great story but please do the sequel for this story sooon!!!

Oh wow! I just can't stop reading and laughing at your engenius story telling. And I can't wait to read the next sequel for this story. But first I have to catchup on 'The Dairy' lol Thank you for writing this story and all the other ones I haven't read yet and had the pleasure to enjoy.

YaY! ask and you shall recieve. however, i do think that Koga-kun would have acted differently, but it is your story so you can make my man act as you see fit^^

It says that you are on hiatus -- I've just read Passion, and the first two parts of the four parter you have planned, Dragon's Prey and Divine Concubine. Now I *really* want to see how things continue in both stories... and you have 12 pages of reviews from people asking you for the same thing.

I wrote you at length to the email address you had posted on Passion; everything I said there goes for continuing to the next part after Divine Concubine - you have wondrous skill at bringing the reader into the story. You dialogue flows, and is very much in character and very believable.

The emotions portrayed in the stories ring true - there aren't any false notes, or things that make the reader stop and think "No, that doesn't sound right" -- having the ability to write with that kind of flow is a rarity.

How can we bribe you to continue writing? There are lots of people writing, but not many who write as well as you do -- and as for the erotic parts, you do those very well also, and that is extremely rare -- too often it's very formulaic; you write them extremely well, they are erotic, well-written, believable, in character, and all-over excellent. You avoid many of the pitalls that people writing sex scenes often fall into, I wrote more about that in my email to you.

Overall I'd rate this 10 for style, 10 for originality, 10 for everything.... 9.5 for spelling and a few usage errors, overall rating 10 (something I rarely do.. it's very hard to find a writer who is in the 9-10 range.

Start writing again, please.

By the by, should you want the services of an experienced editor/beta, I think I would enjoy working with you. I assume others have offered, however, if you are interested, feel free to contact me or respond to my email.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Wow, that was a surprising ending in a way and boy, am I glad that there will be a sequel. I really like how the story has developed so far. Thumbs up!

Wow, that was a surprising ending in a way and boy, am I glad that there will be a sequel. I really like how the story has developed so far. Thumbs up!

That was a terrific ending and i seriously can't believe how well inuyasha and koga had reacted to the news...and you really portrayed koga well too! I hope that you make the third part of the series soon, cause this is deffinatly great! :-D Also, i think that your reasoning behind his interest of her was very interesting and believeable, ya know? cause he Would want to know why his father would go to a human, and not even have the full please they'd get when mating/rutting a demoness...
So very nicely done! *auplaudes authoress* I know this review is that, but i've been busy giving birth to my little girl, so i haven't had time to go through all of my favorite stories and see if they've been finished or added to!
TTFN!
joanne
oh, and make the next addition soon please!!!

I love how you can really tell how the relationship is progressing between Kagome and Sesshoumaru!!! I can't wait untill the next story! I hope you get a chance to put it up soon! Until then...I'm goin to go check out "The Diary"!!

Wow!! Two great stories can't wait for the sequel!

I absolutly love your style of writing. The stories draw you in to the point where you feel like you are one of the characters. I never tire of re-reading them over and over again. Thank you!

That was the most refreshing Koga reaction I've ever seen. Rather nice and less stressful than trying to explain things to him a million times. Thanks for the story!

Sorry I took so long to review. Summer makes me lazy. A nice look into Sess POV. It was very in character of him I think, something that many SessKag fics seem to discard all too quickly. I also like the fact that there was no prolonged battle to eliminate the worm *cough* I mean opposition. What an interesting dimension you've woven.

Lovely. Really enjoyable. Nice ending. i cant wait for the next sequel to be out. Do tell k. :)

Oh jubilation!! I'm crying from all of these stories that I've been reading, but yours is, at least, out of happiness! Sesshoumaru has much to learn. I always forgt that he's still quite young considering how old others make him out to be. And I'm very grateful that this is becoming a mini- series. Well, at least a four parter. I don't mind their relationship going slow. I love the detail and clearly anyone can see the foundation of their relationship and how it's growing. I truly love it! I'll be waiting here for your next installment!!! X3

P.s. I don't remember, but did you e-mail the reviewers when you posted your next chapters? I'm not sure if that was you...or another author. Would you ever consider if it wasn't you? XD

well... since i'm SUCH a sweet girl and FAR above begging... i shall take a page 4rm sesshomaru's book and COMMAND you 2 hurry the HELL up and write the next part of the DAMN story already!!!!!

Can't wait for the sequel!

I enjoyed this story very much. You did an amazing job and all thanks to your hard work and talent. I look forward for more :)

You are an absolutely wonderful, amazing, beautiful goddess!! Thank you so very, very much for this incredible story!! I love how you had Sesshoumaru explain his actions to Kagome!! I was always scared that he had had sex the first time with Kagome only to make Inuyasha mad!! I'm so glad I was wrong!! I know this is going to sound stupid, but I think my favorite part of the story was when Kagome was back with her friends after Sesshoumaru had left her and she saw a glimpse of him in the trees!! I thought that was so sweet (don't tell Sesshoumaru I said that)!! I wonder if he felt any kind of jealousy when Miroku carried her? Thank you again for this fabulous story!!

A great ending to a great step in the journey. I'm really looking forward to the next story. And i'm very excited to know that you're working on 'The Diary'! I'm really looking forward to the next update you post, no matter what it is!

I can't wait for the sequal! The story was awesome and just keeps getting better as it goes. Update ASAP!

this is a very good book 2 of the series!
i really like the development of their relationship and with sess getting confused and curious about the difference between love and lust...thank you so much for this nice installment. i am looking forward for your next fic and the update for diary..keep on writing!

I very much enjoyed the last two chapters. i like how we have a little insight as to why Sesshoumaru is acting the way he is. I am looking forward to the sequel.

oh im so happy you finnished this and i cant wait for the next ! great job again

That was a great story...i'm so glad u finished it!!...i was afraid u were going to just leave it unfinished......i cant wait 4 the 3rd & 4th one 2 come out

What a bittersweet feeling. On one hand I'm overjoyed that the story has finally ended. On the other I'm misrable that the story has finally ended. The way you write is beautiful and incredible to read it's almost like peotry as you keep a pace and don't overload every single sentence with words, just enough to get you're point across. I love the reason you gave for Sesshomaru sleeping with Kagome. I also thought it alittle ironic as they say 'curiosity killed the cat'. It just seems like something Sesshomaru would do, him forever being the intellectual. Anyways I'll cease my mindless blabber and just say thank you for an amazing read and I look forward to both Demon Menace and Death’s Priestess. Just try to get them out soon I mean I don't know how long I can last!

I await patiently (Which isn't very patient at all, but I can pretend) for the next in this series. Hurry, hurry.

woww!it's been so long since i've last read your updates!!!!!heh. can't say i'm any less happy to see them updated!definitely can't!

i didn't know this was only part2 out of 4 BUT, i MUCH PREFER it this way!!!i LOVEEEEEEE long fics!but of course, long fics written by excellent writers and you are definitely one!

yay!so looking forward to part 3 AND the new chapter for The Diary!i hope both comes soon!i LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVEEEEEE The Diary!!!

God I loved this story. You feed us just enough Sesshomaru goodness to keep us coming back, begging for more. I really enjoyed Sesshomaru's playful teasing just before he left her on her own. Not only did he tell her about losing control, but he admitted that he enjoyed the sex and that was awesome! I was like... 'hell yeah!'. I'm greatly looking forward to the next tale and discovering what other interludes you have planned for Kagome and her sexy inuyoukai. Thanks for the read. You've done a wonderful job!

