OMG if you dont' update the next chapter sooon I'm going to DIE. You... Cant...Do this to me (coughs as if on death bed) Please I beg you as my dying wish. please, oh and the length of your chapters are just perfect. I'm also sorry to here about your bro, my prayers go out to you and your Kin. BTW I love what you did with the story and it's characters I love they way they are and man is your story ever good. Don't allow your muses to leave you it always difficult when your depressed to be creative but follow your heart it will never guide your wrong.

Penelope

OMG!!!!!! I love this story! You really expressed how protective everyone is of Kagome. It's so interesting to see how everyone thinks, the way you describe everyone is very personable!!! I'm not sure if I could actually believe that Fluffy could have been kidnapped, that would have been so funny! He would probably just tell the kidnappers exactly what they were doing wrong!!! Lol, please update soon!!!!!!

talk about misunderstanding... everyone thought that kag tried to kill herself... now what... how will kag going to react to this... and when will kag and sessh going to meet up.... will we ever going to find out why sessh left in the first place.... will kag and sessh ever going to get back together.... all these questions and no answer... please oh please update update update update please....... pretty please with a cherry on top.....

talk about misunderstanding... everyone thought that kag tried to kill herself... now what... how will kag going to react to this... and when will kag and sessh going to meet up.... will we ever going to find out why sessh left in the first place.... will kag and sessh ever going to get back together.... all these questions and no answer... please oh please update update update update please....... pretty please with a cherry on top.....

wow wow wow awesome story can you please plesae email me at: jessica_cocom@yahoo.com when you add a new chapter

“What? Girl, your man is romantic, attentive, sexy beyond all reason, not to mention just a little in love with you, and” her doe eyes twinkled naughtily, “I’d bet my Beanie Baby collection that he’s got an enormous-”
that is my favorate qoute of all time!!!! idk why i just freaking love it lol! please upadate soon! what happens when thay meet!?! ill be checking updates

“What? Girl, your man is romantic, attentive, sexy beyond all reason, not to mention just a little in love with you, and” her doe eyes twinkled naughtily, “I’d bet my Beanie Baby collection that he’s got an enormous-”
that is my favorate qoute of all time!!!! idk why i just freaking love it lol! please upadate soon! what happens when thay meet!?! ill be checking updates

I freaking love this story!!! i cant wait to read about what will happen next! I love how long it was and no it doesnt sound stupid at all. You ROCK!! ^.^

I love, love, LOVE it. Perfectly written! I can't wait until the next one!

10/10

it's getting good.
i can't wait to read more.
good luck!

wow this is such a deep story! keep it up i cant wait for you to update!

sounds like an interesting story and can't wait for more... you use a lot of swears and I'm surprised that through it all, it all makes sense and also your not in any trouble..
later and keep up the good work...

Where has this fic been all my life... well not all my life. Lol. But I had never heard of it, but when I read the summary I was like I gotta read it.
That was soooo good.
I love it. It's funny, it's dark, it's goodm
Poor Kags.
And OMFG you had me in tears when u mentioned how Shippo's family and Kagome's dad died. So sad.
Please update real soon.

And I know it's late, but I'm sorry for your loss.

Please up-date soon!!!!!!!!!! ur flash backs are long and i cant tell when they end or begin... its realy good so please up-date soon and with your brother sorry i know how it feels to lose one i love my dad died which is not the same and i will never know what you feel, because everyone is different with morning. if you need someone to talk to i'm here........love your story!!!!!!!!!!!

I really like your story and have enjoyed it so far. I do think that having them hide their drug use from Kagome just increases their deception and betrayal. Besides I would think the demons parents would smell it on them and be very dissapointed about it.

