i like how you do kagome in this fic, shes awesome! keep up the great work!
wow! please continue... It's been good from the beginning, but i am so drawn into your story, that I want to keep reading.
I'll be waiting..
toni- Sat 12 Jul 2008
oh! last paragraphs were hot!!!!!!!! how come noone aware of kanna's doing?! when will Sesshy's father hears about this?
I wish I could rate this fic higher than a 10. Because Lord knows it deserves it. This is the most interesting fic I have ever read and it holds everything from romance to adventure, Great job!
REDWOLF
I LOVE IT!!! YOU ROCK!!!!
megs- Wed 11 Jun 2008
have I mentioned that you are the greatest!? This story is wonderful and I cant wait for the next chapter.
moniq- Tue 10 Jun 2008
YAY you updated, Woot.
that chappie was awesum, update ASAP!
MONIQ
UtterChaos247- Wed 27 Feb 2008
awesome, i love this fanfic.
--i await ur update--
*^_^*
beckyducky (not logged in)- Tue 19 Feb 2008
WOW!!! I absolutely love your fic!! AND YOU UPDATED!!! It's hands down one of the best AU fics I've ever read!!
Great chapter! I was very excited to see an update, keep up the great work!
daniela gonzalez- Sat 05 Jan 2008
dude i was wondering when it would finally come out this was the first story that i read when i first came to a-s-s ive grown attach to the story cause it was cool and had envoule amazing things
?- Thu 08 Nov 2007
Hn.
Faby- Thu 08 Nov 2007
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
WWWWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWW!!
And write some dude you rock!!!!!
SO, make more!!!!!!
BYE,
Faby
(PS) currently at home, so , until Dec. than I go to mexico,so :`{
megs- Mon 22 Oct 2007
*glares* im beginning to think you like torturing people! You write this awesome story...and then disappear for awhile and leave us hanging *cries* so not fair!
snowbird- Sat 20 Oct 2007
OK---It was officially 2 months on 10/8. Where's the update? You said it would be about that amout of time for your next update due to your new schedule. Please????? Try to squeeze in an update!!!!!!!
snowbird- Tue 02 Oct 2007
Please!!!!!!!!!!!! When are you going to update? It's been far too long. I'm a frustrated fan. I hope everything is ok with you. Even if you can't update regularly, just let your fans know why.
megs- Thu 27 Sep 2007
why the cliffhanger!? do you hate us that much? *sniffles* Thats okay though....I still love your story...it's the best, though Im waiting for Kagome just to go off on Sesshomaru and beat his ass
snowbird- Thu 30 Aug 2007
I'm in love with this delightful little story. I'm glad you have youkai in the modern age. It aggravates me when I come across a good plot for the modern age only to find that the author has made all the characters human. I then abandon the story. Being youkai is part of the fascination of certain characters, so why take that away? That's one of the reasons I like your story. Now I just anxiously await your next update.
Michelle- Sat 25 Aug 2007
Hey i think I have told you this before but your story is my absolute favorite. Would you be so kind as to email me when you update again please. kikyot@yahoo.com Thank you so very much. Michelle
Vinnievoodoo084- Sat 18 Aug 2007
I love this story. It Absolutly captivates me. Please Continue.
anime_fan141- Sat 11 Aug 2007
this is a very awsome story i deffently hope to read more soon. . i cant wait to read what will happen next and so on. update sooon and keep u p the great work
jade- Fri 10 Aug 2007
can't wait till the next chapter
annemarie- Thu 09 Aug 2007
OMG i love you !!!!! you posted another chapter!!!!!!!! i have been following your story form the begging and i love it i cant wait till you finish it :)
krysba88- Thu 09 Aug 2007
for love of all that is holy update with more chapters already I hate these damn cliffhangers.
toni- Thu 09 Aug 2007
oh my!!!! i'm so glad u updated Kiba, i was beginning to wonder where u went. ahahah. A VERY INTERESTING CHAPTER... I'M IMPATIENTLY wondering how Kagome would take the news!!!!!
A really nice story! Please update soon!!!! Luv all of the chapters!!!
A really nice story! Please update soon!!!! Luv all of the chapters!!!
