LUV the fanfic! Please write more! Or I'll kick the bucket! ( Goes over to the bucket, only to get tangled with the bucket and mop.) And the curtain rises on the Romance 'The Mop and I'. Sounds sexy doesn't it?
Megan Consoer- Sat 24 Feb 2007
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
I like it I realy like that she's going to be wearing his fur sounds fun not to mention soft. keep a witen
karen- Sun 14 Jan 2007
same chapter as the 4th so you know 4 and 5 are the same lol
Lita- Sun 14 Jan 2007
....wheres the next chapter?
this story is really good,please keep going!
I remember I read part of this story long, long ago. I'm glad that you have continued it. This is more than I have done [sighs] but I'm too lazy.
I liked the fur bit...sounds sexy ^_~
-Dani.
Lita- Fri 12 Jan 2007
i WISH i had a baby brother!
youre lucky!
i like the story..but i cant picture sesshoumaru...doing...well....THAT!
i mean really!its disgusting!
but other than that,its great!
Priestess Riiko- Wed 10 Jan 2007
hi! i love ur story its really cool and unique! btw can u plz tell me somthing? can u tell me if inuyasha comes to try and steal kagome back(i jus started reading it on 1/10/07)? thanks and keep writing!
Truly Yours,
Priestess Riiko
Megan Consoer- Tue 09 Jan 2007
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
KillingMeTenderly- Sat 25 Nov 2006
WoW, that's a great fanfic, I like it a lot! The story is cute and I like how you've made Sessoumaru's and Kagome's characters. You shoulad realy write a new chappter and soon, I want to see MORE!!! Well, that's from me,
KillingMeTenderly
PS: Just as advise, try to leave space between the paragraphs,It will make it look nicer and easyer ro read without loosing were are you (it also makes the chappies look longer ^_- )
your a very good writer
Kambri_Jade- Sat 07 Oct 2006
This fic rock! i'm lovin how Kgome and Sesshomaru are portrayed in this one, reall cool! keep it up and updat ASAP!!!
Later,
Kambri_Jade
trihn- Wed 04 Oct 2006
it's not bad, but i agree with kiba, spacing would be good, makes it easier to read you know. and you can't forget the quotation marks because it will make it very confusing. perhaps you could call it 'Lust at First Sight'. all in all, it isn't bad. go you!
trihn- Wed 04 Oct 2006
it's not bad, but i agree with kiba, spacing would be good, makes it easier to read you know. and you can't forget the quotation marks because it will make it very confusing. perhaps you could call it 'Lust at First Sight'. all in all, it isn't bad. go you!
Fred- Sat 15 Jul 2006
Two words - 'Spell Check'...you seriously need to run both a spell check and a grammar check on your fic.
Not what I'd usually read, but since you wanted feedback I'll give you some. The story is very nicely written for a first timer, but I'd suggest spacing out the paragraps more, with a space inbetween them, since it makes the page look a lot nicer. Of course, you don't have to do this, but it does help a bit. However, I do like the way you had Sesshoumaru bow to Kagome, since it shows that he is honorable, and I do hope that no one tries to flame you for this, since it is very good for a first try. Hm, also, another thing to make it look good, is to have the title in capitals, like this "Don't Have One Yet", since all the words aren't lesser words, like "a, for" and things like that. However, these are just pieces of advise to make it better, you don't have to take them.
Kiba
Megan Consoer- Sat 01 Jul 2006
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
I loved it. I saw very little mistakes. Update soon.
ReRe- Tue 27 Jun 2006
MORE MORE MORE MORE ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Kyo-Chan-Lover- Tue 27 Jun 2006
That was good. Try spacing out the pargraphs more, but it's still good. Anyway, update soon!!!
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