Reviews for Midnight Snack by Zyren

Megan Consoer- Thu 20 Mar 2008
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

samantha sargent- Wed 07 Nov 2007
(This is not real adress!) I like your iidea of having sesshomaru more dark and you should write more!!! you've got me hooked on this story! :) :) :) :)

Sweet_Dark_Silence- Sat 03 Nov 2007
When are you going to update or fix this story? Inquiring minds would like to know!

Megan Consoer- Wed 12 Sep 2007
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

ninamori- Sat 18 Aug 2007
yo!! hey loved that yu updated..wish it was longer but life is not always fair. bout the changes...i got mixed feelings...I mean i like the flow of the story now. Sess is not all loveydovey and its not being rushed to get there and Kags is not all that acceptent to whats going on....but I think it would be cool to see Sess have a little more of a darker side thats just SeXy and Kags kick some more ass..but either way IT WILL BE AWSOME!! so update soon...ukno.

ninamori- Sat 18 Aug 2007
yo!! hey loved that yu updated..wish it was longer but life is not always fair. bout the changes...i got mixed feelings...I mean i like the flow of the story now. Sess is not all loveydovey and its not being rushed to get there and Kags is not all that acceptent to whats going on....but I think it would be cool to see Sess have a little more of a darker side thats just SeXy and Kags kick some more ass..but either way IT WILL BE AWSOME!! so update soon...ukno.

mikiwashere- Sun 12 Aug 2007
Coool. Please continue.

Birdy- Sun 05 Aug 2007
=D

Megan Consoer- Tue 26 Jun 2007
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Kags21- Sat 23 Jun 2007
A darker Sesshoumaru will be good, I can't wait to read the revised chapters

Night silence- Sun 17 Jun 2007
don't change it! I really like the chapters! It shows a sudden change in Sesshoumaru of how Kagome has changed him.

Plz update soon! And don't change!

~Monica

Heather- Sun 17 Jun 2007
Glad to see your back^_^ I love the way the story is going. I don't think you should have to go back and change all the other chapters. I think it all flows together quite nicely. Update soon!!

Mari- Wed 13 Jun 2007
I love this story. I don't think that you need to revise the previous chapters because, it may seem on the lighter side of things, but it does flow well. i had no problem believing this new chapter, because he had a reason to hate kagome. Because of her he is now bound to one food sourse, and that ties him down. They are slaves to each other.

Anyway love the story, please update soon.

hime jun hi- Sun 10 Jun 2007
Wonder what would happen if KAGOME got PREGNANT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

loveyaa1210- Sun 10 Jun 2007
I really enjoy your story and can't wait to see or read what is going to happen next. i really like the way that things and descriptions are presented but from a characters' pov. til next time (*smiles*)

Risa- Sat 09 Jun 2007
I like the idea of Sesshoumaru being dark. Yeah, I say go for it.
I really enjoyed it. I wished it was longer.

Red-Smartiez- Sat 09 Jun 2007
I reallly like this story a lot!!!!! I hope Kagome 'changes' as the story goes on. Like she turns into a drop-dead-gorgeous miko that Sesshomaru aint afraid to show off and she becomes much more stronger and defiant!!! I really hope she does!!!

The story is utterly amazing!! I love how EVERYTHING flows!!!! U pulled it off!!!! I love the slave part and the part where Kagome goes nuts just to find him!!!

You got to continue!!! U just have to!!!! I am dying to know wats going to happen next!! I still cant believe Sesshomaru said that to Kagome!

PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE CONTINUE AND THANK YOU!!! ^_^

P.S more lemons pweezz.....Oh, and you are an EXCELLENT author!!!! =D

DONT STOP NOW!!!!! lol

TwinTiger- Sat 09 Jun 2007
Gah! cliffie not fair...ok enough of my whinning. I love this story, I can see the sudden darkness but if you just alter the previous chapter I think you'll be alright.

Kris- Fri 08 Jun 2007
i think that your story as is is going in a wonderful even flow. you don't have to change a thing.

anoumoys- Fri 08 Jun 2007
i loved this story and i like your idea to make it a little darker. and i can't wait to red the new version and the new chapter

Li- Fri 08 Jun 2007
Hmmm, interesting how things have turned out... But i get the feeling both of them hate each other now since sess doesn't like the weak and she doesn't like being controlled ^_^ oh well, great job so far and i hope you can update soon ^_^

oh, and about the rewrite, i think it's ok if you don't, since we haven't really glimpsed how sess really was, and with the info he just received about being dependent on kags may can give reason to show his true character! ok, well, take care!!

