This is such a fun fic, you must come back to it and update!

Please?

Okay now this was something to laugh at.... I enjoyed it something different yet kept your attention and humored you as well. I can't wait to read what happens next....

Little One, you have a die-hard fan here. Now that I've stumbled upon your work I can't forget you! Your protrayal of these characters are grand! I loved Kagome in the first chpt. She is such a teen when offered money for the job it's "I'm in!!!" So my daughter who's 19. She's an anime addict as well and got me into the series and then the last 6 months the fanfiction. I am totally hooked and Sesshoumaru is my Hmmm??? Well, as my daughter says, "we won't go there". But, anywho... I like your work and even ooc alittle isn't bad as long as Kagome doesn't get a potty mouth beyond the simple damn, hell... it's just truly not her unless you specify so in the beginning to prepare fans. You're growing well in your grammar and typos as is always when we learn new things. Keep this up Little One, I'm behind you all the way.

This is a really good story. My only comment is that most of the writing should be done is past tense, for instance (to quote in your story)-in chapter one Kagome is going to the well and says to Shippo "Be good Shippo-chan. I'll be back in a week." Kagome gave (not gives) Shippo a hug, then jumped (not jumps) into the well. Outside of those few typos, this story is excellent and I'm awaiting the next chapters!! Keep writing!!!

MidnightStar

HAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You're doing a wonderful job. Keep up the good work. I can't wait for the next update.

Very informitive however less ooc, and more talking and action. Grammer is great, and I love how you portrae the lord and kagome. Very good. can't wait to see what happens next.

hehehe it's awesome so far. please update again soon.

At this point, I'm glad she hasn't told him about the well. I also like her youkai-like actions. hee

Your idea is very good and original... and you're grammar is pretty good. The only thing that bothers me is Kagome's behavior in the first chapter. She seemed OOC and definitely was too rude to Jakken. The Kagome in the manga and in the anime does not curse that much, nor does she dislike Jaken to that extent. It came to a point that I actually felt a bit sorry for the poor toad, and I don't get that feeling for him often XD

Just watch out the way you portray Kagome. Otherwise, great job on the fic =D

I love this story please update soon!!! Ja ne.

luv your story

Wow, what a rude bitch Kagome is in the opening scene with Jaken. She is a bit ooc, and I feel sorry for poor Jaken. I'm not a Jaken fan club member, but he seemed pleased to see her, even though he was shocked. Poor guy never gets a break.

Keep up the great work! This story is so funny!

I wouldn't know whether to gut Jaken or reward him in that situation. *grin* I hope she really is as timeless as he thinks (and able to have full youkai pups but that's just my eternal plug. I wonder if he has any already?). This new POV of each other, along with their respective stories, ought to be interesting.

*faints* *twitch* *twitch* Please *twich* update, soon... *twitch* *E-mail me when you do! - smart_girl46360@yahoo.com*

I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY, AND I THINK JAKEN SHOULD GET ALL THE THREATS {MORE FROM KAGS} THAT HE CAN GET!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please update soon!!!!!!

nice strory waiting for you to update so can you update soon

Fricken AWSOME! =D I absolutly love it ^_^ you have to write more =) Jaken was never a good lier to Sesshoumaru ^_~ hehe

“So? Sprout another one.”
“Foolish ningen! I am not a vegetable!"

LOL... continue, you must!

please update ASAP!!!! GREAT STORY so far!!!

OMFG! This fic is great! You knew how to make me laugh! Though that is not hard to do ¬¬ it is when it is accomplished with smart jokes or well used sarcasm.
The "Foolish ningen...I'm not a vegetable!" part made me fall from my bed in laughter. It earned me a little bruise on my left elbow and a stare from my sis, but HEY! it was worth it! Keep updating! My Humps too!

-Kanz

Please continue this is really funny.

Amazing fic so far. Absolutely hysterical. I don't think I've enjoyed Jaken more. Poor little toad, he doesn't catch a break, does he? Hope you update soon!

“No time like the present to write my will.”

That line is the BEST! So, update soon cause I wanna know if she has any real need for it! Not to mention about the events of the lunch with a current-day Sesshoumaru-sama. And Jaken's new scent is cool too *snicker*

Again, update soon please cause this is a really good and cool fic!

OO ^^ awesome another good fic i hope u update soon k! ^^ i love it so UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!

omg wow.. great story i really like how its going.. please update soon!!!!

definatly keep going! I love this it's great! I love kagome intimidating jaken absolutly brilliant and the bill gates line was pure genius! (Not that the rest wasn't great but those where my favourite parts :P)

lmao!! Like all the rest of your fanfics, I find myself rolling in laughter over the witty insults and fast humor that surrounds your writting!! The plot is great on this one too! I can't wait for the next installment, and I hope it'll be filled with the same unique humor you infuse your stories with.

I think you have a sound concept going and should definatly keep writing, but there were a few things that were a bit distracting. The biggest problem was the constant switch between past and present tense. Things like: '“Ya, Inuyasha didn't like it though. I had to sit him till my voice croaked-he just wouldn't relent, the stubborn jerk!” cried Kagome taking a sip of her miso soup, after which she promptly puts down on the table.' read really awkwardly. I think if you were to revise those problems the story would be a lot easier to read.
Kagome also seems a LITTLE OOC when speaking to Jaken. I just don't see her cursing at him and acting so frantic. Overall though, she seems fine.
I don't say all this as a flame! I think you have something really interesting and funny going and should keep it up.

love it, please keep it up, the suspense is killing me. When will Sesshoumaru find out about Kagome.

Wow! This fanfic is off the wall> It's really great I love to read more. Please update soon. Love Ya

Good plot so far,can't wait to see what happens!Please update soon!

You're off to a great start! You're first chapter has me hooked already. Please post some more soon!

THIS STORY ROCKS!!!! i can' t wait till you update.