Excellenti! (I know I spelled it wrong, don't ruin the mood! lol) It was long as hell, indepth, and lovely! ^__^ Wonderful story hun, I've enjoyed reading it. Please keep on writing stories, I look forward to reading more from you! JA!

I Love This Story!!! At first, I thought it would be boring, but it turned out rather nicely! Good job!

I truly loved this story, it had a wonderful story line and I like how you had their lives played out as a game. I cannot wait for you to add a new chapter to Wounded Heart!

So cool.

You are so rocking on this. Keep it up! Super duper. Can't wait for the next chapter. The individual elements are so nicely done, and work so well together. Great flow, and the drama is quite gripping.

great chapter cant w8 2 read the next 1 plz update soon,take care Ja Ne ^.^

Superbly done. Excellent story telling. The pictures painted by your words are quite captivating. I love the way that you merged the information from the third movie into the chapter. It provides excellent background and lends more realism to your storyline. Again, most excellent job.

Couple of notes: Inuyasha's sword is spelled Tetsusaiga. Also, at one point you have Touga 'lunching' himself. LOL! Lunch is the midday meal. Launch is the term for the action of 'throwing one's self into, at, or towards something.

Sincerely,
Vyncent

I wouldn't worry about the reviews. In any site there are spiteful people. They are just jealous of your talent. If you let their stupidity get to you, then they've won.

Wow, don't go anywhere. This is a great story. I can't wait too see how this ends. Just one question. Why did you change Kikyo's name and that she loved a full youkai. Hope this is explained soon. Later.

That was the best portrayl of movie 3 that I've ever read!! Definitely time well spent!

I really like this....it is so different from your other stories....Great job and I can't wait to see the next one.

Sweet going Kiba-chan! Most excellent next chaplet. Still considerable mystery, and many questions. The intrigue is still strong and building. I can't wait for the next installment. The part about Lord Sai is being most excellently presented and leaves tons of space for many options later on. I really look forward to seeing where this progresses from here.

I'm glad you decided to continue this story. It's enjoyable to read something so different than the other usual kag/sess stories.

Excellent story, and quite a different approach. Well described and it held a nice flow to it. While this is a one-shot, it would be nice to see one or to off shoots that might show Sesshoumaru learning of the fate of Lord Sai, and perhaps later his meeting and remembering Kagome.

I love this story! Are you going to write more to it? Perhaps a sequel where Sesshomaru meets Kagome's human half?

I liked this...it is not your usual style, but if is very good...I was actually surprised to see that it was PG-13 insteadof NC-17 like the rest of your stuff....anyway, this story was really sad and dramatic...You did a great job.