I love this newest chapter. I have been following along with this story from the beginning, and have not fallen away even for the wait in between. This was funney, gratifying, and portrayed Kagome and her non-scariness quite well. But what can I say, a kitten may be cute but it still has claws.
WhiteRose-Kurama- Thu 29 May 2008
Wow! I just love how things are finally moving. I hope they find her soon. Do they all know about the powers of those rings? Also, where do u plan on moving ur fics to? Cuz I can't get enough of the loopy chaos that the rings have caused. Keep up the good work. :P
HeartStar- Sun 04 May 2008
I can not wait please i love this story please update soon and if you are on another site please let me know.
HeartStar- Sun 04 May 2008
I can not wait please i love this story please update soon and if you are on another site please let me know.
OMG i love this story it is so funny and creative cant wait for an update
:O:O:O IM SO EXCITED!!! You finally updated. I could just pee myself in excitement. But I wont, for my own sake and my clothes. OMGSOEXCITEDYAY!
Sola- Thu 10 Apr 2008
OH MY GODS YOU UPDATED!
and I now remmeber why I love this story so much! MORE please
could you tell me when you update this fic please?
'How ironic would it be if he were to take a would-be lover from his half-brother, who was the result of his father taking his own lover?'
(chuckles lasciviously)
I am so taken with the above sentence from this story. Clever, Sexy, Ruthless.
(shivers like a hopeless hentai with anticipation to see how this pans out)
rowdysgirl- Thu 10 Apr 2008
OH HAPPY HAPPY dance dance HAPPY HAPPY dance dance!
You're still writing! And I enjoyed it very much! Thank you so much!
Katie- Thu 10 Apr 2008
omg i almost peed my pants when i saw that you updated! I am so excited! im reviewing before i read the chapter ... this is one of my favorite stroeis ever .. so funny... anyway i hope you keep updating and thanks!
Oh please update soon, this is an incredible story! I couldn't stop reading and I'm looking forward to more.
i love this story! i was so disappointed when the story ended abruptly, but now im happy since you've decided to continue! keep up the great work! :D
itachiiyoubastard- Wed 09 Apr 2008
It seems all the authors I so know and love decided April of 2008 was a good day to finally come back. Devoted fans should not have to wait this long people! *shakes fist into air* Love it anways. C=
dsm1980- Wed 09 Apr 2008
Wow! She's back!!! Good to see you haven't lost the magic touch :) Hope you don't keep us fans hanging too long. Any more, and we'll burst! BTW, is it just me or did the razor seem to come straight from Demon Barber of Fleet Street? ;)
Thank you so much for continuing this story! It is such a fun one and well written which makes it a joy to read. Please keep going with it!
I cant tell you how much I enjoy your stories, not only are they hilarious but they portray the human and youkai mind in such a way that its so easy to relate to. I mean come on who wouldn't want to know what Sesshoumaru is thining, I know i would give almost anything.
The decoder rings are pure genius, really I mean it. Not only is it original but it's funny as hell!
Thank you for the wonderful read, the great laughts, and for the look into the mind of a hentai Inu Tai Youkai.
---Chibi-chan
sujin- Fri 29 Feb 2008
honestly, when will sesshoumaru realize how much he has hurt kagome? with his stupid bet and all. i do feel bad for koga, being rejected and then beaten. shippo is so cute, hahahaha i love him! well i hope the snake lady is killed, and i hope kagome gives many pieces of her mind to all three jerks.
jaderinx0x- Mon 12 Nov 2007
OMG!! this is SO good!
but please when are you going to continue with it!!
omg i wanna know really bad whats gonna happen!!!
when are you going to put up the new chapter????
xxxxxxxxx keep up the GREAT work! can't wait to read the next instalments.
Kariah- Thu 26 Jul 2007
This chapter took over my brain and commanded that I comment. I almost died of embarrasment reading this. When Sesshomaru ran his hand through his hair and said that females loved that, my mind stuttered to a stop, because all I could think was Kagome. Has. The. Ring.
