Reviews for Primal by RhiannonoftheMoon

jade_san- Wed 04 Jun 2008
hi i'm one of your loyal fans and i was wondering if your going to update anytime soon?

update your story so I can live again!!- Wed 23 Apr 2008
I know it has been a long time since you've updated, let alone viewed this fic, but maybe by some chance you'll come across this story and these reviews and it'll inspire you to continue this story!

You really have something amazing going here; please don't give it up!!

update your story so I can live again!!- Wed 23 Apr 2008
I know it has been a long time since you've updated, let alone viewed this fic, but maybe by some chance you'll come across this story and these reviews and it'll inspire you to continue this story!

You really have something amazing going here; please don't give it up!!

Spiff- Fri 18 Apr 2008
I know authors hate when you harass them about fics and all. I promise I'm not doing that.

I just don't know why you would quite on this fic that you got such a wonderful start into. It's really was unique and I enjoyed reading it.

It's seems you just abandoned it 2 years ago. I just wanted to let you know it could've had a lot of potential if continued.

syaorangirl- Thu 06 Mar 2008
I Like, I Lust, I Love!!Please Update Soon!!

Daianara- Wed 30 Jan 2008
Why did you stop writing? This is a Killer story, and I can not wait to read the rest.

Megan Consoer- Thu 13 Sep 2007
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Libertine- Mon 30 Jul 2007
AHA! I've finally found it, you see I started this fanfic very long ago and lost track of it, but finally we're reunited. It must be fate, although I do wish for another chapter. I mean it's an amazing story done by an amazing writer and Kagome is a demoness, wow. Please do update you've got something really good here. I know it may seem kinda pathetic but I've checked all you're accounts to see if you've updated on any of them, yeah lol, I do have alot of free time on my hands. Anyways I'll cease my rambling, I just want to see a new chapter!

Tiegrsi- Fri 16 Mar 2007
Sorry..please ignore my comment...the one that is probably right below this one. I thought it said 'complete', and I checked again to realise that I am an idiot, obviously. I hope you finish this story, because I really like it so far!

Tiegrsi- Fri 16 Mar 2007
Arg! The description said COMPLETE. Where's the rest?! *rips out hair furiously*

Megan Consoer- Fri 22 Dec 2006
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

blue dart- Mon 13 Nov 2006
XD kagome's going to have a nasty suprise when she relises that she's pregnant XD hehe cant wait for the next chapter :D

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sesshoumaru's girl- Sun 12 Nov 2006
I hate that kogome is not her self but adleast she got to do sesshoumaru.

lisa t- Thu 02 Nov 2006
more 6 and 7 and 8 all new ch

DarkMiko6Decortiquer- Mon 30 Oct 2006
Wow, that was great.

But can't she save Kouga before she goes into that village. t's kind of heartless to just leave him there!!! That's so cruel! It would only take a minute of her time to breateh life into him, and her youkai can tell her how.

I mean Kouga isn't bad, and to hear him so described as skinny with thin leatheyr skin i sjust soo sad.

Do update soon by the way.

DarkMiko6Decortiquer- Mon 30 Oct 2006
Wow, that was great.

But can't she save Kouga before she goes into that village. t's kind of heartless to just leave him there!!! That's so cruel! It would only take a minute of her time to breateh life into him, and her youkai can tell her how.

I mean Kouga isn't bad, and to hear him so described as skinny with thin leatheyr skin i sjust soo sad.

Do update soon by the way.

Rinseternalsoul- Sun 29 Oct 2006
Oh no! Poor Kouga! He sure wasn't expecting that, was he?! I'm sure it will please Inuyasha to no end when he finds the wolf and sees the damage Kagome wrought on him. Now that Kagome has found herself again, I wonder how she will control her more feral side. She has some really intense powers. Very creative of you. She will be a perfect match to Sesshomaru's own power. An unstopable pair. Great job, as usual! ~Til next time.

wynter89- Sun 29 Oct 2006
at one point in time i thought that kagome would never gain contol over her body and the life sucking experience she did to Kouga that pulled it off is creepy... Poor Kouga! Lieing there possibly dieing as she runs off doing who knows what... I wonder how long it is going to take Sesshomaru to find her...

good luckl
i hope you update soon

Flightoffancy- Sat 28 Oct 2006
I was so glad to see you had finally found the time to update this steamy story. I read the whole thing over again because it just really takes me by surprise. I love it when she basically molests Sesshomaru and then carries him away. It was just too delicious. Makes you imagine what we could do with an immobilized Sesshomaru.

