Reviews for Unrequited by ShadyMinion

orchid- Thu 10 Apr 2008
please please please update... very cute... what will sessh do... will he win kag's heart or not... is sessh just playing with her or is it for real.... please update and let us know.....

orchid- Thu 10 Apr 2008
please please please update... very cute... what will sessh do... will he win kag's heart or not... is sessh just playing with her or is it for real.... please update and let us know.....

syaorangirl- Mon 10 Sep 2007
shit....sorry anyway Update!!update soon!!

syaorangirl- Mon 10 Sep 2007
I don’t know how to let you go

Porsche- Sat 08 Sep 2007
i honestly love ur story i had to have read it like at least 20ish times so far! PLEASE update T.T lol maru sounds like maru too!

orchid- Wed 22 Aug 2007
please please update soon....

Oreostar90- Thu 16 Aug 2007
Update!!! I love it, but somehow you managed to make me root for houjo....I love kag/sess but kag/houjo are just being too cute here....ignore me though! Keep writing, and make that stupid playboy straighten out and win kags heart!

Rin125- Sat 12 May 2007
Haha!! I love your story!! Please update soon!!

SmileZ- Fri 09 Mar 2007
you need to update! Making Sess jealous makes my day that's for sure. Hehe! Please continue this soon! It's veryyyyy goood!

orchid- Thu 01 Mar 2007
update update update please

xmikoxmandiex- Sat 20 Jan 2007
this is one of the best college fics i have ever read. its very well written and i cant wait for the next update. keep up the good work.

*Amanda

orchid- Fri 29 Dec 2006
update please please pretty please

Midget- Wed 27 Dec 2006
Omg Yay, i love fl.uffy in this fic!! He's kick ass^^ Keep updating!! Merry xmas and happy new year!

skyleopardess- Wed 15 Nov 2006
I've sent you a review by email already but I just wanted to say that I love the story so far and I can't wait for more! Good luck!

HanaDan17- Sat 21 Oct 2006
I like this story, and am eager to know what happens next!

Lilith Winters- Thu 17 Aug 2006
Oh my. I certainly enjoyed the last chapter, as it captured my attention. Sesshoumaru is very...interesting, to say the least. Good job in this story, by the way! I absolutely adored this story so far!
-L.W.
P.S. Update soon, please.

angel wolf- Fri 04 Aug 2006
Ekk! He's evil! Great story, keep going!

Hikari- Sun 30 Jul 2006
I loveeeee this fic!!! hehehe...this first chapter was awesome....couldn't stop laughing...

AnimeFanime18- Wed 26 Jul 2006
This last chapter made me burst out laughing! It was 12 in the morning, and I woke up my parents...

Yukino- Mon 24 Jul 2006
Hi,

This fic is really good. I hope that you will be able to continue writing wonderful chapters for this. Good luck and I hope inspiration would come to you soon in order to update all fo your stories if you are experiencing writer's block.

Thanks and regards,

Yukino

Risa- Sun 28 May 2006
Review of chapter three
This was exciting. I can really related to Kagome's plight. I like the way she is so innocent and mindful of Houjo's feeling. Miroku's blut conversation with Sesshoumaru was daring. Sesshoumaru is very interesting in this chapter; he reminds me of guys who would have the flavors of the week but when bored and ready to commit, they go back to the one they view as worthy. This chapter was very exciting.

Risa- Sat 27 May 2006
Review of Chapter two. I was happy that Kagome and Houjo had a good time at the movies. It was very funny when Kikyo and Sango were coaching Houjo in asking Kagome to a movie date. Miroku's wisdom is true to his character. Sesshoumaru's surprised appearance and stayed had me feeling the tension. Good chapter.

Risa- Sat 27 May 2006
Chapter one's review. I like it a lot. It held my interest. I was very surprised that Sesshoumaru and his flavor of the week would rut on Kagome's bed. Bad dog! LOL Houjo and Kagome are so cute and I'm thrilled that she is getting help in Math. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

emo- Thu 25 May 2006
yay! sesshy would go with them tomorrow...!!! hope you update soon!!! so excited!!!!

REDWOLF- Thu 25 May 2006
I really enjoy your story. I look forward to all the excitment in the chapters. I have been sick for weeks and I had to have surgery, so this is one of my favorite stories!! Im glad when you update!
A Loyal Reader

notafan- Thu 25 May 2006
I couldn't even read the rest of the FIRST chapter, because it had me so appalled. I thought perhaps it was going to be different from the few of your other stories that I have read since it was labeled romance instead angst/drama, but I see it's not.