It was about then that my mind went 'Uh-oh' and my heart went out to poor Sesshomaru. Then he flipped his hair and gave that "rare smile" -- I was so embarrassed for him, I had to stop reading for a minute and just LAUGH. You are a brilliant writer. Was it hard for you to portray this scene with a straight face?
This is a wonderful story and congratulations on placing 2nd in humor. You definitely deserve it!!!
Love the story, it's cracked me up alot, can't wait for the next update!!
Akasha- Wed 25 Jul 2007
Love this piece of fiction but why haven't you finished it?
You know...when I first saw this story here..I kind of, well, skipped over it. Mostly because it wasn't complete, and I already have about 20-something incomplete stories I am reading...but I was over at AFF, and I saw the same story posted there, and gave in and started reading it. WOW. I REALLY, REALLY love this story! I hope you update soon, because I am dying to know what happens next! I love the humor you have added to everything, and it makes the story such a fun read! Please continue soon! You crack me up, and the plot is great, too. I can't wait to read more. :)
Please update soon! I laughed my head off thru this and really want to know how you are ending it.
Kanazawa- Tue 08 May 2007
wow, just wow!! I can't wait to read what happens next... What a wonderful idea for a story :)
Nikki-kins- Mon 30 Apr 2007
oh wow, i like this one alot.
If you wouldn't mind emailing me when you update so i could read the rest? i'd appreciate it :3
girlygirl- Mon 23 Apr 2007
When are you going to update? I've been missing this fic! what's going to happen to kagome?
Lady Skyfire- Mon 05 Mar 2007
*stares dumbfounded* theres...no more? *dies* This fic rox my sox! Need more! *dies some more* Excellent work so far, I'm in stitches and on the edge of my seat! I can't wait for you next update! Thanks for posting this!! ^^
Taje- Tue 30 Jan 2007
YES! Very interesting beginning. All that cereal! Boy! I shall read on.
so.... snake woman captured kagome to get to sesshoumaru? hmm... ... ... EVIL BITCH! poison? gosh she's a cheat (sorry in a 'stick-up-for-kaogme- mood..) anywya i love this story! it's by far one of the funniest, twisted, slightly dramatic, and oh, so perverted stories i have ever read! i love it!
Chaos-and-Serenity- Tue 23 Jan 2007
Great chapter! Sesshoumaru was a trip! "He’d play poker, he decided." I loved how he treated Kouga! Pinky and the Brain were quite hilarious as well.
The snake bitch needs to die. I almost feel bad that Kagome's dirty little secret will (most likely) be revealed, but it was pretty selfish. Shit, I'd have done it too! I take it that only Kagome, or a priestess, can use the rings' telepathic capabilities. Hence, why the snake lady's minions were chucking them at her - so she could 'activate' them? Just a guess. Sesshoumaru is not going to be happy...
I can't wait for the next chapter. This story is a blast to read, which is why it's spanned three quarters in the IYFG. Good luck to you there!
wackywisher- Mon 22 Jan 2007
great story! can't wait to see what's up next!!!
Rinseternalsoul- Sun 21 Jan 2007
Congrat's on the nomination's. This story is very funny. I'm sure it will win. This chapter was strange at first, then I realized what those idiot 'bad guys' were up to by throwing those rings at Kagome. And poor Kagome! It looks like things have come full circle. A confession may be in order soon. I hope Sesshomaru forgives her - maybe after a good spanking. LOL!
lilmoe31- Sun 21 Jan 2007
That was a great chapter. I just love cliffhangers. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Gina- Sat 20 Jan 2007
O_O wah!! such an evil cliffhanger!!
and I have to wait another month or so for an update, *whimper*
But I made to this chapter and I can do it again! *strikes a pose*
Quite good. One question though...are Sesshoumaru and Kagome -ever- going to do the nasty?
clavira- Sat 20 Jan 2007
well... that's an interesting turn of events. I wonder if Sesshoumaru will kill her, even if she doesn't tell the formula for the youkai-features-disguise-thingy or if he will just torture and kill her and then revive her with Tensaiga until she gives in...
but I'm sure he's gonna be pissed.