Woa....I Guess I Missed the Part Where U Said It Was Part 2 of a 4 Part Story!!!! U Don't Know How Happy That Makes Me!! These 2 Stories Have Been My Favorites Ever Since U Started Writing the 1st 1. I Hope U Start Part 3 Soon. I Can't Wait! Please Start It As Soon As U Can.

Your Biggest Fan,

Kagome-Chan ♥

OMG i soo 3 ur stories.. i can't wait for the next part to come out XD

Good job w/ Divine Concubine.. it was REAALLY good XD

gl on all future endeavors.. u can be sure i'll read em XD

Just...beautiful!

Wow, that was a great ending, but I'm really glad there is more coming!!

Your writing is really amazing, you capture the characters very well adn the storylines are always entertaining. Can't wait for more!

PS Could you use the update list to send us an e-mail when you start posting the next one?

Oh, thank heavens you mentioned the sequel at the end. I was SEMI-okay with it ending the way it did, but the promise of the sequel(s) just made things that much easier to handle. Of course, it would take Sesshy a while longer to figure out just what the heck he was feeling... even to get past the shock that he WAS FEELING... so I guess it's to be expected. The admission that the second time around was just because he enjoyed it was classic - almost as though it surprised him as well! Great thinking there!!!

I loved both this and Dragon's Prey... and I'm very much looking forward to Demon Menace. Thank you so much for giving us all these wonderful stories (and lemons to match!!). It makes the hentai in me giggly!!!
:D
~~Wiccan~~

I LOVED IT!!!! than you so much for wighting the first part and this sequel to it i very much loved this story thank you again

Yay! I'm so happy to see this story finished...well...sort of finished since there are two more parts. I was so happy to see it updated, and I LOVE the end..even though it's a bit, well, disappointing. But I know there will be more to come and I am happily looking forward to the next part! :) Thanks so much for keeping up the hard work and continuing to write!

Yea~!!!!!!! It was great and I can't wait. Well, I will have to wait, but I can't ya know? Well anyway it was so great and it ended well for the second of four. I can't wait for the ext one!!!! Lol!

omg!!! that was so funny!!! miroku and sango catching on first...

i thought this was supposed to be 3 parts... where did this whole part 4 come from? Are your muses being creative? or just long winded? ;)

YES AMAZING lol I have been waiting for almost a year for that...geee if I didn't love your stuff I would have kidnapped you myself and stuck you in a room with a host sexy steaming person....lol Could you find a way to send me updates when you begin to post them???? My email is disgracedworld@yahoo.com



Thank you for an amazing story it was so sweet lol and cute like an episode of porny inuyasha lol

I had forgotten just how much I absolutely adored your writing. 3 Seriously you are my idol. As cheesy as that sounds. xD I mean the way you write- the flow, the words, the imagery. It's as if I can see absolutely everything in my mind. Played out before me like the sweetest movie. I've been really busy lately, but I finally (FINALLY xD) decided to check out A Single Spark again to see if you had updated and not only did you have two spectacular poems, but Divine Concubine was updated with one of (if not the most. xP) delicious, steamy, amazing chapters you've ever written. I swear I read 3/4 of the entire thing with a slackjawed expression, drooling. xD The way you described Sesshoumaru in his feral state was breathtaking. Honestly just WOW. I could just see him standing above her, his eyes nearly black, markings glowing.. Okay I need to just shush or I'll go on forever. xD Long story short, the imagery in this chapter made me want to cry and pant at the same time. And I really hope that doesn't sound as creepy as I just realized it possibly could. xD Don't be scared of me! I am just a humble fan. 3 Your number one fan. ;D No really. I love your writing. But I already said that. And I'm about to repeat exactly what I just said earlier about how amazing you are so I'll get back to the actual chapter's review. xP I loved the interruption with the ghost and the reminder to Kagome that Sesshoumaru was indeed as deadly as he was beautiful. I love how you can have him be so caring and sweet, but never lose that dangerous edge that we have all come to expect (and love) from him. It's like I know I've told you this before, but you capture the personalities of these characters so freaking perfectly I wonder if you're not like.. The god of sess/kag fanfiction. xD Or a robot. =o Okay I know I'm weird. Anyways back on track ONCE AGAIN! Another thing I adored about this chapter was the -ahem- little intercourse action between Sesshoumaru and Kagome. xD I'm going to try and tell you how much I loved it without sounding like a weird, creepy, fan-girl, but I'll probably fail so bare with me. xP It was so well done, tastefully I mean, but you still captured the passion and raw lust between Sesshoumaru and Kagome. And you even managed to fit in Kagome finally accepting that Inuyasha and her will never be together yet you didn't automatically make Kagome assume that Sesshoumaru and her would definitely be together now. Which is perfect because I hate it when people do that. It isn't realistic at all. I don't care if it takes ten chapters or two, as long as the second Kagome stops thinking of Inuyasha and her being together she doesn't try and mate-rape Sesshoumaru. xD Meaning she isn't like, "OMFG WE R GONNA B TOGETHER NOW WRIGHT?" Because obviously she realizes that at the moment their relationship is (almost) purely physical and she still has some stuff to deal with. Which you made a good foreshadowing of with the whole Sesshoumaru going GRR on, well not her, but you know the ghostie. xD God how do these things end up being so long? I swear I'm so horribly guilty of gushing. xP But I can't help it! I love your writing and gah! Just amazing. 3 That's it- I swear I'm done. I'm just going to say one more time that this chapter knocked my freakin' socks off, all I could have hoped for and more, and was well worth the wait. Just please don't made me.. Erm us (sorry I'm selfish xD) wait forevers for the next one. 3 But you know, take you time, I know you have a life. xD Ja ne my favorite, talented, author. 3333

Okay, you absolutely have to finish this. I'm waiting on baited breath for your muse to come back. It's just too good a series not to finish it.

Great chapter! I hope that Sesshoumaru will save Kags from that stupid 'god'!

I have been reading your stories and they are wonderful. I would like to be added to your updates list if you could. Keep up the good work.

I'm really glad that you can work on this fic. You seem to give Sesshomaru suck passion, without really losing him. I enjoy your style of writing. I eagerlly awaiit the next chapter & more of this story. :-)

utterly amazing!! I loved this!! the way it all panned out and how one could still since that Shujin wasn't really who he playe dout to be! I was getting kinda worried about 3/4 of the way throught the chapters, but as soon as Sessh came in, i thought "WOW! perfect timing!" lol but really i hope you update soon, anf although I'm not to certain about this since i don't rigthly remember...

if you have an email list could you perhaps add me? I would much appreciate reading this story as it goes on. i don't think my email address shows but my email is inusgirl17@yahoo.com

Hey, me again! You probably only remember me from my reviews for "Dragon's Prey" and "Divine Concubine" on fanfiction.net. I finally got over my lazy bug and checked your profile and saw that you updated here, so I decided to--finally--check out the new chapter. I love it!!!! Very sexy and naughty, Kagome!!!! lol Anyway, I can't wait til your next chapter and your next update for both this and "The Diary" on fanfiction.net. Later!

Your story is so good, no matter how many times I read it. I have read this about five times and I still love it. So please keep updating as much as possible. You really are good at keeping people in suspense, and I can't wait to see what you have happen next.

You are absolutely incredible!! No one can write a better love scene than you!! You captured both Kagome and Sesshoumaru perfectly!! Thank you for allowing Kagome to be able to explore Sesshoumaru this time!! I can't wait for chapter 10!! Good luck on your exams!!!!

That was such a romantic chapter. I LOVE this story! I think you're a REALLY great writer! Please keep up the great work! i Just love Sesshoumaru and Kagome, and this story is one of the best ones I've ever read. Thank you!

