I loved your story. ^ ^ It's an idea I had once formed into my head years ago, but could never put to text. Thank you for succeeding where I couldn't. ^-^ Sincerily. heheh. You kept Sesshoumaru mostly in character and I love that fact a lot.

-yuya-sama

That was the cutest story I have ever read. I love it.

I love this fanfiction. It held my attention perfectly, and not many can do that ^-^ 333

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

hehehe, i learned something knew today in my english class, irony=) the ending was definetly ironic, ne? i was kinda expecting Kagome to leave, but she didn't! YAY! i hope to see more soon, this story is really really good!! when will they be gaining memories??

Is this the end? and if it is I loved it! and if it is not love it plz update soon! ^_~

Hey all..I just wanted to say thanks to everyone who gave me positive reviews of this fic..I kinda rushed the ending and I think my ratings kinda reflect it....I totally had a humor/paraody that I wanted to write, but didn't wanna leave yet another fic incomplete..*huggles to everyone who was so supportive*

this is a realy good fic write another chapter real soon. please.

Wow! great chapter...I'm so glad she came back to him

write a new chapter please.

please update soon your storys awsome

Holy TOLEDO, and I DON'T mean OHIO!!

You certainly know how to set up the tension. THEN the sexual tension. Then (as if that weren't enough for us poor readers), THEN drag it out so that everyone will most likely be checking Single Spark several times a day for updates!!! This story has all the elements of award-winning fics like Resmiranda's "Tales From The House Of The Moon!" Your plot is, within the constraints of the original storyline, believable and quite innovative. Your characterizations are superb ... Sesshoumaru is VERY much in character, especially in his confusion as to why he is acting like he is over Kagome. I can hardly wait to see how/if you manage to integrate the 'former past' with the 'actual past.'

I will be waiting for those updates with bated breath!!! :) ~~Wiccan~~

KAMI, I love this fic....and I am so glad that you update regularly. BUT one thing....UPDATE SOON! How can you leave us hanging like that?

I am just loving this story!! Very well done, and most enjoyable.
Looking forward to your next chapter.

now that was a fun chapter and Inu semes so grow up I loved it so plz tray to update as soon as you can!^_~

Wow, what a twist bringing Inuyasha into the picture...I really liked this chapter!

girl write another chapter please.

This is definitely a great fic, please update soon. I can't wait to see what happens next

It's really new and different from the other fanfics I have read in the past. Keep up the good work and continue editing!!!

love it so plz update as soon as you can k!^_~

Nice addition. Oh well, nice try for Kagome. Now sexual frustration...lol. So he will not allow her to leave... oh the possibilities :D

great job!

nice chapter keep it up i want to know what happens next

yes about time she started to face the turth and what is he going to cook? I loved it so plz update soon! ^_~

awesome story! can't wait for the next update.

I like it plz update soon!^_~

I like this plot. I am sad to see how the beginning came about, but it turned out to be interesting. I wonder if anyone will notice Kagome's absence? Or if Kagome might succeed in escaping? ;)

Very interesting. I wonder if anyone will notice her absence and if Kagome might actually succeed in escaping. Great plot so far!

Thank you for the heads up on the youkai/youki thing...I honestly didn't know...huzzah! for new info. As for the ratings ...I think some people are a little conflicted by Sesshoumaru's..uh...confliction. :P If it helps..try to remember, he never saved Rin. He never lost his arm, and now he's been dreaming of this woman (much to his dismay) for the last 500 years. Thank you for all the great reviews THEY are what keep me movtivated! *beams*

wow i love ur story update soon!
=)

I don't understand who the f-gave you this stupid, undeserved ratings! Your stories are great, great plot, grammar is decent, characterizations are fun, I say it must be jealousy. I've read mediocre pieces of work with almost 10 ratings, what is wrong with these people! Really, these readers can't rate for sh-!

Keep up the great work, for both your fics!

Hi,
Just to clear up something,
Youkai = demon
Youki / jyaki = demon energy
I think you might have misspelled the japanese word since you kept referring to Taiyouk whereas it should have been spelled as Tayoukai.

Very nice fic.

Thanks and rgards,
Yuki

great story!!! please update!!!

I really like the way that this started out...I hope you continue. It has a lot of promise.

I don't know if this review will post (hope at least you see the review I sent directly), but I've got to tell you that I'm pretty damn sure your new fic 'Love Undone' is now my favorite obsession. Yep. Truly. Your writing is strong, well-paced and emotionally indulgent. I was wary at first of a fic where Kagome and Sesshoumaru were in love with no preamble, but you pulled it off believably and with no small amount of very palpable angst. I think the way you captured the moment after Kagome's wish, when life rewound and the revised lives of the remaining Inu-tachi continued, was my favorite scene thus far. It was so quick, but so powerful that I almost felt my breath catch. The second chapter was highly engaging, too. Pretty much, this entire fic rocks my socks, and I can't wait to read more!

Excellent! Update soon! I loved it!

0,o.... wow, a very cool story, please write more