| up date!!!!!!!!!! update !!!!!!!!!!!!!update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
michelle- Sat 02 Sep 2006
| i started to read ur chapters and im really into them now PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!!!!
Samantha- Sat 17 Jun 2006
| It was awsome!!!!!!! Please write more!!!!!
cherry- Fri 16 Jun 2006
| that was great. Good job.
| I love this story. It's a great idea! You could use a little work with the way you write, but other than that it is a great idea. I got a little confused on some of the dialouge (probably spelled that wrong). Try using the character's name after they say something. EX: "This is Inuyasha's wench," Sesshomaru spat angrily. I rememeber reading that you said that this was your first fic. I wish you luck and look forward to future chapters. BTW you have this listed as completed. Is there a reason for that?
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