MorningStar- Fri 08 Jun 2007
maybe i'm a little weird here, but i love the way he was before and i think it's amazing that he's beginning to resent her.
sorta like the more you need some one, the less you like them. it would definitely be a different story. please keep up this story, i love it!

Kai- Fri 08 Jun 2007
At first, I wasn't sure if I should continue reading after the first chapter, but wthat the heck. It started to get a lot better after that. I do like Sesshoumaru being darker in the latest chapter. It does seem more like him. And now you can branch off into where their relationship can lead. Can't wait for the next one.

FallenAngelKagome- Fri 08 Jun 2007
Oh my gosh I love your story Keep on going please it rulez

*****- Thu 03 May 2007
You will die if you dont update fic!!!

loveless- Sat 28 Apr 2007
wow....yeaa this is good. GREAT ACTUALLY. Im rlly lovin this fic. I was sad and disappointed when it stopped but thats life. PLZ update soon. Im restless to kno wat happens next.

Megan Consoer- Wed 21 Mar 2007
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Heather- Sat 03 Mar 2007
Wow.......I really like this story!!^_^ I love how you have made them vampires. Your writing is awesome it keeps you on the edge of your seat!! Update soon!!!!^_^

perfectkillingmiko- Sun 25 Feb 2007
u are naughty!! bad, bad, bad. very niiicceee writin' darlin'. oh and i have gotten another profile. its the second perfectkilling and i have *in bold letters* UPDATED!! MUH HAHAHAH!! see you at work sweety.

Kags21- Sat 24 Feb 2007
Since Kagome is now his slave what will he do to her, and how come Sango doesn't remember?

Tanya131- Sat 24 Feb 2007
please write more

Night Silence- Sat 24 Feb 2007
I love your story. I just have one question though... WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

And another... So what is Sesshoumaru and everyone wearing? Just their regular Fedual Era stuff? Or like Black capes and stuff?

love ya
-monica

Megan Consoer- Sat 24 Feb 2007
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

lilmoe31- Sat 24 Feb 2007
That was great please continue.

clock-winder- Sat 24 Feb 2007
My eyes are bulging out of their suckets because of this fic. Well, it totally awesome please update fast!

Ari- Fri 23 Feb 2007
you make update list & I give review
seems fair enough?

inuprincess- Fri 23 Feb 2007
I really loved this last chapter. You have me hooked now and I can not wait for the update to see where you head with your ideas.

Thanks for a great chapter!

hime jun hi- Fri 23 Feb 2007
0.0 ............... hmmmmmmmmmm................ I wonder what would happen if she got pregnant from being his little toy......................? plz?

TamikoMikaver- Fri 23 Feb 2007
ok, it's really really super amazing. sess/kag + vampires=genius. Please keep this going. and if possible, could you email me when you update?

Vaneles- Fri 23 Feb 2007
La La!!!!!! Fantastic fic so far. I love it. update again soon! ^_^

WhiteRose-Kurama- Fri 23 Feb 2007
It's been awhile since i read ur fic, but I'm glad that I finally caught ur update. This is one of the best vamp fics that i've read. I can't wait to see what happens next! I wonder if sess can regain kagome's trust again? Will there be more dark lemony goodness in the future? Anyway keep up the good work and hurry w/ the next chappie :P

Risa- Fri 23 Feb 2007
Wonderful surprise with the Miko factor. I enjoyed it. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Risa- Fri 23 Feb 2007
Cool, very cool chapter. Looking forward to the next one.

Eternity of Tears- Thu 22 Feb 2007
I like how you changed the mikos a bit, very cool.
=D
Anyways, great chapter, can't wait till you update!

arzuue- Thu 22 Feb 2007
whoaaa..lol. i luv your story utterly. slave kagome...hehe. KEEP IT UP!! update soon? =)

sesshou's gurl- Thu 22 Feb 2007
You better update this soon because this is a dand good story. WOW!!! Update like tommorow ok??? I can't even wait!!!!

