Fri 23 Feb 2007
| I don't know, Chapter 5 was cute. I had to wait a while before my laughing subsided enough to review for you. Excellent! You have talent.
Saeko- Sun 07 Jan 2007
| Interesting idea. You keep spelling guitar wrong, and if by Ayamae you mean the fox demon in love with Kouga in the anime, which its pretty obvious you mean her, its Ayame. There were other things that bugged me about this fic, but I'm too tired to remember them, so I'll tell you some other time.
post ur fanfics on fanfiction.net so that readers may know when there is an update
sesshomaru_lover- Wed 27 Dec 2006
srry about not rating sooner but i wait till the last chapter that the peson wrote to rate and review.
anyway i loved it sooo much (not wanting to be pushey) but i would love you forever if you put me in the storie ^_^ im 5,5 waist long black hair ice like blue eyes (once again not wanting to be pushey!) hope you finish it soon!!!! if you dont *glares eviley* just kidding but hope you finish it!!!!!!
| Great Chappie Cant See Wut Happens Next!
| Love the story so far! Please try and update as soon as you can!!!
Brandie- Thu 07 Dec 2006
| I was wondering when the new chapters will be posted
Brandie- Sat 02 Dec 2006
| I read the newest chapter and can't wait to read the next
*lick* i love this story,and i am 'odd' as well,but i'm not all that friendly.well i say i'm not but my friends say i am.oh um i hope yea don't mind but i knda used the beganing of this story to start mine out,its called Dating Modles,its on my fanfic site thingy on here,so if you wanna see if its ok for me to use that part just click my name and look at Dating Modles on my site,k?? good. ^-^ hope to see another chapter soon.
*lick*
Iris
Ren Taisho- Tue 28 Nov 2006
| IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII LLLLLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEE IIIIIIIITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT (- I LOVE IT)
Little Sheriff- Sun 26 Nov 2006
Ok, so I didn't see anything about youy having a girl for Musuo, and so I figured I would submit one. If you have one, sorry for not looking hard enough, if you don't, your welcome to use this one, and even if you don't want her for something like that, you can use for anything, including dead bodies if need be. I'm not really picky. Ok, here goes(I'm making it up as I go):
Name: Liana Rays (likes to go by "Li")
Age: 21 (just legal)
Height: 5'8" and a half
Appearance
Hair color: Black w/ dark blue highlights
Hair length: Mid-back
Eye color: Dark blue with silver specks
Build: lean, pretty athletic
Skin: White, no freckles
History
Ummm, her parents are dead, and all she has is a way over protective big brother who doesn't like to leave her alone. Part of what she's doing right now is getting away from him so she can have some alone time. Parents were murdered when her brother was 19, leaving him to take care of her, since she was about 11 at the time. Has extensive martial arts and wepon training. She's taking a year break from collage right now.
Personality
She's kinda shy in the way that she doesn't like to talk to people. Very quiet, but still an over all happy person. She has a short temper though, and it always seems to surprise people. She stays quiet as long as possible, then ends up exploding at whoever is angering her. Fidgets a lot, whether that fidgeting includes excersing, training, or just fidgeting with something on herself depends on the mood. Like to play with hair, but not in an obcessing "Yura of the Hair" way, more like, "I'm bored, and I'm gonna put multiple small braids in your hair" type of way. Always wears a small silver cross on a silver chain that her brother gave her for her highschool graduation gift. It used to be her mothers. Loves to sing, read, and write. She's very loyal to those she considers her friends, and sems to be very responsible.
Ok, so there's my character. If you have any questions, feel free to e-mail me. And just so you know for future reference, gitar is not a word hun, it's guitar. I'm not trying to be mean (I seem to end up sounding that way), I just do so much editing of my own stories (months after I write them of course) that it's kinda habit to edit as I read. So, please don't take it wrong. Anywho, hope you update soon.
magnolia- Sat 25 Nov 2006
I love the story, but I feel like you're trying to make the chapters seem longer by adding lyrics. Personally, I rather that the song lyrics were a minimum, unless they have a part to play in the chapter--like the song that Kags sung and Sess was trying to figure out who wrote it.
Can't wait for the next chapter, and good luck writing:)))
haha!! finally some romance!! yay!! oh and you don't have to worry about your candy....i have my own now....*clutches large bag of jolly ranchers* great chapter (or two since i just read both right now :)) well please update soon!!!
