That was so good! How could you atop there? Please update.

Please. You have to, It is of dire importance that you add more chapters. My heart can't take the wait.

So sad. Why the hell would Sesshoumaru marry Rebecca, whoever she is, if he still loved Kagome? Does he even love her? Update soon anyway.

Continue as soon as you can please and thank you

OMG

wow... i love ur style of writing as well as the plot for this FF!!!!

UPDATE PLZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

very interesting story. My compliments. I look forward to the next plot twist..

This is a great story! I can't wait to read more. Kagome needs to stop being thrown around though! poor girl.

Please continue soon I'll be waiting

I'm flattered by your response to my last review - thank you!

This chapter was shocking to me. The lemon was very quick and seemed premature in the plot, but it was done well. However, I strongly believe that you can use the following chapter to bring reason to light. Why were they so quick to rut? Are there more moments from their past that could have contributed to this? Was it rebound for her and vengeance for him? As a reader, I am asking you to take some time to make this chapter more believable, which is completely within your grasp. I have faith in you as a writer to make that happen and I'm anxious to read why exactly they decided to do the deed at this particular moment in time. Simple vulnerability on her part and pity on his would work, if properly executed.

I'm still enjoying this story and I await the next chapter. Like your other story, Through the Lens, I have no idea where this plot is going and that fact alone intrigues me. Not to mention I'm drawn to your writing style. Thanks and enjoy the rest of your weekend!

pretty quick for citrus, but well written nonetheless. You worked it into the story well, though, so complaints about it being too quick should fall by the wayside.

another chapter beautifully well written. I can definitely sympathize with Kagome

Impressive. The description of Sesshoumaru in the garden was so descriptive, easily imaginable. What a good first impression for Kagome to have of Inuyasha's brother. Well done.

really well written. Having been through something very, very similar, I feel that you captured both Kagome's reaction and Inuyasha's reaction very well. (although I wish I had had enough guts to punch the guy... go Kagome!)
I am looking forward to seeing how this turns out.

Heeey!! Wow! it's like...wow! Kanz likes it, very much. Please update soon nee, nee? Suerte!!

-Kanz

I'm really enjoying this story so far. It's clean and simple and all-around well written. It's a neat perspective and I'm very fond of the way you use the first person POV. Very mature too for a break-up/love-again story. I'm looking forward to more from you and I'm very anxious to read Sesshoumaru's present debut. Thank you and good luck!

You...with the updating sometime, yes?

Okay, I'm sorry I'm pushy. This is just a great story.

hey this story is sooooooooo cool update soon!

damn u nailed the characters head on i loved it update soon plz

You have such a unique way with words and I simply adore your FanFic for them. I usually don't write reviews, nor do i usually read Fics that have less than five chapter with the exception of One Shots. I hope you will keep up the story, updating chapters once every two days if not more. Thanks a bunch,

Krista 3

aaaarrrrrgggghhhh why? Why did you leave off there? Please update soon I love the way your story seems to develope and the different outlook on sesshoumaru. Though he's still keeping his cool. ^.^ please Update soon. T.T

Your story is really good, can't wait to read more. I hope you UPDATE ASAP PLESE ! ! ! PLESE ! ! ! PLESE ! ! ! : ^ )

i love this story its so good!