I just read the prequel to this, and loved it. I just started reading this, and LOVE it! Update ASAP!

we will wait as long as it takes and don't ever think we wont!. this is a wonderful story and well worth said wait! this particular chapter I've been hoping would come for a while now, and just when i get back from vacation, there it is!::is thankful you can't see her dancing::

- Sidhe

I have loved this story since the beginning, and I definently can't wait to see if Sesshoumaru takes Kagome as his mate. I am so happy that you decided to finish the story. I can't wait to see the next chapter!

I was so happty when I saw my name up there. i think that was the best lemon I've ever read -grins-.

I love your writing it makes me so happy. Good luck with you muse. [My friend's tell me that].

Can't wait for an update! I chekced this story everyday for an update and I almost clicked out until I realized it was chapter 9 not 8. I did a very happy dance and yelped quite happily! =]]

Like I said, no disappointments. Drangon's Prey was wonder, This is is just as enjoyable. I loved the love making scene. Sensational! I can't wait to see where this relationship will go! Peace!

Finally !!! Thank you !! Thank you !! Thank you !! Thank you !!

So when r ur exams?? Best of luck regardless :)

I was so happy to see that you updated this fic. It is one of my all time favorites and I have to say this chapter was sooooooo worth the wait. I really love the way you've written the characters and the story line has me hooked. Thank you so much for continuing it! I can't wait for chapter 10.

I had just about given up hope of you ever continuing this one. This is one sweet and hot chapter. Can't wait for the next one...if the muse does not want to cooperate, beat the hell out of it. LOL!

Sincerely,
Vyncent

AH! it's an update!! yay!! I love your stories! ...well the one's about innuyasha..*refuses to admit she has only read the inuyasha ones...* lol. well I love the one's I've read! haha. but loved the new addition to divine concubine. It well made up for the wait! please update soon! I cannot wait to see what he asked her! and hmm maybe that inposter god-guy...can't recall his name at the moment.. heh heh... well yes anyways! I hope maybe he gets neutered! he's a shovenistic (sp?) pig! *checks for next feminist rally in date book* lol well.. ah yes enough of my rambling! love your work! keep it up!

It's been forever! Oh, how I've missed your writing! T^T But I'm glad you decided to come back with this chapter. Definitely made my day....I didn't mean that in so much as a pervy sense. It was just refreshing to read this. Wow...I'm gonna stop now. But I'm glad you're back and I can't wait to read more from you! How can you desribe this scenes so perfectly. They seem sooo real. You have such a wonderful imagination. I wish I could just come up with this kind of thing. Great job!

I am so glad to see another chapter up for this story! Yay! That was such a cliff hanger, before. This chapter was fan-tabulous! Thanks so much for writing it, it made my night!

wow i really believed that u werent going to keep on writing this fanfic but im so happy that u did. thanks
your fan; nelly

Fantastic! So worth the wait, even if I didn't enjoy the long break :P

I really hope you keep up with the story now, but I know how real life can be! Just know that there are a bunch of us waiting anxiously for more!

Also, thanks for the special mention, that was so sweet!!

WOW! That was totally worth the wait. I even kept forgetting to breathe while reading this chapter. lol So amazingly hot!

Damn... But you sure know how to leave a girl yearning for more. Hope to see you inspired enough to update soon! ^_^ Keep up the good work!

Love the story! Have been waiting for this chapter for awhile. Need to write more reviews to feed the muse! Again love the story and how it flows.

Well This Chapter Was Pretty Steamy!!!! Please Update Soon!! *Thinks 2 Self* I Hope Sesshomaru and Kagome Live Happily Ever After....

With Love,

Kagome-Chan

^-^ You've made my day! I looooove the newest chapter and I can't wait for more. It's always a treat to read something you've put out. Keep up the good work! I

Yes, it's been awhile, but OMG what a comeback!!!! That lemon was sooooo amazing. On Fire! If time away can inspire such sensual talent, then take all the time you need! You've out-done yourself with that chapter. I do believe that I love you. Til next time~

Whew,, thanks for the hot update. I was hoping your story would continue and I like the way you've introduced Sesshomaru.

When I saw this on the updated list I stared at it for about a minute stunned then promptly started screaming happily. THANK YOU!

Welcome back!!! I was secretely waiting for the continuation of this story. I read the first part and I loved it, and then this one. But it was on hold for too long. I hope your muse visits you more often. I wonder what will hapen when Shuji finds out that his plan didn't work. Will Sesshomaru realise how attached he already is to Kagome soon or will you make us wait until the third part? Keep tup with he good work!!

Thank you, thank you, thank you !!!! ^^
I am so happy you updated !!!!!!!!!!
And you don't have to worry, it is such a great and marvelous chapter that it was worth waiting! ^^
Your story is an addiction, I am already dying for the next chapter ^^ I can't get enough!

And good luck with your essay! ^^

thank god you're back! i check for your updates religiously. you are one of the best writers of sess/kagome or any fanfiction i've read and you have been sorely missed.
i love reading your stories - the blend of canon and alternate is seamless and make it very believable for me. i have never read the manga but have only seen the anime but inu captured my attention as only a few anime have done.
i do believe that sess/kags make a more natural pairing than inu/kags and for the reasons that u have stated - inu will always have kikyo as first in his heart and that kags will always be the reincarnation, not that he doesn't care for her but it's not the same as sess.
sess sees kags and cares for her despite her being human and i think that if he hadn't met her first he would never have taken to rin.
well anyway, just to say thank u and that i really look forward to reading this as well as the diary (you will continue that one won't u? pretty please with cherries on top??????)
poppet

omg i am so happy i have been waiting for the next chapter for forever and it was soo worth the wait i couldn't believe it when i saw the update i'm absolutly thrilled with it and will be waiting in anticipation for the next chapter

Though it took a while, I'm happy that you've updated this story; it was too good to leave it unfinished. And good luck with your exams; I'm taking mine this coming week and have hardly any time to read fanfiction....

Yes! You're back! And a few things have been explained. I'm glad she got to see who he is and accept it. I am especially impressed that you made a point of showing that he is not at all human. The sounds he makes are especially good for realism. Hope they tear the 'god' apart! heh. Oh, and three cheers for her decision to drop 'Yasha. She'll inevitably feel guilty (that's just her) for hurting him, but I hope she does it with no other regrets and chin raised!

OMFG!!! you FINALLY UPDATED!!!! *woot...... it's been soooooooo sooooooooo long... *tears..

god your muse needs to go on steroids or sumthing so that this story will continue!!

Ah, I am so happy I could cry. I am so glad you've posted another chapter and it was well worth the wait, but please don't make us wait that long again.lol

woohoo!!! you updated it!!! i am so happy!! i missed you and your muse!!! update as soon as you can please, please, please...

good luck with your essay

Yay! your not dead!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I really wanted an update as you can tell....:3

~zen

I really love this fic and its prequel. I like the action youve thrown into it and how its not JUST about Sesshoumaru and Kagome. That and the twists you keep throwing out. I noticed this story is on hold, but I really hope youll update it soon! Its very awesome! Id be incredibly happy to see it continued! XD I want to see it continued so much Id bribe you for update-ing-ness too! Id draw fanart for it ^_^"" lol But yeah, that shows you how much I love this. I hope to see an update soon! Thanks for writing such a fun fic!

