This is the 50th time I've read this : D
It's awesome. I love the plot. I have to say that you are one of the best authors on this site : D
Random Reader- Tue 22 Apr 2008
With all due respect to "Girlygirl" -- I understand that all are entitled to their opinion, but she is objectively wrong on several fronts. First, Sesshoumaru doesn't have to say he loves her - he proved it with his actions.
Also - the lemons weren't good?? How can anyone say that? Girlygirl, did you read the same story?
Sesshou_Lover + Lemons = wow!
Please keep writing, I am utterly desperate for the completion of your outstanding stories; the two more important ones, Speaking without Words and the one from Trapped that you made into a full story.
Girlygirl, if you want lemons, go read either of those. Sesshou's lemons are amazing exactly because she doesn't do the "f*ck me put your cock in me" garbage. She writes brilliant lemons and writes well to boot.
Great chapter, wonderful to have you have back, and looking forward to more on your other stories.. we are all glad that you had the break you needed and hope that all is well with you -- your stories were missed.
I loved how much was implied but not stated outright in this story... very well done, as enjoyable as your other stories.
girlygirl- Sun 09 Mar 2008
ok.......... um dat was um........ ok i guess but i was kind of expecting Sesshomaru saying i love u to kagome and she finally realized dat the love she wanted so badly was right in front of her. also the lemons could of been better.
Silverinumiko- Wed 05 Mar 2008
Finally!
I mean that was a good story but Sesshomaru was right Inuyasha wound only continue to cheat on her until she ended it. So cute the ending, I liked it
Megan Consoer- Thu 07 Feb 2008
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
I really love this story. I just re-read it and I must admit that I still enjoy myself. I love the way it is writen. You are one of the best!
take care
This was really good. I love the way you write!
SexyKitsuneNeko- Sat 17 Nov 2007
im really enjoying the story so far i love all the lemons they are very well written good job. i know theres more chapters and it doesn't really matter what i think should happen but i have this weird feeling kagomes hurt is just ganna go away and shes ganna do something like kick inuyasha out of -her- house because its in her name not his well anyway i just want to say that for the hell of it again good job on the story
Just lovely. I thought you were going to end this with Inuyasha and Kagome getting married but you did it! It was very good.
i hope this gets a sequel!! i just spent the last 2 hours reading it from begining to end. ive enjoyed it very much. hot stuff!! hee hee
tilayha
Liz- Tue 12 Jun 2007
Wow. For a relatively short fan fic it had a lot of detail and subtance, which is nice.
Definatley an AU fanfic. I though that sesshomaru's portrayl was excellent. it was coo, sexy, and forboding which i always think works well for sesshomaru.
Kagome's portrayl, wasn't really for me. I really couldn't find anything wrong with it though. I think maybe I just wanted to slap her for dealing with Inuyasha's cheating.
Plot and story line was excellent. details were all there. Of all of the stories i've read, this was in the top 10 if not the top 5. I've read lots of good stories so that pretty impressive. I'd give it an A.
Good job and keep writing.
Alexus Woods- Fri 01 Jun 2007
I absolutely loved your story! Let me know if you write anymore because I'd give anything to read them!
well... *fans self*
i just... can't form proper sentences to explain how amazing this story is. and how hot the scene at the beach house is... *wiggles eyebrows*
DreamingPisces- Tue 10 Apr 2007
WTF?!?
PS: Loved The Blind Date! =P
crystal- Sun 08 Apr 2007
I reely liked it and the detailswere
realy juicy:)
Mirokuschildbarer- Mon 12 Mar 2007
this was great! Lovin it and i think this one is one of those few stories that actually need a sequel. ^^
~Dani~
Always known as
Mirokuschldbarer
OMG! I love this. yes!!!!! Ohh, it was so good. Are you going to write a sequel? I would love to read one about how Kagome finally gives Sessho a baby. that would be awesome. I loved it.
Megan Consoer- Fri 22 Dec 2006
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
AW555- Tue 19 Dec 2006
I loved it! It was awesome! Keep up the good work!
Renoumaru- Fri 08 Sep 2006
Is that the end? o_o; Nooooo! -Dies.-
jestergirl- Wed 06 Sep 2006
You should make a sequal or something to this story. I loved it
Tsuki Doriimaa- Sun 03 Sep 2006
LOL Oh man, the endings funny! ^___^ This isn't a make-up break-up story, it's just a sex story. ::laughs grinning:: can't says I've read one like it before but it's mighty good deary! ^_~ Nice work! I'll have to pass it along ot my sis to read. ::laughs again winking:: I'm off to read some of your other works, I hope you keep writing! heh heh Blessed Be with all you do! JA!
What I orginally wanted to write for this chapter:
ch. 11-Trying to Decide
About time she left with Sesshomaru, lol.