Love The Story And The Chapter ... Our Little Innocent Shippo Wants To Do Sticky! Goshness What Is The World Coming Through!!!

holy crow! you're back! YEY! I've been waiting FOREVER for an update!
Is it just me or does anyone else think that Kagome will kick Sess and his dad's butt when she hears they think she tried suicide. :D

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

I'm sorry about your brother and the lack of progress in the case. But I'm grateful that you've found your muse and are able to work on your fan fiction again. I love this story. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter where Kagome and Sesshomaru meet, and where Sesshomaru is told by his father what Kagome 'attempted'.

Welcome back!!

This story is just...amazing. That's the only word I can think of. You have done a fabulous job with it so far and I definitely look forward to reading more of it.

You and your family are in my prayers, just remember to not lose faith, karma has a way of catching up to people.

Keep up the great work!

worry not. there are plenty of people i'm sure that have not forgotten about this amazing fanfiction.
i fur sur am one.
:D
im so glad that you updated and revealed that Kaggie is NOT suicidal cuz then i would've totally been on a rampage, seeing how that Kags is probably one of the strongest characters in that series.
i mean with all the events she has to deal with. geez. i would've never had gone through with the whole damn thing. so thanks so much for making her character strong.
as for everyone else, its such a shame that they would actually think that she would do that to herself just over a guy. i mean sure that she loved her and wutnot but like geeez.
i would've been hella pissed as well. hopefully they find a way to gain her trust back and make everything peachy.
ahh Sessho. he's got some 'splaining to do.
XD
but i do HOPE and PRAY that he gets everything fixed cuz i do love this couple. though i am hoping for some drama and comedy as well which im sure that will be served.
thanks for the update and i hope that the po-po find that bastard and lock his ass up.
hell, even capital punishment sounds good to me.
no one deserves to have their life taken away like that.
i wish you luck with all your hardships and God bless.
just hang in there. you'll get through it.

worry not. there are plenty of people i'm sure that have not forgotten about this amazing fanfiction.
i fur sur am one.
:D
im so glad that you updated and revealed that Kaggie is NOT suicidal cuz then i would've totally been on a rampage, seeing how that Kags is probably one of the strongest characters in that series.
i mean with all the events she has to deal with. geez. i would've never had gone through with the whole damn thing. so thanks so much for making her character strong.
as for everyone else, its such a shame that they would actually think that she would do that to herself just over a guy. i mean sure that she loved her and wutnot but like geeez.
i would've been hella pissed as well. hopefully they find a way to gain her trust back and make everything peachy.
ahh Sessho. he's got some 'splaining to do.
XD
but i do HOPE and PRAY that he gets everything fixed cuz i do love this couple. though i am hoping for some drama and comedy as well which im sure that will be served.
thanks for the update and i hope that the po-po find that bastard and lock his ass up.
hell, even capital punishment sounds good to me.
no one deserves to have their life taken away like that.
i wish you luck with all your hardships and God bless.
just hang in there. you'll get through it.

worry not. there are plenty of people i'm sure that have not forgotten about this amazing fanfiction.
i fur sur am one.
:D
im so glad that you updated and revealed that Kaggie is NOT suicidal cuz then i would've totally been on a rampage, seeing how that Kags is probably one of the strongest characters in that series.
i mean with all the events she has to deal with. geez. i would've never had gone through with the whole damn thing. so thanks so much for making her character strong.
as for everyone else, its such a shame that they would actually think that she would do that to herself just over a guy. i mean sure that she loved her and wutnot but like geeez.
i would've been hella pissed as well. hopefully they find a way to gain her trust back and make everything peachy.
ahh Sessho. he's got some 'splaining to do.
XD
but i do HOPE and PRAY that he gets everything fixed cuz i do love this couple. though i am hoping for some drama and comedy as well which im sure that will be served.
thanks for the update and i hope that the po-po find that bastard and lock his ass up.
hell, even capital punishment sounds good to me.
no one deserves to have their life taken away like that.
i wish you luck with all your hardships and God bless.
just hang in there. you'll get through it.

i am lovin it! Absolutely love it! Its funny n yet has so much drama in it! I mean wow ths is sooooooo gooood! Please update asap! Once again excellent job!

i am lovin it! Absolutely love it! Its funny n yet has so much drama in it! I mean wow ths is sooooooo gooood! Please update asap! Once again excellent job!