Michelle- Tue 03 Jul 2007
Hey omg im in love with this story. As soon as you have the next chapter up please let me know you can contact me on myspace ar yahoo
kikyot@yahoo.com
www.myspace.com/antiangel666
Thank you
Kanazawa- Fri 22 Jun 2007
OMG!! Please please please update soon. I love this story!! Beatifully well written-- and what a plot!! update, update, update (please :))
tenshineavehl- Thu 31 May 2007
HURRAY!!!!!!!!!! A NEW ADDITION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love this story!! i hope you can find time now that school years are coming to the end (although it IS cram-time....) to update again soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~tenchneavehl
megs- Tue 08 May 2007
KIBA!!!! hehe....Ive been waiting for you to continue on with thisn story....and I wasnt disappointed. YAY! I love this story....Its easy to see you put a LOT of thought into it...cant wait for more
patricia- Sat 05 May 2007
i sooooooo!!!! love you please update soon o and i think that after kagome meats the fox's once more sesshoumaru should get taken over by his beast and Seduce kagome any who please up date soon love you by
nIcOlE- Sat 05 May 2007
it's about time ya know!!!
alandrias- Tue 24 Apr 2007
*screams* NOOOOOOOOO YOU CANT LEAVE IT THERE! NEED MORE AND I NEED IT NOW!!!!! *wails*
Lady Kagome-sama(^_^)- Thu 05 Apr 2007
plz PLZ kiba-san make another CHAPPIE :p
arigotu,
Kag-sama
I must say i think it does deserve a nomination as best au. I just hope you compelete it soon. I'm glad i was bored and going through the noms and found it.
killer_butterfly161- Sat 24 Mar 2007
This fanfic was awesome. Please write more I would like to see how the relationships are going to pan out. :>
nicole- Thu 22 Mar 2007
I dont know when you last updated this fic but I do hope so that you could update soon because the hold up is driving me insane!!! All, everything about this fic is perfect and the idea is very uniqe. At first, I thought this fic is all about fucking only but when I read it more, I found it intresting and oh...... Gomen nasai for my first review, I hope would accept my apology. Oh, I almost forgot, if you have the ability to draw, um could you plz.. draw a picture of the kitsune twins and if you could'nt,ask somebody and post it to the Fanart section of this site if its not a bother.. thanks a lot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
nicole- Fri 16 Mar 2007
Great ,a fucking school in which pupils are taught how to fuck another pupil. Say kiba , you got a unique idea there!
Metis- Thu 08 Mar 2007
I see the teachers are still as meddling as ever. Anyone who thinks they can just arbitrarily erase my memory better enjoy free form skydiving! Grrr! I SO want them to be thrwarted in some way! ...Anyway, thanks for the update.
Rven88- Mon 05 Mar 2007
Woohooo:) go Kiba! I can't wait to read the next chapter, and welcome back to the world of writing. Have fun and be yourself you will do great I know it:)
sesshou's gurl- Mon 05 Mar 2007
Update soon.!!!! I like it. I can 't wait. Updates!!!!
vaneles- Mon 05 Mar 2007
wonderful! ^_^ until next time...
localsamurai- Mon 05 Mar 2007
Yeah! Bring on Spring!!!!
nice...very nice...im glade with the way that chapter turned out...
mangadreams- Mon 05 Mar 2007
luv the chapter:)
greeneyes- Mon 05 Mar 2007
This is one of the better fics I have read! There is so much that you can do with this fic since you have introduced so many different things that could happen! I see a great fic here! I hope that you know how much many of your readers enjoy this fic! Thank You!
KIBA!! we need more!!!!
Artemis13- Sun 25 Feb 2007
KIBA!!!!!!!!! your KILLIN me here!
Artemis13- Tue 20 Feb 2007
come on!!!! GIVE US SOME MORE!!!
Artemis13- Fri 16 Feb 2007
OMG!!! this is really good...PLEASE poast more chapters SOON!!!!....and do u think u can make them a lil bit long too?
ashley-kun- Tue 13 Feb 2007
wwwwwwwrrrrrrrrrrriiiteee mmmooorreee!!!!!!!! plz
Mari- Tue 09 Jan 2007
OMG where did they go?!?!
As always loved it.
Mari
Mari- Tue 09 Jan 2007
OMG where did they go?!?!
As always loved it.
Mari
eternal_indifference- Sun 07 Jan 2007
Very well made, I must say. This is turning out to be a most promising fic. I will agree with everyone else in saying, please, continue. You're brand of writing is so rare that it's addicting, if you don't mind my saying. Better than any drink I've ever had, if I do say so myself. Congrats on the good job and good luck with the following chapters, not like you need it, but still. You have my support.
eternal_indifference
F.V.- Sat 06 Jan 2007
Forget what I wrote eariler (-_-?)
