(Don't mind spelling errors!)
It wasn't crummy, a little slow yes but not crummy. That sounded like something Kagome would do, the whole white rose thing. I liked it alot and loved how you made them fall in love through letters. I think this could be better then just a one-shot though. If you ever have the time you should expand on it a bit add a couple of chapters of some of their letters and about what Sesshomaru and Miroku spoke about.
bluemoon_175- Tue 30 May 2006
Your story was really good, keep up the good work. You should make it a longer story. Because I think it would be really supper great.
Rio- Mon 29 May 2006
NONESENSE! I loved your story. LOVED it. I think you should've gone farther with it, but I loved it none the less. It was sweet, simple and romantic. I loved it. Loved it loved it loved it. XD Best thing I've ever read.
Kat- Mon 29 May 2006
that was a very cute one shot... very adorable... okay so I like mushy sappy stuff...
cherry- Mon 29 May 2006
SO GREAT!!! I love how you wrote your story.
Lady Thesta- Mon 29 May 2006
Wow! I really like this one shot! It's very unique and something I have never read the like of. Keep up the good work! ^_~
peace maker- Mon 29 May 2006
That is so good. I liked it very much are you gonna update it or leave it how it is cause i would love to see what happens.
marmalade girl!- Mon 29 May 2006
man i love this short one shot! i kinda wish it were alot longer and show us all the letters that would be Wonderful!! :) keep up the amazing work!
lilbabychrist- Mon 29 May 2006
awwwww!!! that was sooo cute!!!!!! awwwwwwwwwwwwww! i love it! it was soo cute!
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