Much Love, PunkrockerX
kagsesskyo- Sat 25 Nov 2006
| I love this chapter!!!!! I can't wait for you to update the next chpater!!!!!! That one is going to have Kagome and Sesshomaru in it!!!! Yay!!!
| cute chapter okay hurry and type more i'm off to write myself a new fic or update an old one lol
BlackFangedInu- Sat 25 Nov 2006
| You rock! the title Rocks! The story Rocks!! Everything So Far ROCKS!!!!!! I luv U! Linkin Park's "crawling" song would be fantastic for Sesshy-kun to sing or any other LP song!! Make more very soooon!! Ican't wait for more chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Review ch7:
Awwww Sesshoumaru-sama is intrigued! It's how it always starts Buwhahahaha...
Dragons! Yus! no! Now I want to stay up more! Why must you torture me so?!
Lol good luck and keep up the excellent work
Goodness would youstop with the cliffies!
I must read on... but I can... But I must... but I can't... Grrr why did you have to make it so darn good and addicting?!
:-p
Lol well.... maybe one more... just one more for tonight.... ha, I'll prall be dreaming about what happens next though
Keep up the fatastic work and good luck
Hahaha! Mobs of fans thats soo funny! Gah! look what you have done, your story is tooooo good! I can't just leave it >. But I have to make the dinner tomarrow... Hmmm Awesome Fanfic vs turkey.... well one more chapter couldn't hurt eh?
^_^v Good luck and have fun! Happy Thanksgiving!
Review ch4:
Gah! Cliffy! ^_^ Awesome Chappie! Hehe totaly funny!
Good luck and keep up the fantastic work!
Review ch3:
It did sooooo not suck!
It was hilarious!!
^_^ kehe ice age.. that was a good one I have to admit.
^_^ good luck!
Keep up the great work!
Review for ch2:
Hahaha Niiiice Sesshoumaru looks like a chick *snickers*
Oo yea and I realised a second too late on my last review... I spelt Ayamae waaaay wrong >. Sorry for that. No clue where it came from.
Anywhoo awesome chapter even better than the last! ^_^ It makes laugh! Buwhahahahahaha
hehe keep up the awesome work and good luck
Review for ch1:
LMAO!!
It seems I'm not the only one who makes Aayme into a sex pedo
^_^ I love this story so far, it's just the first chapter.
Soooo I figured, I would comment on every chapter that I love. Which by the looks of it is going to be every chapter. ^_^ Hope you don't get too annoyed of me by the time I'm done.
Well Good luck and keep up the great work!
brit- Sat 18 Nov 2006
| PWEASE make me a list of all the songs you used in this fanfic. I love them!! Keep writing, I hang on your every word!! Keep it comin' with the Kag/Sess!!!
mszbrownangel- Sat 18 Nov 2006
hello again....
i really like the storyyy
please be quick about updating
will just get to the Sesshomaru and Kagome stuff alreadyy... we already know that Rin and Shippou are okay with her...
soo please please hurry uppp and update LOL i know you updated yesturday soooo can u doo it again=) or do i ask to much=) ne wayz im gone bye bye GREAT STORY
| OO > Q Q how could u!!!
Twilight Garden- Fri 17 Nov 2006
| Loved that you updated so very happy that you and I can't wait until you do so again.
kagsesskyo- Fri 17 Nov 2006
| It's okay! I can wait for you to update the next chapter! That's how much I love your fanfic!!! I'm willing to wait for you to update the next chapter!!! And when you update the next chapter, I'm looking forward to reading about Kagy and Sessy romance!!!! XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD
mszbrownangel- Tue 14 Nov 2006
heyyy i really like this storyyyy!!!
Damn it!! I wanna be paired up with one of them.... *goes in corner in cries* LOL ne ways please updateee.... can i gettt some milk n cookiesss=)
kagsesskyo- Wed 01 Nov 2006
| I love your fanfic!!! It's soooo funny I can't wait for you to update the next chapter! ^-^
Maru-kunkun- Thu 26 Oct 2006
woot, that was really awesome XD !! i laughed soo much !! XD update sooooon !!
Ja-ne.
Bye-byez.
Serene Aurora- Sun 22 Oct 2006
| That was a funny chapter! Keep on writing!
| LIked the revisons update soon.