Jinja- Thu 22 Feb 2007
Where the fuggly is Chapter 5?! I can't get enough of Sesshoumaru and all his un-holy goodness. You're a fantastic writer, so update!!! =)

Raven- Wed 21 Feb 2007
Wow I love this fanfic! At first I thought it would be a little weird but its awesome! Let me know when ya update ^-^

~Raven T.~

cindy boyd- Wed 21 Feb 2007
i am loveing this fic

hime jun hi- Wed 21 Feb 2007
MAKE him SAVE HER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

gouka chibi fujo- Wed 21 Feb 2007
I'm glad that you added more because i loved the oneshot but i think i have to hunt you down for ending that way. flatline her

tina- Tue 20 Feb 2007
NO!!! Not a cliffhanger I need another chapter to stay sane! Please update soon!

kogome- Tue 20 Feb 2007
omg omg i can't believe u stopped, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!

Kris- Mon 19 Feb 2007
I hope that you update soon this is a really good story. Chow

jazz- Mon 19 Feb 2007
why?...did you live a clifhanger?..why?

Birdy Main- Sun 18 Feb 2007
T_T After so long you end it with a cliffy NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!

alatera- Sun 18 Feb 2007
Uh-oh. Sesshomaru did a bad bad thing. He needs her blood to stay sane. If he turns her , her blood would be different then wouldn't it? So only thing I can think of is, where is Tenseiga when he needs it. Can see lots of other possiblities too. Can't wait for the update to see what happens next. Keep up the good work.

Sassy- Sun 18 Feb 2007
Cliffy? CLIFFY? NOOO!!! X_X *flatlined*

blackrosewitch- Sun 18 Feb 2007
of course i hate u, you took to long to update but i guess i can't be mad u wrote another chapter after all but hurry up and update i'm really curious to see what happens next.

Lord Pomeko- Sun 18 Feb 2007
Update. Update. Update. Please Update. Cliffys arent any fun.

shaanjin- Sun 18 Feb 2007
Hello!
I really like your story (vampires, yammy^^)
and it is well written too (look at some other stories with all their illogical turns and gramatical mistakes...)

What I noticed and wanted to ask: Did you actually read The Hollows by Kim Harrison? Because your humans-being-sugared-reference kind of remembered me of her series.

Go on ;)

shaanjin

clover_babe- Sun 18 Feb 2007
aii.

i like it. and the cliffhanger is terrible.

update ASAP please

arzuue- Sun 18 Feb 2007
oh my....lol. =) im enjoying this fic. update soon?

ashley_kun- Sun 18 Feb 2007
wwwwwrrrrrrrriiiitttttteeeeeeee mmmmmmmmmooooorrrrrrrrreeee plzzzz!

Tanya131- Sun 18 Feb 2007
please write more

aesuka- Sun 18 Feb 2007
nooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! noooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!! horrid horrid author!!!! absolutely horrid!!! i wanna know what happens!!!! nooooooooooooooooo!!!!

Moonlight Goddess- Sun 18 Feb 2007
I HATE YOU!!!

I HATE YOU!!!!! What's Sango gonna say? Inuyasha? I s KAgome gonna leave him?

I don't really understand this Vampire stuff. What does "flat lined" mean? He turned her into a vampire too?

Aniway... GOOD JOB!!!! Nice chapter layout too!

UPDATE SOON!!!!!

Moonlight Goddess

Fluffy-kins- Sun 18 Feb 2007
In response to the last question: Only a little bit. But, I plan to over look that cliff-hanger when the next chapter comes out.

OMFG!! She's dead!! >. What's he going to do now?!?! Who will feed him?! Who will do naughty things with him?! And more importantly, who will do the dishes later in life?! He just doomed their relationship!! I know how Kagome feels... Men and there failure to commit... Le Sigh.

Update soon!!

Chaos_Queen77- Sun 18 Feb 2007
AHHHHHHHHHHH! what was that you cant do this to me please i need more! *Cries in corner while rocking back and forth*

black moon inu- Sun 18 Feb 2007
I hate to sound like a child but, I WANT MORE NOW NOWNOWNOW NOW NOT LATER NOW. Ok now that thats out of my system please post soon.

BYE BYE

Suicide- Sat 17 Feb 2007
AH! *bangs head on wall* Evil cliffy!!!
HURRY UP AND GO WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!

...please?

sybol- Sat 17 Feb 2007
i love this story will there be another chapter plase say yes!

Katie- Sat 17 Feb 2007
I do hate you!!! You just totally left off there! How could you do that!!?? I liked the story alot so update soon please because if you dont I'll cry. Seriously i'll cry see im crying right now :'( WAHHH!!