AH! I was very excited when I saw this title up on the updated list :] The newest chapter was absolutely fulfilling~! It wasn't too long at all! I'm eagerly awaiting for you next installment :D.

ow.... interesting oww ppoor everyone.. so sad...

You have absolutely NO idea how much I love this story!!...Well...you probably do NOW but that is besides the point. Usually I stay away from stories that make Sesshoumaru a complete asshole, but there was something about this one that made me check it out. And I'm glad I did! Man...the number of times I laughed while reading about the guys...LOVE IT!! BRILLIANT!!!

And allow me to give my condolences to you and your family about your brother. I'm extremely sorry and I hope that you have managed to find some peace.

Until then, I hope you are doing well and can't wait until the next chapter!!

10/10

You have absolutely NO idea how much I love this story!!...Well...you probably do NOW but that is besides the point. Usually I stay away from stories that make Sesshoumaru a complete asshole, but there was something about this one that made me check it out. And I'm glad I did! Man...the number of times I laughed while reading about the guys...LOVE IT!! BRILLIANT!!!

OMG.. ive read fics that were good but this one is awesome.. can you PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE UPDATE.. this is amazing!

Good freaking grief. I almost NEVER read AU fics, but DAMN!! This story has so much life to it, the characters are real and woven together like a tapestry, I can hear Inuyasha yelling, and see Kagome's innocence, and feel the history between everyone, and sense the way everyone feels. It's real, and that's the highest compliment I can give a story. My first clue this was gonna be good was the way you put the first few paragraphs in 3rd person close. I really figured out your INuyasha's personality by the way his thoughts moved. I didn't need to hear 'Inuyasha was a short-tempered, foul-mouthed hanyou absolutely dedicated to his friends'. You showed us all that with the voice, which is the perfect way to do it. I actually excalimed out loud, at one time, 'this story is freaking awesome! I rarely review (shame, shame, I know) but I just had to tell you this is incredible; I beg you on bended knee to update soon. Thanx much!

please update soon please keep it coming

Please update, this sis the BEST story I've read in this site. Its been a year now!

update update update please

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

update update update please

update update update please

Oh wow!!! This is such a great story!!! I love how you have captured the characters and how real you have made them. Please update again soon!!!

update update update please

Way to go babe great story so far i enjoyed reading so keep me posted kay !!

update update please pretty please

update updat please pretty please

omg i love your story. it is a little slow pace for me only becuase i cant wait to see what sesshomaru will do when hes back and why did he leave! u are a great writter and i check often to see if u update so please do so asap!

ALready-with that bastard not being there, you had her falling for his memory. Do NOT make it that easy. Don't make her become aroused at hsi presence while he smirks at his prowess. Make him kill to gain her confidence. And I shall await Kouga's formal courtship of Kagome soon enough. At the end this will be a Kag/sess but right now it cannot be. Please don't make her shy or nervous with sesshoumaru! That's so droll. Make her angry and impassioned. Or dispassionate. Not lovey dovey. Don't make her stray too much in the past. I like this, please update soon.

ALready-with that bastard not being there, you had her falling for his memory. Do NOT make it that easy. Don't make her become aroused at hsi presence while he smirks at his prowess. Make him kill to gain her confidence. And I shall await Kouga's formal courtship of Kagome soon enough. At the end this will be a Kag/sess but right now it cannot be. Please don't make her shy or nervous with sesshoumaru! That's so droll. Make her angry and impassioned. Or dispassionate. Not lovey dovey. Don't make her stray too much in the past. I like this, please update soon.