Yuki Asao- Mon 09 Oct 2006
| GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT PHENOMENAL STORY!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
cherry- Sun 08 Oct 2006
| GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE IT ! LOVE IT! LOVE IT!!!! UPDATE SOON!
Yuki Asao- Sun 08 Oct 2006
| This is a GREAT idea!!! Except Ayame's name doesn't end with ae, it ends with e. Ayame.
Kanela- Sun 08 Oct 2006
Hey!! I love it!! Can't wait for the Sess/Kag stuff, just can't!!
I love how your story is going on...update soon!!
-Kanz
Iris_Sesshomarusmate- Thu 31 Aug 2006
| i love eve and riku there so cute together^.^please update i love this story it kiss naraku ass,trust me thats a lotta ass^.^,so update 'caz i love this story and the people in it^.^
Shadow- Sun 06 Aug 2006
Dude so totelly awesome!!! I'm finally in a story!!! I've wanted to do one of those self-insert things so long but I didn't think anyone would like me if I wrote it (Isuck at writing). I have cat ears!!!!!! you rock!!!!! I'm using a lot of exclimation(sp?) points.....right thank you so much for pairing me with Haru!!!! again totel awesomeness! ^_^
Ja Ne!!!!!
Hahaha!! Silly string and feathers!!! *snickers* That chapter was defenitely funny as hell! And you say something's going to happen to Kagome? NOOO! IT better be good or ima hunt you down and steal all of sugary candy and treats!!!
Toodles!!
Much Love, PunkrockerX
| hey guess what? you didn't say wich ones you were going to update so ya know what? update em all! lol jk but really I hope you update this one and Untitled, cuz they both rock! I love 'em both!
| this is a great story and its hallarious!!!!!!!!
another awesome 3 chapters!! oh and to answer what u said in chapter 13 ^^ i am kind of funny, i like to act out and try to remain hidden, my friends say i act like a little puppy when it comes to people and that i'm pure evil when it comes to tricks and evil deeds lol i actually believe them
I was watching an anime called host club and i act like the three evil characters lol. I almosted did another evil deed today but forgot it was orientation for school so i had to hold off the evilness lol hurry and update soon! i hope to read more soon!!!11oneone
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my kitty friend says hi lol
Eternal Serenity ~ Raging Maden- Thu 03 Aug 2006
| this is an awsome fic. PLZ UPDATE ASAP.
| so happy so very happy that you updated. this was a fun chapter. i really liked it alot. Update soon
Dude, your story like rocks outloud! I've been checking every day to see if you've updated, and before anyone thinks it, I am not a stalker! I've just had alot of time on my hands since school ended for the summer, so yeah. But anyway, keep up the good work!
Oh yeah, and I saw in chapter 15 that you needed someone for either Maru or Musou, and if you haven't found anyone, I'd be happy to pair up with either one. ^.^
Name: Harmony Kanaye
Age: 22
Hair Color: Onyx Black
Eye Color: Dark Blue, sorta like the ocean.
Body Type: Athletic
Personality: Very outgoing, kind to everyone, and I get to know people before I judge them. I try and get along with everyone, and I make alot of friends that way. Not to mention, I'm a large animal lover, and I have a pet Siberian Huskey that goes everywhere with me named Sephiroth, if you wanted to add him.
He's really, really friendly and loves kids and is kind towards all my female friends. He doesn't hate males, but dislikes them with a passion. Except a few that are like really nice to him...like boyfriends of whatever. He kinda knows if someone's trying to hurt me, and can tell the difference between hugs and punches. ^.^ He's a smart pooch.
Seriously, I do have a Husky named Sephy that does that, I just thought it might make my character more complete. ^.^ Whatever works for you.
I hope you update soon!
-Harmony
Kuma- Thu 27 Jul 2006
| decent decent i liked it....it wasn't a full ten i give it a 9.8 cuz sesshy was sleeping
rhonda34- Thu 27 Jul 2006
| please keep updating this story
angel wolf- Thu 27 Jul 2006
| Very nice! Love the story keep going.
| hey i hope you dont mind im sort of a gothic type buti do believe in god and i keep my self open for other types of religion and im quiet and sort of like sesshomaru but ill be with who ever ok and for your grampa to get well soon and my best wished to him and you
| I have to say Shizo is my favorite!! ha ha he acts just like me...lol
| YAY! I loved Riku and Eve's song!!
| YAY! that was awesome! And thanks for the thanks in th beginning.. i think that sounds right... naywyas loved lal the songs, specially saving me
| I am so that I am in the story. The last chappie was just hiliarious. I loved it and the last chapter as well. If you need help with revising let me know and i will help to the best of my ability. This story just kicks ass.
don't you just love filler chapters??? lolz. Yes, even though it was boring, it was informative. Hey; when are Sesshomaru and Kagome gonna show some signs of romantic intrest????