Let me guess how this one goes: Sesshomaru is an all-around pig and jack-ass who doesn't understands his emotions for Kagome, so he hides it by being an insensitive asshole and uses other women, but still slightly teases Kagome to keep her interested in him; then when he can't have her because she finally thinks she can get passed him or just moves on miserably without him because he forced her to, he somehow understands his emotions that he must admit to her before he loses her for good, but in the end does.

Tell me, am I close and how would I know this? Because ALL of your stories are all the SAME. By using the same storyline over and over again, you're worse than an author who plagiarizes other people's work. It just proves your an author who can't come up with an actual creative idea.

And not only that, your characterization of Sesshomaru and Kagome are the worst. You have Sesshomaru as a disrespectful, dishonorable, and contemptible man when he's not even close to that (you obviously have him confused with Naraku), he's almost the opposite of what you made him. He's all about having and giving respect, having and showing honor, and only really showing contempt for Inuyasha and Naraku (each for their own obvious reasons). Just because he doesn't show emotions, doesn't mean he doesn't have them or understand them, especially compassion. Your description of him in all your stories makes him a coward who can't face his feelings. For Kagome, well, you describe her as a pathetic creature who can't function without the man she 'loves.' She's so annoyingly weak and feeble when it comes to Sesshomaru that I want to put her out of her misery because she's so pitiful. Even though she knows Inuyasha has trouble with his feelings for her and hurts her, she is still a strong individual who can put it behind her to do what she needs to do, but in every story you have she's a not even a shadow of herself. In all your stories, somehow Kagome finds something of interest in him when to the reader it seems impossible that she would by the way he acts in general and to her. And honestly for this story, I don't know what Kagome would find attractive and desirable in him if he can't keep his dick in his pants (why would she like a man whore who uses her own room to have sex with someone else? Disgusting!), because frankly that's unappealing in every way imaginable and I wouldn't go near him unless I was in a rubber suit to make sure I didn't catch something.

You know I have no idea why you write stories with the Sess/Kag pairing when it seems you can't even imagine them together (or being close to in character). Why do you even bother? Most of you storylines would be more believable if it was the Sess/Rin pairing and Inu/Kag or Inu/Kik, maybe even Sess/Kagura. Maybe you should think about that before spewing out more nonbelievable Sess/Kag stories.

And maybe if you actually come up with an original idea, instead of the same one over and over again in different settings, you could possible be a good author. Until you do use your mind to really think of something creative, you'll never be a decent author.

BrokenSouledPoetess- Wed 24 May 2006
Just wanted to say that I am loving this fic.

amy- Wed 24 May 2006
hello SM...its so good to have an update..you've been gone for a while..i hope you will also update your other stories...

jazz- Wed 24 May 2006
so very cute but will you add naraku and his minions

mandy- Mon 22 May 2006
its very good but finish it soon please

Ari- Mon 22 May 2006
Me like, its cute and its the first time I see a nice interpretation of a Houjo/Kagome relationship...this will be interesting!!!
Ari

orchid- Sat 20 May 2006
awesome fic... like the twisted that kag has crush on sessh instead of inu... update soon, thanks

sesshys_jaded_samuri- Sat 20 May 2006
Oooh, me likes....you should definitely update often.

Elli Mac- Sat 20 May 2006
Hey this story is the bumb. It's very good. But by making Sesshoumaru into a man whore is kinda funny in a way. But i hope to here from you soon.

bglasse- Fri 19 May 2006
SWEET! loved it...hahahaha...

jestergirl- Thu 18 May 2006
I loked this fanfiction alot, i also like to read the school ones, they are pretty cool most the time. Keep up the good work

Kelli- Thu 18 May 2006
I really enjoyed your story. I'm usually not into school stories, but this one I truly enjoyed reading and can not wait for more chapters.
I hope you'll update soon.

angie- Thu 18 May 2006
more more soon soon please i like were you are going with this

Shomei-chan- Thu 18 May 2006
awwww i feel soo sorry for kagome that sesshoumaru used her bed. EWWWW! i would so move out if he did it againa nd i saw. that's just disgusting! BUT I LOVE THE FIC! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER TO SEE WHAT WILL HAPPEN! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!

Princess. TigerMomo- Thu 18 May 2006
Hey there SM! =D I haven't seen you quite a bit and I'm super duper happy that you have the time to write this =) I love these -pair-up-Kagome-with-someone-better-then-to-end-up-with-Sesshomaru fics =D hehehehe, can't wait for him to get jealous, by the way, EWW!!! on her BED?! inconsiderate much..makes him more of a manwhore with raging horomones...XD

Vanessa- Thu 18 May 2006
I very much like this fic. and hope that you continue. My only critisim is that Houjo doesn't seem like much of a rival for Sess. no matter how cute and stammering he is. Oh well...on with the story. ( I hope)

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