| that was wonderful! it was sad and made me cry, but it was genius, i loved it it! please write more, i really want to read more! ^ ^
KillingPerfection- Mon 03 Jul 2006
that was sad. i liked the ending were Tao finally told her what he felt deep inside. and the part were they weren't aware of the wet amber eyes staring down at the ground with shame.
great job! ^_^
you should totally write the next chapter! PLEZ????!!!!
| you and me both. that was sad tell me are you going to update to one on fanfiction cause I'm seriously addicted know i cant wait to see what happens. when do we meet fullfys perants? thank you for taking the time to write this story your a great writer and i look forward to reading more of you work.
XxMoon_FlowerxX- Thu 08 Jun 2006
WAAAH! Chapter 21 was so... emotional. It made me almost wanna cry! Almost. Hehe. As I said before, your fiction is THE GREATEST. I can't wait until chapter 22!! Hmm... I wonder what will happen... ^__^
XxMoon_FlowerxX
Cochrann- Thu 08 Jun 2006
| Well, the story seems to be progressing in a good direction...but if those two don't get together...I am sooo going to be balling my eyes out!!!
Cochrann- Thu 08 Jun 2006
| Well, the story seems to be progressing in a good direction...but if those two don't get together...I am sooo going to be balling my eyes out!!!
Benni- Thu 08 Jun 2006
| that's really sad but isn't it the same chapter as the one from your old story?
Ooooh! *sniff* this so SAD! Our sweet Sesshou is getting what he deserves though, but please! Make them a happy family. They all love each other so much! pleeee-aaa-see *bursts out crying*
I'll be waiting for you next update! XO
kanela
Kuma- Thu 08 Jun 2006
| well that brings back child hood memories...tao will get over it i did...anyways lol update soon *brings out a camera* now where is that crying sesshou
SesshomaruCrazy- Thu 08 Jun 2006
OOhhh my god.. What a chapter...
This is getting greater as you write... PLZ,,,PLZ,, Let them get back together...But make Sessy pay for being so bad.. LOL.. Kags needs lots of TLC and make him give it to her.. I got so chocked up at the end of this chapter.. Great writing agian..
Hurry and up date.. PLZ..
Mari
niru- Thu 08 Jun 2006
hey have you reposted your story.
well becauseI've read your fullstory before..is it thesame oneasbefore where they finally dance together and sessh changes the diapers of the baby and she does not know what to do ,that is get back with him...he reconciles with her....is it the same one
XxMoon_FlowerxX- Thu 08 Jun 2006
Oooo, I love it! Your fiction is THE best! Hahah. Damn cliffy... well whatever! I can't WAIT until the next update.
XxMoon_FlowerxX
Kuma(not logged in)- Wed 07 Jun 2006
| its gettin good...i hope the babys okay...yeah i hope its a girl 2
SesshomaruCrazy- Wed 07 Jun 2006
Oh no not another cliffy... Just get them back together already.... Lets hope its a girl...
Nice writting.. I have been enjoying reading this story... So Hurry plz..
Mari
Cochrann- Wed 07 Jun 2006
| This plot has more twists in it than I've ever seen before and yet it still makes sense...quite an accomplishment I must say. Update Soon!!
| Pleeeeeeeeeeeease! I'll give you everything! My...my.. SOUL! UPDATE!!
| its even better than before i hope they get back together sess/kag 4 life ^_^ update update update -_~ or else
Valire- Tue 06 Jun 2006
| I'm so glad your back and in action. Congrates on graduating, and I hope you update a few more of your stories. Totally can't wait to see what you have planned
oh no what a cliffy... Cant wait to see what happens next.. Thanks for the quick chapters.. Hurry and post the next one plz...
Mari
| yes u should its really really really good im addicted its so good update soon please
Cochrann- Tue 06 Jun 2006
| you reposted chapter 2 as chapter 5
...- Tue 06 Jun 2006
| Your italic tag in the summary is messed up.
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