I get it now!!
Rea- Sat 20 Jan 2007
I love this story. It's so funny. Waiting for the next chapter. Keep up the good work
Leira and Frooky- Sun 14 Jan 2007
oh same person but i wanted to ask if maybe you might have the insporation to put some seen with them playing DDR (Dance Dance Revalution) or spenner ^_^ some where in a fucher ch. i just got the game and i'm so hooked on it!! i played for like 3hour strate the other day man that was x__X but fun, very fun!
loved the ch and i still can't wait for more!
Leira ^.~
Leira and Frooky- Sun 14 Jan 2007
Yay! fun fun fun! well kind of, kag is capchered again.-_- you know she needs to get better at this whole deffend your-self thing! anyways i can't wait for the next ch! ^.^
Addah- Sat 06 Jan 2007
Kagome Better Put A Hurt On Snake Lady.
thehotty- Wed 03 Jan 2007
You really need to get this thing moving faster. I really like it, but it took you quite a while to get chapter 14 up. It's a really good story.
YAY!!!! That's the kagome that I love ::grins:: I'm glad she set the idot wolf straight
lilmoe31- Mon 01 Jan 2007
Once again you have done it, bringging out another great chapter. Thanks for that one and can't wait for the next. I believe that it takes you about a month and a half to sent out your next chapter, so I see you then. Once again great chapter. Thank you so much for this ff, it is really a very good read and wonderful storyline.
Kit- Sun 31 Dec 2006
AWESOME!!! Can't wait for more...btw, do you have a mailing list that I can be added to? ^^; It would be very helpful
nada- Sun 31 Dec 2006
awesome fic!!
plz update it soon
Gabby- Sun 31 Dec 2006
My love for Kouga is conflicting with my love for Kagome. D:
And Sesshy's seeming like an uber jerk. :C
o well
PunkrockerX- Sat 30 Dec 2006
wow....what a chapter...i feel a little bad Kouga; keyword a little. so what's with the snake lady? she's gonna steal kagome's beauty or something??? lolz. well please update soon!!!
Tana-san- Sat 30 Dec 2006
You got what it takes to love a character in one scene and hate in the next, then feel sorry for him in the next one. Man, Kouga has got to be one dense and delusional guy. Kagome should know better than to think she's safe in a parking garage alone, be it day or night. You'd think living in the feudal era and seeing all the gruesome stuff happen to women there would help train her intellect to never be alone like that. Besides, what does Mommy and school teach litttle ones about being alone and strangers? Sometimes she's too stubborn for her own good. Great job, as always. Can't wait till Sesshoumaru shows Kagome that sex CAN be enjoyable as well as satisfying. Guys like Kouga are only in it for self gratifacation and it's guys like Sesshoumaru that we crave there were more of. I know Kouga loves her and all, but he hasn't a clue how to make love to a woman. Oh and what's up with snake lady? Is she a decendent of Mistress Centipede therefore wanting to cause Kagome trouble too?
Chaos-and-Serenity- Sat 30 Dec 2006
Alright, Inuyasha nearly killed me this chapter! He stole the spotlight in my eyes! "There wasn't any money involved!" LOL!!! I feel awful for Kouga, but you gotta be frank with guys like that. Kagome, you go girl! She held her own, that's for sure.
I take it the snale demon lady-thing has the human decoder? Maybe...? Anyway, it was an intriguing ending. I guess the snake bitch ain't too happy that her precious Sesshoumaru has it bad for Kagome - and vice versa!
I'm dying to read what happens next! This story is just too entertaining! Love it!
i love this story. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please don't leave us hanging in suspense for too long hehe.
Rinseternalsoul- Sat 30 Dec 2006
It is always such a joy to read your updates. I have laughed so hard, but also felt so horrible for Kouga. I mean, he's dense, but a really good wolf at heart. But oh, Sesshomaru... mmmm.... and speaking french. Ah, the language of love. Very sexy indeed. And it was so perfect for Inuyasha to be with two women! Especially when he tried to justify it because they were twins! HAHA! Too funny! I loved it. The whole thing. Now I'm dying to know what snake-bitch is going to do with our Kagome? Great cliffie!
