Wow! I am so glad somebody mentioned this story on a search, otherwise I would not have known of yet another extremely talented author and absolutely amazing fic. I would have to write a whole book in order to explain how magnificent your story was. If I were one that cries often or at all in any case, I would have wept like no tomorrow upon nearing the last chapter of this sequel to “Darkness.†It is remarkable the way you tied the actual episodes of Inuyasha into your storyline. Everything fit perfectly, the encounters with Naraku and the way Kikyo came to take the jewel shards from Kagome in order with the episodes. You MUST have gone over those things a lot in order to get everything sequenced so well. But enough of my blabber. You are a wonderful writer with wonderfully original ideas. *sweats* Wow to be trapped in a cave with Sesshomaru. Wooo!!! I look forward to reading more of your fan fictions.
sesshoumaru's girl- Wed 03 Jan 2007
SEXY,MYSTERIOUS To put it in smaller words I LOVED IT.
lilmoe31- Wed 27 Dec 2006
OMG, that was truely a great story. Congrats on writting another great fic. You are truely one of my favorites. I'm reading Cereal Box Romance right now and I am complely I love with that story, it is the only one that I am really waiting for, I keep cheaking to see if you have updated that fic yet, but I will wait for you to update. I'm a big fan so I can wait for you. Please don't let those haters out there discourage you. You fans stand by you. You have my support.
sesshou's gurl- Sat 04 Nov 2006
I like this story.It was well written. Good job and keep it up.
Chaos-and-Serenity- Thu 24 Aug 2006
This story was a blast to read. It was even naughtier than the first one! She kept giving it to him without ever seeing his face! Kinda funny, kinda slutty, but pretty hot at the same time.
I liked how you manipulated the canon. It made it all the more interesting to read. Basically, there's too many good elements to this story! So just keep of the fabulous job...
Megan Consoer- Tue 22 Aug 2006
I really ike this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
FirePhoinexAshlyn- Sat 29 Jul 2006
Just a thought,if u were 2 ever re-write this fic,u could put 'Unfaithful' by Rhanna in because inuyasha seems 2 die inside whenever kags ruts wit sessy... remember, it was just a thought. :)
Outie !-)
Beautiful, just, beautiful! ^_^ I loved every second of it. Now, I have had a feeling of this fic being partially based on Passion from Cira Arana. ^ ^ If not, well, I suggest you read it beacause it's really good. ^-^ Just a friendly advice. heheh. I love your work! 3
-Yuya-Sama
Dragonsorceress- Mon 26 Jun 2006
I really enjoyed your story. It was beautifully written, despite the fact that it resembled a myth. Keep writing more stories, they have gained my intrigue.
i know i've read the story of cupid and psyche before, but i had forgotten so it didn't even ring a bell when i read your fic. but i do greatly enjoy this story and look forward to the next update.
Sarah- Fri 23 Jun 2006
Wow, I loved this story so much! I really liked the mythology touch, i definetly picked that up in there...and before I read this fic and "Darkness", I was like...Kagome? with Sess? no way! but I actually rather like the coupling now! ^-^ Keep it going, your fics are great!
OMG! That is so adorable! I loved it.
Dragonsorceress- Fri 09 Jun 2006
Ok, your story darkness was delicious and well written.(man why cant that happen to me, sigh) Anyway, the story your writing now is also delicious and i can hardly wait to get back to the steamy parts. 8D
Mistress Butcher- Thu 08 Jun 2006
This was great.
Ari- Thu 08 Jun 2006
Cupid and Psyche...that is one of my favorite mythology stories...but the version you know must be different from mine, because their nothing alike(except for the names and so). Funnily enough yours is one of my favorite fanfics...figures
Ari
Kitty Kat- Thu 08 Jun 2006
What? That's it?? How can that be it???
Also, you never said what Kagome gave Sesshomaru in return to make her his official mate!!!
...
**POUT**
Luvspanky- Thu 08 Jun 2006
Huh? Its over? NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!
Just playing around! Lovely story!
OMG!!!! *cries* This is the end? *sniff* Rhiannon, you are totally, completely, wonderfully AWESOME!!! Need I say more? This fic kicks ass! Great job. Okay so what's next? *lol* J/K no rush.