ALready-with that bastard not being there, you had her falling for his memory. Do NOT make it that easy. Don't make her become aroused at hsi presence while he smirks at his prowess. Make him kill to gain her confidence. And I shall await Kouga's formal courtship of Kagome soon enough. At the end this will be a Kag/sess but right now it cannot be. Please don't make her shy or nervous with sesshoumaru! That's so droll. Make her angry and impassioned. Or dispassionate. Not lovey dovey. Don't make her stray too much in the past. I like this, please update soon.

ALready-with that bastard not being there, you had her falling for his memory. Do NOT make it that easy. Don't make her become aroused at hsi presence while he smirks at his prowess. Make him kill to gain her confidence. And I shall await Kouga's formal courtship of Kagome soon enough. At the end this will be a Kag/sess but right now it cannot be. Please don't make her shy or nervous with sesshoumaru! That's so droll. Make her angry and impassioned. Or dispassionate. Not lovey dovey. Don't make her stray too much in the past. I like this, please update soon.

Ahhh...What a cliffie! Please update soon.

UPDATE SOON PLEASE!

UPDATE SOON PLEASE!

I loved this new chapter!!! I can't wait for the next one!! I want Sesshy in the picture soon...update please!!!

Hey I hope you are better I m really sorry for what happened to your brother. my condolencies to your mom and family. hope you feel better soon.!!!

glad to know that you are back! welcome back! the chapter was awesome! update soon! i cant wait to read it...

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh..... Update soon...
~FFM~

o yay a new chap... so did kags kinda jus 4get about everything that happened for a while? omg i cant wait til the next chapter!!!

o yay a new chap... so did kags kinda jus 4get about everything that happened for a while? omg i cant wait til the next chapter!!!

This is such a fantastic fic - the gang has me literally cracking up with their silliness. The setup of those scenes is absolutely sublime! However, the wreck creeped me out in a serious way - I've gotten stuck in the traffic cause by semi accidents and have driven by the burnt, twisted bits of metal that had once been automobiles. *shivers*

Looking forward to the next chapter! If you have an update list, could you please add me?

P.S. - I'm so sorry to hear about your brother. My condolences.

awesome job on the chapter! It's good to have you back and I hope everything is well with you and your family now. Keep up the excellent work! Kagome shouldn't get sad or depressed over sesshoumaru coming back....she should be pissed and ready to throw punches! hehe

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN HARDLY WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER SO PLEASE HURRY IT UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

What was/is up with Sessy?
It sounded like he really does want Kags as his mate {with the what if I was at the grocery store to get food when someone killed me...aka the goose thingy incident}

PLEASE UPDATE VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

good because i want to see both kagome's and sesshoumaru's takes on that night. I can't wait until the confrontation.

Now I don't normally leave reviews. ever. But I just wanted to say, that I'm really excited to see that you're back and that this story isn't on hiatus anymore. It is one of my favorites, and while I understood why you went on hiatus, I was heartbroken to know that I wouldn't find out what happens next until well...today.
Amazing job with the chapter. I loved it. And I can't wait to see what will happen next. *squeals!*
Update soon!
Emily

Hey..sorry for your brother..you must be really bad right know, your story is great and you really conquered fans, fans that will wait and give you support untill you get better.. So, remember to smile, i think your brother just wanted that ^^
Good luck
;***

I'm sorry to hear about your brother. I don't know what to say, what anyone can say to that.
I would like to say that your story is very good and I hope that sometime in the future you may feel recovered enough to write more maybe as a memorial to your brother since you said the group was bassed off of your family.
I hope that given time this wound will heal.
Good Luck and take care

Hey.. sorry for your brother, my deepest condolences for you and your family, just keep going..we all know that you can, we love your fic! keep on with it!! be sure we'll be there when you need us, but don't forget you have a great stoy here waiting for you!!

i send my deepest apologies and condolences to you and your family. i can imagine that your brother was a great guy based on reading this story and after reading your note. i have also lost close family members but none of them were that close to me.

great story! please continue when you have time because i really enjoy reading this story. it's one of my favorite to read. take care! we love ya! 3

hikari_phoenix (bright phoenix)

Hey don't be so hard on yourself. This was your brother for God's sake! Take your time and whenever your ready, update. For now just know that he's probably wanting you to be ok. I'm not sure what religion you are but I think he's probably up with God looking for a fire extinguisher lol, just a little humor to lighten the mood. DOn't rush yourself, we can wait.

