I have been waiting for another chapter to come out for some time but, alas, it looks as if the evil time demon has gotten to you as well and will not allow you to update. I do love your story, though, and I wish there was more to it. It intrigues me. Update soon, please.

Hey, I really like this one-shot! I wish I knew what happened next...could you make it a two-shot?

well, it sounds like this could be a cery interesting story, but I can't really say anything, since there's only one chapter.
I hope you update soon though!

I really loved your story. I gave it a 10 outta 10. And feel honored I amlost never give reviews. LOL
~~~DEB~~~