Reviews for Unrequited by ShadyMinion
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-L.W.
P.S. Update soon, please.
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Yukino- Mon 24 Jul 2006
This fic is really good. I hope that you will be able to continue writing wonderful chapters for this. Good luck and I hope inspiration would come to you soon in order to update all fo your stories if you are experiencing writer's block.
Thanks and regards,
Yukino
Risa- Sun 28 May 2006
This was exciting. I can really related to Kagome's plight. I like the way she is so innocent and mindful of Houjo's feeling. Miroku's blut conversation with Sesshoumaru was daring. Sesshoumaru is very interesting in this chapter; he reminds me of guys who would have the flavors of the week but when bored and ready to commit, they go back to the one they view as worthy. This chapter was very exciting.
Risa- Sat 27 May 2006
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REDWOLF- Thu 25 May 2006
A Loyal Reader
notafan- Thu 25 May 2006
Let me guess how this one goes: Sesshomaru is an all-around pig and jack-ass who doesn't understands his emotions for Kagome, so he hides it by being an insensitive asshole and uses other women, but still slightly teases Kagome to keep her interested in him; then when he can't have her because she finally thinks she can get passed him or just moves on miserably without him because he forced her to, he somehow understands his emotions that he must admit to her before he loses her for good, but in the end does.
Tell me, am I close and how would I know this? Because ALL of your stories are all the SAME. By using the same storyline over and over again, you're worse than an author who plagiarizes other people's work. It just proves your an author who can't come up with an actual creative idea.
And not only that, your characterization of Sesshomaru and Kagome are the worst. You have Sesshomaru as a disrespectful, dishonorable, and contemptible man when he's not even close to that (you obviously have him confused with Naraku), he's almost the opposite of what you made him. He's all about having and giving respect, having and showing honor, and only really showing contempt for Inuyasha and Naraku (each for their own obvious reasons). Just because he doesn't show emotions, doesn't mean he doesn't have them or understand them, especially compassion. Your description of him in all your stories makes him a coward who can't face his feelings. For Kagome, well, you describe her as a pathetic creature who can't function without the man she 'loves.' She's so annoyingly weak and feeble when it comes to Sesshomaru that I want to put her out of her misery because she's so pitiful. Even though she knows Inuyasha has trouble with his feelings for her and hurts her, she is still a strong individual who can put it behind her to do what she needs to do, but in every story you have she's a not even a shadow of herself. In all your stories, somehow Kagome finds something of interest in him when to the reader it seems impossible that she would by the way he acts in general and to her. And honestly for this story, I don't know what Kagome would find attractive and desirable in him if he can't keep his dick in his pants (why would she like a man whore who uses her own room to have sex with someone else? Disgusting!), because frankly that's unappealing in every way imaginable and I wouldn't go near him unless I was in a rubber suit to make sure I didn't catch something.
You know I have no idea why you write stories with the Sess/Kag pairing when it seems you can't even imagine them together (or being close to in character). Why do you even bother? Most of you storylines would be more believable if it was the Sess/Rin pairing and Inu/Kag or Inu/Kik, maybe even Sess/Kagura. Maybe you should think about that before spewing out more nonbelievable Sess/Kag stories.
And maybe if you actually come up with an original idea, instead of the same one over and over again in different settings, you could possible be a good author. Until you do use your mind to really think of something creative, you'll never be a decent author.
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Kelli- Thu 18 May 2006
I hope you'll update soon.
angie- Thu 18 May 2006
Shomei-chan- Thu 18 May 2006
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Vanessa- Thu 18 May 2006