After a long time (and lots of breaks from work) I have finally got this story finished. I must say, I like it and have enjoyed reading it.
~JazkaStar~
kace- Sun 01 Jul 2007
good story but mean ending. very short and it didnt really conclude as well as i thought it would. it just stopped. but besides that i liked it very much
kace- Sun 01 Jul 2007
good story but mean ending. very short and it didnt really conclude as well as i thought it would. it just stopped. but besides that i liked it very much
I loved this story! I was worried in a few places, but just about all stories need a little bit of angst in them!! Great job!!!
Jenna- Fri 29 Dec 2006
yay i'm glad that you got the chance to finish it. i really liked it.
TAJE- Wed 27 Dec 2006
I have finished your story, and I enjoyed it. But I did find Kagome and Sesshomaru kind of 1 dementional. What I mean by that is the emotions were a bit lacking. But your story line was good. And I really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing your talents. Peace!!!
demon13o- Fri 22 Dec 2006
omg that was just awesome!!! i loved it i really hope u do another one i can't wait to read that one next!!!
swtdrm01- Sat 09 Dec 2006
I loved the story. Thank you for updating so soon and for finishing the story. That was such a sweet ending.
bluemoon_175- Sat 09 Dec 2006
This was a fantastic story keep up the good work can't wait to read more of your stories. I think you should do a sequel, I know it will be very good. But do what you will. :^)
helikesitheymikey!- Fri 08 Dec 2006
Thanks for updating so fast!
I love what the baby's name means!
I'm now thinking of Martina McBride's wonderful song "Blessed"
You know what? They already had the baby but they forgot one little thing.............................................................THE BABY SHOWER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
dun dun duuuuuun!
MAKE THE MEN PLAY RIDICULOUS GAMES AND WEAR SOME OF THOSE BIG PREGNANT STOMACH REPLICAS TO SEE WHAT THE WOMEN HAVE TO PUT UP WITH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
We're not gonna see Kags dad/newly turned grandpa again are we?? If we do Sess should kick his patooki!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
WHEN IS SESS GONNA PROPOSE!?!?!?!?!?!?!? I mean with a ring {to keep the stupid human males away.....}.....
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I've noticed that you like to make long stories.....I like it.....as long as you'll keep completing them.....which I'm sure you will!!!!!!!!!!!!!
helikesitheymikey!- Fri 08 Dec 2006
She's gonna have to get baby stuff including a carseat....she could send Souta to get it.
If Sessy doesn't make things right soon where will she work?? and live???
PLEASE UPDATE VERY VERY MEGA SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is a great story and I NEED to see what happens next ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!
What's she gonna name her son? something that means puppy in it??
Shouldn't Sess be able to see the baby when it's in the nursery? and will Kag be able to do a concealing spell or will someone else have to?
WHEN WILL SESS PUT 2 AND 2 TOGETHER!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
Is his dad gonna kick his butt now and ask questions later? OR the other way around???
Jazzy- Thu 07 Dec 2006
this is good can't wait to see whats next!!!!
Faye- Thu 07 Dec 2006
This is a really good story, but you keep repeating yourself over and over and it gets annoying. For example, when Kagome explains what happened in the backyard, you don't need to write it out again and again. We are READING the story and KNOW what happened. Reading the same thing over and over makes me want to not finish the story even though I really it. You go into too much detail and repeat your self a lot and frankly I'm starting to loose interest in this fic again. I tried reading it before, but when the characters just kept saying the same thing over and over I got bored and left. I'm not trying to be mean or anything, but all these long drawn out recaps are grating on my nerves. I would seriously suggest getting a beta reader to proof and chech your work so you don't have as many repetitions, it really causes the reader to lose interest. I hope I have offended you, I'm just trying to help you improve a great story. Have a nice day.
REDWOLF- Thu 07 Dec 2006
WELL YOU KNOW HOW TO CAUSE PANIC ATTACKS FOR US DON'T YOU? I can't believe you would leave us hanging like this. Help us, we got to know something! THE WAIT IS TERRIBLE! Please update as fast as possible!!
kat- Thu 07 Dec 2006
hmmm this should be interesting update soon please
Brandie- Thu 07 Dec 2006
I read the 3 new chapters and I can't wait to read the rest of this story and see how it turns out
swtdrm01- Thu 07 Dec 2006
That was awesome! I hope you update really, really, really, really soon because I so want to know what happens next.
bluemoon_175- Thu 07 Dec 2006
I have been loving the updates tonight hope you keep at it with a few more but if not, I hope you'll do it tomarrow. Keep up the good work. Just reading all of the updates tonight has me bouncing off the walls. :^)
AWESOME!! ^^ can't wait till the update!!
swtdrm01- Mon 13 Nov 2006
Thank you for updating. I loved it. I'm so excited that they are finaly gettting close. I have a question for you are other, are other characters coming out in this story? I'm very interested in knowing what else can happen, especially now that Bank is out of the picture.
Kari- Mon 13 Nov 2006
OMG I love this story. It's one of my fav's I can't wait for you to update....SOON!!!!
well done. I realy do like this fic. I do hope that you update soon. I can't wait to you start makeing lemonaid. Keep up the great work.
kei yotokana- Sat 11 Nov 2006
I love the story but I just wanted to say that you have 2 little problems with it...1. you have small spelling mistakes here and there like in one part instead of typing night you typed might...and 2.you seem to repeat yourself alot.....but besides that it's perfect...update soon...and can you tell me the next time you update because I can't keep track of shit latly and I said the same damn thing you have Kagome saying when someone calls me a bitch...UDATE SOON!! Ja ne!
kei yotokana- Sat 11 Nov 2006
I love the story but I just wanted to say that you have 2 little problems with it...1. you have small spelling mistakes here and there like in one part instead of typing night you typed might...and 2.you seem to repeat yourself alot.....but besides that it's perfect...update soon...and can you tell me the next time you update because I can't keep track of shit latly and I said the same damn thing you have Kagome saying when someone calls me a bitch...UDATE SOON!! Ja ne!
bluemoon_175- Fri 10 Nov 2006
Please you must write more, I have never been more excited to wait for an update. I hope you keep up the job well done, also this story sounds fantastic. So PLEASE UPDATE as SOON as you can.
Brandie- Mon 06 Nov 2006
I was just wondering when you will post new chapters
swtdrm01- Thu 19 Oct 2006
I loved it! Thank you for updating. I hope you plan to update soon because it is getting very interesting.
Kei Yotokana- Sat 30 Sep 2006
OMFG!!! I love this fic. it's not going too fast like some people make it and sesshomaru is in his RIGHT mind. now your not the first person i've read a good fic. like this.... BUT.... you are the first i've read a good fic like this in.....Kagome's time(I can't think right now sorry I don't know a better way to put it). Update soon or I WILL be sad and mad(and you DON'T want that to happen trust me!). Ja ne!!
~Kei~
TAJE- Mon 04 Sep 2006
Love it so far. Very well written. Will continue
liza- Sat 02 Sep 2006
Hi !!!
I liked your story a lot, I cant wait untill you update!!!! I want to know how will she react if she finds that the big dog youkai is Inutaisho.
Ja ne!!
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