Squee! I love this story! I want one of those decoder rings darnit. Preferably the one that the creepy snake lady has...more directly to the opposite sex. Although, I think if I did try that...all I'd get would be static. Anyway, good story...dont know why I didn't start reading it sooner..hm.
Elly- Sat 30 Dec 2006
*gasps, cries* why is she being kidnapped...I am assuming it's someone..either after the jewel..>__> perhaps not...
augh! evil cliffhanger. Very nice. Sess was so smexy.
I hope Kagome doesn't get poisoned or anything.
litlest_amazon- Wed 27 Dec 2006
you are so cruel to end on this note!!
Addah- Wed 27 Dec 2006
Please Update Soon Please Please Please!
The Pretend Child- Thu 21 Dec 2006
I hope that there's another chapter coming in the near future. I started reading this story a while ago and had to drop it due to severe studying time. Please finish! that would be the greatest Christmas present ever...That is so sad that she kind of went somewhere with that wolf. Ugh.
Eiko- Wed 13 Dec 2006
OMG i so hate you for that cliffy!!!! Update soon, i'm dying here, i absolutely love this story. Who is it that she sees i'm so curious!!!!!
Addah- Thu 07 Dec 2006
WHAT! A cliffy, u can't do this 2 me! U must update soon.
lilmoe- Tue 05 Dec 2006
I love this story so much. I find myself looking through my emails just to see if you have updated the story,and when seeing that you have its like I've won the lotto or something. Thank you for such a mind blowing story. I have told many people about your fanfic; thoughs who are looking for a good fanfic to read, and thoughs who know nothing about anime. Thats how much I love this tale of love, lost, and a lot of funny stuff. Please don't make us wait to long for the next chapter. Thank you for letting us into your mind. You are truely someone we all can look forward to reading one of the GREATEST fanfics out there.
Frooky and Leira- Mon 04 Dec 2006
i'm soooo~! happy that you send out e-mails when the ch is up! thank you very much!! so witch one is it Inu or Sesshy? but by her respons i would say Sesshy ^__^ i'm feel so hot now. and beleave me that isn't an easy thing with no heat and snow coming down out side. LOVE THE CH! and i can't wait for the next one! KUDOS TO YOU!
Leira ^.~
Anita- Mon 04 Dec 2006
Ohhhh you are so evil a cliffy that was so good by passing koga keeps calling kags his woman please more soon.
Anita- Mon 04 Dec 2006
Ohhhh you are so evil a cliffy that was so good by passing koga keeps calling kags his woman please more soon.
Rinseternalsoul- Sun 03 Dec 2006
God I loved that chapter! I was dying for the moment when Inuyasha and Sesshomaru figured out that Kouga had been with Kagome, and it was everything that I had hoped for! haha! I have laughed so hard! My favorite line was this, when Sesshomaru thought: "It occurred to him in a distant, idle sort of way, as he closed the smoking claws of his right hand around the throat of a much less satisfied wolf demon, that they would have to find a new Lord of the East." HAHA! I'm still laughing! Great job. You so deserve honors for this story. It's been a great read so far, and I know that it will continue to be up until the very last sentence. You really are one of the best Inuyasha fanfiction authors out there.
Yay, I'm so excited!! I can't waaiitt!!!!
ktshabatie- Sun 03 Dec 2006
AMAZING! I can't wait for the next chapter!! :D
ktshabatie- Sun 03 Dec 2006
AMAZING! I can't wait for the next chapter!! :D
Please tell me Sesshoumaru is not with a beautiful woman, too cliche. Or Inuyasha. It would be interesting if the woman jealous of her tried to do something to her which made her mad. But Kagome in a catifht and jealous-BORING!!!