I'm joining the hordes of people anxiously waiting for a continuation of this marvelous story!
You stopped at an incredibly wonderful spot, I really need to read more!
Please add me to your update list so I can know when your muse finally returns.
pixe_cat14@yahoo.com

impatiently awaiting more! I loved this when you first began the preceeding soty, and love it even more now that you have continued it! I hope you return to finish it sometime.

- Sidhe

Oh, I love it! He sends her to Sesshoumaru for punishment not knowing that is what she desires. Fantastic! What is Sesshoumaru doing in the house of the world's largest pimp?

PLease can you update this story soon....It is such a bad place to leave it at.

I cannot, CANNOT wait for the next chapter! I really, REALLY hope it's almost ready. I absolutely love it and am dying to find out what will happen next. You write the absolute best stories!

UPDATE SOON! Dang, you can't seriously leave a sista' hanging like that!

Wow! Hey Please update soon this is probably the best fic I have read in a long time. @_@ I was so scared for kagome! I kept thinking "Well crap . . . I bet its gonna be some other hot demon guy and more tension and then a cliffy . . " But then, :O It was a savior in silk white clothes hum? Yay Kagome :D
I'll wait patiently for the next chapter.

Ganbatte kudasai!
RAO

AWESOME !!! AMAZING !!! I really luv ur wrk. Please !! Please !! Please !! continoue. We ur humble fans thirst/hunger/impatiently await for the next chapter *lol* No really so mean to leave us at such a cliffy :( Please continoue. I cant wait.

PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!! I COULDN'T BEAR NOT TO KNOW MORE!!!!!!!!! MY LIFE DEPENDS ON IT!!!!!!!!! ......well......not really......but I'll be soooooooo sad if you don't continue!!!!!!! So PLEAAAAAAASE???????????? PRETTYYYYYY PLEAAAAAASE??

OH DRATE! And it was just getting really interesting too! What with her throwing things at that 'god' and she scratched and clawed! For a minute there i thought perhaps he was a demon in the disquise of a god...but then i remembered she was clawing at his face...
And when he led her to that room...and said his 'demonic visiter' was inside, i had a cold feeling of dread that my most hated character was in that room...
BUT! You suprised me yet again! It wasn't Naraku! (THANK GOD!!!) and was instead SESSHY!!!!!
And the way he asked "All of my wishes?" I just about swooned at the picture!
I hope your muse gets back on track again! and that you'll e-mail me once you've added chapter nine! if you need any advice or encouragement just e-mail me and I'll send you bucket fulls!
oh, and incase you dont get e-mails at this site...my e-mail is msjomag@yahoo.com
:D!
TTYL;
joanne

OH DRATE! And it was just getting really interesting too! What with her throwing things at that 'god' and she scratched and clawed! For a minute there i thought perhaps he was a demon in the disquise of a god...but then i remembered she was clawing at his face...
And when he led her to that room...and said his 'demonic visiter' was inside, i had a cold feeling of dread that my most hated character was in that room...
BUT! You suprised me yet again! It wasn't Naraku! (THANK GOD!!!) and was instead SESSHY!!!!!
And the way he asked "All of my wishes?" I just about swooned at the picture!
I hope your muse gets back on track again! and that you'll e-mail me once you've added chapter nine! if you need any advice or encouragement just e-mail me and I'll send you bucket fulls!
oh, and incase you dont get e-mails at this site...my e-mail is msjomag@yahoo.com
:D!
TTYL;
joanne

Umm...when do you think you could update? Because I'm not a very great fan of cliffies....anyway.GREAT CHAP! HATE THE CLIFFY THOUGH...

AH! I Cried!!!! I Cried when Kagome was thrown into the room, your storys always make me cry! lol i have read a few of yours now and i cant thank you enugh, when i am having trouble w/ my life, i just turn to one of your storys and i am taken away by your words and ideas! You need 2 publish a book someday i think, for you are WAY 2 good 2 stay on some website!!!! ^^

With Love,

Kagome-Chan

Dear CiraArana,
I've read everything on your page now & let me just say that I've never been so persuaded about Sess/Kag as I am with your writing. I must also say that I like the way that you try to reach inside of him and discern motivations, thoughts, fellings, and -gasp- a heart (not to mention an amazing body). Oh, I've read him moved by lust before, and by the need for power, possession, etc. (I suppose those are a dime a dozen), but not convincingly by warmth or love. I know that hasn't developed yet in this story, but I'm thinking of Passion & Diary.
Anyway, just wanted to write my praises of your work. Please consider posting chapter 9 of Divine Concubine soon - rabidly awaiting fan. Shameless, but there you have it!
All the best,
CainteFan

NOOO!!!! You can't stop there, please!! I've been waiting forever for Sess to come into the story and now he's finally here and there's no more for me to read! >tears

Please try to persuade your muse to continue with this, please!!

Awesome story! ^^ I love it!
But that's such a cliffy! I know I shouldn't have started reading an 'on hold' story, it's just too bad for my health, but I read "Dragon's Prey" and I found it so good that I just couldn't stop myself and now... I'm dying to know the end!
Well, hopefully you will update soon! ^^

this story is really awesome!!! i tell you, i wasn't really expecting sesshoumaru at the end of this. is he in league with shujin? or is he the guest because he can kick shujin's ass and shujin doesn't want any trouble? can i be added to your mailing list please? by the way, i noticed you used cusswords such as 'bloody' and 'git', for some reason i find it odd to hear british cusswords come from kags-chan and the others...oh welll, still wicked story!!!keep it up!!!

Please update!!!!

i love the story so far but im wondering why its on hold can you please tell me why and roughly how long i have to wait for a update please tell me

I am terribly sad to see it has been a very long time since you have worked on this fic. I want to know what happens next! And the other two parts of the story! *dies* PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE with whipped cream and a cherry on top!

fear not! muses are fickle creatures indeed! I'm sure we'll all love what you write, no matter how it turns out! eagerly awaiting your future updates :)

Hey could ya at least give us a lemon in chapter nine since we"ve been waiting so long? It would so help if you do. It would be great. I love all of your things you write, please continueing writing.

friiiiiickedy frick frick I don't know why I just did that to myself.......ohhhhh I'm so terribly unsatisfied. You know I saw that the story was on hold, but I just couldn't help myself I finished reading dragon's prey, annnd I couldn't stop.

Still there? Miss you! Threaten your muse with a Barney marathon! I hope to see what happens next. I hope they fake out the god (hah!) before Sess takes his head off!

hi,
I love this story it has a good start but you stoped right at a good prat so please up deat soon PLEASE! OK thanxs for reading this.
Tallon Lennox

please update..i am still hanging on the edge of a cliffie here! please please please

I miss it! Can you please update? Hopefully sooner rather than later.
Ja

I just made yummy chocolate cookies, maybe she'll come back with those^^

PLEASE UPDATE!! Pretty please with a cherry on top? It is now 2:00 in the morning and I have to go to school at 8:00. That is how much I LOVED this story! So you have to update. I thought maybe this review would give your muse a little kick in the pants. Or whatever muses wear.

I can very well give you ideas, e-mail me and we will talk because i got a bunch of greawt ideas for a lemon and an exxape plan.

Dawna Sama

please keep this story going ::gets down on knees and begs with puppy eyes::

Great story!!! I hope that's Sesshy and I hope he saves her!!! What a great story, please update soon! I ca't wiat to see what's next! Yeah!!

Hey, Hey! What'ya doing more please, I mean it's getting good. and leaving us on a cliff is good but please could you update soon. Please when you can?

oh my god oh my god oh my god!so interesting!how creative!!!!!!!!!!!!!i never thought you would introduce sesshomaru this way!!!!!!!! oh my god!you rock girlfriend!you so have to udpate soon!i can't wait for the next chapter already!

and is sesshomaru a prisoner of shujin? how is he related to shujin?

ooo!so exciting!please please please update soon!

