Your ability to use beautiful, clear language without ruining the humor is such a gift! Thank you for letting me read such a wonderful piece of literature. 3
Fullm00n- Tue 22 May 2007
What I would call A-list smut! Great job on the story!
Excellent story! I laughed so hard at some bits ("don't say give an arm!" especially) that my husband actually had me read those bits out loud. (He didn't get it as much as I did - he only watches sometimes when IY is on adultswim.) Anyway, this was my favorite one-shot that was nominated. I've read your other stories and they're all very good. You have a real gift for dialogue, especially inner dialogue. And you capture Kagome better than any I've read in a long time. It's so easy to make her into a Mary-Sue and you don't do that at all. So congrats for the award and keep it up! Ciao!
that was a great story! i throughly enjoyed it and i think you captured the characters wonderfully.
LynLin- Sun 22 Apr 2007
Oh wow. I never saw this fic before! I loved it. =]
chibi-nova- Fri 13 Apr 2007
wow that was mindblowing haha nice little one-shot (long) thanks it was really really good
Wonderfully delightful, mesmerizing and eternally sexy.
I really liked that a lot. Very good story. :)
LadySkyfire- Fri 09 Mar 2007
This is like the third time I've read this, and it never gets old! The balance of sexy and funny is just perfect. You are an amazing author! Thanks for posting this!
Sereneth- Mon 12 Feb 2007
It's very good, I love the way you wrote everything. I see that you haven't written anything in a while, I really miss your work. :)
I think this one-shot could make for a great full blown story if you ever decide to pursue the idea.
-Sereneth
It was hilarious!
It was hilarious!
Mirokuschildbarer- Thu 31 Aug 2006
Wow that was good. especially the end really got me goin. Im gonna tell my friend to read this. good job res!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You are absolutely my favorite fanficiton writer of all time. The seriousness of your writing is some of the most beautiful writing ever. And the humor in this one was great! I bow down to your superior writing skills. You are an inspiration to us all. *bows*
im hoping that u do a sequel because thiz iz a nice story
Mrs_Sesshomaru- Tue 11 Jul 2006
Hmmm... I just had to read that again. I love this piece... a lot... waaay more than I should... Oh well. You rule the fan world Res. NO doubt!
Kheylia- Mon 26 Jun 2006
Dear goodness, child, that was lovely. If you wrote more chapters, you would have plenty of loyal readers returning. I love that story. It was perfect. No regrets, ne?
lisa- Fri 26 May 2006
maan... that was the shits! i loved it almost too much! you are great i'll be sure to look for your works in the future!
lol I laughed through out most of this and I gotta say I absolutely love your writing. I hope to see a sequel to this so please e-mail me if you happen to write one. I loved the last line of this story, it leaves a lot of possibilities for a sequel.
Megan Consoer- Mon 22 May 2006
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
rainfall- Sat 20 May 2006
Oh this was soooo porny and hot - you make me want to sing 'me so horny'. Very funny too. when I got to the line about Sesshoumaru's buttocks, I had flashbacks of Forest Gump. I think that Sesshoumaru was a little more affected than he was prepared for by the encounter (and that's what made it so sexy) - but of course Kagome wouldn't know that, being so new to sex. If the two go their separate ways, she may later realize that the encounter was truly unique - as was your story.
Here's hoping Kagome and Sesshoumaru have more sex and less regrets in the future, if only in your or my imaginations. :)
This lemon pushed the limits - those descriptions of Sesshoumaru in the heights of ecstasy were almost more than I could take! Wow and wow again. You hinted at one-shots to possibly follow and I can understand why - there is so much fun to be had there. Kagome was great here as well. Her nervousness near the beginning of both their encounters - so many funny one-liners.
sessou's gurl- Wed 17 May 2006
I like it. The ending was funny and the sex wasn't bad either. Keep up the good work. PS> The sex and the kinky ness ROCKS>> want moe.
Cleo- Tue 16 May 2006
my cousin read tease to me over the phone 9tp add me and my cousin are big fans of your work) and it good. Naughty but still good. We can't even write a love making scene in any of our fan fics that good. I can't wait for your next fic.
Pangoo- Mon 15 May 2006
Woow...is it me, or has the temperature suddenly rised a damn few grades???
Nice and "charming"!! Hehe...
But why didn't they kiss eachother?? I mean mouth to mouth?? Did you feel it would be to perosnal???
Well, anyway, you definately have to continue....This story has some strong "potent" to become something even better...
Pangoo- Mon 15 May 2006
Woow...is it me, or has the temperature suddenly rised a damn few grades???
Nice and "charming"!! Hehe...
But why didn't they kiss eachother?? I mean mouth to mouth?? Did you feel it would be to perosnal???
Well, anyway, you definately have to continue....This story has some strong "potent" to become something even better...
Love your stories, cried many times in house of the moon..
Chaos-and-Serenity- Wed 10 May 2006
That was...damn HOT! Geez, I think I'm sweating...and panting... You naughty, naughty author and your damn hot lemons! With all these hot lemons of yours, I should never get a sore throat again!
Great work, as usual. I truly love your stories and they are by far the best I have read. Your talent obviously elicits some jealousy since people do not rate your stories accordingly on this site. An 8.4 average rating for this story? That's insane. It's a 10, pure and simple. Readers should not be allowed to do that so easily on this site and I too had to deal with that crap. Just remember that low people succumb to jealousy. But considering your success in the fanfic medium, I guess you could care less about petty people.
I guess what I'm trying to say is please keep writing. I enjoy it a little too much.
Thank you.
This ditty is just wonderful! You know, this would work great for a sequel to see if anything further. You have always written well. I am not that great, but perhaps if you wanted to collaborate something based on this as a sequel.
It just has some potential for more "mischievous fun" as well as somewhat of a story. I still am left breathless after Tales.
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