Or she wants to murder Inu and Sesshy for the bet, but what u r implying makes me want to stop reading, tho the story has been good so far. Even her puking her guts out.
Excellent! Once again you display your evil by ending this great chapter in another cliffie (shame!). I'm just glad that everyone is (mostly) on the same page. I can't wait for the next one.
Ninja Rikku- Sat 02 Dec 2006
fantabulous! Update soon please?
SilverWaters- Sat 02 Dec 2006
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Oh, Kami, please let it be Sesshoumaru! I am craving some serious Sesshou/Kagome action. ::Hugs:: Awesome job so far. I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope it will be soon. Good luck!
sess621- Sat 02 Dec 2006
"Hungrier than she thought?" Oh lord, don't tell me she's pregnant now?
AW555- Sat 02 Dec 2006
*Cries* NOO Why must you end it there? It was great! Can't wait for the next one!
tajia- Sat 02 Dec 2006
Awwwwww please update very, soon I am so hooked on this story!
swasdiva- Sat 02 Dec 2006
I...freaking LOVE...this FIC!!!!! How do you *do* that??? Every chapter is better than the last...the mayhem, the misunderstandings, the *testosterone*!!!! I swear, I get giddy with every update. Let the drama ensue!!!
clavira- Sat 02 Dec 2006
Hehe *snickers* Finally she's going to get her revenge - I hope you don't make her give in too soon, I would like to see Inu Yasha and Sesshoumaru sweat. They did afterall make the bet and I know that I would be pissed!!!
Update soon
Fluffy-kins- Sat 02 Dec 2006
EEE!!! I bet it's Inu-Yasha with his groupies!! YAY GROUPIES!!! I'm not sure if that'll work in his favor but more power to him! Sit his ass into oblivion!!! >. I mean if it is him... You don't know how how happy you've made me!! I was wallowing in my boredum and procrastination and you're my hero!! Yay! Update soon!! (SOONER!!!)^.^
You have to update again soon! I must know what happens! I bet Sesshou and Inu are there! Ha! Well update soon. Ja ne!
lilmoe- Fri 24 Nov 2006
I have been looking for a great story to read that has everything, and your fic has just that. It keeps me on edge all while at the same time I'm laughing so hard that I fall out of my chair. Please keep it coming, don't leave us hanging for to long. and again; thanks for your story, I truely love it. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Mrs_Sesshomaru- Sat 18 Nov 2006
Rhiannon! *shakes finger* So now Sesshy is gonna smell Kouga on her & lose his mind. Arg! BUt I must admit... that was too funny! The whole puking thing. Perhaps her having sex with him won't count because he didn't get to finish? You know, spraying his load & all? *LOL gross!* Instead she'd sprayed hers... something chicks aren't supposed to do... Hmmm... *ROTF* You are the bomb! Keep it up.
Kitty Kat- Thu 16 Nov 2006
Haha, I think it was justified that she got her cherry popped by Kouga, not Sessh or Inuyasha. I wonder how she's going to convince Kouga to let her go...?
Kittycat- Thu 16 Nov 2006
NOOOOO! What the hell did you do ruining a story like this! Kagome is that stupid.
With Kuga!? EW
Well it was a good story while it lasted.
You know, I actually LIKE that she slept with Kouga, making it so neither Sesshoumaru or Inuyasha won the bet. I mean it isn't as if she liked or had a good time sleeping with Kouga, if anything she had an awful time.
Can't wait to see what happens next (as always), reactions should be interesting. I wonder if Shippou was the kitsune that helped Sesshoumaru with the rings? (That is, if I remember correctly about a kitsune helping with the rings) If it was, I can easily see how such a trickster would put the added bonus of 'reading demon thoughts' into them.
swasdiva- Mon 13 Nov 2006
I pretty much knew this was going to happen in some form or fashion when they ran into each other, and boy oh boy, you didn't disappoint. Gotta make Sesshou work for it, eh? Especially since he's starting to realize she meant more to him than he'd been aware of. Gah! Another great chapter of a fabulous fic! The twists are mahvelous!
