| Hope you'll continue this story, I'm sitting on edge can't wait!!!!! Keep up the awesome work!!!!
Yukilunny598 "aka Susanne"- Tue 16 Oct 2007
| Awh -pouts- you writers just have to leave a cliffy and change things around. I really like your story so far. Thank you for your work
Ava 365- Wed 20 Jun 2007
Nooo!!! I dont' think it was too soon for Kagome to find out Inuyasha is Sesshomaru's half-brother. She could begin to be extremely cold to Sesshomaru and he would hate it. His beast would fight him to get near her and his rational part would eventually agree. Perhaps Kagome being cold to him would make Sesshomaru react.
Did I convince you? No? Anyway, the story is yours and you do what you think is best or has more sense. I also wanted to tell you that I love it and have been waiting for it for a long time!!!
luna- Wed 20 Jun 2007
| wow its kind of weird that you posted this week since i was thinking of your story last week and i hadnt read it since the last time you posted some wold say that that is deyabu but then again my friends always tell me i am good a telling outcome of things and predicting stuff i dont dont if should really believe them but for the most part its true and very weird. hope you write i missed this story
Kaho-kun- Tue 19 Jun 2007
| You know you are reading a good story when you scream "Noooo-etc.!" at the end of the chapter and there is not another chapter waiting. I must say I am addicted to the story line and I understand your reasoning for deleting the next chapter. Please keep up the great work.
elsy- Fri 19 Jan 2007
| I am hoping you havent stopped writting for this fanfic and that you will update soon.!!! love it entirly
Please update soon! I read this 'cause I liked your gangsta story. But this one is way cool too! Plz don't leave your readers wallowing.
-Dani.
UPDATE SOONNNNNNNN!!!
Suki Lin DeHart- Sat 23 Sep 2006
I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Suki Lin DeHart- Sat 23 Sep 2006
I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ShadowChick- Tue 12 Sep 2006
| awesome luv it!!!!!!!!!!!
Cassie- Tue 05 Sep 2006
| I really like your story! It's good, and has a different feel to it, I can't wait to read more, please write more!!
| Hi I love this story can't wait for more
jestergirl- Tue 05 Sep 2006
I love this story please update soon, you are a very good writer
kohana- Mon 04 Sep 2006
| oooohhhhhh its getting good!!! I have been checking constantly for the new chapters, its my favorite story right now!!! Keep up the great work!!!8D
bluemoon_175- Tue 22 Aug 2006
| I must say this is a really fantastic story. I must say that I'm at lost for words it's that good. Keep up the good work, I can't wait to you update again. So I hope you UPDATE ASAP PLEASE.
Raven88- Thu 17 Aug 2006
FIX IT FFIIXX IITT FFFIIIXXX IIITTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Must read more:)
Silver Gold Fox- Sat 29 Jul 2006
| Great Story. I love it Please keep it up
ADSV- Fri 28 Jul 2006
Why would I throw something at you? This was a great chapter. Kouga needed his tail kicked. What better than a little, seemingly helpless ningen. hehe.
Love that the paintings are Sess's. Love that Kagome saved him from Kagura by dancing with him.
Loved that Sess's inner demon wants to follow her and hurt Inuyasha.
Oh, can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work!!!
| Poor Kagome!! Please continue!! This is a review and that makes it much more closer for you to post the next chapter!
Nakey- Fri 28 Jul 2006
I love this story! hehe But! People have seen Inuyasha and Kagome at the party together so Inuyasha's threat should be moot at this point now... But Kagome is still afraid...(@_@)
Oh ya... by the way.. UPDATE!
lehcar132- Fri 28 Jul 2006
| Why was she speaking in the "royal we?" I mean she hasn't done it before... just wondering. Another nice chapter, thanks.
| YES YES YES!!!! I ABSOLUTLY LOVE IT!!! You simply must update for me and the others. PLEASE!!!!
| if youd like id be glad to help with the pages you want to correct
Kohana- Thu 27 Jul 2006
| the climax is building!! YAY!!! I saw three chapters and was thrilled!! but they were the same=( meh keep up the good work i can't wait to read more!!=)
Fox_Faerie_Maiden- Thu 27 Jul 2006
why have three of the same chapters been posted?!?!?!?!?! When I saw that there was THREE new chapters I was like WOW!!!!!! BUt they were all the same....... Update soon..... please...... and make sure theyre different......
~FFM~
| Love it. You simply must update darling. lol
ADSV- Tue 25 Jul 2006
Jumping up and down with excitement about 2 chapters in one night! Bravo!!!
Oooooo, can't wait to see what kind of disaster occurs at the ball. Part of me hopes Inu is not there, and the other part hopes he is so he can get his tail kicked!
| Can't wait to see Sesshomaru's face once he spots Kagome. I bet he has a date and she is ..... Kagura right? Update soon so I could find out.
| yay!! this story is so kewl!! hope you update soon!!
mangadreams- Tue 25 Jul 2006
great story really enjoyed last couple of chapters
Victoria- Mon 24 Jul 2006
nice i usualy dont like future stories but this one is the best story on here!
and those who give you flames should be shamed
KogasGirl- Sat 22 Jul 2006
| Did you have to be so evil to make it a cliffhanger? I hate those, anyways great chapter and please update soon. (BTW: What made you come up with that gadget, if it were real I would so totally buy it.)
...- Fri 21 Jul 2006
I was with this story until the most recent chapter. One of the most tired, boring devices in recent fanfic is the use of IM conversations. There are more interesting ways of conveying information this way than doing it the way it actually happens.
In fact, transliterating real IM conversations border on just plain annoying and in general, an eye sore.
Do you regularly go back and read you own IM sessions? I have. And I realize I might continue to find them amusing, but how many other people will get something out of it? No one. I'd never inflinct my own IMs on others. Nor should we be so cursed to be inflicted with fictional characters IM conversations. It just ruins the flow of the story and is frankly, self indulgent.
Sincerely, if you must use IMing as a device, then by god...find a better way than this.
| loved it update soon
Lady Kio-tye- Fri 23 Jun 2006
| This story is great!!! You should finish it cuz I would luv to continue readin it!! ^_^
linda- Fri 23 Jun 2006
| I like the idea and has be laid out very well. Can't wait for next update.I
swtdrm01- Fri 23 Jun 2006
| This story is great. When can we expect the next chapter?
diabolical angel- Fri 23 Jun 2006
how very cute.. I read the whole story and I love it so far.. there is more, right? better be!! lol
can't wait for the next update!!!
Ciarra- Thu 22 Jun 2006
| hello! i love the story so far. keep writeing
mangadreams- Thu 22 Jun 2006
| what an interesting story:) very much enjoyed reading the first 5 chapters!!
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