,but I still want U to keep writing so U can make a part 2,3, & 4.
Farwell,great author, Kiba.
Faby
Favi- Sat 06 Jan 2007
UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!
OMG!!! OMG!!! U Are the greatest, So please make it longer about 50 Chapters:) If U don't I think I gonna cry!!!:( And it would be cold if Kagura saw Kagome pinned to a wall by Sesshoumaru and Kissing her, but before this Sesshoumaru and Kagome should starting fighting(verbally) kind of like this.
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Kagome yelling with tears coming out of her red eyes and down her cheeks " Go back to your-your-your Bitch, YOU..don't.. FUCKEN LOVE ME!!!! "
(this means thought)
Sesshoumaru (HOW DARE SHE QUESTION MEEE!!!!!!! I WILL SHOW HER SHE IS WRONG!)
Sesshoumaru with dark deep red eyes " That is IT KAGOME."
Sesshoumaru grabbed her wrists,wrist over wrist,and over her head.
Sesshoumaru than pressed his lips on her.Licking her lips and then KISSING her.
Instantly wanting entrance into her mouth her.
*******************************************Okay well ya get the point ! :)
XO
OH Ya Make a part 2,3,& 4, U know like the high schools,cause yer really great so U should contine!!
XP Sorry
Hello & good bye,
Faby @.@
phishbon3s- Thu 04 Jan 2007
NOOOOOOOO!!!!! I want the twins in one piece damnit!!!!! Please Kiba-sama, don't hurt the twins!!!!!
*sobs*
Unseen Watcher- Tue 02 Jan 2007
Here's hoping all three of them end up in a nasty way. Preferably an embarrassing scenario.
swtdrm01- Tue 02 Jan 2007
I loved it! Thank you for updating. Please update again soon.
Kuma- Tue 02 Jan 2007
im sorry to say this but i hope koga wins i hate those lil kitsune creeps
mszbrownangel- Tue 02 Jan 2007
yayyyy yuuu updatedd
=)
keep up the good work and try to update sooner
=)
bye bye
mszbrownangel
awesome chapter sorry i couldn't write sooner my internet blew and i had to buy a new conector... money money man u'd hate looking for scarps of money lol
Ren Taisho- Tue 26 Dec 2006
OoOoOoOoOoOo kiba-chan hiya i read it again and cant get enough it soooo good hahahaha haha kagura is a slut kagura is a slut hah ha haha ha well i havent talked to you in a while so question 1- how are you did you do good on mid-terms is it snowing tell me tell me!!
Mari- Wed 13 Dec 2006
loved it. please update soon
kuma- Tue 12 Dec 2006
those kitsunes are bad lil boys...update soon
OMG! OMG! OMG! How did I not know about you until now!!! It's taken my over nine hours just to read this fic but it was well worth it. I love it!!!!!!!!! I'm definitely gonna be looking for updates.
cool please update soon
i wanna see what those kitsunes are gonna do!!!!!!! ^_^
Saiyo-san- Fri 08 Dec 2006
ilove your storyand i hope you can update it soon
I am even telling you to update on this website too! [see I sent you 2 reviews today-one in fanfiction and 1 here] this must show my desperation for another chappie, ne?
-Dani.
^_~
ok like i know i cant talk cuz i havent updated my fics in a while but like i really NEED u to update NOW! thanx ur doing a great job btw smooches
I read this chapter already...where is chappie 18? I need an update pwease.
-Dani.
The drama and suspense is killing me.
awesome two chapters ^^ i'm back and happy i kind of miss reading fics off of ssp!! ^^ can't wait till u update!!
Gummi- Tue 24 Oct 2006
This story is intresitng, and fun to read to see what would happen next.
Anyway, some of the things in here That uncannily remind me of books/shows I have seen/read.
Not that's a bad thing,
Like the School, Have you ever read the Childeren of the Red King or better known as the Charlie bone books? They Have a school system like the one you have in here. (Capes, bording, and the three departments.)
And the Twins, Remeind me of the Twins of Oban High School Host Club.
Keep up the Awasome work!