GinaBristow- Thu 08 Jun 2006
I'm sad that it's over, now i have nothing to look forward to. I hated the wait but you always made it worth it. That was a terriffic chapter(as usual) and a really great ending. Congrats! And I hope to see some thing new from you soon.
bluemoon_175- Thu 08 Jun 2006
Your story was really good keep up the good work. Hope you'll make a sequal to this, it would be really good.
_Charlotte_Sometimes_- Thu 08 Jun 2006
This was awesome. I really liked this and Darkness.
chibilee (leslie)- Mon 05 Jun 2006
just wanted to say that i think the fic is great. it's pretty hot. love how you incorporate both parts from the series and your own stuff. very interesting fic. can't wait to see what happens. and love how shippo is running interference! lol man...people so underestimate kids don't they? lol
Natsumi- Sat 03 Jun 2006
I can't wait for the update. When sess bit her, didn't she bite him back that one time. Is she going to do it again. I'm guessing that someone in going to b close to killing him and she'll jusmp in the way and that will kinda end up being her gift. Please e-mail me with the update.
ReRe- Thu 01 Jun 2006
OMFG...THIS STORY RAWX!!!.....CAN YOU PLEASE HURRY AND FINISH THIS STORY!!!!!
PLEEZZZZZZZZZZZZ......!
niki- Wed 31 May 2006
OMG i love this fic and i had to calm my self down before i busted a vein coz i wanted ot read more grrr.lol. love ur story and the fact that sesshoumaru's back yay. plz plz plz i'm obsessed plz update soon plz. i check everyday to c if u have an update lol.
sesshomarusgirl3- Tue 30 May 2006
please write more soon
IY finally knows...dRaMA.... can't wait for the next update! xD
whitedragon235- Fri 26 May 2006
OH PLEASE, OH PLEASE, OH PLEASSSSEEEE update soon!!! The drama is killing me!!! I cant wait to find out why sesshoumaru didnt want to reveal his identity.
BriMaire- Thu 25 May 2006
When i first read Darkness i was so in love with it i was going to beg you to write a sequel then when i found out that you did i am absolutly addicted please continue
BriMaire- Thu 25 May 2006
When i first read Darkness i was so in love with it i was going to beg you to write a sequel then when i found out that you did i am absolutly addicted please continue
Megan Consoer- Thu 25 May 2006
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
Yay, Sesshoumaru's back! Great chapter and the ending was a little scary - does Inuyasha suspect and what will he do?
Arryelle- Thu 25 May 2006
That was amazing like always I hope she returns his arm as price to the courtship thing wow just wow can't wait till your next chappie update soon
Loves arry
Mrs_Sesshomaru- Thu 25 May 2006
Oh for the love of kami!! How could you stop there?! *naughty thought* Hmmm... I wonder what she's going to give him. *wags eyebrows* He-he. yeah & I hated that epesode too, when stupid Kikyo took the shards & Inuyasha basically stood there like 'duh.' Baka. But then again, I hate just every episode she's in. *shrugs* More, more, more!! Yay!
That was...amazing!! I do so hope you update soon!! Ja Ne!
jade- Wed 24 May 2006
ohhh can't wait till u update...can u plz email me when u update
Sei- Mon 22 May 2006
this is an incredible story. absolutely incredible.... so much going on all at once. @_@ i cant wait to read more! i'll be checking back soon. ^_^
-Sei
Lori- Wed 17 May 2006
You've done a great job with the sequel - I'm loving it so far. My favorite chapter being the one where she turns the penlight on Sesshoumaru. I had a good time trying to picture that in my mind. You do such a great job with Sesshoumaru - making him sexy as hell. Thanks for writing and giving us your take on the Kag/Sess relationship.
Oop, almost forgot the obligatory, please, please update soon!
Rinseternalsoul- Sun 14 May 2006
Well, at least Kagome has a decent excuse for not having the shards anymore! Great chapter. Looking forward to the next!
I disagree with CiraArana about their opinion on your story. It does fulfill every reader's desire and frankly, I am on the edge of my seat begging for another chapter.
I almost thought that Kagome might possibly commit suicide, however it would not be something that would fit her character (suicide, that is.)
You are doing fine... making me grip my seat and be eager for the next chapter. I hopr Sesshoumaru gets over his want to be incognito and just accepts her publically..