darkjewel- Mon 13 Nov 2006
I loved it! It seems more real now, as opposed to it being a perfect score for Sesshy. And I've been there. Drunk, bummed about a fight, and there's this hot friend that I really didn't see that way . . . next morning you get a hangover and some really bad moments of "Oh, what did I do?" Sesshy gonna have a fit! I can't wait! Nobody touch her fingers while torturing her!!!!
phishbon3s- Mon 13 Nov 2006
Hmmm... *taps pencil* Youkai can smell it... Well, I assume that youkai can smell their coupling. *shrugs* I mean, they can smell innocence... let me do the math.... Kagome - innocence + male/youkai smell = groove thing has occured. That math seems to work. *nods head* Much easier then discussing the improbablity of the well ever being distroyed. That is mind-boggling. I have discussed that on the email ring before. The well forever being distroyed is an universal impossiblity. Continuity will stop you or press the reset button ...... *the sound of gears screeching to a halt* Dear me, I have done it again. Do excuse me. RhiannonoftheMoon-san please take all the time you need and ignore the nay-sayers.
you'er right. killing you would suck because then we wouldn't be able to see kagome and sesshoumaru end up together (in writing, i mean, i can envision them right now, but it's not down in words Xp). so instead, i shall rave....=p this is all to relieve the pressure, i don't think i mean anything in this...
HOW COULD YOU?! YEAH, KOUGA/KAGOME IS CUTE, BUT THIS IS A KAGOME AND SESSHOUMARU SITE! TTATT AND YOU PUT A FREAKING PIMP-SESSHOUMARU TOO..(XD)
*..sigh* i think i'm done =], keep up the good work!
I vow death to the authoress for this catastrophe ::cries::
heh- Mon 13 Nov 2006
lol how disappointing this story has become.. a kagome/kouga? Perhaps I'm wrong but.. any youkai can smell it? So now she's also pregnant for kouga? like I said so much promise in this but.. disappointing. Will she have the baby or have the cliche miscarriage?
Was good while it lasted, take care.
Inusbabe- Mon 13 Nov 2006
OOOHHH NOOO!! Looking forward to more
Kayka- Mon 13 Nov 2006
I rarely review, but this last chapter has me greatly saddened. I can't wait to see this story completed.
Keep up the good work, and more, please!
sesshou_lover- Mon 13 Nov 2006
I won't kill you for the last chapter, but I will say that she is incredibly stupid to continue drinking when she has no tolerance. What did it get her? A night she didn't even enjoy.
lilmoe30- Mon 13 Nov 2006
YOU GO GIRL,
That was the best chapter yet. My jaw dropped to the floor; Kouga and Kagoma. OMG. You have me completely speechless. Sesshomaru is going to be PISSED, but I love it. PLEASE PLEASE don't keep us waiting to long. I have read some of the reviews and some of us can't go on with our lives if you don't antitup another chapter soon.
Rinseternalsoul- Sun 12 Nov 2006
Sadly, I can empathize with Kagome. Been there, done that. Of course, none of them looked as hot as Kouga... but, along with inhibitions goes eyesight... and good sense. Personally, I would have passed on the toast. That would have only made me barf again. Yuck. Well, she knows about the bet and she's screwed herself into a flase relationship. Boy, Kagome has a way of finding trouble. Poor girl. If only the trouble I found was nearly has beautiful with a gleaming set of fangs. *sigh* Great job as always. I look forward to seeing what Sesshomaru thinks of this turn of events. Something tells me he's going to be rather perturbed.
Racheru- Sun 12 Nov 2006
I feel so bad for Koga. Poor wolf. Always been in love with Kagome and he finally has her, but it was only the alcohal...I could just see his hurt face...it's making me cry...
I don't like Koga, though he is one of my top ten hot guys on Inuyasha, it's just...so sad, he is so sweet and so hot and stuff...poor Koga. I know, no one is to blame, except the alcohal...but Kagome is going to be a bit mean. I mean, Koga! This is Koga who has loved her all these times and he believes that they are now together...*sniffle* poor Koga....
sesshsmate101- Sun 12 Nov 2006
LOL! I won't kill you, besides its actually an awesome twist to the story. really kaes you think ahead and all that. Can;t wait till you update plz do so soon!