Tanya131- Wed 17 Jan 2007
i like this story can you write more please

KagomeHime- Tue 26 Dec 2006
when will there be an update?

Animeholic- Tue 19 Dec 2006
*whispers* update.....

Animeholic- Tue 19 Dec 2006
When are you gonna update?! Will Kagome just be Sess' lover and snack, just lover, or will he turn her into a vampire

Jenna- Wed 06 Dec 2006
Sesshy as a vampire...yummy!! I love your stories..they are all really good!!

Megan Consoer- Tue 14 Nov 2006
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

azera- Wed 27 Sep 2006
i love this fic, its so good!

Lanie- Tue 05 Sep 2006
yay! chapter three is up! the story keeps getting better and better. keep up the good work!
:3

shikongodess- Sun 16 Jul 2006
nice story lookin fowad to ur other chapters and nice lemons they 'very interestin'

cherry- Sat 15 Jul 2006
GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Taddy- Sat 15 Jul 2006
i really like it your fic...write more soon!

Teana- Sat 15 Jul 2006
loved it. please continue. it's great:D

WhiteRose-Kurama- Sat 15 Jul 2006
This was a very good chappie and i can't wait to see how Rin helps Sess and Kags get together! Keep up the good work nd hurry w/ the next chappie :P

sessluver- Sat 15 Jul 2006
I love this story! It's so.....kinky! And not to mention Rin's personality is so cute! I agree with what Sesshoumaru thinks about her being dangerous because partly of her naivete... I think I spelt it correct..... Anyway, update soon!

Tsuki Angel- Fri 14 Jul 2006
update soon

serenitymoon- Fri 14 Jul 2006
cant wait for more!

mangadreams- Fri 14 Jul 2006
luv your story

kaya- Tue 27 Jun 2006
that was great its relly good hope you continue it

liza- Mon 26 Jun 2006
Hi!

Thanks for updating!!

please update more soon I want to kn0ow if they are going to see each other again please!!!!

Ja ne!!

Patrice- Mon 26 Jun 2006
It is sooo great so far. You have a great talent.

Megan Consoer- Sun 25 Jun 2006
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

AHeartofIce- Fri 23 Jun 2006
It was alright, though it sounds familiar. Have you read Dead Until Dark? Plus it defies the laws of sex, but eh. It's a fanfic. Do what you want, I suppose. ^^

rain perfection- Thu 22 Jun 2006
Very unique! I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Update and make more chapters very, very, very soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ankoku-sama- Thu 22 Jun 2006
Kagome should definitely turn after a while, and so should the clothing. You know, more vampireish, leather, skirts, somewhat slutty (girls case that is xD). Vampires love their blood orgies ^_~ haha update soon please!

Laini- Thu 22 Jun 2006
WOW awesome fic.I hope u write mroe chapters.Update soon please?^_^

fatima- Thu 22 Jun 2006
hey that was owe realy good please continue and update more you write good and I love your story. bye,bye see you later.
att-kibasess

ReRe- Thu 22 Jun 2006
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!

Inu_Twins- Thu 22 Jun 2006
Sweet!!! I love it!!! Plzzz Update soon!!! This is soo good!!

blackrosewitch- Thu 22 Jun 2006
this fic is off the chain i look forward to reading more. Thatis is if youi don't turn into one of thoses authors who only writes two pages of their fic and forgett about. but keep this fic up it has a lot of fanaze.

Sesshoumaru&Kagome4Ever- Thu 22 Jun 2006
This is certainly a new twist! I don't think I've ever read a vampire SessKag story! It's amazing though. Very well written. I remember reviewing the first chapter, I think... because I read it before. ^_^ But the second chapter is amazing as well. Update soon, ne?

crazygirlforlife- Thu 22 Jun 2006
this is a freakin awesome story. i can't wait till you update again

WhiteRose-Kurama- Thu 22 Jun 2006
Well, I have heard from u in awhile and i love the latest chappie. Ur one of the few who can write a wicked awesome vamp fic so keep up the good work and plz hurry w/ the next chappie:P

_Charlotte_Sometimes_- Thu 22 Jun 2006
I just loved this. I thought that it was totally amazing. Update soon

Goofy- Thu 22 Jun 2006
please continue the fic i really really really like it thanks alot bye

Goofy- Thu 22 Jun 2006
please continue the fic i really really really like it thanks alot bye

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