Ren Taisho- Sat 21 Oct 2006
oOoOoOoOo kiba-chan this chappie is awmazing kagome has poison acid liqued stuff like sesshou i cant wait !!!! and sorry if i havent talk i a while ya might not believe me but my f**kin' computer practically hates me it wont let me check my e-mails so just ta ask some question i am
kiba how are you ??
dont worry your my buddy and i am never gonna forget you
kiba your the best writer ever!!!
how is skool??
have your parent been paranoid??
mine have been totally pushing my buttons well i miss ya kiba-chan hope to write to you soon bye bye!!! :])
dez- Mon 16 Oct 2006
great job! :) I can't wait until ur next chapter.
kagsesskyo- Sun 15 Oct 2006
That was great !!!! PLZ update soon!!!!
Because I Can- Sat 14 Oct 2006
You know why you come up with all these great ideas. It's cause the story has a life of it's own. It comes up with the ideas u just don't realise it.
lol anyway I can't wait for the next chapter.
Saiyo-san- Thu 12 Oct 2006
i love your story! please update soon!
Ren Taisho- Tue 03 Oct 2006
OMG!! kiba-chan that was soo good its soo much i cant take it i thought kikyou was a good guy--er girl and the kitsune twins WTF i thought they were CREEPY good guys well besides taht THis chapter is awsome and i am sorry that i didnt reply i still cant check e-mail even with the new one isnt that odd well anyways tell me when the next chappie is up
P.S how are you doing in life??
Ren Taisho- Tue 03 Oct 2006
OMG!! kiba-chan that was soo good its soo much i cant take it i thought kikyou was a good guy--er girl and the kitsune twins WTF i thought they were CREEPY good guys well besides taht THis chapter is awsome and i am sorry that i didnt reply i still cant check e-mail even with the new one isnt that odd well anyways tell me when the next chappie is up
P.S how are you doing in life??
Because I Can- Thu 28 Sep 2006
That was a great chapter Kiba-kun. Those Kitsune brothers are great. I live when evil comes in pairs.
Because I Can
Raven88- Wed 27 Sep 2006
OOHH! More Chapters Please:)?
KogasGirl- Tue 26 Sep 2006
You know the drill! ^_^ Update as soon as possible!
Kambri_Jade- Tue 26 Sep 2006
What a great chapter! i can't wait till the next one, Keep up the good work. Update ASAP!
Later,
Kambri_Jade
ShadowChick- Mon 25 Sep 2006
THANK-YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it felt like u took a year awesme i luv it!!
Raven88- Sun 17 Sep 2006
Please more chapters?
ShadowChick- Mon 11 Sep 2006
i love its hilarious u should keep it going
UNKNOWN- Fri 08 Sep 2006
NEEEWWWW CHAPPIE, PLEASE!!!!! THANKS A BILLION, NOW GET WORKING ON IT!!!! PLEASE N THANK YOU.
Because I Can- Tue 05 Sep 2006
Hey Kiba r u gonna continue this fic? I really hope u do. E-mail me or somthin.
Mari- Sun 27 Aug 2006
hey there think that it was a great idea to bring in the two kitsuns. it will like you said give sesshoumaru a reason to be jellous(sp). so cant wait for the next update.
keep them comming
Arianna- Sun 27 Aug 2006
YAY!!! I'm so glad you put up another chapter! I really do love the concept of this fic and you write well so it's truly an enjoyable experience. Please keep it up!
awesome chapter ^^ the twins kind of act like the twins from ouran high school host club lol evil, tricksters and yet love to play games with others lives lol, can't wait for the next chapter hope it's soon but i can wait for chapter 16 a little longer i guess lol ^^
Eicco- Fri 25 Aug 2006
OMG!. update update update update!.. :| not cool to keep people waiting... *wwwaiillllsssss* Yeah yeah. Got hooked on it like.....chips.. :| good story. very good :D well..yeah long enough reveiw thingymabobber. mostly blabbing. but yeah UPDATE SOON! :D
KogasGirl- Fri 25 Aug 2006
Update soon!
Metis- Thu 24 Aug 2006
Good. A bit of competition should help to resolve some inner conflicts. In various people.
Because I Can- Thu 24 Aug 2006
Yaaa. I'm so glad u updated. I liked how you brought the twins in, they seem like really interesting characters. To bad Sess will have to kick their asses.
Well untill next time.
Because I Can
Aurora Potter- Thu 24 Aug 2006
That was cute...........good work
phish_bon3s- Wed 23 Aug 2006
*le sigh*
If Kags doesn't want the twins, I do!!!!! I love twins!!!