AccidentalGoddess- Sun 12 Nov 2006
Must...restrain...fist of DEATH!!! Oh my frickin' god! I know you've probably heard a lot about this already, but KOUGA!!!???? EEEEWwwwww. Oh, man is this going to make things more complicated. I can't wait to see what happens next and just how hard she has to bitch slap that wolf. And what will Sesshomaru do when he finds her and finds out. (Frankly, considering how many he's banged over the years, I has no room to talk.) It's definately going to be fun. I so love your stories. More soon please!!!
flyingteapot- Sun 12 Nov 2006
Tar and feathers sound tempting but I am having darn too much fun with your story, so no need for such.
Great chapter. Loved the part about a moody, melancholy Sesshoumaru wandering the night streets. So, the old dog has not only perverted thoughts.
The whole Kagome/Kouga fiasco surprised me and had me cringing while reading it. Oh yeah, alcohol is evil. I really hope Kagome finds her voice for at least some damage control...but Kouga's comment about all youkai being able to smell "it" kind of worries me. I can't wait to read what will happen when Sesshoumaru finds her...and Kouga. Ooh, I'm hoping for some testosterone clashing chaos...Amazing what a silly plastic ring can trigger.
Kudos to you, your story and this agitating chapter!
How about torture? Can we torture you? A little Chinese Water Torture, perhaps? Won't touch the fingers. Promise! ^_^
Beckie- Sun 12 Nov 2006
Does this mean Kouga is not very well endowed? Could it be so small it did not break her hymen? Maybe she is sore because he missed alot. LOL I hope you clarify in the next chapter.
You evil evil woman.
Sesshoumaru is not going to be too happy that he didn't get Kagome first.
Hey, don't like Kouga keept Kagome!! Sesshoumaru needs Kagome for... strategic miko sexy positions. :D
Alrighty, great chapter! ^_^ Can't wait for more, espcially can't wait for Sesshoumaru's reaction to the new development. :O
Pats- Sun 12 Nov 2006
Then I'll kill you after you finish the story, wow that was SO WRONG, I still love your story but I certainly don’t like you at the moment…..nah….but all the same this isn’t sitting well on me I hope you find a way to make it all better
Fluffy-kins- Sun 12 Nov 2006
Oh My GOD!!! You didn't! That had to be the funniest thing I've ever had second hand witness to (And I've had second hand witness to a lot of funny stuff) Oh wow Ouch? I'm in shock I can't even find words to say, but wow that was friggin awesome!! I never even saw that coming!! :D Can't wait to see what happens. Update soon!!
Arsenic- Mon 06 Nov 2006
Awesome chapter! Hope you get a chance to update again soon!!
Chaos-and-Serenity- Mon 30 Oct 2006
What a drastic turn, yet I'm still addicted - and this is my crack. I'm glad Kouga was the first to find her; it promises to be even more amusing this way! Despite Inuyasha's whoring ways, I still find him likeable, not to mention that it's totally possible that he'd turn out like that. 500 years of life without dying of boredom - yeah, we'd all be sluts. I wonder how Kagome will react when she learns of his 'new' ways. Should be fun!
And Sesshoumaru Does Not Lose - I think that sums him up pretty good.
Thanks and good luck with your noms!
You are bad. I am sorta disappointed about Inuyasha but then again he had shown his true colors years ago.
-Dani.
ktshabatie- Mon 30 Oct 2006
Ahh so good! I can't wait for the next update, I want to know what happens when they find each other!! Update soon!! :]
Andi- Sun 29 Oct 2006
Awesome Twist!
OOO! i was not expecting to never be able to return to the past! it was totaly surprising! anyways, yeah im reviwing here... i think last time i reviewd on AFF.Net so yeah it balances lol anyways awesome story! I can't wait till you update again!
