Aomori! XDDD I find it so odd. Kaori san, the foreign exchange student staying with my friend Reina, technically her parents house, is from Aomori. I saw that and blinked twice. Mostly because before that I'd only heard of it in vague terms in class, and after I met her learned, well, not much but more.
Anywho, about the chapter, I applaud you for not having them meet at the festival and start to eye eachother and whatnot. Most people would do that, but it's not realisitic. So yeah, really nice. ^^; update soon, please.
| update update update please pretty please
Rowen- Wed 13 Dec 2006
| Much as I loved that chapter... what was in the note he gave her at the end of the last?
phxazkyote- Thu 27 Jul 2006
| Wow you're writting HAS changed a great deal. I really like Atonement but this fic is really captivaiting. The writting has matured a great deal. Awesome. Please update.
Pangoo- Fri 16 Jun 2006
| wooow...really good! I like this story's originality..!! Very good! Keep on!!
apis perfectus- Sun 04 Jun 2006
| I've read what seems to have been hundreds of fanfics, and yours comes out to be either the best or a close best in expression, creativity, originality, and form. Awesome work, keep it up!
| good story
Mishi Kawaii- Thu 01 Jun 2006
| This is very beautiful writing.
Dana Daidouji- Mon 22 May 2006
| I like this story very much. It's original, refreshing and very well written. I like how Naraku is not evil in this fic and Kagura's character is also nice. Definetely a breather from other stories.
I really love the character relationships you have set up in your AU (though I don't know about the whole Naraku thing... oh well)
I like the story and I hope you update soon, I want to see how Kagome begins to like the other Taisho
| I really like the point of view you are doing this from...It is quite interesting....I especially liked the end of CH 3 when she told Sesshou "You shoot like a girl"...That was classic....keep up the good work and UPDATE SOON!
jade- Fri 19 May 2006
| So kagome is a genius in uni while her friends are still in highschool
taylor- Fri 19 May 2006
| i love yooh. and i don't even noe yooh. trust meeh, that i love yooh means alot, cuz i don't say it often. and i don't like many authors. but now your my number one favorite. your story has a point. inticing words. your story is everything i wish mine could be. feeling. haha. this is truly a great story. perfection. write more soon, please??
Daughter_of_Sesshoumaru- Thu 18 May 2006
| Wow. I have never seen someone capture the complete and utter selfishness of childhood, or the errors of humanity, the way you have. Very nice.
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