The Weasley twins, (expectally in the 4th movie, when they seemed to be sporting a beatles look (or was it the 3rd movie?!. crap) well, they are still kawaii and my favorite (with snape, now if he had a twin.... *drools*))
the twins form Ouran Host Club (symmatry), and now your boys are on the list. Congradulations!!! *squeal*
Samantha- Wed 23 Aug 2006
Update soon! Peace.
i luv it! plz update oon! plz adn thanx!
helikesitheymikey!- Wed 23 Aug 2006
WOW! SESSY WILL BE KEPT ON HIS TOES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
....when's spring again???
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Because I Can- Sun 20 Aug 2006
hey are u gonna update soon. I miss ur story.
Because I Can- Sun 20 Aug 2006
hey are u gonna update soon. I miss ur story.
Unseen Watcher- Sat 19 Aug 2006
She needs to learn control and he is stubborn. I don't like the idea of being controlled by instincts, but I'm glad he is effected too.
Faithful Vampire- Fri 18 Aug 2006
ooooooooooooh!!!!!!!!! please update soon!!!!!!!! i really love reading this story!! ^_^ Thanks for writing it!
Mari- Thu 17 Aug 2006
loving this story. it is very intresting to see all the detail that you have inputed into it. can't wait for the next update.
Mari
Ookami_K.- Tue 08 Aug 2006
Wow, what a story took me some time to read all 14 chaps but I did and I have to say that I loved the story its full of unexpected events pleasing to the eyes.... Anyways update soon I can't wait to read more.
thanx for updateing!! plz update soon! plz and thanx!
helikesitheymikey!- Mon 07 Aug 2006
Inu no baka, Sesshomaru!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I really can hardly wait for Kagome to come home pregnant and try to kill her mother!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I wonder what Sess's dad will think when he finds out that his son mated his best friend's daughter...
said daughter will probably be squished in a hug!
I really like this story!
Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YASHA_YURI_79- Mon 07 Aug 2006
THIS IS MY FAV STORY PLEASE UPDATE SOON..
swtdrm01- Mon 07 Aug 2006
I can't wait for the next chapter.
Eternityoftears- Mon 07 Aug 2006
simply Amazing!!
^_^
KogasGirl- Mon 07 Aug 2006
Please update as soon as possible!
Unseen Watcher- Mon 07 Aug 2006
I'm glad that they're getting along better, even if I'm sulking that she's doing it against her higher will and playing into the stupid school's plans. I Hate being cooperative to manipulation!
Azmaira- Sun 06 Aug 2006
Very good story. Please keep writing more so everyone can read it. ^-^
Fireice- Wed 02 Aug 2006
Hey, I just wanted to tell you that your story 'Breeding School...' is an awesome fic. I haven't read one this good in a long, long time, lol. It's such a shame that you have to wade through all the not so good ones to find the ones that are expertly written, which I think that yours is. Keep up the good work, I've never read a story that had a story plot like this before, so I was hooked after pretty much the very first chapter, lol. Well, I think I've written a long enough review, lol. Can't wait for the next chapter.
--fireice
Ren Taisho- Wed 02 Aug 2006
kiba sorry i havent replied to any of your e-mail messages my network passport still doesnt work so i still love the story and kagura is a bitch hahahaha i hope that she is tortured cause i hate hurt when she is a bitch !! keep up the fantastsic work kiba-chan ok
Ren Taisho- Thu 27 Jul 2006
Hahahaha kagura is a snobby whore that is a bitch that likes to get in trouble yes good chapter very good i always hated kagura it good to see her getting waht she deserves but i am confused about the whole lunch time sesshoumaru calming kagome thing plz explain and tell when next chappie is up ok kiba-chan gtg bye
WhiteUsagi- Thu 27 Jul 2006
i LOVED it!! you really should update. i cant wait to see what happens next.
Your Wonderful
Because I Can- Wed 26 Jul 2006
Awsome as usual. the storie keeps getting better. and it seems that they might start to become a couple soon. Keep it up. I'll be around.
Metis- Wed 26 Jul 2006
Wow. The teachers actually have a clue and are not just meddlesome matchmakers. Who knew. I'm glad she responds to him and is mostly Inu, though he shoud still bleed for his presumtion. *shrugs* Ah, well. As for other pairings, dun care. THEY'RE what's importante to me.
mitch- Wed 26 Jul 2006
yay!!another chapter!!!!!!^.^keep writing!!
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