Reviews for The Train Ride by Pseudomonas
nickel- Tue 06 Mar 2007
Sarasa- Tue 01 Aug 2006
Don't really know why, it is kind of ordinary, but I love it.
Maybe because I once had a similar idea about a girl riding on a train towards an unknown destination (she got on the wrong train) and meets a stranger there.
I am also going to read your other stories. And your grammar is pretty good, but mind the adverb- adjective case!