This fanfic is very good. I loved Dragon's Prey so I just had to read this one as well. Hopefully this story will be updated soon...as the last chapter left it at a huge cliff hanger. I can't wait to find out what happens to Kagome :]
Keep up the great work!!

mwhahahahaha, that's more than I could have asked for^^ I was wondering when fluffy would pop by. Bout time!!! But yeah, that was pretty funny. can't wait till you update!! I was like, omg yay next chapter - NOOOO!!! No next chapter button!!!

I saw you didn't have any reviews for awhile so to motivate you. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE A THOUSAND PLEAS update! I am completly in love with this story and the cliff hanger you evil person. I need more of this story it's it's I don't know fantastic wonderful beyond anything I've ever read just UPDATE. Please........please with a super big cherry on top? Or avacado? Err nevermind maybe not avacado. BUT please update. I'm dying. Dying do you hear me?! Okay so maybe not dying okay htis is long enough. Sorry if I wasted a few of seconds of your life =].

omg i love this outcome you need to update soon please I can't wait please update please please please thank and remember UPDATE SOON

You need to Update... I'm begging....that's just like the biggest cliffie. I'm really hoping what is coming next is what i think it could be. I thoroughly enjoyed Dragon's Prey, I think you did an excellent job on the story itself and the lemons were particularly well written compared to most I've read. And if your Muse has run off....we need to find them! And impress upon them the importance of not running off in the middle of a story!!! LOL Anyway, you're doing a wonderful job, I look forward to future chapters.

~Jess

Love the story. When is the next chapter coming?? Inquiring minds want to know. Keep it up. Will there be a lemon? ;p

OMG!!!!!!! i luv this story!!!!!!!!!! please add me to ur update list!!!!!!!!!!!! i've been waiting for like forever!!!!

OMG!!!!!!! i luv this story!!!!!!!!!! please add me to ur update list!!!!!!!!!!!! i've been waiting for like forever!!!!

I can't wait until the next chapter! I just found your lovely work, and I hope that your muse comes back to you soon!

I'm so happy I found this sequel! Today I had some free time and decided to check for any updates. So glad that the Divine Concubine has progressed this far.
Thank you a lot for the story! In the beginning I was afraid that something can go wrong, but now I'm perfectly calm about this 4-part idea.
I had a good laugh today. The 8th chapter ended great! "All my wishes" Read the ending a few times even. But what WAS Sesshoumaru doing there? I'm dying of curiosity here )))
So pretty-pretty please- update soon!
Thank you again for you hard work.

you really need to updat this one ood fan fic

wow! great story. definetly a cliffy. can't wait for the next chapter. i hope that your muse will come back so that the rest of us can enjoy your writings. good luck and happy writing! waiting as patiently as possible for your next update.

Ok I'm going to be a pest and beg for you to Update! Please? I'm dieing here!

hurry up and update damn it!!! I can't wait to read the next chapter...(giggles like a school girl) it's about damn time you put my favorite youkai in the story.

BAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!! what a bizarre twist of fate hahaha! she damn sure showed that shujin! go kagome!!!!!! o0oo0o i hope he gives her all she wants in return lol.

Please Please Please Please UPDATE!!!!!!!!

What a wonderful story! I thnk, though, that that muse must come back post-haste (donns muse catching net).
I wonder what the demon lord is doing in the temple?
Update immediatedy!!!!!!!! Please~!!!!!!!!

OMGOSH Its very good so far! I hope you update more soon! How did Sesshomaru get inside considering Inu and Koga couldn't?

plz, plz, plz, plz, try to get the next chapter up soon! I know, as a fellow fanfic writer, that it is hard to get these chapters up... but plz!!! your's are so better then mine anyway xD

T_T why...why ... a cliffyT_T its not fare jajajaja i'll be waiting for your next update ... hopefully is soon ... this chappi. was greate n_n

I absolutely ADORE this chapter! Kagome was giving Shujin a fit! That was great. And the best part was Sesshomaru being there! Oh what glorious luck. That was the best thing she could have hoped for! Even better than rescue! I'm sorry to hear that you are having some muse problems. I'm dying for the next chapter, but, I for one, can not complain. I've had the same problem lately, and when the 'flow' isn't there, it just isn't there. It'll come. Don't worry overmuch. This was a superb chapter. Great writing!

GAH!!! you had to leave it off as a cliffy!!! but Great chapter!! and Sesshomaru came to save her!!! yay!!! and yes you do need a new err... muse? did you say it was? yes fire the old one!!! how could she leave you here?? I'll bet every single fanfic reader is dying from anticipation about what's going to happen next....so please try and update as soon as you can....

ja!!

Silk_worm

SQUEE!!!! Hahaha! That was effing hillarious. Ok, the end was, haha. This was a great chapter!

Gah! Your muse is lazy and needs to be fired. -looks up new muse in a directory- -cries- They are all busy. -pouts- Oh well I guess this wait will just make me learn patience like Sesshoumaru -glomps Sesshoumaru- Right Sesshy. -Sesshoumaru runs and calls his lawer reporting sexual assault as I chase him.- Don't be that way Sesshy! -Pauses and laughs nervously as lawyers appear.- Ugh....just kidding. Well buh bye until next beautiful chapter! -Runs away from evil laywers-

oh your gonna have to update soon! That was evil!

Gahhhh.. a delicious twist!!! Excellent chapter, i was biting my nails for crying out loud!....a masterpiece..(sniff)...(snort).. it was beautiful...

HugsXXX
DWX

You are an absolute Goddess!! Thank you, thank you, thank you for having Sesshoumaru be there!! Now Kagome will get to have some fun!!

Ah! What an ending! You really HAVE to update soon now!!! And to not make an intense lemon in the next chapter isn't a option...just in case you didn't know. :D

Great chapter, though!

Krystal

I don't know if I should be happy or scared for Kagome...mostly happy, but somewhat scared...Sesshomaru-sama, you can't hurt Kagome!!!!!

I don't know whether to kiss you or kill you! Update soon!

okay now that was mean... but yea i finally got my sessho for like two paragraphy but it's my sessho!!!

and i would be thanking every god in existance for being forced to follow his every command for as long as he wanted too... alright so so the almighty annoying one said for the night but i think forever works better

I love you, you know that?
And I don't care how long it takes for you to get chapter 9 out, so long as it does come out!!

....BAHAHAHAHHAHAH XDDDDD Ah, what a lovely twist >D

And don't worry about the next chapter--as long as it comes out as soon as you can get it out (and you don't stop this story), I think it should be enough! 3 I loved Dragon's Prey, and I love this story as well! Keep up the good work, and take your time!

3

OMIGOD! You can't do this to meee!! MORE!! Please? You're doing so well.

Fantastic as usual!!! I love it & I hope you get your muse back to work on this story. lol

Well, Kagome's in for a loooooooonnnnnnggggg night *letchous grin*
Well, I wish her good lick.. um luck, and hump... happy (wet) dreams. ...... Do you want to borrow my muse, the hentai won't leave me alone.... *sigh* damn laural k hamilton freak obsessed fan.... thou, now that she mentions it, Frost from the Meredith books reminds me of sessie, a little.... (yummy), *smack muse and hog ties her* go to sleep, ya freak!
......
are you sure you don't want her????

woot when i ment sesshomaru save her... i hope he (will)save her... but hey i dont mine this xD infact its better then saving!