What I orginally wanted to write for this chapter:
Ch. 10- I really hope she will leave with him and not stay with jerky Inuyasha!!!
What I orginally wanted to write for this chapter:
Ch. 9-sesshoumaru’s Suggestion
She should so stay with Sesshomaru especially since she already admitted she was his.
What I orginally wanted to write for this chapter:
Ch. 8- I Don’t Believe This
I’m glad Sesshomaru is always there for her, so sweet.
What I orginally wanted to write for this chapter:Ch. 7-carnival
I like the carnival idea and I’m glad that Sesshomaru and Kagome are such good fans that they can talk about everything and that he has her working with him now. Ohhh, such fun! I’m glad she admitted that she wouldn’t be happy without him around, that’s a step up. Sesshomaru has been telling Kagome to leave Inuyasha forever, you would think eventually she would make the right decision, but that’s okay, because I know by the end, she will thanks to our favorite demon’s help. And of course she will thank him by finally giving him the boy he has always wanted from her. ;)
What I orginally wanted to write for this chapter:
Ch. 6-Making A Deal
I’m glad Sesshomaru and Kagome are having so much fun together. So happy, yay! I love this story so much, I know I keep saying that, but I can’t help it, it’s so wonderful and such a joy to read! ^_^
What I originally wanted to write for 5th chapter: Ch. 5- Big Mistake
Yay, what I was waiting for, Kagome to stand up to Inuyasha, hehe. Just a little bit further, I’m glad she is not giving up Sesshomaru, but I do hope she will give up Inuyasha soon! ^_^
I'm glad Sesshomaru waited for her, see perfection, didn't rush her even though some people might have thought she needed to leave. She needed to be ready to leave and not regret her decision and prepare herself. A wonderful story and a joy to read. Good enough to be a professional writer, if you ask me! *smiles*
*crosses fingers* I hope she goes with him, but I have already read him *sobs*
Further proof that who would want to resist the great sesshomaru, hehe.
Further proof that who would want to resist the great sesshomaru
Further proof that who would want to resist the great sesshomaru
I wish this was the point where Kagome grew strong enough to leave Inuyasha
The carnival was a fantastic idea and I love the part about the ferris wheel
I actually read this while the site was being fixed, and I don't remember what I wrote for the rest of these chapters, ugh stupid me. I can guarantee to you I loved it though! Sesshomaru's and Kagome's relationship is so perfect, yet they can't realize it, er Kagome can't that is.
Yay, what I was waiting for, about time Kagome reacted, thank goodness.
The sooner they realize that they both really love each other, the better. But until then, I am happy to hear about their exploits. I have to admit, I really want my own Sesshomaru, maybe I can talk my boyfriend into dressing like him, lol.
I’m glad that Kagome and Sesshomaru got to have at least a little catching up and I gotta say I wasn’t disappointed with their reunion. *grins* Can’t wait till they meet again, pleasantly I don’t have to do so! *skips off to next chappie*
I fully dislike Inuyasha in this story, so congrats you got me to feel what you were planning. I can’t wait to see what happens at the benefit, I just know Sesshomaru will be there, hopefully he will comfort Kagome and what not. *mischevious grin* I am going to hope so anyways! :)
I’m liking the story and just waiting for Kagome to catch Inuyasha and Kikyou with Inuyasha realizing it, so Kagome can truly be happy with Sesshomaru instead.
Jessica Lyn- Thu 03 Aug 2006
The story is great! I really enjoyed it! :D
Midget- Sat 01 Jul 2006
Hey dude I've been looking for your fics for ages! The Trapped series, and When I finally fi=ound it I was like, Awesome!!!! And this fic was absolutely kool too! But I didn't really like the "I don't love you' thing going on between them both. i was hoping in the end they'd get over it and fall but you know. Still loved it. Oh and i just gotta tell you this funny thing, I got up from the computer to get something, walking past my cat, and if I see my kitties (they're also very awesome) I always like call out to them, and this one is called Tora, but because I was reading your fic, I blurted out Inuyasha! Lol It was funny but embarassing. I hope nobody heard. haha! Anywho, thanks for the read, I loved it and i'm most likely gonna read it over and over when I get the time. thanks!!!!
Kheylia- Tue 20 Jun 2006
Oh my God, I loved it. Is that IT!? It's gorgeous! That can't be all! Serious!
AWW!!! i love you! wait that sounded weird... no i love your story, your writting, your creative imagination, your hentai ways, your amazing plot, your perfect timeing fro ever scean, and most of all sesshoumaru!!!! wait that was creepyer... well take out sesshomaru and its not creepy anymore... kinda... but still keep up the good work and i vant wait to read the rest of your stories!
Megan Consoer- Sun 21 May 2006
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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