I really liked the dream idea, especially the scent and how they knew things about one another later in real life. I thought the lemon could have been a little more inventive/drawn out (he can defy gravity) and little things like this really bothered me "ANI don't have any reference to this poem, nor have I thought up any poem with any such properties." other than that, Two Thumbs Up.
I liked it because the dreams made up for the improbabilities, however the reactions of kagome's comrads were not so true to form.
WhiteRose-Kurama- Tue 13 Jun 2006
I absolutely love this one shot! Everything came together so well. Keep up the amazing work. I enjoy reading ur stuff, ur very talented :P
Megan Consoer- Wed 24 May 2006
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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