Wow, what a great chapter. Kagome always was a fighter. I am glad that her night and shining armor is the one and only...? I am sure you will let us know. Lol. Thanks for the update, it was well worth the wait. Ja ne!

OH MY GOD (no pun intended) . This was a most awsome and delicious chapter. If I were ever to become a character in a story, I would be Kagome in one of your stories. She always gets the good stuff.

I was just in awe of how she was able to keep Shujin(?) away from her because he sounded absolutely scrumptious. But she did her part and found the strength and got the very best of all.

I could just feel that it was Sesshomaru waiting in the room and I squealed in delight when I was right. But this worries me; Is our Sesshomaru a captive also ( punishment for the BAD girls) or is he a guest that just got lucky?

I love this story and if you want me to I will kick your muses' ass for you.

I know, I know be patient but it is sooooo...hard. Great job . Til next time, Deb pegasus4@bellsouth.net.

oh i just love this story hope to see your next chapter

WHOA ,loved the update! awesome really.OMG THE DEMON IS SESSHOMARU ISNT IT?!! AGH! damn cliffies! LOL. Well hopefully you'll get over ur bad case of witers block,hope to see an update soon. Good Luck chica! ^_^

Oh, don't worry. I Much prefer this cliffie to the last one (gleeful grin). Way to go girl! That's the spirit! And she even drew blood! Whoohoo! As for her 'punishment'.... PUNISH ME TOO!! (victorious laughter). YESS!! Ooopsie. Did widdle godwing scwew up majorwy! Maybe she should send him a thank you card!

Oh yeah! Now that is what I call good luck! *lecherous grin* If it were me, I'd spend all night enjoying the fruits of my righteousness, ne? I can't wait to see Shujin's face the next day when he realizes that Kagome has spent all night following very pleasant pursuits, and VERY willingly, with Sesshomaru. Hmmm... I would LOVE to know what Sessho was doing there to begin with.... I really hope he was there for Kagome...

Anyways, I truly love your story! It has a lot of spunk and undertone goodness. I loved the prequel too! Sessho is just good enough to eat, ne? :) I hope you can get chanper 9 out soon!!! Just take your time and sneakily reel your muse in again!

SQUEEEEEE! *has a joyous fit*
Okay here's the best thing I can offer for hunting down wayward muses. Watch and read lots of Sess/Kag, watch the show, and cookies.
Yes, Chocolate Chip cookies, eat them and watch the show and read, they draw muses, I promise.

Your muse can't leave now...what about all of his wishes? Another Great chapter. Thanks

Hi.
Great chapter! *~*
Sorry to hear about your moody muse ..you know, you could try to bribe her into a good mood with ...candy?
Viel Glück dabei, ne? ^.~

oh gosh i'm a bIg idiot! who else is a white knight in this tale right? but what is he doing in that god's temple..i thought demons coudn't get through the barrier? well, anyways...keep on writing!

that was so exciting! please tell me the demon is sesshomaru!!! update soon please!!!

yes! yes! finally sesshoumaru has arrived! anyway,good luck on the next chapter...don't worry too much about it just do your best! can't wait to know what happens next!

WOW... your native language is NOT English??? That leaves me in awe of your abilities to write in English. Your stories have all been really great, I have especially enjoyed Dragon's Prey and, now, Divine Concubine.... I can't wait for the next chapter(s) and all I can say is WRITE FASTER!!!! hahaha (I mean really, do you need a life outside of writing about the InuYasha Gang???) Anyway, I just thought I would let you know that I think you are one of the talented, the ones that can bring a story to life and allow others to see the scene in their mind's eye.
Thank You,
Rhonda

Excellent story!! Thank you for saving Sango from the dreadfull god!! But what about Kagome? Please, please don't let that creepy guy have his way with her, I love her with Sesshoumaru too much!! Is there a way for him to save her? Please post more soon!!

I'm so excited about this story I loved the first one!

Good. Maybe Miroku will finally get a clue... there's hope anyway. Now Kagome! EEEE!

About time! lol Another great chapter. As always, I eargerly await the next chapter.

Hugs from Okinawa

Hi cira-

great chapter, I'm glad that things and feelings are well understood between Sango and miroku....well to some extent anyway....

Kagome's still in trouble though, hope nothing happens to her. Shijin is such a hentai!!! honestly, what does he need so many women for? oh wait...don't answer that.....

(ahem) You're one of my fav. authors....please update soon!!!!

ja!

Silk_worm

thanks for the update. Great chapter and I am so glad that things are resolved between miroku and sango. i hate that kag was left behind. is this going to come down to sess being the only one able to rescue her? I can't believe that Koga and Inuyasha accepted things so easily. It should have taken miroku days to get his point across inbetween beatings. They were being very diplomatic. keep up the good work.

I'm so glad that Miroku saved Sango and they were able to clear things up between them. You were cruel to leave us hanging on Kagome's status. Yep. A cruel, cruel author - A really good one though. I can't wait to see what you have planned next. Great job!

stupid barrier means sessho can't rescue her... grr!!! update soon need my sessho!!!

WHOOT an update! lol.Ah hmm hmmm now we are getting somewhere,man i hope Kagome is ok! Loved the chapter,Sango and Miroku are such a couple,hehe.update soon cant wait to read more! ^_^

more soon plz!!!!!

hi- great chapter...poor kagome...what a hentai of a god shijin is...I hope sesshomaru saves her an soon.....err...he gives me the creeps.....update soon!!!

Silk_worm

I'll bet it's going to be quite a blow to the God's ego when he discovers that his prized miko has the hot's for a certain demon lord. I can't wait to see what happen's to poor Kagome now. Heaven know's, she has to beat the gorgeous men off with a stick. If only we could be so 'un'-lucky. Great chapter!

I don't think the girls liked what the concubine's had to say. I loved Kag's reaction of thinking about our Sess. I hope that nothing bad happens to them before the big rescue. Sess is going to do the rescueing, right? This is like Sango's worst nightmare. Stuck with another man (god) that thinks he gets to have whoever he wants. Is Kags response because of being from the future and wedding vows or because of jealousy of the whole Kikyo thing?

yay! that was a really GREAT chapter! update soon! I wonder who's gonna save kags from the horny Shujin-sama. lol!

oh more please!!!!!!!!!

Cool i like it

Hi, wow, yay, yuhuuu! Update!
And the perfect little world of the god is not so perfect after all, ne?
The little weasel! Oooh, who will rescue Kags from the horny Shujin-sama??? XDD

Update soon, ..if you can. ^.^°

CM

I love this Fanfic!!! I can't wait for you to update the next chapter.
XD

I love this fanfic!!!! I can't wait for you to update the next chapter.
XD

another great chapter. Wish is was longer. lol can't wait for the next chapter. As always, a great story;.

Keep that stubborn streak up Kag! Don't look in his eyes, picture what Sess looks like, use Inu's sense of tact, and pray that Sess finds you soon! Oh, and aim low. heh

You know I woke up this morning and thought : There HAS to be a new chapter of Divine Concubine up! And so I checked and TADA!
Just please, please don't wait too long to update or my imagination will run rampant and make me even more scared for Kagome! Ja

hurry sessho! save kags from the shijun guy (even though he's also hot!) update again soon!

YAY great update,loved it.AHHH OH NO SOMEONE HELP HER!!!! *waves to Sesshomaru* THAT means you Mr! lol.Ah thats ok for it being late,school is a killer,trust me i know -.- lol.Update soon,cant wait to read more! ^_^

That was sooo funny, haha. I love your stories. They kick ass, definatly!