Hi

I want to say sorry for your lose, I know it must be a diffucult time for you, but I hope you can find pace and resignation to overcome your lost, may him rest in pace

OMG!! I'm so sorry to hear about your brother I hope you feel better soon. If I could just pop out of this review to you i'd help cheer you up but sadly this is only a review. I do hope you'll be okay, I was devastated the day my kitten died after having him for 13 days it scarred me to near death, but I know how it feels to lose someone you care about I lost my grandmother a few years ago along with my uncle and grandfather in the same year. But I did learn one thing that no matter where you go or how far you walk they will always be watching you take each step and edging you on telling you to never fall back to only keep going forward. If you come to that wall of depression just stop and find some explosives to blow the wall away. Don't ever lose hope. You may lose someone but you have the gift to give life to another. So don't get distracted to much and come back to your fans safely and cheerfully and I'll be waiting to hear some news from you when you return to us. I will be a fan of your writing and a distant friend still waiting to be found that will stay by your side in the time of need. Good bye for now and don't be afraid to drop an email I'll always reply ^^

I'll keep you and your famliy in my prayers. I hope that you will all be able to cope with your horrible loss in the best ways possible.
God be with you.

I am terribly sorry for your loss. I will wait for your stories as long as I must for you to overcome such sadness. I hope you and your family will be alright.
~vanessa

I am beyond sorry that you lost your brother. I won't say I know what you feel, or anything like that. I wil just remind you that your brother is always be in your heart and mind. And though this may seem a bit strange, do not forget your brother. I have lost someone close to me and have tried to repress their memory. It works for a little while, but when their name is brought up, the pain is much worse. So I now remember the good times we had. The pain is still there, but it's not nearly as bad as it was.

As for your fics. Don't worry about disappointing us or anything of the sort. We understand you need your grieving period. We will wait for you to get over the mourning, don't worry. Please do mourn, but not overly much. Don't let grieving for your lost brother blind you to everything else.

I hope the pain of losing your brother lessens slightly. Also, I hope your brother Rests In Peace.

Sincerely,
Your Reviewer

Oh my...I'm terribly sorry...I do remember when my grandfather died not long ago...but to have a loved one so tragically taken away from you by someone else...that will hurt for a while...take your time.You need to heal slowly,and I will pray for you and your family and your brother.I hope he's in heaven watching over you right now...and I hope the one who took him away from you will be punished dearly.

I'm really sorry for your loss. You and your family are in my prayer. God Bless

don't worry take your time, one of my close relitives commited suicide nearly three months ago and i'm still hurting from it, so don't worry about updateing, it takes a while to get going after something like that happens, and i do have a sense of what you feel, loosing a family member is hard on you, weather it's cousin or brother
CottonCandyIceCream

I love your story, keep up the good work. I am very sorry about your brother I wish the best of luck to you and your family.

sorry to hear about your brother! I have had many people that I've loved die but never a sibling. Take your time and spend it with your family. they come first!

Condolences. Take care of yourself and don't worry about this story. This is just a distraction, and real life is more important.
God Bless you and help you heal.

I'm so sorry for you and your family.

I'm really sorry to hear about your brother. I just found about this site and looked up your story. I know it's probably a rough time fore you but I just wanted to say that i reallly love your story. Hope your doing well. sorry about your loss..

Whitney out*

You take all the time in the world that you need. Your time to heal is a lot more important than a fan fiction. Please know that my prayers and well wishes are with you and your family. Take care of yourself and I hope to see you grace the pages of A Single Spark again very soon.

Best Wishes

Nefra

I'm sorry about your brother. Take all the time you need to in order to heal. btw, I love your story. It's really great!