Toodles!!
Much Love, Midnight Walker
sesshou's gurl- Wed 26 Jul 2006
| I like it. Up date really soon.
DarkMagic1018 (Sam)- Wed 26 Jul 2006
Hello! ^^ I just wanted to say that I love your story so far, and was really surprised (and happy) to see that I like every song that the bands played. Also I would just like to note that if you ever need help with spelling/grammar/editing just let me know and I'd be happy to. Hope to see more writing from you.
-Sam
| thanks for the cookie and if need be take your time on the spellings
Mizu- Wed 26 Jul 2006
i just found ou tsome bad news m ygrandpa is in the hospital right now and i may not be able to read any fanfics while i go visit him, he os going through surgery right now my mom just called me on my cell. she knew i'd be up since i had to close the resturant tonight at work. On my honor i swear he is in the hospital so if you could pray for him if you are not into that its ok, i just hope that he gets better that is all. Um so if you update or email me and i don't replay that will be why. Well i shall talk to you later, oh and i for got to tell you that i am the very Mizu who appeared in The Player's Club. You can even ask the autour that i am the very one, but i kinda would like a change from Inuyasha so either Haru or Shinzo would work best, well i am rambling now that i am sad and tired so i am going to bed, Good night, or should i say good morning, or good afternoon, or good evening, (referring to whenever you read this review.) i have rated all of your chapters so fate even the author notes, those do count towards your story, and high numbers never hurt anyone. So please pray for my grandfather if you want to and if not well then its okay i will NOT hold it against you. Thank you for spending all of this time reading all of my reviews. I really do appreicitate it. Thanks again.
Mizu Setsuna
P.S. You have earned the full Pen Name signature which only my bestfriend gets to know that it is real me. So enjoy update soon and notify me on the beta testing i can still do it, and it may help me to get my grandfather's pain off my mind a little since i am a state away from him, but only temporarily of course. I will talk to you later then, Bye Bye
Mizu Setsuna
Mizu- Wed 26 Jul 2006
hey there, here is my discription if you want to add me
Name: Mizu
Hair color: Dark Blue
Eye Color: Silver
Skin Color: Very Fair Skinned
Height: 5'5"
Hobbies: Singing, dancing, playing the drums, reading books and taking relaxing walks when upset.
Attitude: Generally a nice person, loyal, kind, friendly towards new people, open to new ideas, but stubborn at time, carefree very loose, not too uptight, but can be if the time calls for it, and is an all around good person
Species: Whatever you want but i would prefer to be a Kitsune youkai, or a Ryuu youkai. (I think that means dragon, but i want to be a dragon just incase i am using the wrong word.)
Just so you know Inu or Shinzo is good, but i would like SHinzo the best, and i have reviewed every chapter, and i will be your beta reader in return for this honroable position. SO please pllase plase give me a chance and let me bne with SHinzo.
Mizu- Wed 26 Jul 2006
hey if you need a Beta reader i can do it for you. other than typing on AIM, and emails and reviews i am a a straight A student when it comes to english. so if you need any help let me know. I am here to help you in any way that i can. Have a nice day, and update soon, oh and don't forget i would really love to be paired up with SHinzo, give me an email if you want to add me so incase you need any help i can halp you, but only if you need and want my help.
Mizu
Mizu- Wed 26 Jul 2006
I did like kikyo'd band's songs and poor Shinzo got bonked on the head. lol poor guys he's crazy (In a good way) and funny and kool all at the same time. The perfect kinda guy, for me at least. I am amazed at teh kind of characters you came up with. i usuaslly don't approve of O.C.'s becuase they are usually under done and not very interesting and only there to be paired up with a main character, BUT yours are done excellents with well thought out backgrounds, interesting personalliities, and are all around likable people. I am very happy to say that these are my favorite O.C's in ANY of the Alternate Universe stories. I do have to say that Anubis is my favorite O.C. but then again he is an Egytption god portrayed into a Japanese Anime. WHich rocks, but then again dragons' totally kick ass too. SO if you can pair me up with Shinzo then please do. Thanks for reading this. I really appreciate it.