I sure do hope that Sesshomaru will save her from being a concubine!!!

o.o Sesshomaru! god of perfection! Please help your little miko out o.o before her spitfire dies out and submits to the god lesser then you

cue sessho, please??? please please??? hope your exams are going okay, how'd that report turn out?

hey u finally updated! Great fic update again soon ^_^

-blushblushBLUSH-
Poor, poor Shippo... Poor, poor Inuyasha, for that matter. Jeez, 'Roku needs to chill out on the perversion. >>

Excellent, as always.

I'm still hoping like crazy that Kag will have enough will and sense of pride not to give into him even once. RESIST!! BLAST IT ALL YOU SILLY UNTRAINED TWIT RESIST!!! @_@

YAY an updates,updates are great! lol.Shippo is so darn cute ^_^ Hm so what are the boys gonna go now? And where is our sexy taiyoukai at? Love the update,cant wait to read more! :D

Cute chapter giving Shippo a 'heads' up on the birds and bees! Hurry Miroku! Save Kagome and Sango!

i'm going to start begging for fluffy involvement soon... two updates and no sessho in either this one or the diary... i feel deprived, i want to pout...

okay no pouting update soon please? want sessho appearances...

hahahahaha! This was such a great chapter! Though i will never look/say the word head the same way again...

Please update soon, I really want to know what happens next

Miroku 'instructing' Inuyasha and Shippo about women: priceless!! I laughed so hard!! Keep up the good work!!

Please update quickly. I really want to see the next chapter. This story is awsome.

Yay, update!
'a heady feeling', huh? XDDDDDDD
The word play was comically delicious! I laughed so hard, I woke up my boyfriend - he was sleeping upstairs ...^O^'''
Hope you update soon,

Grüße,
CM

update soon please i must know what happens!!!!!!!!!!!!

I really enjoyed Dragon's Prey. I'm not typically one for a lusty story, but hot-dang! In fact, I have no doubt this will be one of my favourite stories once all the sections are in. (I only read completed stories, because I forget where I'm at and stuff XD)

And you ARE a nice authour, because you're making sequels and not leaving open ends (like evil rumiko). Hopefully not, anyway.

Wow. I must admit that I love all of your stuff. I really enjoy reading it. I'm so glad you've made this sequel. I'm completely captivated by this story now. I can't wait until you update!

you are becoming my fave author, plz update soon! i love this!!!

awesome so far. Please update as soon as possible!

I really hate cliffies, but I will get over it. Sorry I didn't review the last chapter.but I was unsure what to write. I like the choice in names for the villian. Is it Sess's turn to show up? I hate that Miroku is being a pain. Can't wait till the next chapter.
Leslie

GAH!!!!! how could you! that is such an evil clffie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you must update soon!! plase? i have to know what happenes next and who kidnapped kagome and sango!!! ah i just love this story! haha it gets me on the eadge of my seat everytime i read a new chapter!!!!!

I love this story!!!!! I can't wait for you to update it.

very interesting. i wonder what sesshomaru would do now that kagome is in the clutches of this sex god...update soon!

I loved that fanfiction I also loved the other fanfic that u rote pleaz update soon

I loved that fanfiction I also loved the other fanfic that u rote pleaz update soon

awesome so far! when does the oh so mighty and sexy sesshomaru come in though? hopefully soon. sorry I haven't reviewed much....please put me on the mailing list for this story...you can e-mail me at hellspixie18 @ yahoo.com without the spaces.

It was getting so good! Ooooh....can you please add me to your update list you mentioned a chapter ago? I can't wait until you update!

holy! that was a bit intense at the end.. wow.. I wonder how that guy is? i bet he uses all of the girls as concubines... says sweet words to them as he did for Sango... i wonder what kagome will be if the guy didnt have that other girl.. Betta (or somthing like that)

well this is getting more fasinating by the chapter... i am soo excited to read more.

good luck
i hope you update soon

omg you updated!!! and that was such a good chapter!!! but such an evil cliff hanger, you better fix that soon, please? please? please? sessho needs to save kags she's his not this other pansy's...

okay so i don't like this guy already, any guy that pretty and has to steal girls definately has something wrong with him.

update soon

AGH!! Resist, Kagome! Don't meet his eyes! Be stubborn just to be stubborn. EEK!!!....anyway, thanks for the update!

Uh oh! Kagome and Sango are in more trouble than ever before! Because this time, they might not WANT to be saved! I think I'd consider it myself. The guy sounds HOT! lol! Great Chapter!

can i be added to the notice list thingy o.o ty...

HOLY CRAP.Great chappie,soo whats gonna happen next?..and where the heck is Sesshomaru,i think its about time he showed up..kagome + danger=Sesshomaru. LOL.Update soon,suspense is killin me. >. ^_^

I'd tap that. xP xDD lol
Kami, just reading those words that he said gave me shivers.

I love the story!!
Wow, I'm so resourcerful today! -.-'''
Can't wait 'til and how Sesshou comes in the story!
The plot and character development are beautifully done (as allways^^) and really entertaining.

Schöne Grüße,
CM

A fascinating story that has me utterly hooked! Brilliant, well-rounded characters, beautifully written dialogue and a handsome, seductive villian....ahhhh, what's not to like! Well done, and I for one will be anxiously awaiting more of this story!

omg i love this story i can't wait to see what happens next please update soon

Another great chapter. Though, I wish it was finished so I could read it straight through. lol But, I know you have a busy life besides writing this story. *sigh* lol I love it. I eagerly await the next chapter.

Maggie/psycobookcollector

Yay I'm soooo excited!

Hey!!! I was like, what the??? Where is the "next chapter" button???? I was very throuroughly ocnfused. Oh, Kudamono actually means fruit itself, Fue is a flute, and odori means a dance. So, to Japanese persopn those names are kinda weird - and I am Japanese^^;;.

I really loved this story and Dragon's Prey. I hope you update soon.

wow!!!! i am loving it!!!!!!!!!!!!! please update soon i can't wait to see whose kidnapping the girls... is it sesshoumaru? is he planning something to woo kagome with?

So Kagome admits (if only to herself) that she wouldn't mind another encounter with Sesshomaru? hehehe Who wouldn't?! The mystery is building, and now they are heading to the West! Yay! Sesshomaru is in the West. Maybe Kagome will get her opportunity to mingle with our demon Lord? That should make for an interesting visit. Inuyasha will be fit to be tied. Great chapter!

I can't wait for the next chapter! I want to know who this god is and why they are collecting girls! I love the whole mystery! Keep up with your great work!

Nicely done! Really glad you decided to write this. And to help you with your lost list of translations:
fude = (writing) brush
odori = dance
fue = flute, pipe
kudamono = fruit
shijin = poet
igaku = medicine (as in medical science)
Can't wait to see where this is heading. Keep up the good work :)

Meh. Needs more Sesshomaru. :D But yeah, thanks for the helpful chapter!

PS, I seriously want to meet someone who's name means squirrel. That's now my life goal. Tell me when you update!

horses4ever2k@yahoo.com
~Krystal

hmmm why are they all actin so wierd....hmm

Another interesting chapter. I forgot to ask last time-- could you add me to your mailing list, please? :D

Yay, you updated! And I would like to be added on your mailing list. Thank you!

Wow, I like this story as well. I also liked how you started to give some details about the girls that were captured. Their talents sort of reminded me about the nine muses of Greek Mythology but...that could just be a similarity. Anywho, I love the story and hope to read more as soon as you put it up on here. ^_^

whoo hoo you updated i love this story and this is definately and interesting puzzle you've presented your readers with update soon please

Another most excellent story. I have not yet read one of your fic's that I didn't like. Please add me to your mailing list.