I'm sorry about your brother. Take all the time you need to in order to heal. btw, I love your story. It's really great!

Wow.I'm so sorry about that. I hope you and your family can pull together and help eachother out through your grief. I have two brothers and I can't imagine the pain of losing either of them.

take care of yourself. my condolences to you and your family!

Its okay feel better my uncle dies after christmas so i know it hurts.

You're so mean. Gah that was just evil, okay so add asap!

hey! please update soon! nice fic by the way!

Well this certainly was a very interesting chappie. Just hearing their different ideas was quite hilarious. Can't wait to see what happens so keep up the good work and hurry w/ the next chappie:P

Wow. That was...hilarious at the end. But I was slightly saddened THAT YOU DIDN'T BRING SESSHOUMARU IN!! For goodness sakes, bring his butt in! 'Cause I want to see it kicked...along with other things. Heh. Anyways, your story is great so far. Please update soon. PLEASE. This lowly human begs you.

lol shippo is a snitch some one duct tape his mouth already lmao update soon

Dudett you had me cryin in the first chapter(now i feel stupid)and at the edge oh my seat with the cliffhangers. Now you leave me mixed emontions with the fact that you have no more chapters for me indulge in, but make no mistake i will be mad soon if i find out you didn't continue. So please if you could write more more it would greatly welcomed.
P.S. In short terms great ass story.

lol great chapter & althought I fell like murdering u right now I think u cut it off at the right part so that most of the angry readers have already fainted at the sight off the cliffy thus buying urself some time 4 survival.........................hmm i think i got off track there um anyway wat i meant was awsome chapter i cant w8 2 c how it all goes down.......& i still fell like sesshoumaru should be slapped....or something of the sort,anyway take care Ja Ne^.^

Great job...so when does my handsome Sesshy come in? I can't wait for his arrival.

I love this story. You are amazing. Please get the next chapter out ASAP. Kagome won't go for Kouga's plan on him courting her. I want a confrontation between Sesshoumaru and Kagome soon to find out Sesshoumaru's POV. Right now I think he's an ass but there are always two sides to every story.

See, you did good choosing a good ending place for this chapter. I had faith in you. Great job. Loved the "incident" that lead up to the calling for the fire extinguisher. Also loved the explanation of pack law and courting and such.
Oh, if you are having trouble with all the characters in a room, do what I do, use cut outs or figurines of each character involved so you can visualize who is there easier. It really makes story writing easier.
Keep up the good work. Poor Shippo. He really loves her and is so sweet and caring. I love Inu's character in this story too. Would love to see them date, but, nahhhh, you've already set them up as best friends and nothing else.
Just can't wait!

Wow...great chapter!
^_^
I love how they were planning this all out and they didn't think about what Kagome would want to do....lol.
^_^
Please update soon...i can't wait to read about her reaction and what happens when she sees Sesshoumaru again!

loved the chapter!!!
:)
great job, keep it up!!!

3

Wow, i love the story so far! I can't wait to see what happens when Kagome finds out.. 10/10!

Wow, i love the story so far! I can't wait to see what happens when Kagome finds out.. 10/10!

Awesome start! Can't wait for an update!

I really love this chappie and the scene at the gravestone. The flashback about the ducks was pretty funny. I wonder how Kagome will take the news and when will Sess show up to defend himself/ make it up to Kagome. Anyway keep up the good work and hurry w/ the next chappie:P

yayyyyy I cant w8 read the next chapter plz update as soon as u can,take care ja ne ^.^

i love this story. Update soon.

AAAAAH!!! NOOOO!!! There is something SERIOUSLY wrong with this chapter!!! You know what it is? There's no "next chapter" button!?!? *searches frantically for it*

It's not there!!! ;_______________;

Uwaaaaah!!!

