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Okay now you have to update soon so...

-pokes the computer screen-

Hey!

Hey you!

Yeah you!

Who else could I be talking to?

Hurry up and update!

Yes that's an order and no I will not leave you alone!

Update now!

Must know what will happen next so update now!

-pokes the computer screen again-

Did you hear me?

Then get to typing now!

-grins evily-

Ja Ne!!

Very nice, in-depth story. The characterizations are fleshed out to fit them quite admirably and you haven't vilified Inuyasha! Yay!

Though, he is still his neanderthal self at times. Now, to sit on my hands and wait to see what happens...

I like this what will become of Kagome? Will Sesshoumaru find a human friend or his kidness a trick to get closer to the jewel? Will Inuyasha catch up with Sesshoumaru before he gets his hands on the jewel? I like this baby I cant wait to read the other chapters. Your so good at this. I can tell you know you inuyasha because I dont know what half of this stuff is but i lkie it;) I am going to read the other chapters asap.love you
BC

cant w8 2 c wat happens next plz update,take care Ja Ne ^.^