It is such a unique twist. Then the death of Kikiyo and the near death of Kogua, you are taking no prisioners. I think pretty soon others are going to realize just how lucky they were in their encounters with her.

The fact that she is more aware and seems to be in control at the moment is a hopeful sign but we cannot count on how long it is going to last.

This is just a great, gutsy story and I love the more "primal" story line. Sorry, I couldn't help myself. Til next time, Deb

cathy- Sat 28 Oct 2006
I've been waiting so long for you to update this fic and i'm so glad that i kept coming back to check for new chapters. that last chapter was awsome and i look forward to the new one even more, especially after reading the potbelly part.

Fluffy'sMate17- Fri 20 Oct 2006
I like it!! Poor Kagome... I hope she goes back to normal. I really dislike who she's become.

sakurachan_1- Mon 02 Oct 2006
ok... this fic is very interesting... but i do have several questions about it...like...
1. what happen to the other female yukai? did she died after she transfer her powers to kagome?
2. what did she really wanted? to mate? or to get pupped?
3. did she obtain back the soul that kikyo had from her?
4. would she stay yukai or is it temorary ?
5. would she ever remember her life as a human?
well some questions about it that is all you don't have to answer them if you dont want it's ok. but hopefully on your next up date some of this questions would be answered ... hopefully you update soon

Kheylia- Tue 26 Sep 2006
Dangg, this is purty good. I won't lie. Pleeeeeeease update soon! I love it!

Renoumaru- Fri 22 Sep 2006
AhhhH! New chapter, yes? o_o; -Begs.-

Silver Drache- Wed 13 Sep 2006
*grin* I love role reversal stories. And this one is done so well! I do not know if you have stopped updating this story or not, but i would really appreciate it if you added another chapter. *cute kitty eyes*

Chaos-and-Serenity- Wed 23 Aug 2006
Oh, I love it! It's so racy and exciting! I especially love their fights for dominance. It's so sexy! I laughed so hard in some places, too. When Sesshoumaru thought about the shame in being carried by a female, I nearly had an ulcer! This story is a lot of fun, and a bit dark, which I always seem to enjoy (I swear I'm a sadist...). As always, it's a pleasure to read your stories and I'll be looking foward to more of this!

Beautiful Silent Death- Sun 20 Aug 2006
I really like this story. I love all of yours. I have read them and love how you go about in your writings. Keep up the great work!

Rinseternalsoul- Sat 19 Aug 2006
I LOVE your imagination! Kagome's liquid/particle form was a stroke of genius. The descriptions were vivid and flowing. I also found Sango's embarrassment pretty cute and Miroku's observation hilarious! Great job, as always!

val- Mon 31 Jul 2006
i love where you're going with this fic and the way that it's so well written. it's one of the best that i've read in a while and i hope that you continue with it.

Yuya- Wed 26 Jul 2006
Sesshoumaru must snatch her and RUN!! XD please update soon. 3

-yuya-sama

CiraArana- Mon 24 Jul 2006
Wow, that was GOOD!

OOC? Well, I thought Sesshomaru was amazingly IN character. Okay, Kagome is OOC, but she isn't really Kagome anymore. Only a little bit. And it was fascinating to see that demoness struggle with her inner Kagome. The need to dress and to have a bath came, I suppose, from Kagome. That was funny. ^-^

Amazing beginning, and I'll be looking forward to more. But the most amazing thing is, that this is the second time you write exactly the story I wanted to read (and had decided to write myself, since no one had written it)! First Darkness, now this. Probably you got hit by the same particles of creativity.*grins* Anyway, I'm now going to log in and add you to my favourite authors. *nods*

bai-cha,
Cira

Flightoffancy- Thu 20 Jul 2006
This is very basic, "primal" if you will, I LIKE IT. It could be just my menopausal syndrome taking over, my beast, but all the snarling, growling and single-mindedness was sort of a turnon.

I never knew this about myself and was rather amused and surprised. I usually don't much care for the ones where Kagome gets turned into a youkai or goddess, some of them are good. I just want Sesshomaru to care for her just as she is, but this offers challenges to the mind and it wasn't like it was her fault but she is sure reaping the rewards.

This is unusual and original in its concept and I really love those stories. You seem to have a knack for coming up with things that nobody would ever put together. That's why you are one of my favorites.

Til next time, Deb.

INSERTJJS- Mon 19 Jun 2006
PLEASE CONTINUE

hellspixie18- Thu 08 Jun 2006
hmm very interesting! I can't wait to read more so please update soon.

Megan Consoer- Mon 22 May 2006
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

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