I can't wait for the next chapter! ^___^

Poor duckie... Sesshoumaru... you murderer! XD

Poor Ro's going to be in trouble, isn't he? *pets Miroku*

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!! i was so unhappy when ur newest chappie ended T-T..... i really love ur writing!!! the sppech that u make the characters use just blend in so well!! i love the "gansta-ish" talk, its so modern, course, and altogether refreshing from other writers!! and also i love how u make it so that the guys of kagome's life seem so close with her, because normally in fics i c that authors tend to make it so her girls seem closer as in girl & girls, but ur mix of girl & guy friendships make ur fanfic stand out to me!! T-T truthfully u made me cry when inuyasha was describing his views on what happened.....and the "incident" omg i can go on forever but i am boring ppl and u so anyways great story and i am very impatient for the nex chappie lol >
Byebye,
ParaKiss_chan~~

B-Boy
K-Hawk
Ro

... they're so gangsta I love it!!! XD And I really love their respective ringtones.

I was seriously cracking up with chapter 2. I love how there are lots of characters but you make them interact so well. I can't wait for Sesshoumaru's return! Kyaa!

And I know I should've reviewed on the first chapter, but will it help that I rated 10 on both chapters? ^_^;; I'm about to read chapter 3 right now. NUUU!!! I want more chapters!

I can't wait, can't wait, can't wait!

DUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!
yeah I'm making fun of you aout the duck thing...
UPdate soon...
~FFM~

Hey! I love this story so far! It's funny, dramatic, angsty, and so much more. ^_^ And it's well written! Amazing job! Update soon! ^_^

wonderful chapter!!! please update soon.

haha..i liked this chapter, its really cute with all the memories and the fire...hahha

the goose chase was too cute!

UPDATE SOON!

I really like this chapter. Love the interaction between the guys. Really well written to feel the comraderie and common goal of protecting her. I like that Inu describes her as the alpha of their pack. I hope you keep writing this story, because I can't wait to see how they reveal Sessh's return, and see what her reaction is. I liked the flashback to how things were a year ago. Just enough detail to understand why Inu so worried about her, and why she was on suicide watch. And for Inu to snap at the others for making him feel guilty and do something he knew better, and then for it to end up so tragically. The groups reminds me of my favorite novels about Navy Seals and how they are fun and playful until it's time to go to work, then they are frightening and serious and ban together against an outside threat (even if it's a brother). Can't wait to see what justification Sessh comes up with to take her innocence an dthen dump her without explanation.
Keep up the good work

Oh man, just those two chapters and I'm crying a river. Just what was Sesshoumaru thinking? Glad she has those boys, oh and the girls as well. Love the story so far, update soon.

wow that was an awsome chapter lol i cant w8 2 c how they'r going 2 tell kagome & wats gonna happen when they do lol...take care Ja Ne ^.^

This almost seems like a Kag /Inuyasha fic, and a darn good one at that. I don't think I could forgive Sess for doing something like that either. To me Sess is a loser. Im just wondering how your gonna straighten this out especially since she tried to kill herself!!

awesome two chaps... left me wanting more... update soon, thanks

I really, really like this story, though a little more foward motion in the chapters would be nice, I am totally on board as a dedicated reader at this point. I enjoy how you protrayed the family of friends and its differences from InuYasha's blood family. You've done a good job and I have high hopes for the coming chapters. It'd be great if Kagome saw Sess and pretty much just blew him off [with massive internal struggle and heartbreak, of course] and he sees her with her family of friends, and has serious groveling to do. Oh, inspiration for my own fics, do I feel thee returning? LOL, anyways, you're doing a great job and I really look forward to the upcoming posts. BRAVO!!

I like this, I like how you have the guys sounding like guys, not something sweet or just not right. you know? I had guy friends like these in high school, just rough & goofy. I can't wait to see how this goes. Keep it up. :-)

This was an intense chappie. And it wasn't confusing at all. It's great that u were able to make a well thought out flashback and tie it in to the present situation like that. Keep up the good work and hurry w/ the next chappie:P

hey this is a really interesting fic... i can't wait to hear more so update soon!!!