Mizu
Mizu- Wed 26 Jul 2006
hey there. i will gladly be paired up with either Shinzo or Inuyasha, i reallly do love your story and i really would love to be a part of it. I'd like to be pariede up with Shinzo more than Inuyasha, but with one works, Haru is okay too, but no tmuso, the banging his head on the limo was kinda wierd and plus he is in Kikyo's band, even though i have nothing against him, i don't really want to be paired up with someone that works with Kikyo the bitch tried to kill kagaome. Well please let me know if i can be paired up with SHinzo i really like the way he acts and he sounds really nice, he's a kool character and i really would like it if i could be with him. THough if someone was quicker and has already taken it then no hard feeelings.
Thank you for at least considering
Mizu
Mizu- Wed 26 Jul 2006
lol. "The Pickles are Coming!! The Pickles are Coming!!" Lmao that was hilarious. : D Keep up the hilarious and great work.
Mizu
Mizu- Wed 26 Jul 2006
that chapter was...lol... completely....lol...and totally...lol... truth or dare hilarious. I can't believe Ayamea had to ask Kouga out, and that Kagome had to kiss inuyasha. that was good. keep on doing a wonderful job Entity of Sorrows.
Mizu
Mizu- Wed 26 Jul 2006
ohh a 'fun' and 'harmless' game ot 'truth or dare' rock on. and the boys had left the room like 'cowards' as you put it. that was good i can't wait to see what you make all of the girls do and tell. Keep up the excellent work.
Mizu
Mizu- Wed 26 Jul 2006
| wow the boys are dragons, rock on. that is soooo kool. i hope that kikyo gets what is comeing to her for torturing Kagome. I am guessing you are a Kikyo-hater by the way you are depicting her.
Mizu- Wed 26 Jul 2006
| i wonder, are yo ua kikyo hater, or did you just need some one to hate? Oh well i am both kinda surprised she already tried to killl Kagome, and somewhat not surprised, she does seeem to be quite the evil bitch in this by her first appearance. oh well keep up the good work.
Mizu- Wed 26 Jul 2006
| awwwww. those two are soooo kawaii. i hope that sesshomaru doesn't ground them too bad. he is so nice around them. i loved this chapter keep up the good work.
Mizu- Wed 26 Jul 2006
hey rock on this chapter was good. lol sesshoumaru gets to be a daddy in front of everyone i hope he doesn't send them all home. I wonder if he is both rin and shippo's dad or just rin's oh well i can't wait for the next installment. your story just gets better and better.
Mizu
Mizu- Wed 26 Jul 2006
| those O.C.'s for the DC band sound kool. Mare Riku Haru and Shinzo are all really kool names. I think it is kool how you added a past relationship with eve and the others keep up the good work. i can't wait to read the next chapter.
Mizu- Wed 26 Jul 2006
lol funny chapter poor ayamae thinking sesshoumaru was a girl. that was good. i love the O.C.'s eve rocks. lol keep up the good work.
Mizu- Wed 26 Jul 2006
| hey there i really like the beginning to this story. I just got home from work so i decided to read some fanifics before inuyasha started again @ 4:00. THis is coming along great. I wonder who the other bands are.
Hey, I would be super happy to be paired with either one! I don't really care which! Nor do I know how it would work, I'm having a moment! Oh well here's the description.
Name:Kara
Demon Type: Fire demon
Hair: Dark Brown, goes to shoulder's
Eyes: Blue
Personality:Calm, but has a fire and won't take crap.She's also rather charming and smart.
Anyway I'd be willing to make changes if you would like to have me be paired! Thanks!
| aww how sad okay i'll wait *jumps the cookie and eats it all in one bite* COOKIE!! *jumps the cookie man next thinking he's a cookie and eats him* COOKIE!! ^^
SunsetAngel- Tue 25 Jul 2006
| Gaaaahhh!!!!! I love it!!! More, onegai? :3
| i loved the songs...great chappy...lol thanks for clearing of that definition 4 me...update soon
| OMG LOVE IT> MUST UPDATE MORE DAMIT MORE
Fluffy's girl- Mon 24 Jul 2006
| yet another cool chapter, and i think the song that Eve and Riku sang together was sweet. anyway pleeaaase update soon again!!
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