I cannot wait to see how this turns out.
kitsuneonna- Sat 13 May 2006
You know, for being a little PWP, this is still an excellent story. I have hoped that someone might do something like this where events in the story are included as background for an alternate version. Great job so far! I'd said once in a review for Darkness that a sequel was unneeded and its PWP smut was great enough as a stand alone, but I'm thrilled that you paid me no heed!
megan Reynolds- Sat 13 May 2006
love it keep going
laina- Fri 12 May 2006
Another yummy chapter! Thank you for updating it so soon for us! I can't wait to see what unfolds next!!
Suicide- Fri 12 May 2006
This is a seriously good story. I still can't imagine Kagome giving up shards to Naraku for anyone. It just seems so... I don't know. Can't think of a good word for it... treacherous I guess. I'm totally hooked on this story now. Plz update soon! And keep up the wonderful work.
NeoYoukai21- Fri 12 May 2006
I LOVE YOUR FIRST STORY, DARKNESS, AND THIS ONE IS JUST AS GOOD! PLEASE UPDATE SOON. IT IS BRILLIANT. if its possible could you email me when you update the story? i would really appreciate it. bye now.
Tink- Fri 12 May 2006
Wonderful chapter... can't wait for the next one... Hope it it soon...
Hmmm... I hope one of your upcoming chapters will have Kouga in it... Ah! I absolutely adore Kouga and would like to see Sesshy's reaction to all the Kouga does...
Gah! uh... hate suspense! Hope the next chapy comes soon!!!
Mitche- Fri 12 May 2006
I really liked. PLEASe update!
sore wa himitsu desu- Thu 11 May 2006
hmm.... its good... how long is it going to be? Do you know? I hope the ending comes out soon I like this fic
whoa Kagome actually gave him the jewel x[ update soon pls. =)
Oh my ... things aren't looking good. Giving her shards to Naraku? *gulps* Bad idea, Kagome.
And now she knows for sure just who her lord is. Hm. Actually, I had expected it to be a lot more ... explosive. Which doesn't mean it's bad. Quite the opposite. Not fulfilling readers' expectations ... that's one of my favourite hobbies. *grins* And I really like it when stories do not turn out like I expected them to do. After all, if they did, it would be boring. So. Um.
Not a very coherent review, is it? I apologise. It's the heat. Makes me stupid.
Oh, and I read your reviews of Dragon's Prey and Passion over at aff. That answers my questions whether you read them or not. You know, I did notice the one or other motive in your story that felt familiar ... ^-^
Xiomara- Thu 11 May 2006
Woaw, like man that is the most amazing story i've read.... I love it and i want you to finish it i mean, is really good, and can you do me a favor? Can you e-mail me when you have a new chapter up!
Thanks you are the best!!!!
^_^ Oh yeah! tell everyone thanks to all the ppl that have helped you b/c thanks to them and you we have this story.....!!!!!!!!!!
Koi- Wed 10 May 2006
I love this story u should some more chapters to it. please please for me please do it i love this story please update it
wiiTneSs- Tue 09 May 2006
"Darkness" and this sequel are both AWESOME! i'm totally hooked xD pls update soon.
Joy- Mon 08 May 2006
Hey! Read your one shot and I just had to read the sequel! They are both so good! I love how this story is going so far, it keeps me on the edge of my seat. Hope you update soon!!
Youkerie- Mon 08 May 2006
i swear you like to torture me... doing great so far- youll do even better if you update ^^
feisonna- Mon 08 May 2006
I wish for there to be many many more chapters soon. ^__^ Bad mean ole Sesshoumaru! Poor (but bad) Kagome giving them shards to Naraku! Any way... I didn't notice any spelling or continuity errors (those can be very distracting while reading) and I don't think I've ever run across this exact story idea before. It's different and new and I like it! Please continue soon!!
REDWOLF- Sun 07 May 2006
Hi!!
I am so glad I have got the chance to read your next chapter (7)! I had to have an operation (severe) and I have been out of it for a while!! Now, I hope that Sesshoumaru saves her from Naraku because Kagome would be in a heck of lot of trouble with Inuyasha to find out about the shards. Inuyasha appears to be shard crazy more that Kagome crazy so this kindly would fit Inuyasha pattern. Don't ya think??? Well anyhow Im glad to be reading your story again and I can't wait for the next exciting chapter!!
A Loyal Reader,
REDWOLF
Oh.....I so hope that Sess heard Naraku calling Kagome a whore, if she is his mate he will be pissed!
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