How long before the girls find out, epseically with Rin running around on the loose.

Will Kagome know before the girls?

Either way the guys will get major earful from the girls for not telling them and if Kagome finds out, the male population of the group probably end up in the hospital.

Will Kikyo make her appearance or is it name only?

How much does she know? Even if she doesn't know everything, will she use it to get back at Kagome for taking Inuyasha away from her?

Mabye tell the parents, thinking that they don't want someone like Kagome who is perhaps unstabel around their sons.

if it's name only, then who cares. (Sorry not Kikyo fan, if she's not friends with Kagome.)

What is Sesshomaru's story for what he did.

Do I Love you? Yes I do! Weee!! You updated!! Great! It was awesome! Update soon!

wow...that took some skill interweaving care bears into an inuyasha fic. =)
I love the interaction between the 'brothers' it's really funny and authentic. update soon!!

Ohhhh please update soon. This is sad, funny, and loving @ the same time. It's a great fic.

ohh.....you've got me on hte edge of my seat now.....please update soon!
:)
great chapter!

Wee!! That's the first time I've ever seen that nick-name for miroku... but i like it! ^.^ 'Ro-Ro, do you love me?' I have no words to describe how cool that was. I've also never seen Rin as the spoiled teen. Very fitting. Any hoo... Update soon!

OMG!! this is an awsome story It made me cry,laugh & get pissed off at sesshomaru(even tho I love him 0.0)omg I just cant w8 2 c wat happens next uupdate uupdate or I'll get an angry mob 2 come after u muahahaha....cough..cough...ehehehe um so uh anyways great story cant w8 4 the next chap. take care,Ja Ne!1 ^.^

This is great.
Please update ASAP.

Wonder what Sesshoamru's reason of leaving.

If Rin liked Kagome, wonder how she she would react, if she finds out what Sesshomaru did to Kagome.

hey i think this a very good idea!! keep on with it!! wish you luck!

I can see it now.... "What are you doing here Inuyasha?????"
"Uhhhh.... I um... Uh......."
Update soon
~FFM~

i love ur story!!! i cant wait to see what happens next! please update asap

OHHH!! sounds amazing. great job. :)
please emial me @ sakura_flower15@yahoo.com when you update, i want to keep up with this story!!!
please and thank you!

omg. poor kagome. i cannot wait to hear the explination that guy pulls out of his ass. yup.... i have got to see what would happen. by the way how long was it since his sess left kag.

this is good. update soon

WOW!!! BEAUTIFUL WONDERFUL! now HURRY UP AND UPDATE IT ALREADY!!

This has been one of the best dramatic SessKag fic I've ever read. This actually makes Inuyasha look like the overprotective brother that i've always pictured him to be for Kagome. Anyway keep up the good work and hurry w/ the next chappie:P
BTW didn't see any errors in grammar or spelling.

I think your fanfic is so cool!
It's got a great plotty thing and I like the fact that you actually use spelling and grammar. It's really annoying when the story is so full of bad grammar. I just wanted you to know that your story is v. awesome.

i love it!!! please update soon.

GAH! I must read more! Please update soon!
until then..
Ja ne

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Oh wow!
That has to be one of the best fics I've read in a while. Very well written (You had me tearing up there for a while.) So keep it up! Update soon!

i love the fic write another chapter real soon please.

Wow! great first chapter. Talk about jumping in mid-stream! Love the interaction at the breakfast table. And how you hint at what happened a year ago in his rant about her not eating and being on a suicide watch with her friends. Great story telling. Can't wait for more.

interesting storyline..update soon!

oh please please please update soon!!!

update soon...I'm really looking forward to what comes next.

Looking to be an excellent fic. I can't wait to see how this all plays out. Update soon please!

GAH! I love it already! If you have a update list, put me on it sister! Sesshoumaru better have a really good reason to have been such a bastard.

I look forward to lots of angst and whatever else you can throw at us! Keep up the great work!