Also, to your note that you lost your list of meanings to the names of the girls. LOL! You are so going to smack yourself for this one:

Risu the cook, - Squirrel
Fudé the painter, - Writing Brush
Odóri the dancer, - Dance
Fué the singer, - Flute or Pipe
Kudamono the fruitful who doesn’t fit into the pattern because she was married, - Fruit
Igaku the healer, - Medicine or Medical Science
Shijin the author, Poet
Bara the beauty - Rose

You apparently had chosen each name for the skill or ability of the girl, so you already had the meanings right in your story.

LOL!

You have mastered the art of the tease. That is great in a story but is painful for a reader when you are waiting for the next update! Your great! Please update soon.

WOO! Good chapter! Update Soon!

WOO! Good chapter! Update Soon!

Okay, I just have to say, I absolutely loved that last little line by Inuyasha..."If you keep going on like this you won't have to worry about being sucked in by the kazaana." Absolutely perfect! I can't wait for more...especially when Sesshomaru gets brought back into the picture. Grin. And interestingly enough, my first thought with all teh differently skilled girls being taken is that someone is trying to make themselves the perfect woman...one of those 'combine these beings' plans going on perhaps?

Wow. Inu Yasha is taking time to think. Go figure. Thanks for another update!

Hm,well that answers some questions lol.Great chap,hope to see more updates soon.Cant wait for the next one.^_^

OMG!! That ending was funny!! When is Sessh and the action coming back in?

This was great! Lol! Pleas eupdate soon!

Fantastico! I can't wait for the next update. I love all your fan fictions.

Thanks for the birthday present. ^_^

please update soon, i love this story

I really like the begining. Did you have many death threats wanting you to write this story? When does Sess join the story? Inuyasha is being a big baby. I understand that he has to be difficult to move the story in the right direction, for that you are doing a great job. I would not want Kag with him for anything. Keep up the good work and I can't wait till the next chapter. Please add me to the email list. Thank you

Leslie

sign me up for that mailing list ^_^ please and thank you....im kinda understanding the title now...update soon

CiraArana Please add to to the mailing list..... Alas >. finally the sequel has come. thank you^^ how long will this story be?

CiraArana Please add to to the mailing list..... Alas >. finally the sequel has come. thank you^^ how long will this story be?

Itt's me again. I found your sequel to Dragon's Prey, which I reread, yay, & I'm hooked, as usual. lol I really liked Dragon's Prey, especially that steamy, sweet lemon you did with Sess & Kag. You go. Can't wait to see what happens in this one.

Ah hah, you took up my idea about the mailing list, haha. I feel special. And yes, anyways, yet another good chapter. But lets get more Sesshomaru in there! -hint, hint- Haha. Update, much!

Please add me to the update list. I have been waiting for this sequel for a while!
Thanks,
Kim

Hmm hmmm,i like it.Thank god for sequels lol.Yes i want to be added to ur mailing list,it would much appreciated.Update soon.^_^

wow the second part to dragons prey is good. its awesome. keep writing I so wanna fing out if kagome's and Inuyasha's friendship can go back to the way it was. T.T
update!!!!!!!!!!!

wow the second part to dragons prey is good. its awesome. keep writing I so wanna fing out if kagome's and Inuyasha's friendship can go back to the way it was. T.T
update!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh, yay! :D I've been wondering when you would begin the sequal (guess I should wonder over to A Single Spark more often then hanging around FF.net). Anyway, you have certainly captured my attention once again, and I can't wait for the next update. :3

Right now I'm hoping Sango hurts Miroku good! :B

Can't wait to see what happens next!

When Sango finally has enough and nails him upside the head with her boomerang, Miroku is going to have one helluva lump! haha! Great job. I'm excited about your latest edition to the Dragon's Prey series. I do so admire your writing. Please add me to the mailing list! Thanks!

-hugs sesshoumary plushie and squeals- When will he come in?! teehee! Love it so far!! xDD

This was great!!!! Please update soon!

... uh, maybe the Dragons 'made' the shikigamis? Or maybe not... hope you update soon!

gah!!!!! please update soon! i am loving this story!!!!!!!

I am so glad that you are picking up the threads of "Dragon's Prey". I very much enjoyed that fic. It was one of my first to read. All of your stories seem to flow effortlessly from your imagination. There is nothing about any of your stories that sounds like anyone else's.

This one has started off rocky just like I would have expected. Inuyasha is still so immature that while he was unable to even help Kagome out of her problem he still wants to be angry that someone else had no qualms about helping her.

I am not surprised that Miroku has gone back to his hentai ways inspite of the tenderness that he and Sango shared.. Some men never appreciate what they have in front of them.

It shall be interesting to see what Sango does about this situation because I definitely got a suspicous feeling from the "beautiful" but creepy girl in the forest.

Can't wait for more. If it is possible please let me know when there is an update. pegasus4@bellsouth.net

Til next time, Deb.

You are such a great writer! I just read Dragons Prey and cannot wait for this next story to start getting deeper. I don't trust the girl they just saved though, is she a trap that Naraku's usung or something?

I love this fic and I'm so glad you decide to make a second fic. Update soon

Hi Cira!
great first chapter! I had been waiting and waiting for you to start this fic..yay!! keep it up!!!

Silk_worm

YAY!!! IT'S UP!!!!!!!!11!!!

YAY!! The sequel is here!

Yay! The sequal has begun! Me sooo happy! And frankly, I don't care what other people say, I'm really glad that you're doing this in a four-parter. It's really nice to have an author who is willing to put in the work to actually build a relationship and world around the characters. Far too often it's more of a 'wham, bam, thank you ma'am' kind of relationship. I'm really looking forward to see how it progresses! Keep up the good work!

AG

PS. You don't happen to have a mailing list, do you? If so, I would love to be put on it!

It is so cool that you not only are continuing this series, but are doing it is parts. It is quite a different perspective and I love the approach. Please update soon.

Intriguing beginning? Now to find out who, what and why about the new girl and the ghosts. . . and of course look forward to 'all' kinds of action.

Damn, I reached the end and there's no more chapters! -tear!- Update soonnnn!

Can you email me when you do update? You should start like, a email alert thingy or something.
horses4ever2k@yahoo.com
Thanks!

YAY! you continued... this is a great beganing to a new fic... i really like it. i wonder when Sesshomaru is going to show up, but i bet you get asked that a lot ...lol... i find it really interesting how you combined both english and Japanese folk lore, its pretty cool...
good luck
you write amazing work

Hello there, luff. Do you remember me? Of course you remember me. You have to remember me... Okay, so you probably don't remember me. But I was one of those lovely people who asked (politely, I hope...) for you to continue. And I just died of happiness. So thank you. And... er... yeah. ^^

This was great! Please update soon. And passion to, I love that fic. Im pretty excited to see how the group will react 2 Gome's pregnancy. ^^ Hope u can update soon!!!

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR FINALLY COMING OUT WITH THIS!!!!! Please update as soon as possible. Please?

love it cant waate for the next chapter!

you're mean as I am sure you are aware... four part series... not nice... nope not at all...

although i am really glad you started the sequal to dragon's prey I loved that story... off topic when are we getting a passion update?? i wanna see what everyone says when kagome finally admits she's mated to sessho!!! the suspense is killing me!!!

thanks for the new story update soon

YAY the sequel!! lol.Great,im so excited now soooo plz update soon.Cant wait to read more ^_^

THANK YOU!!! OMG, I cant even say how long I have been waiting for the sequel for 'Dragons Prey'! I love this story already, can't wait for the next chapter.

KMB080

Like whoa. Pretty intense for a first chappie.