Inu_Twins- Sun 29 Oct 2006
YAY another wonderful chapter and i can't wait for the next update
wynter89- Sun 29 Oct 2006
That is amazing.
So now it takes place in the present...
Sesshomaru is looking for her, Kouga found her, Inu Yasha is being like a man-whore...
good luckl
i hope you update soon
Rinseternalsoul- Sun 29 Oct 2006
So Inuyasha can watch?! That jerk! Now, it may just be me, but at this point I'm kind of cheering for Kouga. Between Inuyasha and Sesshomaru, he's the lesser of the canine evils. I mean, it's sweet and all that Sesshomaru still thinks of her, but for cying out loud, he's still such a perv! Well, at least His Smugness will have some competition for her hand. This should get really interesting. Great job!
mangadreams- Sun 29 Oct 2006
terrific chapter. luved it!!!
Avid Reader of Fan FIction- Sun 29 Oct 2006
I just want to say, I absolutely LOVE your writing! "Cereal Box Romance" is a great and beautifully-written story (along with "Darkness," "To Shed A Little Light-" need I say more?) Not only is it creative and incredibly funny (not to mention the hot love scenes), but the characterization is amazing! (considering the circumstances; I mean, would Sesshomaru in the real anime ever get together with Kagome? Probably not) The twists of the plot are also incredible: I was thinking that Sesshomaru would continue to seduce Kagome in the Feudal Era, she would eventually give in, they fall in love, they live happily ever after- I think you get the point. However, having the well get blown up- I can't describe how surprised and delighted I was when I read chapter eleven (I would've liked it more if you wrote how they met again *hint*hint*). I would also like to compliment the careful way you choose your words to make your story more entertaining; for example, the part in chapter eleven where Souta is teasing Kagome and she has just slapped him. I have to say, any other word but "howled" and I would not have laughed, but . . . "howled" was there, so, I laughed!
In short, I think you're a wonderful writer and will eagerly be awaiting more of your works in the future. Have you considered writing a book and getting it published? Seriously, consider it. I enjoy some of your stories (particularly this one) a lot more than I do when reading some of the published fiction out there.
Monika- Sun 29 Oct 2006
WOW, it just keeps on getting better and better. I can't wait for the next chapter. Once again WOW!!!
Monika- Sun 29 Oct 2006
WOW, it just keeps on getting better and better. I can't wait for the next chapter. Once again WOW!!!
sumire- Sun 29 Oct 2006
...oops, I sent the last review without finishing. Ahem.
AGH!! You weave such an elaborate tale, and leave off right there! NOOO *cries* Sesshou, go find Kagome! Now!!! D: *impatient for that time* Please update as soon as possible! AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!!! (life can be really hectic, yeah?)
D:
3 Sumire
sumire- Sat 28 Oct 2006
CRUELTY! THY NAME IS RHIANNONOFTHEMOON!
Whoa... Inu-Yasha sure has come along way, now hasn't he? hahaha! I nearly fell out of my chair i read that sesshoumaru was behind the rings!! lol great chapter. Hope to see an update soon!! :D
Andi- Tue 24 Oct 2006
OMG! You need to get the next chapter up! Your story is awesome! This IS the best story that i have ever read! And i cant wait to read more!
ktshabatie- Mon 23 Oct 2006
Aww what a good chapter! But UGHHH you better update soon! Stupid cliff hangers. :D
Monika- Mon 23 Oct 2006
I love this fic. This the funniest I've read. Please don't keep us waiting to long for chapter 11. You Rock!!!
sesshsmate101- Wed 18 Oct 2006
YES!! I'm soooo glad you updated! This story is sooooo awesome! i love it! I'm glad SEssh finally "made a move" but am alos glad Kagome stopped him as well, it made me giggle like a school girl lol. Also, i have to say my favortie line was when Jaken though "His stff of one head gets more action then my staff of two heads" (something like that) I laughed soooo hard! I fell out of my chair! lol you are an awesome author! Plz update as soon as possible!
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